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Old 09-08-2005, 03:47 PM   #1 (permalink)

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Howdie, Everyone!
Thsi is my first time at this type of stuff, and it'd be great if you'd post your comments, even criticism is good... Just don't be mean.

I'll probably post on a regular basis [twice a week, unless school gets in the way] and my fic takes place AFTER HBP so if you haven't read HBP I advise you to GO READ IT NOW! Whatcha waiting for?

Here Goes...

Okie Doke, seeing as a chapter list [or what you call it] would be helpful I'mma going to try and build one up below... I'll try and get it done as soon as I can, right now it's a working progress.

SPOILER!!: Chapter One - The Letter of Surprises
Chapter One - The Letter Of Surprises
Part #1
Part #2
Part #3
Part #4
Part #5


SPOILER!!: Chapter Two - Friends Reunited
Chapter Two - Friends Reunited
Part #1
Part #2
Part #3
Part #4


SPOILER!!: Chapter Three - Wedding Disasters


SPOILER!!: Chapter Four - Hide and Seek

Chapter Four - Hide and Seek
Part #1
Part #2
Part #3
Part #4


SPOILER!!: Chapter Five - An Eventful Alley

Chapter Five - An Eventful Alley
Part #1
Part #2
Part #3


SPOILER!!: Chapter Six - The Perfect Guard

Chapter Six - The Perfect Guard
Part #1
Part #2
Part #3
Part #4


SPOILER!!: Chapter Seven - The Revival of the Giant

Chapter Seven - The Revival of the Giant [I really need to think of better chapter titles. ]
Part #1
Part #2
Part #3


SPOILER!!: Chapter Eight = Halloween Horrors

Chapter Eight - Halloween Horrors
Part #1
Part #2
Part #3
Part #4
Part #5
Part #6
Part #7
Part #8
Part #9
Part #10
[Whoa, I really know how to drag a chapter on...]


SPOILER!!: Chapter Nine - An Unexpected Visit

Chapter Nine - An Unexpected Visit
Part #1
Part #2
Part #3
Part #4
Part #5
Part #6
Part #7
Part #8


SPOILER!!: Chapter Ten - The Real Fake

Chapter Ten - The Real Fake [? ?]
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Part #2
Part #3
Part #4
Part #5
Part #6
Part #7


SPOILER!!: Chapter Eleven - The Betrayal

Chapter Eleven - The Betrayal
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Part #2
Part #3
Part #4
Part #5


SPOILER!!: Chapter Twelve - Memories Healed, The Past Unforgotten

Chapter Twelve - Memories Healed, The Past Unforgotten [O_o]
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Part #2
Part #3
Part #4


SPOILER!!: Chapter Thirteen - The Container of History

Chapter Thirteen - The Container of History
Part #1
Part #2
Part #3
Part #4
Part #5


SPOILER!!: Chapter Fourteen - The Start of the End

Chapter Fourteen - The Start of the End
Part #1
Part #2
Part #3
Part #4
Part #5
Part #6


SPOILER!!: Chapter Ali's Confused (15/16) - Friend or Foe?

Chapter Fifteen/Sixteen [I got confused the first time round, and it's staying as it is. ] - Friend or Foe?
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Part #2
Part #3
Part #4[Happy Birthday To Me ]
Part #5
Part #6
Part #7
Part #8
Part #9


SPOILER!!: Chapter Seventeen - The End of the Shadows

Chapter Seventeen - The End of the Shadows [I love this title name, not sure why]
Part #1
Part #2
Part #3
Part #4
Part #5
Part #6


Epilogue

Alternate Epilogue, here @ my LJ.


Whoa, I think I got that all done... If there's any mistakes, you have my sincerest apologies... And I'm not joking. Lmao, anyhoo, enjoy the fic, guys! And thanks for reading!




And now after all that kafuffle, the fic and extreme Ali-noobness begins... Enjoy!


Chapter One- The Letter Of Surprises

The rain was lashing down on the square houses of Privet Drive. The gardens that were kept so neat were a mess, as the rain fell all day and night. Summer seemed like winter as darkness covered the Privet Drive. Houses would be pitch black if electricity didn’t exist, but the Dursleys nephew had to put up with this, because his uncle Vernon had cut the supply of electricity to Harry’s room so Harry lived in darkness.
Harry’s aunt tried to treat Harry fair, but Vernon disagreed.
Harry was an orphan, forced to live with his last remaining relatives, the Dursleys. But this would be his last year with them, and then he would move to his parents’ old house, Godrics Hollow.
For ten years Harry believed that his parents died in a car crash but on his eleventh birthday the truth about their death was out.
when Harry was a baby an evil wizard by the name of Lord Voldemort visited Godrics hollow hoping to kill the three potters to fulfil a prophecy that was made about him. He killed the parents easily but when he went to kill Harry, a one year old baby, his spell backfired, leaving a connection between him and Harry. The only visible connection was a lightning shaped scar on Harry’s forehead. After this attack, Harry had lived with his mothers sister ever since.

In ten minutes Harry would be turning seventeen, he would be able to move into a house by himself and use magic outside school.
Harry had been in no contact with the wizarding world since his headmaster had been killed almost a month ago, but whilst staring into the darkness of the night he saw four birds flying in his direction.
He quickly opened his window as the birds flew into the room.
Harry recognised one of the birds; it was his best friend’s owl. He untied the note as the owl landed, and then it flew to the other side of the room and started drinking water from Hedwig’s water bowl.

Happy Birthday Harry
How are the muggles treating you? Everyone here is fine, and Bill is not going to be a werewolf.
Fleur and Bill are getting married in two days; we all hope you can make it.
Seeya really soon,
Ron, Hermione and Ginny.

Harry read the letter twice through, he must be leaving soon if he could make it to Fleur and Bills wedding.

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Old 09-16-2005, 06:06 PM   #2 (permalink)

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Harry pulled the note from the barn owl, which flew out of the window as soon as the letter was off.
It was water logged but Harry could make out the words.

Harry,
I hope you have a great birthday
Life is so hard now…well, you know.
How are you coping with the muggles?
Hogwarts is empty apart from that squib who keeps sneaking up on me. If I didn’t know better I’d think he wanted a friend, or protection, seeing as he hasn’t got any.
Lupin keeps visiting me though.
Grawp has learnt a lot of things and he enjoys being with the Order.
I’ll see you soon
Hagrid
You’ll be in for a surprise when you come to school.

Next was the turn of Harry’s school letter. This owl also departed the moment the letter left its leg.

Dear Mr Potter,
Please note that the new school year will begin on September the first. The Hogwarts express will leave platform 9 ¾ at 11.00am.
Because of the unfortunate events that happened at the end of the last term, school is optional but Hogwarts will be safer.
A list of books for next year are enclosed.
Yours sincerely,
Professor M. McGonagall,
Deputy Headmistress of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.

Deputy? That meant that there was a new headmaster.
Now there was only one more letter left and it was of an eagle, with red eyes.
Harry untied it as the eagle flew off to drink some water. The last piece of parchment was in writing Harry had seen before. He stuck his hand in his pocket and pulled out a locket. He opened the locket and took the note out of it. The handwriting was exactly the same.

You have recently searched an area I am fond of
I failed to do what I wrote
You must carry the burden of finishing what I started
I apologise for the past, but you have seen what you are looking for.
R.A.B

’Harry its great to see you’, said a hoarse voice.


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ARGH!! This fic is sooo good. That RAB thing and then the 'Harry it's great 2 see u' really freaked me out but I hope it's who I think it is ... PAMS!! *goes off screaming*
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Harry jumped, pulling his wand, aiming at head height, but lowered his wand when he saw who it was. Remus lupin was standing in Harry's room looking tired, but happy.
’Harry, I haven’t got time to explain, but we are going to grimmauld place,’ he said, scooping Harry’s magical books which were on the floor into a trunk with a flick of his wand.
’I forgot to tell you, Happy Birthday,’ he added.
’Thanks,’ Harry said, stuffing the letter from R.A.B into his pocket. He didn’t want anyone to see it, so as lupin turned around, Harry hastily stuffed the note into the locket.
’How are we going?’ Harry asked.
’We will apparate, but lets wait for Tonks to bring Ron first.’
’Ron’s coming? I haven’t got an apparation licence, and neither has Ron.’
’Well Harry, I decided that for your birthday present you will have an apparation test, and Ron will too.’
’Thanks Remus,’ Harry said, feeling exited.
’POP’
Two people appeared into Harry’s bedroom. One was a tall boy with flaming red hair, wearing a pair of jeans and a black t-shirt, the other was a witch with bright pink hair. Tonks had attempted to look like a muggle, by wearing a pink t-shirt and a pair of pink jeans.
’Hello Harry, Remus, we can’t stay long,’ Tonks said.
’Very well, Harry, hold on to my arm, Ron, you do the same with Tonks. We are going to go to the ministry.’
’One, Two, Three.’

Harry felt his legs sweep of the ground. He opened his eyes and saw alot of blurs. His head started spinning, and then he hit the cold floor. They had arrived in a well lit corridor, with only one door which read “apparation tests”.
As soon as they arrived a woman appeared.
’Mr Ronald Weasly, your examination is ready.’
’Good luck,’ Harry and Lupin said.
’Thanks’ Ron answered and walked into the room behind the door.

’How do people get in?’ Harry asked, not spotting any other doors.
’They apparate, side-along of course,’ answered Tonks.
The woman appeared again, but without Ron.
’Harry James Potter, please follow me for your test,’ she said walking into the open door.
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i got another post but its not that long, it will do for now though

chapter 1 cont...
As Harry walked in he couldn’t spot Ron. Wondering if Ron had passed, Harry took a seat.
’Mr Potter, do you remember what you need to do, walk into that circle there,’ with a wave of her wand a red circle appeared.
Harry walked into the circle trying to remember the thing he had learned in the apparation lessons in Hogwarts.
’Now, it’s your turn to try to go into the yellow circle there, as a circle appeared. Remember, Destination, Deliberation, and Determination’
Destination, Deliberation, and Determination, Harry kept saying these words in his head.
Now he had to do it. Focusing hard on the yellow circle, he kept trying to move until… he did, not knowing how, he had just apparated.
’Well Mr Potter, you have passsed, as did Mr Weasly. You are free to leave’
Harry walked back out of the door, seeing Ron, lupin and Tonks.
’I passed,’ he said
’Well done, that’s one thing done, now we all will go different ways.’ Lupin Said. ‘Tonks, you take Ron to the Burrow. Me and Harry will be there shortly, we just need to sort something out.’
And with a ‘pop’, Tonks and Ron dissapeared.

’Harry, we are going to go to Grimmauld Plc. As dumbledore died last term, the house is visible, the longer it can be seen the worse, we need to sort something out. Now, its better for you to apparate with me for now, can you do that?’ Lupin said.
’Yes but-’
’Not now, on three, one, two, three’
Then room started spinning, everything was blurred, and then they landed.

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There is one more post for chapter 1, it should be on soon
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just great like ever!!!!!
and Harry had to pass.....how could he not....he's good at everthing(i know i know, he needs Hermy's help to pass sometimes...but he's good....now, isn't he?)
love it....post the other part sooon!!
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this is my first fic and it would be great if u posted ur comments, for improving,etc...i will probably post on a regular basis,(around 2 every week unless i get caught up with school work) and my story takes place after Half Blood Prince so if u havnt read HBP then i advise u to find somthing else to read.
Thnks for reading this FF
Allucha you're so sweet you're writing a fic and you didn't tell me. I subscribed, and I'm going to read it, because you didn't ask me too. People always ask me, but I don't usually have the time, but you didn't ask, and well you're nice to read my fic anyways so...

*pops out of the door* Ta da! Here I am...and I brought Teddy too. *Allucha's going "Oh, no!"*

I have to bring him with me Allucha he knows where I live. LOL.

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Harry pulled of the letter from the barn owl, which flew out of the window as soon as the letter was off.
The letter was water logged but Harry could make out the letters.
I saw a little problem with this first paragraph, I hope you don't think I'm being too picky, tell me to shut up and I will if you don't want my critiques okay? I won't be offended. But I think you used the word letter too often, you might refer to it as other things. Like, "it, the item, the package, the parchment, etc." so that it doesn't sound too redundant, and that last one you could have used the word 'writing' to make it sound less confusing with the letter. Just a thought.

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I noticed that too...which is also very good, even more mystery so of course you've got my attention now. LOL.

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I failed to do what I wrote
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The most interesting letter of all, and still more mystery... so very very good, you've got my attentions.

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Now you've just killed me with suspense. I'll be back to read more laters so I guess you're cliffies worked. I hate my classes.
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Well, Here it is, the last part of chapter 1.

Harry opened his eyes and was standing in the kitchen of No.12 Grimmauld Place. Then, sickness came over him. He still felt guilty for the death of Sirius, but he knew that he should concentrate on the job at hand.
The room was crowded with people, who Harry expected, were Order members. One of them had noticed that Harry and Lupin had arrived, so he drew them two chairs in mid air and they fell to the ground.
’C’mon Harry, sit down. The quicker we do this the quicker we can go out’ Lupin said, not looking pleased with all the people who were in the room.
’Well, we all know Dumbledore died last term, and as he was secret keeper, he was magically connected to this house. So when he died, two portraits belonging to Albus Dumbledore appeared. One, in the headmasters office in Hogwarts, and one, strangely enough, here.’
’Where?’ a tall blond women asked.
’Look behind you’ Lupin answered.
And there, behind the woman was a portrait with a sleeping man with a silver beard.
’But what are we actually here for?’ Harry said
’Oh yes, well, in the past, if a secret keeper dies, but a portrait of him is left in more than one place, he can continue being secret keeper as long as he has permission from the house owner.’
’Do you mean, do I want to keep Dumbledore’
’Yes, but I warn you that it might not all be good-’
’I want Dumbledore’.
’If you are sure then I should tell you that your friends have been waiting for you at the burrow and might lose their patience.’

Its Short but now i can start posting on chapter 2
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I'm all caught up Allucha. I'm sorry I haven't been posting more...busy with stuffs. But I'm all caught up and I plan to stay that way, I'll give you reviews from here on in, if you'd like. For now, all I can say is. Interesting, *crying* I still can't believe Dumbledore's gone. I really loved him, but I didn't realize it until the end of book 6 *crying some more*

I only didn't like how when Ron and Tonks appeared you really didn't give Harry and Ron time to say hi, or even mention that they looked at each other, I mean they are best mates and all. I guess it all just happened too quickly...LOL Also you didn't have to actually write them taking the test, but that's okay. Just give Ron some lines LOL *tackle glomps Ron* He's my favorite character so...*shrugs* back laters Allucha and thanks for posting.
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I only didn't like how when Ron and Tonks appeared you really didn't give Harry and Ron time to say hi, or even mention that they looked at each other, I mean they are best mates and all. I guess it all just happened too quickly...LOL Also you didn't have to actually write them taking the test, but that's okay. Just give Ron some lines LOL *tackle glomps Ron* He's my favorite character so...*shrugs* back laters Allucha and thanks for posting.
yeah, they were in a rush to sort the stuff at grimmauld plc
i should b posting by sunday
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hmmm nice post.....Ofcourse, harry wants dumbledore....how can he not....????
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