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Old 04-14-2009, 02:45 PM   #26 (permalink)

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Wow. Draco kisses Becky makes her faint and beats up Pansy. It's all very interesting and intertaining.
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Go Draco! Punch that pug-faced Pansy in the face! I' say a couple more things about Pansy but that would get me kicked of snitchseeker. Love it!
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i cant believe draco punched pansy in the face!!!

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Love the story so far!!! Nice plot!!!
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you are an excellent writer.
Plzz try being an author for a profession............
who knows,maybe we'll worship you like JK one day?
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Chapter 13-In the Hospital Wing

“Cho, Cho!” Flo yelled racing through the halls. She grabbed her friend’s hand and yanked her through the hallway. “Becky’s hurt!” What?, How?” Cho yelled. “I don’t know!, I was walking down the hall and I heard something about Becky in the hospital wing and Draco punching Pansy.” Flo replied. “He punched Pansy?” Cho asked. “Guess so” replied Flo. Soon they reached the hospital wing and burst through the doors. “Where’s Becky?” Cho yelled. Madame Pomfrey looked up. “Some people are trying to rest in here, Miss Chang, there’s no need to yell. Becky’s in that bed, by Mr. Malfoy. Flo and Cho ran over to the bed. “Is she dead?” shrieked Flo. “Honestly, you don’t have to yell in my ear.” Draco grumbled. “She’s not dead, she just fainted.” “When? How? Why?” asked Flo. “Uh... well she looked up and saw me and then she just kind of fell over.” Flo stared at him. “She fainted because she saw you?” she asked. “Yeah...” Draco said. Suddenly Becky stirred “Draco?” “I’m right here” he said looking down at her. “Flo and Cho are here too.” Becky smiled and opened her eyes. “Oh, thank goodness Becky, you scared us!” Flo said, looking relieved. “Yeah, don’t ever do that again!” Cho said. Becky looked around “What happened anyway?” Flo glanced at Draco. “Draco said you saw him and then you fainted.” “Oh...yeah I remember now.” she looked over at Draco “Did you bring me up here?” she asked. “Yeah” Draco replied looking down. “Apparently he punched Pansy as well” said Cho, grinning. “What?” asked Becky. “Well...um she was making fun you, and well yeah, I punched her.” he said. “Speaking of a certain pug...” Cho was looking over at the door where Pansy had just stomped in. “Fix my nose!” she screeched. Madame Pomfrey raised her eyebrows “Been in a fight have we, Miss Parkington?” “I said fix my nose!” Pansy screeched again. Mrs. Pomfrey raised her eyebrows even higher. “Perhaps I should fix your attitude while I’m at it, young lady.” Becky, Cho, and Flo all grinned and even Draco smirked a little.
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oh my gosh, you guys are so nice!! thank you sooo much for all of your replies!! There are only four chapters left in this fanfiction. However, I'm working on a sequel called "A New Beginning" The chapters are longer in this one, and I'm written three chapters so far, but I kind of have writters block right now, so it could take a while. But anyway, thank you once again for all of the nice things you have said!!
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you are a great writer! cant wait for the sequel. i hope becky and draco are together in it. there are so cute!
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your very welcome!

i still love this story!

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Chapter 14-The Beginning of the End

Soon it was time for Christmas break. Draco and Flo were about to board the train to go home. “I’ll miss you Cho, and you Becky.” Flo said, hugging them both. “Make sure you write!” “We will” they both replied. The train pulled up and Draco and Flo got on. They rode in silence, each lost in their own thoughts. “We’re here.” Said Draco, a while later, shaking Flo, who had fallen asleep. They got out of the train, and found their mother waiting for them, standing by their car. “Hello!” Narcissa beamed. “Hi” they replied. They got into the car and drove toward the Malfoy manor. When they got home, they both headed upstairs towards their rooms. Later Narcissa called them down to eat. She smiled at them “Eat up” she said. “Just a moment” Lucius Malfoy stepped out of the shadows. Narcissa looked frightened. “Lu...Lucius, I didn’t know you were home yet.” Lucius ignored her. He looked at Flo “Is it true that you have been associating with mudbloods?” he asked in a low voice, staring at her with no emotion in his eyes. “Don’t call them mudbloods!” Flo yelled angrily. “So you have!” bellowed Lucius. Then in a cold voice he said “Stand up. Stand up!” “Lucius...” Narcissa began. But Lucius continued to ignore her. Facing Flo he shouted “You’re no daughter of mine! Avada Kedavra!” A green light shot from the end of his wand. Time seemed to freeze. Flo was lifted into the air, lying on her back, her feet out in front of her, one leg slightly bent. Her arms were spread out and her beautiful white blond hair seemed to glow. She was beautiful. She hung in mid-air for only a second, but it seemed like an eternity. Then she dropped, in a crumpled heap on the floor. The three other Malfoys stood staring at her. “Flo” Draco whispered, they shouted “Flo!” he raced to her body. Narcissa slowly looked over at Lucius. She was shaking “You...you killed my daughter!” she yelled. There was a crazy gleam in her eyes. “Avada Kedavra!” She yelled pointing at Lucius. The she too ran over to Flo and held her her, crying, her shoulders shaking.
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OH NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Bad Lucius!!!
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BLOSSOM:NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! How could you!! Bring her back now!! It definetly won't be a sequel without Flo!!!!!AAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!! You killed her off.

SHAZZA: Don't worry she reacted like this when she read the Last Battle chapter in Harry Potter 7. She doesn't like it when characters she likes die. Ignore her. By the way a very interesting last post!! Now I am with Blossom!!! BRING HER BACK!!!! LOL Just kidding I won't get angry at you like Blossom did. She is a bit temperamental (whatever that means). Also I agree with Hermione<3Ron, I'm glad Lucius is dead!!!
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wow what a shocking twist in the story !! what will happen to draco, now he is so lonely!!!
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OMG!!! I LOVE THIS!! How could you kill Flo? WWHHYY??? Bring her back!!! PAMSoonish!!!


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Chapter 15- The Funeral

Dumbledore held a funeral for Flo at Hogwarts. Nearly the whole student body and their families had come. Flo’s coffin was white with pink roses. Draco looked at it bitterly. He thought it was too nice for a funeral. He wanted to rush over there and shake Flo, make her wake up. She was dressed in a beautiful silver gown, and looked so peaceful she could have been sleeping. But of course she wasn’t. She was dead, gone forever, and she would never return. He also wanted to shake Narcissa, who, it seemed, hadn’t stopped crying since Flo had died. Dumbledore was speaking about Flo, about what a wonderful person she had been and blah, blah, blah. Draco didn’t really hear it. He was thinking about how he wished he had known her better. Maybe they could have rebelled against their father together. But she was gone. A sad song began playing and Draco’s eyes filled with tears.
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Chapter 16- Talking

Cho and Becky stood next to each other crying quietly. The last time they had seen Flo, they had been hugging and saying that they would see each other after Christmas break. But now they knew they would not. Flo was gone forever. Never coming back. When the funeral was over they walked out of the Great Hall and went for a walk. Cho broke the silence “Remember when Flo put that sign on Pansy that said: I am a pug face! ?” Becky smiled a little. “Yeah” then she sighed “It won’t be the same without her. “Yeah...”Both girls fell silent, lost in thought. “How could he just kill her!?” Cho suddenly shouted, startling Becky. “I mean, it was his daughter, and...and he just killed her!” Cho ended in a whisper “was he crazy or something?” “He was kind of crazy.” a voice said, startling both Cho and Becky. “Draco?” Becky asked. “Hi” he said looking at them. “How are you feeling?” Cho asked gently, looking at him. “How do you think I’m...” Draco was cut off by the sound of someone apparting. “Oh no” Draco said, staring at the person who had just apparted. “I don’t need this right now.”
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Oh no. Flo!! Poor Draco. Who apparated? What is going on?
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