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This fan fic needs a whole lot of the following to make it really ginchy (erm cool):

More Romance because Ron & Hermione, Harry & Ginny should just always be in love
acciozo!, Becky, emerald dawn, Fred&GeorgeLuvr, hermionesclone, Jenny Malfoy, KellyBear, LilyLunaGinnyPotter, Lissydove, MuggleVampire, mushroomweasley, onar, OtterySt.Catchpole, Prongs.RJGirl, purple·myst, reina9, X-Girl
17 - 58.62%

Steampunk, seriously, nothing gets my gears going like gears and steam engines and stuff
allucha, KellyBear, OtterySt.Catchpole, X-Girl
4 - 13.79%

Draco crying ... because I like villains who are sensitive bad boys ... Eeeeeeeeeek
acciozo!, Becky, emerald dawn, Fred&GeorgeLuvr, Jessica94ear, Lissydove, MuggleVampire, Obi-Wan K'Lari, OtterySt.Catchpole, purple·myst, Si, tommys_tasty_treat, WarrenBLUDx, X-Girl
14 - 48.28%

Cameos by your favorite stars like: Meredith Grey, The Care Bears, Alvin & The Chipmunks, The Jonas Bros.
Lissydove, OtterySt.Catchpole, SenoritaMaxie, X-Girl
4 - 13.79%

A new writer, because seriously ... uhm, this fic needs help
X-Girl
1 - 3.45%

Zip, bam, poof, crash! Action, baby, and gimme loads of it!
acciozo!, allucha, BanaBatGirl, Becky, HannahLongbottom, KellyBear, Lissydove, mushroomweasley, Obi-Wan K'Lari, OtterySt.Catchpole, Si, X-Girl
12 - 41.38%

Ridiculously long winded prose, and flashbacks that delve into multiple backgrounds of characters
allucha, emerald dawn, Fred&GeorgeLuvr, Jessica94ear, Lissydove, mushroomweasley, Obi-Wan K'Lari, OtterySt.Catchpole, X-Girl
9 - 31.03%

The Dynamic Duo of Teddy and Ottery with their cracked adventures, yo!
allucha, Connie, Jessica94ear, KellyBear, Lissydove, Obi-Wan K'Lari, OtterySt.Catchpole, Si, X-Girl
9 - 31.03%

Cannon! *fires the cannons* No, not canon, cannons like on Horation Hornblower's ship!
allucha, emerald dawn, Jessica94ear, KellyBear, Lissydove, OtterySt.Catchpole, Si, X-Girl
8 - 27.59%

A banner, a soundtrack, and gratuitious dance balls with costumes and love Eeeek and cupids and hearts and pinkness ...
BanaBatGirl, KellyBear, Lissydove, MuggleVampire, OtterySt.Catchpole, X-Girl
6 - 20.69%

Teddy, plain and simple. I pity the fool who don't gimme Teddy.
allucha, Jessica94ear, KellyBear, Lissydove, Obi-Wan K'Lari, OtterySt.Catchpole, redifer, X-Girl
8 - 27.59%

Ron, because I saw HBP and I fell in love with him all over again *squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee*
acciozo!, allucha, BanaBatGirl, Becky, emerald dawn, Jessica94ear, Lissydove, mione_girlgwp, MuggleVampire, Obi-Wan K'Lari, OtterySt.Catchpole, purple·myst, Si, X-Girl
14 - 48.28%



Human Nature
by Ottery St. Catchpole
for michael ... thank you for the music

Get Me Out
Into The Night-Time
Four Walls Won't Hold Me Tonight
If This Town
Is Just An Apple
Then Let Me Take A Bite

If They Say -
Why, Why, Tell 'Em That Is Human Nature


Disclaimer: All of the HP characters belong to J.K. Rowling, all the characters I create belong to me, as does the story but not the concepts created by J.K. Rowling who pwns, no infringement is implied. It's her world, I just live in it


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"His name was Silver Wind, in the old tongue of his people. Such things were foreign here, in Great Britain, even at Hogwarts, where our school's history went back hundreds of years. He was not from our shores, and in truth his ways bothered a lot of people here but he was much loved. For all our great Imperial ways, with the colonies stretching through Africa to India, it surprises me how close-minded and jealous of foreign ways we are."

Hermione stopped to stare at the picture of the young boy, an early photograph taken by the authoress recording her first impression of the boy as he first entered the great oak doors of Hogwarts castle.

He was a striking young man, this she could tell from the look on his face. There was no smile there. His long black hair fell over his bare shoulders, cascaded really, and his body wore the signs of someone not accustomed to an easy life. In his hair were feathers, and he wore leather pants. An American Indian* from the look of him. What tribe or from where Hermione could not tell simply by his dress, but she was curious to know.

Everything about the book Ottery had given her was fascinating. A Secret History of Hogwarts with asides and entries from some of her less than famous, or stellar or popular--and even a few infamous--former students and would be world dictators by Herodotus Prime. The book contained much information that they did not cover in Hogwarts a History, most likely because it was subversive and there had been a lot of communists in the school staff in previous years.

She closed the book, and took a sip of the tea sitting on the table next to her. Hermione wondered what the boys were up to.

The summer would be over soon, and she had heard nothing about what was going on in the magical world except for what the newspapers carried and they had been censored; she could tell as much from reading them. Voldemort had returned and now the magical world knew it and she wondered what was going to happen.

Her books were some comfort, as were Ron's and Harry's letters but ... since Snuffles death Harry had seemed more distant and well everything had changed hadn't it? The world was at war ... and she knew nothing. Nothing at all about what was going on or what part she would play in it.

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*=As my girlfriend, who is part NATIVE AMERICAN quaintly pointed out, American Indian is not an approppriate word to use. It is highly incorrect and not a little unPC, hence the fact that she BOLDED IT when she typed the correction. Since it recalls terminology used by the oppressers/conquistadores/ slaughterers whatever you wish to call the invading Europeans. However, it is used here, because the story warrants it, and with no intention to offend. It is intended as irony, to show how one cannot always necessarily escape racist ways despite ones choice not to be racist. Seriously, would you consider Hermione racist? It is not the intent of the author of this story to malign anyone or propogate any racist views.

For the reply challenged!

Chapter: Memories like wishes I wish I'd told you once upon a time ....
Chapter: You’re out of touch, I’m out of time, but I’m out of my head when you’re not around …
Part 2
Part 3
Chapter: Love is a battlefield
Spinner's End
Chapter: Don’t turn around, (uh-oh-ooh) The Commissars in town (uh-oh-ooh)
Chapter: Shooting at the walls of heartache. Bang! Bang! I am the warrior …
Chapter: Who can it be now, knocking at my door? No way, don’t come round here no more …
Chapter: All I’m saying, it takes a lot to love you … all I’m doing, you know it’s true, … all I mean now, there’s one thing that turns this gray sky to blue … that’s the look of love …
Chapter: Love takes time ... yes it's hard to find, and you've got to take some time to let love grow ...
Chapter: When you left I lost a part of me ... is this so hard to believe, come back baby please cuz we belong together ...
Chapter: Stir it up, got to shake it up now ...
Chapter: Uuuh Uh Uuuuuuuuh *because the song was instrumental without spoken words just weird vocals*
Part 2
Chapter: You get what you give
Chapter: When you get caught between the moon and New York City
Chapter: Chuck Norris is Dumbledore! <<Don't look unless you want a spoiler.
Chapter: So, take a look at me now, well there’s just an empty space, and there’s nothing left here to remind me just the memory of your face …
Part 2
Part 3
Chapter: None of us speaks about the monsters …
Chapter: “I get up in the evening and I ain’t got nothing to say … you can‘t start a fire without a spark …”
Chapter: Johnny Angel
The Kitty Chaplet
Chapter: “Every now and then I get a little bit tired of listening to the sound of my tears … ”
Part 2
Chapter: “Where have all the good men gone and where are all the gods, where’s the streetwise Hercules to fight the rising arms, isn’t there a white knight upon a fiery steed? I need a hero. I’m holding out for a hero ’till the end of the night …”
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4_The Nynevah Chaplet
Book III or Chapter: A new beginning … or old friends meet new ends …

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Meanwhile back at the ranch chapter
Chapter: Video Killed the radio star
Part next
Chapter: And still he couldn't turn the ship around
Chapter: Words fail
The NEW & Vastly Improved Apocalyptic Uber Mensch totally manly and vastly less romantic violent and Capitalisticly greedy like Bankers and Wall St. Human Nature! a.k.a. The Hijacked Chapter
Chapter: The end of one era begins another … the non-train era :3
Chapter: On a midnight voyage
Part next
Chapter: No YOU won't fool the children of the revolution
Chapter: One less man to pick up after
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Old 07-15-2009, 05:06 AM   #2 (permalink)
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An Ottery fic? Oh yesh! And YAY Ottery's in it! Makes me wonder if Teddy'll be hiding somewhere with a few explosives.

Love the start, Otts! *subscribesss like in the old days*
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Definitely an intriguing start. Can't wait for moreeee. =D
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Hm, I see the fangirling has begun (not to imply that Ali is in any way a fangirl). It never takes long, what with you being brilliant and all. I caught one small thing:

Hermione what the boys were up too

I think you meant to put "wondered" in there, or something. I like your start. Like Ali, I'm subscribing.
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Author's Note: Thank you all for trying out my fic, I'm flattered at y'all's comments. *waves to Ali & Kellybear cuz they're old friends* I'm going to be posting sporadically until I can get a heads up on this story, but I almost always finish my fics when I start them, so ... I promise if you stick with me, the time you invest won't be wasted by my not finishing this fic. That said, I raised a poll, please feel free to vote, I do care what you all have to suggest, I love hearing from my readers. I should point out that this is an alternate universe fic, essentially my take on the events of HBP. It might seem weird at first but ... I hope you hang around to see what I'm up too. I promise, at the very least to make it interesting and unlike any HP fanfic you've ever read. Guaranteed or your money back. Thank you Ana and X-girl, if you don't mind my asking, what do you all ship? Just curious ... my fics tend to have A LOT of couples so expect some romance, and thank you again for the nice comments. I hope you come back. That said, here's the next bit.

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Lovers, keep on the road you're on
Runners, until the race is run
Soldiers, you've got to soldier on
Sometimes even right is wrong
~Coldplay (Lovers in Japan)


The car swerved wildly. The other drivers on the road honked, some even throwing their hands up, a few throwing out verbal objections or suggestions as to what Harry Potter could do (though not necessarily to improve his driving), and there were a few of those ever popular hand signals. But the boy didn’t care, the lightning scarred boy was too focused on firing spells out of his window at the brooms flying in front of him.

“Why can’t anyone see them?” The boy asked.

“They’re cloaked against muggles Harry, all they see is a pair of nuts driving badly,” his godfather replied. “So, how do you like your first ever driving lesson?”

Harry laughed. They had been walking out of the Leaky Cauldron when they’d been fired at by some Death Eaters, it was such a random thing. Of course they did not have their brooms with them and the death eaters had decided to run, so obviously, Sirius broke into a car, a Ferrari 430 Challenger and he’d let Harry drive. His godfather was all fun and adventure. The Dark Lord might be coming after Harry but that didn’t mean that he didn’t have friends and family with him, and with Sirius at his side, he felt like it was all a fun game. They were adventuring, the way Harry imagined that James had done with his godfather when he was just a baby.

The car was driving itself, spelled to do so Harry could control it by taking the wheel every now and then and nudging it one way or the other, which freed his hands to blast away with his wand. They entered a quiet neighborhood and Harry turned wildly when he heard the tire blow out and the car skidded sideways knocking trash bins down and sending them flying over the sides of the car until he stopped it.

“Where are they?” Harry asked seeing the street empty and quiet.

“Hiding most like, they’ve got us where they wanted us, now,” Sirius replied without the slightest hint of worry in his voice.

“This is a trap?”

“Of course it is Harry, think about it. They weren’t flying that low on brooms through the city so you could track them down to their hideout.” Sirius replied. “So, let’s get out and say hello.”

“You’re kidding.”

Sirius was stepping out of the car, and Harry followed quickly feeling like one of those policemen in the muggle cop shows that Dudley loved watching so much--when he wasn‘t watching dance competitions, anyways.

“Maybe we should signal the Order,” Harry remarked, completely aware of his godfather’s sometimes lack of common sense.

“I don’t think you’re going to have time for that, I‘m afraid,” Bellatrix remarked cackling in her mad crazy way. She fired a spell at Sirius who ducked shattering all the windows of the car. Harry covered his face and fell down on the asphalt. He opened his eyes to see a pair of boots.

“Get up Harry Potter,” a growling voice exclaimed.

The boy looked up to see the snarling face of Fenrir Greyback.

“'Allo gorgeous, wanna come with me?”

“I’d rather not actually,” the boy exclaimed blasting the soles of the Death Eater's feet with a dancing spell.

On the other side of the car Sirius was battling Bellatrix and three other Death Eaters single handedly. Harry stood up and fired at one of them sending him crashing into a garden.

“Thanks Harry,” Sirius yelled.

The boy ran over the hood of the car to help his godfather, sending a jinx towards Bellatrix who seemed determined to get at her cousin.

“Meddlesome brat!” she shot back. “There’s only one thing to do with you … Avada Kedavra!”

Harry ducked the spell which hit the car causing it to explode in a gigantic fireball that sent the car flying twenty feet into the air.

“I’d been hoping to return that actually,” he said, throwing a silence spell at her, Bellatrix deftly swatted it away and sent a shower of bottle sized thorns flying at the boy. Harry ducked again, running down the street trying to lure Bellatrix away from Sirius. It was then that he spotted a boy about fourteen sitting on a wall across the street dangling his legs watching the whole fight with the air of someone who was watching a very interesting film.

“Didn’t forget me did ya boy?” the werewolf asked suddenly appearing in front of Harry.

Undaunted, the boy with the scar jabbed his wand into the mans chest twisting the end around his robes and shot a fireball sending Fenrir flying back to crash into a lamppost.

Harry looked up in time to see Bellatrix about to curse Sirius who was busy with two other death eaters, “No,” Harry exclaimed and fired a spell. Bellatrix’s wand flew up in the air disarming her and Sirius spotting her jinxed her. She fell down in a heap screaming, visions of horrible bugs attacking her.

The boy on the wall started clapping, “Bravo!”

Harry pointed his wand at the boy with the brown hair. He leaped down and Harry could see the boy was wearing a blue jumpsuit, or robes that looked that way.

“That’s the way it was supposed to be, wasn’t it?” the boy asked.

“Who are you?” Harry replied with a question.

“Nicholas. Nicholas Black,” he said.



“You’re going to die boy, so why don’t you just give us what we want to know?” The Death Eater asked, as he took a long drag from his cigar, turned and blew his smoke in the boy’s face.

Chained to the wall, naked to his waist, and bare foot, his feet sitting in fetid water in a dark room from where a single lamp swung, his back rested tired against the rocky wall. He could barely speak, much less smile, but he was doing it.

“You can … you … can … kiss … my … a” a hard slap across the face finished the sentence for him.

Rodolphus smiled at the muscled man wearing the ax-man’s mask. His muscled form reminded Ottery of one of those Mexican wrestlers he grew up watching. He spat his blood on the floor.

“You will talk to us, St. Catchpole. Or you will die. It really is very simple.”

“Can … can I ask … you a … question, Rolphy old boy?”

The man in the red suit, with the gold embroidering looking like a figure out of the Napoleonic era nodded, his cigar in his mouth.

“What’s Voldemort … want with … with the triads? He need help trying to conquer little ol’ Brit--,” once again the boy was cut short, this time by a fist to the gut. He doubled over and would have fallen to his knees but for the chains that held him in place.

“Enough playing. Talk, and die quickly. Or remain quiet and die slowly. Either way, the only way you’re leaving this place is in a pine box, Ottery St. Catchpole. You’re hundreds of thousands of miles away from your precious little Order, and they can’t save you.”



Endnote: I have a beta I haven't asked her to review these posts, so I apologize I will edit them, and in future have my posts beta'd. Thank you all again for reading.
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Siiiiiiiiiiiiiirius!!!!!!!!!

-cough-

Anyway...

That chapter was interesting, and dramatic, always a good combination. And as you may have guessed, it was cool having Sirius in there because I LOVE him. And a few Death Eaters, too. I'm curious about why they have Ottery, though...

Also, having the alternate universe to HBP is cool, too. Stories with twists and turns are always fun. xD

As for ships, well, I love romance, but I'm awful with choosing ships. I quite like Ginny or Hermione with Draco, but I also like the original ones, Ginny and Harry... Etc. I know that isn't very decisive, but, trust me, indecisive is my middle name, next to impatient.
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Siiiiiiiiiiiiiirius!!!!!!!!!

-cough-

Anyway...

That chapter was interesting, and dramatic, always a good combination. And as you may have guessed, it was cool having Sirius in there because I LOVE him. And a few Death Eaters, too. I'm curious about why they have Ottery, though...

Also, having the alternate universe to HBP is cool, too. Stories with twists and turns are always fun. xD

As for ships, well, I love romance, but I'm awful with choosing ships. I quite like Ginny or Hermione with Draco, but I also like the original ones, Ginny and Harry... Etc. I know that isn't very decisive, but, trust me, decisive is my middle name, next to impatient.
I agree with Ana. Nice story. Love the twists and turns, love Sirius. And I love Hermione and Ron as a couple.
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For all our great Imperial ways, with the colonies stretching through Africa to India, it surprises me how close minded and jealous of foreign ways we are."
This line is too true I love it, as I love the first post! Silver Wind sounds awesome!

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I can totally imagine Harry and Sirius acting that way! It's insanely funny how Harry seems to be the sensible one That brings up an interesting thought

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“What’s Voldemort … want with … with the triads? He need help trying to conquer little ol’ Brit--,” once again the boy was cut short, this time by a fist to the gut. He doubled over and would have fallen to his knees but for the chains that held him in place.
:O o_O Ottery!!! *sobs* That's a really interesting post! I'm hooked now

Question: "the triads"....is this the alternate universe term for the Trio? Or will I just have to wait and see?
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I love it so far, Hello, car crashes!!! And Otty in chains *gasp* Nooooooooo!!!!! But yeah, Sweetz, you need to go back and edit, there were a few places where I could tell you mistyped. But I know you, so I know the edited version will be better than ever.
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Thank you Ana and X-girl, if you don't mind my asking, what do you all ship? Just curious ... my fics tend to have A LOT of couples so expect some romance, and thank you again for the nice comments. I hope you come back. That said, here's the next bit
Hmmm...ship, you ask? Well, aside from Sirius and I..*whistles* typical cannon duos. =D



Interesting installment...Triads, though? I can't help but think of Charmed. :3 That'd be a long shot, but I can't think of any other triad. I'm also not sure what to think of Sirius being included in it.xD You said HBP, no? Hmmmmm, meeh.

PAMS? I'll be back to check in.


Edit: Lmfao, I should actually read all of the stinkin' poll options before clicking send and not wait to do it after. :3 You're an insanely great writer, Otts. I swear...I blame Teddy for the minor voting drawback. Why? I have no idea...but Teddy seems like a good enough culprit.

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Okay, so I've never actually owned a gerbil to have it die, and the hamster we did have ages ago died when I was like ... 14 or something. As for the whole antarctica thing, I was watching a documentary ...

I love that all you peeps are reading my fic, I love you all, I'm glad old friends are here *glomps Si & Lissylove* but I'm in the valley ... visiting my mom, and I'm not going to have internet for about ... oh, three weeks. So, I will post soon, but I might not be updating for a while. Yeah, sorry y'all. On the bright side, I'll still be working on this story ... I said I had no internet not no computer so, yay, I'll have loads of story to post and be ahead of all of you and I'll be able to drop massive hints and pick on all y'all about what's gonna happen and who's gonna die and who's already dead and stuffs. So you know.

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Thank you all for reading my story, I promise I will make it worth the wait. I guess I should get crackin' on a banner.

*loves his story's fans* I promise it will be good ... just like HBP was good ... well sort of, and what's with the Ron/McClaggan skin ... does SS ship *Teddy fires the cannons* I was going to say McClaggan and that random blonde

*Teddy rolls his eyes and the world spins on*

EDIT:I didn't want to get in trouble for spamming my fic, so I thought I'd edit it. Neways, I'm still working on an update, it just needs to be edited really. New characters, Ron, some Luna, and back to Harry for a big reveal ... you shall see. Oh, and Kellybear, help me pic a picture of me, I'm putting me in a siggy for my fic cuz I'm a media hound. I love the spotlight and Si, I like your siggy. Too cute. I hope you know I stole it. XP Back laterz peeps.

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Chapter: You’re out of touch, I’m out of time, but I’m out of my head when you’re not around …

The thunder crackled in the sky, the rain pouring like sheets of tears and sorrow, as a red car drove around the cliff. The ocean waves slapped against the shore against a cliff rising high above the wild waters in the darkness where the old castle stood against the force of elements unleashed on that dark night. He never liked the place, it reminded him too much of Azkaban. Still, he was happy not to have to be walking in this rain, not that his slicker robes couldn’t repel all the water, it was fun watching it do it, too, all the water sliding like off a duck’s back.

“You don’t have to visit with him,” the girl remarked. "I could go disguised as you. You’re too valuable …”

“While I’m flattered you seem to think so Nymphadora I can assure you that no one is that important to our cause,” the older man replied.

“Just the same, if you’re not out in an hour I’m popping in and blasting everything until I find you,” the girl replied with less gusto than she would have wanted. Her words seemed less powerful and she herself seemed distracted.

“Is everything all right, Nymphadora?” Her old headmaster asked with great concern in his voice.

“They’ve just been working us too hard at the ministry, you know Scrimgeour doesn’t like us moonlighting, but he can’t really do anything to stop us.”

“Yes. It is rather very difficult trying to serve two masters.” The old wizard paused and looked at the bedraggled girl under the enchanted umbrella. Once one of his most talented students. “You do know that if there’s anything you need to talk about you can always come to me.”

She nodded.

Dumbledore sighed. “Then I’d best be off, the time has come and I do pride myself on my punctuality.” In an instant he was gone, apparating outside the large oaken gates of the castle.

“I don’t need your help,” the aged wizard replied politely, if it had been possible to hear the tone of his voice you would have noticed the distinct lack of warmth.

“You might change your mind when I tell you about one of yours,” the man replied, cajoling.

“I don’t bargain with people’s lives,” the older wizard replied coldly, dropping any semblance of cordiality as if it were some disgusting thing he did not want soiling his blackened hand.

“I’m not the one doing the threatening old man,” the younger wizard replied. “Please, drink your tea, headmaster. It isn’t poisoned. I assure you. I would not have called you here if I did not think we had a similar foe.” The man was in his thirties, dressed in simple black robes, a kind of suit, as if he were a business man, and indeed he was. A prominent muggle businessman by day, with many vested interests in the wizarding world, thus his concern for the outcome of the war.

“Though we share enemies it does not mean we see eye to eye on the future of the wizarding world,” Dumbledore replied, lifting the cup to his mouth his eyes wandered around the room. It was an impossibly high ceilinged chamber, a large fireplace, with the help of magic, warmed the large space filled by the small table they were sitting at. All around them large wizard tapestries depicting knights fighting dragons, and wizards fighting muggle oppression, and the Bolshevik revolution, suits of armor in between the tapestries and large rugs on the floor, but otherwise an empty room.

“Be that as it may be, we are united against a common foe, are we not?” the old wizard didn’t nod and the man took his silence as assent, “So, why not ally our considerable resources to putting a stop to this usurper, this pretender.”

“Because then I would be giving you a foot in the door, so to speak, into the Order and the proper wizarding world. I won’t allow that, unless you meet my concessions.”

“Again you harp on that old man. This is a war we’re in, you can’t seriously …”

“No killing. No stealing. No …”

“What are you the Pope? Some kind of Christian conservative?”

“What I am is ever hopeful that you might come back into the fold,” Dumbledore replied, taking another sip of his tea.

“After what the Death Eaters did to … you have … do you have any idea …?” the man gripped the table and taking deep breaths. “I’m sorry, but …”

“I was there Sebastian. And I tell you, you’ve nothing to gain from lowering yourself to their tactics, and fighting them with their own dark magic.”

“I do not condone the use of dark magic except …”

“As a means to an end. And how much different is that from the wizards we’re trying to fight?” The headmaster retorted gently placing his cup on the saucer on the table and helping himself to a biscuit.

“We’ve argued these philosophies for a long time old man,” the stranger said looking away.

“For a very long time, Sebastian, but I remain …”

“I know. Ever hopeful,” the man laughed a little, the sarcasm as clear as Dumbledore‘s stance.



End note: I'm listening to this aggravatingly cool CD that has all these 80's songs but not the whole song, and they're all by the original artists which makes it all the more aggravating because I love all the songs but I can't hear them completely *aaaaaaaaaaaaaargh* *Teddy explodes Itunes* Next chapter is for Si & Lissylove cuz they remind me of Abra Abra Cadabra ... I want to reach out and grab ya
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The burrow was a great place, out in the middle of nowhere with no one to bother you. The Weasley boys and Ginny had grown up with a large playground, as there were no houses around for miles in any direction and the town of Ottery St. Catchpole (for which one of their closest friends was named) nearby. It was in the lake in front of the house where late nights, Ron and his brothers and friends would go skinny dipping. Lake Weasley they called it, and on hot summer nights that is where the boys cooled off, from the weather and their hormones. Adolescent romance might have been on everyone’s mind, had been for some years for some of Ron’s schoolmates but not he. Ron Weasley like Ottery was of the always-late-to-the-party party, and neither had realized quite what had happened to the girl’s around them. It was obvious that the girls were madly in love, either with boys or the idea of love, but the love part was easily lost given the fact that Ron believed girls to normally be mad. Something we can excuse our hero for because he had been raised in a household full of boys. For example, his sister Ginny, who was such a tom boy, and had suddenly become very popular with the boys; his mother who one minute was the sweetest of women, was insane with rage the next, but whatever else he thought of Molly, Ron loved her, but there was no denying she was barking. And to top the list Hermione and of course, Luna Lovegood. Both of them confusing as all get out, if opposite sides of the same coin. There was no denying they were both intelligent, but Hermione seemed to have a never ending romance with books and the library, and Luna always seemed lost in thought, and whenever she said something it surprised Ron. Should he laugh, or was it something Luna had meant seriously? In all girls were too confusing, mostly mad creatures to be admired from a distance. Of late however, he had noticed they were more interesting to admire from up close.

Ron Weasley lay on the ground staring up at the sky, thoughts of Hermione parading across his mind. It hadn’t been that long since they’d last seen one another at the end of term, but he missed her. Ron Weasley didn’t know why exactly that was, they were always arguing about everything. But the odd thing was, it was infinitely more pleasant to argue with Hermione about anything than it was to spend time having anyone agree with everything he said.

“What are you thinking about Ron Weasley?” a familiar voice seemed to emanate from around him.

As the boy lay on his back on a log which lay a few feet away from the shore under the night shade of a weeping willow that sat with a foot in the lake and another on land, not unlike a giant walking out of the water, he smiled up at the full moon before answering.

“Nothing. Just … thinking.”

Ron wondered why suddenly the voice in his mind had suddenly started to sound like Luna Lovegood.

“Thinking about love? It is a full moon night, you know. In the olden days people used to believe that full moons would drive people crazy,” the girl sat next to him on the log.

“Luna!” Ron exclaimed looking up and seeing Luna looking down at him.

“Who else did you think it would be Ronald?” the girl asked.

“I … uhm, well … what are you doing out so late? Are you looking for Ginny? Because she‘s asleep.”

“No. I just … I got up to go snoozlefoo hunting, but I thought I heard something in the distance. I started chasing this dark form through the forests and I saw it come this way.”

“Snoozesingflu?”

Luna stood up, and took out her wand suddenly causing Ron to jump back a bit, as she pointed the weapon at him. He hadn’t meant anything by it, Ron didn’t think he deserved being hexed.

“Luna wai--.”

“Lumos,” she remarked.

Ron turned to look away from the jinx that never came and saw a form standing beside the willow tree. It was a wolf. Ron jumped back again and took his own wand out, pointing like Luna did at the shadow beside the tree. The wolf beside the tree was improbably large, and Ron saw that it was standing. It was a werewolf and it was smiling, almost laughing.

“Ron Weasley? You’re Harry Potter’s friend aren’t you?” The werewolf snarled. The creature began to shift back into human form. “You can put those wands down. If I had wanted either of you dead I would have done it already. I could smell your friend scent there from miles away. As for you … you’re as noisy as a train wreck.”

“If you’re threatening us,” Ron started, but stopped as Luna put her hand on his arm. Ron noticed she had put her wand away.

“If I wanted you dead, you would be,” the boy standing there smiled. He was a handsome boy, blonde hair, blue eyes, and a wicked grin. To Ron’s way of thinking this was the kind of guy that he and all the regular boys hated, cocky, smart, and just plain annoying, someone who woke up in the morning and didn’t have to care if he impressed anyone because he simply did it just by being. “I was sent by … a mutual friend. I just came here to deliver a message. I’m here to warn you about your friend Harry Potter. He’s in trouble. Your friend Ottery has already been caught, and they’re targeting members of the Order.”

“So tell us something we don’t know, Death Eater.” Ron replied.

“I’m not a Death Eater, and if you don’t get to your friend Harry before daylight, he won’t be around for you to get too, later.” The boy was smiling wickedly.

“You know you’re naked?” Luna remarked and Ron blushed as he noticed the boy was standing undressed in front of them.

“One of the drawbacks of being a werewolf,” the boy smiled without the slightest sign of being ashamed.


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Harry turned to look at his godfather and he screamed. Sirius was standing there smiling one Death Eater hanging upside down from a lamppost bound in webbing, the other lying at his feet passed out and tied up with magical ropes. Fernier Greyback was standing behind Sirius, his hands claws with murderous intent. Sirius was smiling. That was the problem. Sirius smiled just like he had smiled at the Department of Mysteries, just like he had been smiling as Bellatrix had shot him, just like he had smiled as he was falling through the veil.

The spell had been harmless, it hadn’t been a killing curse, so how could Sirius Black be dead?

Harry could not let it happen again. Sirius Black would not die.

Harry screamed and the boy with the brown hair jumped down from the fence landing on the grassy ground softly. Harry took out his wand, why wasn’t the boy doing it too? Was he one of the Death Eaters? He looked much too young. There wasn’t time for this … there wasn’t any time.

The werewolf’s hand came down slashing Sirius’ back, and Harry yelled, running, firing every hex and jinx he could think of as his godfather fell to the ground. For some reason the spells did nothing they hit the werewolf but they were useless. Fenrir kept slashing and tearing at the man’s flesh, rending his clothes and his flesh from his body, blood splattering everywhere.

“It didn’t happen like that,” Nicholas complained. “That wasn’t how he died.”

“He doesn’t have to die, he didn’t … he … I could have saved him. I could have saved him,” he cried, falling to his knees in the middle of the darkened street.

“I thought you were remembering something,” the boy said, lamely.

“If I had been stronger. I could have saved him. I should have saved him.”

“So, this never happened,” Nicholas remarked, a note of sadness in his voice.

“This isn’t how he died. He fell behind a stupid veil. He can’t be dead.” Harry screamed, incredulously. It had been weeks but still he could not come to accept it.

“I’m sorry Harry, but Sirius is dead,” the brown haired boy remarked, putting a hand on the other boy’s shoulder.

All around them the night faded into mist. It was odd watching the world drip away like watercolors in the rain. Everything disappeared. Tears streaming down his face, the lightning scarred boy slapped the brown haired boy’s hand from his shoulder. Harry stood up wand at the ready facing the boy next to him. Harry screamed, “Who are you? And what the hell are you doing inside my head?”

The boy looked at Harry curiously, “I told you. My name is Nicholas Black. I’m Sirius Black’s son.”

As the eternal chess game of life played on, one character revealed himself meanwhile, another still hid in shadows, on the great continent in the beautiful city of Paris an old style muggle phone rang. The boy left off eating the chocolate covered crystallized pineapples. The box was heart shaped and the note on it read, “Relish your victory, for now. Love, Ottery St.”

The grey haired boy picked up the phone. “Yes?” he asked in French. “Who is it and what would you like?”

The voice on the other end of the phone crackling and mysterious simply said, “They’ve caught him. The Hong Kong triads have him. They wish to side with Lord Voldemort in the war. If you don’t act soon, the boy’s dead. Consider this a friendly nudge.”

“Who are you, and why are you telling me this?” the grey haired boy asked, ever reticent to fall for any traps. It was only the finely crafted and well thought out traps that he liked to play. He liked a challenging adversary.

“Because I owe Otts. Also, Teddy doesn’t know.”

“If you know Teddy, why haven’t you called him?”

“Because Love’s funny. Save him or don’t. I’ve done my part.” Click.

The line went dead and Angel sighed, putting down his copy of Romeo and Juliet. “I wonder if that boy’s ever going to learn to stay out of trouble.”



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