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07-05-2008, 03:20 PM
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|  Fred and George's DarlingPuffskein
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Sydney, Australia
Posts: 2,138
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sienna De Luca
Fifth Year
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Elizabeth Summers
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Quote:
Thanks isabel...
I've been calling you nikki...
sorry...
its ok honey.
I love your writing
and I want more!!
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07-05-2008, 03:43 PM
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| | Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
Posts: 22,565
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lou Ysobelle Hopkins
First Year |  Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =))
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Originally Posted by HPobsession33  NAT, This is really good! Why di dyou not tell me about it???
you have to post more soon, cause I can not stand cliffies,
and I need to know what happens!!!
PAMS!
~Becca~ I will update again soon.
thanks Beater becks.   Quote:
Originally Posted by Ms.Malfoy its ok honey.
I love your writing
and I want more!! more posts soon.
thank you. My dear Little Teddy..
Last edited by Nat nat; 07-05-2008 at 03:57 PM.
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07-06-2008, 12:59 AM
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#28 (permalink)
| | Streeler
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Belgium soon enough!
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Charlotte Tonks
Second Year
Ministry RPG Name:
Beth Wends
Magical Transportation |
oh my goodness
not a cliffie i agree with allie
i don't like cliffies either!
so....
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07-06-2008, 02:16 AM
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#29 (permalink)
| | Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
Posts: 22,565
Hogwarts RPG Name:
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First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =))
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Originally Posted by keeper#1 oh my goodness
not a cliffie i agree with allie
i don't like cliffies either!
so....
PAMS! I'll update soon.
thanks.
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07-06-2008, 10:18 AM
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| | Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
Posts: 22,565
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lou Ysobelle Hopkins
First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =))
“Dad!” he cried as he gave his father a tight hug, his father bent down so that he could reach his neck.
“Happy birthday, son!” Remus replied, as he hugged Teddy back.
Teddy had the feeling, that moment was precious and should be treasured.
He then gazed at the woman standing behind Remus. Her hair was different from his, its colour the most vivid of pink, but he could tell that she could change her hair colour whenever, wherever, and to whatever she wanted to, just as he could.
The woman stared back at him and gave Teddy the feeling that he had known her his entire life. For a minute or so, he felt that he could drown in her eyes, because they were filled with love, warmth, and affection.
Then the woman said, “Wotcher, Teddy.” | |
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07-06-2008, 01:07 PM
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#31 (permalink)
| RP Queen Snidget
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: dining with Hannibal
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Saiyomi Neliel Schiffer
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Jordyn Aileen Lupin-known werewolf
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first to post!! love it!! can't wait for more!! 
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07-06-2008, 02:12 PM
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#32 (permalink)
| | Plimpy
Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: 6 Ft Under The Stars
Posts: 15,260
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Jacklyn Gold
Fifth Year |
Tonks and Lupin are there??
PAMS!
~Becca~
__________________
♥ ♥ Jacklyn Gold ♥ ♥
You go for seconds and days I live for moments to say that I may never get a second chance don't throw it away
Living for dollars and dimes They'll all diminish in time Oh let that motion come and crash
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07-06-2008, 02:58 PM
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#33 (permalink)
| | Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
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Becca you're shocked.
Sorry about that.
Codi thanks..
You'll know why as the story goes.
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07-07-2008, 01:56 PM
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| | Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
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Teddy eagerly relinquished from his father’s arms and said, “Mum!” as he flung his arms around his mother with all his might.
“Happy eleventh birthday, Teddy,” Nymphadora said in a comforting voice as she was being embraced by her son. Teddy didn’t want to let go of her, he was afraid they would disappear and he would lose them again.
He knew he could not hold on forever though, so he let go of his mother but he still stared at her with happiness in his face. Bright eyes gazed at Nymphadora.
Nymphadora smiled at his son, “Why don’t you go finish opening your gift, Teddy?” as she gestured at Ron's gift.
Teddy, who was still excited and couldn't help but grin, Mum says i should continue on opening my gifts, nodded and went back in unwrapping the last package that was left. Remus and Nymphadora went to sit at Teddy’s bed.
Ron’s gift was a Weasley sweater. A note fell as Teddy tried to unfold the handmade jumper.
Teddy,
I’m sorry but I don’t have enough time to buy you a gift, so I just asked Mum to make you a Weasley jumper. And here’s a pack of Chocolate Frog and Bertie Bott’s Every Flavor Beans. That’s from the rest of us Weasley’s, who hadn’t bought you a birthday gift. In the meantime, enjoy using this lumpy jumper your Gran Molly made. See you soon. Uncle Ron
Teddy smirked at Ron’s use of the word lumpy. Then he looked at his parents. He can't stop staring at them. This is the best birthday I've ever had. My family's complete. | |
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07-07-2008, 05:01 PM
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#35 (permalink)
| | Streeler
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Belgium soon enough!
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haha first to reply!
great post!
thats so sweet!
but my confusion to why they are there
is to great!
must read on!
sooo...
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07-07-2008, 06:16 PM
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#36 (permalink)
| | Plimpy
Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: 6 Ft Under The Stars
Posts: 15,260
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Jacklyn Gold
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awww, I love Teddy...
but I still need to know, How are his parents there?
~Becca~
__________________
♥ ♥ Jacklyn Gold ♥ ♥
You go for seconds and days I live for moments to say that I may never get a second chance don't throw it away
Living for dollars and dimes They'll all diminish in time Oh let that motion come and crash
Like a plane from the sky | |
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07-09-2008, 04:46 AM
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#37 (permalink)
| | Firecrab
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Mystic Falls
Posts: 716
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ellie Summers
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wow just finally caught up and i LOVE it more than before and i cant wait for more posts and well i wonder why and how his parents got there!?
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07-09-2008, 12:43 PM
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#38 (permalink)
| | Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
Posts: 22,565
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lou Ysobelle Hopkins
First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =))
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Originally Posted by keeper#1 haha first to reply!
great post!
thats so sweet!
but my confusion to why they are there
is to great!
must read on!
sooo...
PAMS! Sorry about the confusion and for the long wait.
i've been busy..
thanks keeper.. Quote:
Originally Posted by HPobsession33 awww, I love Teddy...
but I still need to know, How are his parents there?
~Becca~
Teddy loves you too Becca...
Guess... Quote:
Originally Posted by Harry Potter Freak 1 wow just finally caught up and i LOVE it more than before and i cant wait for more posts and well i wonder why and how his parents got there!?
Thanks for catching up..
I'll update...
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07-09-2008, 12:52 PM
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#39 (permalink)
| | Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lou Ysobelle Hopkins
First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =))
Sorry for the long wait.
Nymphadora smiled and said, “Oh! Your dad wanted to buy a book as your birthday present, but I persuaded him to buy you a toy broomstick instead,” she said while throwing a playful look at Remus.
“Well, I’m afraid I didn’t buy him a toy broomstick,” Remus said while laughing. He then handed Teddy a neatly wrapped package. Nymphadora took a quick glanced at Remus' gift.
Teddy had just unwrapped his father’s gift, and it was a book, entitled Quidditch Through the Ages. He recognised the book as one that Harry had once told him about it. Teddy snorted as he glanced at it and then to his father who simply gave him a compassionate look. He then glanced back at his mother.
Nymphadora was chuckling at the very moment, but she stopped and gave her son a sympathetic smile.
“Just what I thought,” she said while eyeing Remus before her bright eyes went back to Teddy, “your father would do.” She gave her son a pat on the back and added quickly, “Don’t worry, Teddy, I’ve got another gift for you.” She handed Teddy a parcel that was untidily wrapped.
Not another book, Teddy thought.
“Now, now,” Remus said as he rested his arms on Nymphadora’s shoulder and continued, “just what I thought your mother would do.”
Tonks rested her head in his chest and said, “I hope you'll like it, Teddy,” while giving him an approving smile.
Remus kissed her forehead and stared at Teddy, “He’ll like that for sure, Nymphadora,” he said while stroking and smoothening her hair with his hand.
Just have to leave it there for now.
I hope you're all enjoying the story so far.
Thanks guys.
Last edited by Nat nat; 07-09-2008 at 12:58 PM.
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07-09-2008, 09:28 PM
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#40 (permalink)
| | Plimpy
Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: 6 Ft Under The Stars
Posts: 15,260
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Jacklyn Gold
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okay okay, I will guess.
Ummmm, are they awesome and came back form the dead? Is it a dream? They never died, bur really went into hiding for some reason, and the people they burried were actuallly dolls?
Great Chapter!! PAMS!!
~Becca~
__________________
♥ ♥ Jacklyn Gold ♥ ♥
You go for seconds and days I live for moments to say that I may never get a second chance don't throw it away
Living for dollars and dimes They'll all diminish in time Oh let that motion come and crash
Like a plane from the sky | |
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07-11-2008, 08:12 AM
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#41 (permalink)
| | Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
Posts: 22,565
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lou Ysobelle Hopkins
First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =))
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Originally Posted by HPobsession33 okay okay, I will guess.
Ummmm, are they awesome and came back form the dead? Is it a dream? They never died, bur really went into hiding for some reason, and the people they burried were actuallly dolls?
Great Chapter!! PAMS!!
~Becca~ Yay! so many great guesses..
Let's just see, what happens next
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07-11-2008, 09:07 AM
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#42 (permalink)
| | Firecrab
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Mystic Falls
Posts: 716
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ellie Summers
Sixth Year |
Loved that last chapter and i cant wait for more!!!!!
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07-11-2008, 09:32 AM
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#43 (permalink)
| | Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
Posts: 22,565
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Lou Ysobelle Hopkins
First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =))
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Originally Posted by Harry Potter Freak 1 Loved that last chapter and i cant wait for more!!!!! Thanks..
i can't say those were really chapters guys, sorry about that.
but Thanks for appreciating my story.
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07-11-2008, 04:39 PM
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#44 (permalink)
| | Streeler
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Belgium soon enough!
Posts: 211
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Second Year
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great post!
PAMS!!!!
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07-11-2008, 09:33 PM
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#45 (permalink)
| | Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
Posts: 22,565
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Lou Ysobelle Hopkins
First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =))
Teddy unwrapped his mother’s gift and grinned at the sight of the toy broomstick, he keenly clutched in his hands.
“I think he likes mine better than yours,” she annoyed Remus, while beaming at the sight of their son smiling at her. The book Remus had given Teddy lay forgotten on the floor, beside him.
“I won’t dare answer that,” Remus joked.
“Thanks Mum! Thanks Dad!” Teddy said, hugging his parents. “Gran won’t be happy about this, but I think I better tell her.” With that he dashed out of the room, his face filled with excitement.
The couple followed their son out of the room and down the stairs. They were in the middle of the hallway when Nymphadora tripped, but Remus got hold of her waist and helped her maintain her balance. They followed Teddy, who entered the living room, but they stayed outside.
Teddy found Andromeda Tonks sitting on a couch, knitting a pair of hand gloves. He eagerly informed his grandmother about the gifts he had just received from his parents and showed her the toy broomstick. | |
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07-11-2008, 09:43 PM
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#46 (permalink)
| | Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
Posts: 22,565
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lou Ysobelle Hopkins
First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =))
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Originally Posted by keeper#1 great post!
PAMS!!!!
~~ Charlotte (Charlie) ~~ Thanks Charlie.  | |
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07-11-2008, 09:44 PM
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#47 (permalink)
| | Plimpy
Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: 6 Ft Under The Stars
Posts: 15,260
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Jacklyn Gold
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ahh whats going to happen now that he told his Grandma??
I have the strangest feeling they are going to dissapear or something!
PAMSpamsPams
~Becca~
__________________
♥ ♥ Jacklyn Gold ♥ ♥
You go for seconds and days I live for moments to say that I may never get a second chance don't throw it away
Living for dollars and dimes They'll all diminish in time Oh let that motion come and crash
Like a plane from the sky | |
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07-11-2008, 11:52 PM
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#48 (permalink)
| | Hippogriff
Join Date: May 2008 Location: In a sea of clouds
Posts: 22,565
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lou Ysobelle Hopkins
First Year | Shel's owner<3 / SSRPG wanderer // Nat luffs you ^^/ Half Slyther half dor =))
Quote:
Originally Posted by HPobsession33 ahh whats going to happen now that he told his Grandma??
I have the strangest feeling they are going to dissapear or something!
PAMSpamsPams
~Becca~
:shrugs:
Hmmmm, guess!
thanks Becca..
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07-14-2008, 01:15 AM
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#49 (permalink)
| | Streeler
Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Belgium soon enough!
Posts: 211
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Charlotte Tonks
Second Year
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Beth Wends
Magical Transportation |
oh my gosh!
I am so confused!
Great post but i need answers here!
will teddys gran be able to see them?
are they really there?
is it a dream.
an illusion.
is teddy a crazed nut case!?
PAMS!
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07-14-2008, 07:13 AM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Mystic Falls
Posts: 716
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ellie Summers
Sixth Year |
WOW loved that last chapter so much well i cant wait for more posts!!!!!!
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