yayyyy!
Thanks for the comment!
Her family other than Ella doesnt know about Sirius.
They would freak if they knew she was marrying a "criminal"
=DDDDD

Hello Heather. It's so good to get to read another post. I'm so happy that Jenny and Serius is getting married. They are so happy, I know because you wrote it so well I can feel their happiness. I'd love to know how it was handled. Will we find out later, or can we make up things in our own minds? Yes! She would be the perfect one to call for this task. Very nice touch.
Well, Heather, I really did enjoy your chapter. Hope it won't be too long before the next one.

Hey sorry I havent posted in awhile!

Disclaimer: Everything Harry Potter belongs to the lovely Jk Rowling.

Chapter 13

Ella sat in corner sipping on her hot coca, watching her sister and new brother dance. She smiled at how her sister was laughing. She had never seen her so happy. Her peace was interrupted when the dancing stopped and Sirius came up to her and grabbed her to dance. Ella laughed.
“Oh, so you want to dance with my baby sister???” Jenny said while laughing

“I will dance with your God son!” Jenny grabbed Harry and started to dance.

Ella had not laughed in a long time. Harry seemed happy, with the next task coming up the wedding seemed to calm him.

Finally Ella retreated to her corner.

She smiled at the sight of Mr. and Mrs. Weasley dancing.
Out of the corner of her eye she noticed Ron staring at Hermione from a distance.


“Go ask her.” Ella said nudging him
“ She will say no” Ron said , his ears turning red.

“You might want to redeem yourself.” Ella said grinning.

Ron glared at Ella and then slowly went up to Hermione

Ella smiled.

A rustle from outside made Ella remember Snape was guarding the shack.
She got a mug of hot cocoa, pointed her wand at the hot liquid said and incantation and went looking for Snape.

He was cold, it was obvious. His cloak wrapped around him tightly made him look vulnerable.

“Here is some coca.” Ella said holding the mug up to him.

“Thank you” He said reaching for his wand.

“I already said calor.”

“Oh thanks..”

“You don’t like him do you?” She stared ahead staring at the beauty of Hogwarts.
“Sirius I mean.”

“No” Snape said sharply

Ella couldn’t help but giggle.

“What?” Snape said

“Its just I knew you would be blunt about it.” Ella said

“Hmmm”

“Thank you very much for dealing with the Malfoy situation.” Ella said nervously.

“I partly blame myself, I allowed myself to be open.” Ella said not sure if she should say more.

“Don’t blame yourself.” Snape said

“ Ella? Ella! Where are you!” Jenny’s voice was calling her back to the shack.
“ Ella ,thank you for the coco” Snape glanced over at Ella.

“ Your welcome”

Ella walked back into the shack and sat quietly by her self

…………………………….

At about 2am the bride and groom plus Dumbledore left.


“Well we better get back” Said Fred.

“Excuse me children , we have cleaning to do!” Mrs. Weasley said stopping everyone in their tracks.

Ella could see Lupin having a laugh

“Mother, how is it cleaning when we have to make it dirty again?”

“Oh and you expect me to do this all by my self?” Mrs. Weasley was not pleased.

“No” said fred in defeat

In just an hour the shack looked back to normal

“Just how I remember it.” Lupin said with no hint of laughter.

McGonagall gathered up the Gryffindor’s and ushered them back up to the common room.

No one spoke they just went up to their dorms and passed out. Ella was grateful that she had one more day of solitude before classes began.


………………………………………………………………………………………

Before she knew it, Ella would have to show herself at classes.

With her eyes focused strait ahead she ignored the sniggers and jeers. Unfortunately the Slytherin’s were hard to ignore.
“Did you like snogging a slytherin?” one boy yelled

“There is enough for us to go around!” another yelled.

Ella had enough. The tears began to well up fast and all she could do was run.
The pictures became a blur from the tears that clouded her vision. Finally she found the handle to the door of transfiguration and slammed it behind her.

In unison the class turned to see who had slammed the door.

“sorry.”
Ella said in barely a whisper.

“Well, now that Miss. Greene thinks it is time to start class, lets begin.”

Ella sunk in her chair embarrassed.
The entire class period, she sat their in silence only once did she ask McGonagall to repeat a spell.

When the bell rang, Ella was happy that it was lunch time.

“Ella, wait up!” Harry said running up to Ella.

“I am not going to the great hall.”
“I am going to study in the library.”

“You need to face them” Harry said

“Maybe so, but it is hard.” Ella said looking down. Before Harry could say anything else they were interrupted.

“Ella Greene” Snape voice was elevated.

“Follow me, please.” He was direct

Ella was not ready for what was about to happen.

“Sir, I don’t want to eat lunch in the hall today.” Ella said. Her voice pleading.

Snape kept walking with his hand grasping her arm pulling her to the hall.

He made his way to the middle of the large room and stood in silence.

“Could you tell me why we are here?” She was getting angry.

Then she saw Malfoy and she began to shake.

“What are you going to do?” Ella was shaking even more.

Snape held his wand to his throat.

“Draco Malfoy, up here!”

Ella in shock watched as Malfoy slowly crept forward.

Finally the hall was full.

With his wand to his throat, Snape began.

“SILENCE!”

Everyone turned and faced Snape.

Ella was on the right and Malfoy was on the left.

“Draco Malfoy used poison against Ella Greene to try to take advantage of her.”
“What do you say to your fellow classmates Mr. Malfoy?”
Ella glanced over to see Snape glaring at him.
“I am very sorry, and please stop bullying her, she did nothing wrong”

Snape grabbed his wand from the direction of Malfoy and again pointed it at his throat.

“If anyone uses poison against another student for seduction will face the same punishment Mr. Malfoy is facing.”
“Which is the following.”

“Your parents will be contacted.”
“3 month detention with Hagrid in the forbidden Forrest. And breakfast , lunch and dinner will be in my office doing potion lines.”
“If I hear any remarks to Miss. Greene, the same punishment will be placed on you!”

“Let that be a warning to you all.”
Snape grabbed Malfoy by his collar and hastily walked out of the hall.

Ella found a seat next to her friends and ate her food without any interruption from the Slytherirns.


As the bell rang, Ella finally spoke

“That was humiliating, to say the least.” Ella said.
“I think it was more humiliating to Malfoy” Ginny said passing by.

Hermione changed the subject.

“I am going to the library, we have an hour, anyone want to come?”

They groaned, but followed.

“I am researching my wizard family tree.”
“You should too, Harry”
“What about Ron?” Harry said trying to get out of the research.

“I have a family tree somewhere.” Ron said stuffing a brownie in his mouth.

“Ella aren’t you pure blood?

“ Yes, it is rare in America, but yes the Greene’s are .”

“I have my birth certificate and the name of the most recent witch in the family.” Hermione said pulling them out of a sealed envelope.

“This is really interesting Hermione!” Ella said glancing at the information

“How do you get your birth certificate?” Ella said

“Most parents keep them for you until you’re of age”

“That is strange”
“Why, even magic born receive them” Ron chipped in.

“ No, I mean my mom said she didn’t know what one was , and that there was no need for one.”

“Write your parents , or even request one from the hospital.”
“Ill do that, Thanks Hermione!”

“Your welcome!” Hermione said

Ella pulled out a parchment and quill and began writing a letter to the hospital where she was born.

Hello Heather. Have I told you how much I love reading your ff? I love the little things you put in to keep things fresh in our minds of whats going on like the next challenge for Harry. He doesn't beat around the bush, does he. I would have been petrified! Oh wow! I'm thinking that Hermione didn't have any witch blood in her ancestery, but then, Slughorn did know some Granger's that used magic, so maybe she does have witches in the family. Uh oh. This sounds like problems. I wonder if Jenny knows anything.
Great post Heather. I'll be watching for the next one.

NEW READER!

Wow, oh wow, this is so good!

OMG Snape laughed, it happened!

And Sirius marrying Jenny, I did not see that coming!

Haha, loved Snape's christmas present to Ella.

YES! Malfoy get's his comeuppance!

GO SNAPE!

Connie, your comments Rock =))))))


Something crazy is brewing !! ( crazy mad scientist laugh) = 000000000000

Hey Ruby!
I’m glad you like it , I will message you when new chapters are posted .

Keep the comments coming!

-Heather

Hey Heather!

Another great chapter! I am thoroughly enjoying Ella, as the forth in a once intimate group of three. You have done wonders with her character.

Your writing is very realistic, and when Sirius pulled Ella up to dance in an almost playful manner, it was quite easy to imagine. I always thought Sirius had a bit of the devil in him, as witnessed by his friendship with James.

I am also really enjoying the friendship which has developed between Ella and Severus. All through JK’s book, I readily hated Snape and his attitude toward the Gryffindors, but you have successfully brought out the humanistic side he must have surely shared with Lily back when they were younger. I love this almost kind side of Snape.

I have one question for you... Why would Jenny be so concerned about her sister, even calling for her, only to leave her to sit alone in the corner? I know it’s in Ella’s personality to stand alone, but in this case, she’d been having a conversation with Snape...

Ohhh... another thing I really liked was the idea of Mr. and Mrs. Weasley dancing together! Don’t ask me why, but to me, this was a truly important and visual part of your chapter. To me, Arthur and Molly are the purest example of true love.

Speaking of the Weasleys... I think Molly is the greatest mother in the world! I can just picture the kids all shuffling off, claiming to be exhausted, just so they won’t have to help with the clean-up! Typical teenagers! So, here’s another question I’m curious about... Why didn’t Molly just wave her wand and have the room cleaned in mere seconds? Was there a lesson in there somewhere?

Next... Ella’s embarrassment during classes, after the Malfoy incident. I really liked the picture you were able to portray of Ella. I was, however, annoyed at McGonagall’s rather cavalier attitude. Imagine centering Ella out after what she’s been through! I just wanted to poke the old bat!

Now, Snape... Snape was my hero after he, I thought, finally punished Malfoy in the appropriate manner. That you were able to punish him in such a way, as to embarrass him as much as he’d done Ella, was too good! I think it’s about time Malfoy got what he was due! Yay, Snape! I also thought it was hilarious that Ella felt humiliated rather than satisfied by Malfoy’s punishment.

Lastly... Where are you going with the ‘Ella/Birth Certificate’ idea? I found it very mysterious and intriguing... I know you are going to have an excellent story line behind it, and can’t wait to find out where you’ll be taking us next in your story! I have a head full of potential ideas and wait, rather impatiently, for your next chapter!

Great chapter, Heather, and like I said... I CAN”T WAIT for the next chapter!

Katie

This Chapter is important. I really went in a different direction that originally planed. But I like how it panned out. Someone in the comments asked a really tough question and I believe I answered too soon. I made it so technically what I answered could be taken different ways. Anyway I hope you enjoy its long and crazy! Oh and Katie , I hope some of your questions are answered in this chapter.

Disclaimer: Anything Harry Potter belongs to JK Rowling.


Chapter 14


“Ella this is not your best work” Snape said
“The solution should be clear, and this, this is cloudy.” He pointed his wand to the potion brewing in the cauldron.
“ Do it again.” He snapped.

“ Sir it is eleven.” Ella groaned
“I want clean notes, and everything to be perfect, I will be back to check.” And with that He left Ella alone.

Ella glanced to see Malfoy with his nose in a book and his quill writing fiercely.

Good, she thought.
At least he was being quiet, but why did he have to leave her with him.

Ella threw away her notes, and began to wash out cauldron.

“You know he washes his cauldron the same way you do.” Came a whisper from the back.

“I don’t know where you coming from, but I suggest you shut your mouth”

“ Plus, all potion masters handle their cauldrons the same way.” Ella murmerd back to him.
She knew she had to focus if she was to get back to her dormitory anytime soon.

She grasped the lid with her left hand and with her right she held her wand.
She then tilted the cauldron and uttered a spell in which a silvery liquid came out of her wand.

She circled her wand until the entire cauldron was clean.

She sat the cauldron on the burner, and began to heat it.

A sort off peace fell on her, and even Malfoy wasn’t going to distract her. This was her time.
“Now , what did I do…….”
She read the instructions clearly.

“Dittany is a major ingredient, but not the main. To heal wounds faster than what dittany would add one half ladle dragon blood, heat for half hour and then add crushed dittany leaves in a circler motion .”

She read aloud a few more lines.

“Not used for normal wounds, the dragon’s blood when heated will turn clear, unlike the purple or cloudy seen in medical potions.”

She made sure she did everything perfect to what the directions said to do. She even crushed the leaves extra than before.

About an hour and a half went by and Professor Snape opened the door to see her progress.

“Well Miss. Greene it looks like you’ve done it, but we need to test it..” He said looking proud.

Ella took her knife and in her palm made a deep cut.

“ Are you that sure?” Snape said shocked
Ella took her dropper and poured the liquid into the cut.
Instantly it turned pink and sealed up.
Ella smiled.
“ I was sure.” “ But one more thing, I’m not sure what I did the first time to not make it work?” She said.

“If the leaves are not crushed small enough, the potion will not turn out.”
“Your leaves were simply too large.” He began to explain why the potion didn’t turn out.
Ella’s faced dropped.

“Ella, anytime the directions say crush, you must crush into fine pieces.”

“What are the differences between this potion and what Madame Pomfrey uses.”

“Madame Pomfrey uses a potion which yes heals , but for deep or extreme wounds this is what the hospital uses.”
“She will be happy to have a few vials on hand , for those circumstances”

Snape glanced at Malfoy with a stern look.
“Malfoy , you can go .”

Ella saw that Malfoy with a nod left immediately.

“Now, sit down.” Snape seemed antsy like he was holding something in.

Ella sat down wondering what Snape was up to.

“I have something to tell you.”

“Ok, what is it?”

“I have contacted the ministry and informed them of your talents.” “We have reached an agreement that there is a way you can skip the rest of your forth year potions, fifth, sixth and seventh year!!” Snape was grinning from ear to ear.

“How?” Ella was intrigued.
“Well, if you agree to this , the minister himself will come to Hogwarts and give you the following: A parchment, for detailed notes, one vial, that will be tested and a card with the potion that must be done to perfection”

“If the potion is perfect, then you will not have to attend classes” He was smiling at this point.

“Well, You will have two hour sessions three times a week with me instead.”

“This is a lot to take in” Ella said.

“Once I send an owl , you will have two days to prepare, on the third its test time.” Snape said

“Any clue to the potion?” Ella was concerned.
“None”

“There is no pressure” Snape said reassuringly.

“What if I fail?” She said worried.
“Then we stick to the same schedule.”

“You wont fail” He said assuring her.
“I don’t want to let you down.” She said with her head down.
Snape reached over and held her hand.
“You wont.”

“Ok, I am up for the challenge.” Ella said with a smile.
“Great!”
“Ill send the owl now.”

“ Go to bed, you will have no classes for the three days.”
“ Ill send your stuff up, go and get some sleep.”

Snape rushed out of the room.
Ella got up slowly.

Questions were racing through her mind. What if she failed? What would Snape think?

She walked to her dormitory in a state of shock.

Thankfully, no one was in the common room and she plopped in front of the fire place.

Her peace was interrupted by the low voice of Neville Longbottom.

“Was it hard to be in the same room as Malfoy.”
“Oh, hi Neville, yes , yes it was.”
“Neville, I can tell you something?” Ella’s voice was soft.

“Well, yes” Neville walked next to her.

“If Draco would of asked me to be his girlfriend , I think I would of said yes.” “With or Without the potion.”

Before Neville could say anything, she got up and patted his shoulder and walked away.



Ella was up before anyone else.
She braided her long dark hair into a single side braid, and gathered her books and her suitcase.

She headed down to the great hall which was empty but for a few older Ravenclaw’s.

She sat down and began eating her eggs.
Then it hit her, the pressure began to take over, and she began to shake .

“My dear what is the matter?” Came a soft voice.

Ella glanced up to see Dumbledore staring at her in confusion.
“Oh, Sir I am just worried.”

“Don’t be , it wont matter what score you receive” Ella sighed.
“But isn’t it exciting, a student hasn’t taken this test for eighty years!!” Her eyes went large after hearing what else Dumbledore had to say.

“Thanks, that helps.” She said being sarcastic.
“Oh Miss. Greene, I guess that wouldn’t help, anyway good luck!”

Ella’s tensions eased as the hall began to fill with more students including her friends.

“Potions all day?” Ron said with a look of disgust.

“Yeah, that’s the cool part.” Ella said eating her toast.

“That is the worst part!” Ron said as everyone laughed.

“Hermione, I meant to tell you last night I completed this potion that I think will be most useful for you.”

“Really? What is it?”

“Well, its basically an upgraded healing potion.”
“It has dittany ,but uses dragon blood!”
“ I’ll write down the instructions , I mean as much trouble you three get into , you might need it.”

“I would save it for a few years, it actually works better with age.”

“Oh , that would be useful! Thanks!”
“Look, how my wound is healing!”
“Ouch!” Everyone said at once.
Ella showed them her pink scar on her palm.

“ It wasn’t bad”

“Harry you really should focus on your egg!” Hermione bellowed at Harry.
“Yeah, yeah ,yeah”
“She’s right you know.” Ella said nodding her head.
“Yeah , unfortunately she is.”

The screeching of owls was heard overhead and Ella saw Chauncy from the pack. Her parents wrote back.

Dearest Ella,
There is no possible need for your birth certificate. I have it in safe keeping.
-Mom and Dad.

“They wont give you it?” Hermione said in outrage.
“ Oh , I will get it.” Ella said determined as ever.
Ella pulled out a parchment and a quill and began to right.

St Lukes Wizard Hospital
To whomever this may concern:
My name is Ella Rae Greene, and I am requesting my birth certificate. Please use my owl; he will know where to go.
Thanks, Ella R. Greene.

After finishing the letter she gave it to Chauncey and took off herself.
“See you guys at lunch!”

Ella walked up to the library, and found the spot that the librarian Madame Pince had set up for her.


“Let it be known, This was not my decision.” “ I usually close at eight pm, but I have to be open for you till midnight.” Madame Pince said all this in disgust.
“Miss. Priss.” Ella said hissing.
“Its Pince.” The librarian snapped.
“ Priss, I am here to study , not for your nonsense.”
Ella smiled, and the lanky librarian walked off in a huff.

Ella opened her bag and pulled out her books. Then she pulled out her cauldron and everything needed to make potions.

“ Protego” She said scanning the area with her wand.

“Why is there a need for a protective charm , Miss Greene!’

“Well, I don’t want green acid slime to eat away your precious books!”
“ Hmmp….” Was the sound that came from Madame Pince.

Ella laughed.

The hours passed by and nothing seemed to stick in Ella’s brain.

The frustration began to bottle, and the sixth and seventh year books were harder than she thought.

“How are you doing, Ella ?” Dumbledore calmly asked.
“ Not good professor.”
“Well, let’s see here.” He said grabbing her book.

Dumbledore glanced at the page of her fifth year book.

“Study, tips for creating potions from your fourth year and fifth year books.” “Then study actual potions from sixth and seventh.” “Study what you don’t know.”

“The ministry is not tricky, even though they think they are” “They will choose a potion from your seventh year textbook.” “I’ll bet you ten galleons on that one!” Dumbledore said.

“Thanks , Sir.” She took his advice and opened her sixth and seventh year books and began to skimming.

Ella skipped lunch and studied her books intently. She chose a seventh year potion and began to work on it.




“Miss. Greene, this is the fifth time an explosion as happened!”

“I know I know.” Ella said rolling her eyes.
“ What am I doing wrong????” She didn’t care she was talking aloud.

“Well, fix it whatever it is because, well this is a library, and you’re a big distraction!” Madame Pince face was red.

Ella looked up from her simmering cauldron. She had enough.

“ Shhhh, don’t you know this is a library, and Im trying to study.” Ella said smiling at Madame Pince.
“Go pet Mrs. Norris and make Filch happy.” She knew she was being evil, but she didn’t care.

Ella grinned in delight as Madame Pince stormed away.

A few hours later her friends came to visit.
“Hey Ella it’s nearly seven, missed you at lunch and dinner.” Harry said as Hermione and Ron followed.

“I just can’t get this potion down!” Ella said as her anger began to rise.

“What is it?” Ron said grimacing at the nasty looking potion.

“It is a cure for stomach worms.” Ella said with no emotion.

Ron and Harry both held their stomachs in disgust.

“You think that sounds bad, read the ingredients.”
“And it keeps exploding, so I keep having to clean purple slime off me.”

“Well, we will lets you go, here is a turkey sandwich.”
“You guys are amazing!”Ella said smiling.

“We will see you later.” Harry said laughing at Ella who had almost finished the entire sandwich
" How can you eat that ,with that nasty smelling potion brewing."
" Doesnt bother me that much!" Ella said laughing at Ron.

Once they left, Ella began to stir until her potion went soupy and turned a bright yellow
.
She took out her wand and uttered "Incendio "
Her cauldron went aflame and after a few hours the soupy matter turned a bright red signaling she had correctly created her cure.

“Finally” Ella said aloud.

“Finally, you can get out of her.” Miss Pince was smiling at her witty comment.
Ella glanced at Madame Pince.
“ You secretly love me , don’t lie.” Ella said hiding the grin she had planted on her face.
“ You are that bold child?”
“Yes.”
“ Pack up and leave.” Madame Pince’s face was stern.
“ Yes , Sir.” Ella smiled.
Ella put her books away and started to fill up vials and label them.
“Ok, see you tomorrow.” Ella said as she walked out the door.

“Alright tomorrow it is.” Madame Pince shook her head and Ella could swear she smiled

By the time Ella climbed in the portrait hole it was nearly midnight.
She sat in the big comfy chair and smiled.
After all the stress of the morning, she completed a tough potion.

“Hey Ella!”
“Hey Neville, up again?”
“I just wanted to see how your studying went.”
“It went well, goodnight.”
“Night…”


The next morning Ella awoke ready to begin the day. She had to get breakfast, go to the library and some how meet up with professor Snape who seemed to be ignoring her.

“Really , he hasn’t once checked in on you.” Hermione said gathering her books.
“Nope, its been Dumbledore.” Ella said walking towards the door.
“He shows up at odd times to check in.”
“That’s weird”
“It is.”

The hall was full of students eating, studying and talking to their friends. Ella sat next to her friends, and began to eat.

Ella was eating her eggs and reading her potions book when the hooting of owls filled the air.
Ella went back to reading her book when to her surprise Chauncey came and landed on her shoulder.

“Baby, are you hungry?” She said scratching the top of his ears.
She gave him her bacon and realized he had a certified letter for her.
“Already?” She said aloud.

“That fast?” Hermione said.
“ I sent it yesterday, and all the way to America!” Ella was truly astonished.
“You are just the fastest owl!” Ella said giving him more bacon.
“Go and rest , I promise I wont use you for a while.”
As if Chauncey knew the command he hooted back and flew away.

Ella stared at the sealed envelope that CONFIDENTAL written on it. “Well are you going to open it?” Harry said nudging her.

“Yes , of course I am .”
Ella went to open the envelope when a loud voice echoed through the hall.

“ELLA GREENE”

Ella stood ,and looked at the opening of the door to see Professor McGonagall standing with her wand out.
She stuffed the envelope in her pocket and gathered her things.
“I will see you guys later, I have no idea what this is about.”
The three nodded their heads as she walked towards McGonagall.

“This way my dear.”
“What’s going on.”
“Dumbledore needs to speak with you.”

“Why”
“Lets let him explain.”

They came to the opening of his office and she said the password.
They walked up the steps ,that appeared and Ella found it weird that his door was closed.
“Wait here” McGonagall said pointing at the ground.
Ella could here faint voices, and put her ear against the wall.

“She is my daughter.”
Ella stood back in shock.
Her mother was here. At Hogwarts.

“Would you kindly lower your voice, she is right outside this room” McGonagall said with a stern sharp voice.

Ella stood back shaking with fear.
What did I do? She thought.

The latch of the door opened, and Ella saw Dumbledore.
“Come with me , Ella.”
Ella stood like a statue right in her place.
“ I’m scared.” She blurted out.
“ Don’t be , I promise everything will be ok.”
Ella took a step forward and stepped into the office.

Ella stood in the doorway and almost fainted.

A half circle encompassed Dumbledore’s large desk. Five chairs made up the circle. From left to right sat Angela, Lisa, Jenny, Deborah Greene, and Edward Greene. Ella’s entire family sat in front of her.
“Ella , sit at my desk.”

Calmly she made her way to Dumbledore’s desk and sat down. She looked to her left and saw Professor Snape and to her right Professor McGonagall.

She faced her family, and yet no one looked directly at her. Not even Jenny, who seemed to glow, would look at her.

“What is going on?” Ella said the first words.

“Why did you request your birth certificate from the hospital?” Ella’s mother snapped.
“ Because my friend Hermione is doing her ancestry and wanted to do mine.”
“What is the big deal about that?” Ella asked.

“ I told you honey there was no funny business here” Said Ella’s father to her mom.

“You guys barely write me and for a birth certificate you rush here.”
“This is not making sense.” Ella was clearly confused.

“ Its your fault!” Deborah Greene said pointing to Snape.

“Wait a minute!” Ella yelled back at her mother.
“ Why are you yelling at him?!”

Dumbledore walked over to Deborah and Edward.
“Its time.” He gave them a vile and then walked over to Snape and gave him one.
Ella turned towards Snape who looked mortified.

Each of them took out their wands and put them against their heads. All there eyes were closed and silver was being pulled out. They put the memories in the vial provided, and Dumbledore collected them.

Ella’s breathing became rapid, and her mind became blank.

Dumbledore walked towards a cabinet opened it and there appeared a pensive.

“Do you know what this is?”
Ella who had seen one just once before replied “Yes” He then asked her to come over.
Ella got up and looked into the water. Dumbledore poured the memories in the pensive.
“Don’t hate them Ella, they love you.” Dumbledore whispered.
“This is the only way to explain everything, without confusing you.”

Ella nodded, and put her head in the water.


Ella opened her eyes and she began to walk around.
She was in a small house with books everywhere. She heard a faint cry and turned away fast.
A man was sitting in an old chair with his hands on his face. His black hair was scraggily and she knew exactly who it was. She walked up to him and noticed a piece of parchment on the floor. She picked it up.

Severus Snape,
By the time this reaches you by muggle post, I will be dead. I have been in America for the past five months; I had a child, your child, a girl with dark hair and blue eyes. I am sorry I lied, but I couldn’t allow her to live in England with you. You’re to deep Severus. To deep in you know who’s grasp. She is safe. A prominent wizarding family took her in. They adore her. She was not legally adopted, but her name will be Greene. Please don’t go after her. Let her be safe.
-Jane.

Ella read the letter over and over again. She couldn’t believe it, yet for some reason she was calm. She set the letter back where it was and began to look around. This is where she could of lived, grew up. It was a sad place. She heard a shuffle and Snape stood up. He grabbed the letter pointed the wand and it went into flames.

The memory shifted. Everything around her changed and she realized she was at her old home in Ohio.

“Isn’t she beautiful?”

Ella turned around to see her mother, who was younger beaming.
She then saw her three older sisters, who were so tiny come running up to try and hold her.
“Mommy, can she sleep in my room?”
“Sure, Jenny.”

Ella couldn’t help it. The tears flooded. No matter what, she was a Greene.
Ella stood for a few minutes, and she watched as each of her siblings held her.

“No , No, not yet!” Ella yelled, but the scene had changed. She was back in Dumbledore’s office.


“What do I do?” “Could it be , it has to be.” “Her last name is Greene.” Ella saw a much older Snape pacing around Dumbledore.

“Calm Down Severus.” Dumbledore said trying to calm him down.


“How can I?” Snape snapped.
“Did you love Jane?” Dumbledore asked.

“No.” Snape said a
“ Not even a little.” Dumbledore this time had his glasses off , rubbing his eyes.

“ We were friends.”
“ I could never love her like I love….” Snape said staring out the window.

“Why didn’t you ever go find the girl?” “ She was never adopted legally.” “ In all aspects of Wizard code you could claim her.”

“Jane, was right.” “ I was in to far deep.” “ Jane always knew what to do.”
There was a pause and there for a few minutes both men were lost in thought.
But Snape interrupted the silence.
“He would of killed her, and now I cant even say I have a daughter.”

“No one knows but you, Dumbledore.”

“We will see if she is yours come sorting.” Dumbledore said with a smile.

“Do you love this?” Snape said his temper rising.

“Severus, we are dear friends.” “ I don’t like seeing you suffer, but you are overreacting.”

“What do we tell the parents?” Snape said.

“You will do nothing, I will take care of everything, and make sure we comply with the wishes of her family.” “They will be upset I am sure.” “They will be upset and possibly overreact like you are doing now.”

“That’s her family.” Snape said.
“ Exactly , that’s why they will be defensive.”
“Thank you for helping me.” Snape said sitting across from Dumbledore.
“ It will be ok.” Dumbledore said reaching for his friends hand.

Ella stood in the corner watching the dialogue in complete silence. This was all to fast..

The scene didn’t change, but Ella could tell this was a new memory because different books were on tables and the sorting hat was on Dumbledore’s desk.

“Severus, she’s your daughter.” Dumbledore said not even blinking.
“ I know.” Snape flinched as the words came out of his mouth.

“She looks like Jane.” Snape whispered back to Dumbledore.

“ I beg to differ.”

“ Her mannerisms, the way she carries herself and the dark black hair all are you.”
“ When I saw her, I saw you.”

Snape shuddered, stood up and grabbed the sorting hat. He held the hat right up to his face.
“ Why was Ella Greene put in Gryffindor?”

“You mean Ella Snape.”

“Shut it.” Snape’s voice was raspy.

“She is kind and brave, and afraid of failure.” The hat replied.

“It was hard, she could have been put in any of the houses.” “ Ravenclaw ,for her wit, Slytherin because of her gift, and Hufflepuff for empathy.” The sorting hat replied.

“What is her gift?” Snape said instantly.

“Potions.” The hat whispered.

Snape sat on the chair and dropped the hat to the floor.

Everything went black.
The scenes were gone, and Ella pulled lifted her head up.

She stared at the faces eagerly looking for her reaction.
Black began to close in and she fainted.




Well I hope you enjoyed the chapter = ) Keep the comments coming =DDDDDDD

-Heather

Hello Heather. Whys he being such a slave master? I like that you put this in. I can't believe she did that. Was she that confident in her work, or did the reaction Snape gave her when he saw the potion give her confidence, or both? I know I could never have done it. Oh my! And that's just Potions too for the fifth, sixth, and seventh years? But, still no Potions would be great. I wonder if she would enjoy school though. I mean that was what gave her the drive for getting to stay there wasn't it? Great come back for the earlier statement you put in. Tied it together very nicely. No pressure. Is he kidding?! There you see!??!?! That is more like it. Snape was just being... well ummm kind? Oh dear. I was afraid of this. I thought her mom told her they didn't give birth certificates to witches and wizards, or something like that. Now Ella will be suspicious. I would be. I loved this part. It's good she thought of that. Madame Pince should have really. Loved this part also! But, she was being an awful distraction. It's great that she has been able to see a different side to Madame Pince. Who knew she could attempt humor, or even smile?

I'm glad Dumbledore drops in on her to check how she's doing. I wonder if Snape didn't because he wanted her to stay focused on her work and not try to please him. Aaaarrggggggggggg! Just a sec. longer and we'd see what was in the envelope! Heather this whole next part is very clever, and I'm sorry to skip over it, but I just previewed my comment and it is getting pretty long. I will say that this chapter was very cleverly written, very well presented, and moved the story along in a different way than before causing more drama to unfold. Very nice. I can't wait till you post more. I hope it's soon.

very wonderfull story!!!

new chapter coming this week !!
Thanks for the patience.
Hope Everyone had a lovely Christmas and New Year

-Heather

Heather!!!

First... HAPPY NEW YEAR'S!!!! Now... still another great chapter, and although you did answer all of my questions... a new batch have quickly cropped up!

I absolutely loved the story behind Ella's birth! See, I thought Snape might have had an affair with Ella's mother, but I really didn't want to believe that even Snape could be so unkind as to be with a married woman. And yet, that would have at least explained Snape's involvement in Ella's life, and Ella would've still been with her birth mother; but your idea was so much better!

My favourite part...

This passage really showed Snape's cruel side, while still showing us just how much he loved Lily. It also explains Ella's ingeniousness (is that a word?) in the Potions' classroom. Excellent forethought and planning on your part!

Now... I also like the idea of the potions exemption, should Ella pass her very difficult examination. I'm wondering just which potion she will have to mix... I can't wait to read about it! So, if Ella passes the test and is exempted from any further Potions' classes, what do you suppose she and the trio will get up too? Just thinking out loud... sorry! And... what will all of the extra classes with Snape involve? CAN'T WAIT!

I guess what I really look forward to is the plot development between Ella and Snape, now that she knows Snape is her biological father. Will she tell Harry and the others? Will she hate him for what he did to her biological mother? Will she go looking for her true mother... but alas... she is dead... just like Harry and Tom Riddles' mothers, or is she? So as you can see, I have many questions!

A very good chapter Heather... very thought provoking! I can't wait until your new post. I may not comment right a way, but I do immediately read your chapters; they come to see by e-mail.

Happy New Years and Happy Writing, my SS friend!
Katie

Ok everyone this Chapter is small, but only because the next one has Ella's test and Harry's next challenge , so expect to see a lot more outside characters being brought in. I have an outline and I am pretty excited to see how it goes. Again everyone is great and I enjoy reading your comments.


Chapter 15

The hot sting of blood on Ella’s hand caused her to stir. She kept her eyes closed, but became fully aware of her surroundings. She passed out. She could feel everyone’s hot breath and there hands shaking her seemingly limp body. With some sort of courage she opened her eyes, but wished she could shut them again.
“You have to face your fears, Ella.” A slight whisper was faint in her ear.
Ella listened to the voice and slowly opened her eyes.

It took her a minute, but she soon reached her feet and quickly swallowed the potion Snape had for her. Her faint feeling went away and the wound on her head healed instantly.
“Have a seat Ella.” Dumbledore was the first to speak.
Ella sat in his chair and closed her eyes. She began a silent pray of courage.

“You probably have questions, which is normal.” Said her brash father.
Ella, her eyes barely opened began to scan the room.

She looked at her mother and then to her sisters.
“Why I was not informed is the main question.” Ella's voice cracked, as she tried to not show any emotion.
“We were told not to tell you anything about him” “He was supposedly dangerous.” Edward Greene said instantly. "That was the wishes of the women who bore you." Her father was frank and emotionless.
Not expecting anything less from her father she
glanced at Snape who stood at the door.
Ella wanted to ask why this Jane had said he was in too deep.
Could it be that he had ties with the dark lord?
Ella remained quiet.
She hated seeing their faces. They deceived her. Jenny and her shared everything.
Ella had enough.
She pushed her chair back, stood up and did not even glance at Snape who moved fast at her approach.
She opened the door, walked out, and slammed it shut.
She stood behind the door with her hand still on the latch when everything began to slow down.
She did what her body told her to do and ran.
She ran and pushed passed people to get back to the common room.
She didn’t even noticed Harry standing with Ginny.
All she heard was a yell.
“What the? Ella!” Ella could tell the yell was clearly Harry’s voice.

She finally reached the portrait hole. She stopped and pleaded with her brain to remember the darn password.

“ Snickleberry”


The door swung opened and to her happiness no one was there.
She walked to the dormitory and making sure the curtains were pulled, she laid in her bed. So many questions ran through her mind.
She could not stop the racing. What had to of been fifteen minutes, Ella awoke from her trance to the door creaking open.

“Ella… we know your in here, your curtains are pulled”
Ella sat up to the voice of her friend Hermione Granger.
Hermione opened the curtain to reveal herself with Ginny Weasley.
Ella glanced at her friend’s sister in suspicion.
Hermione sensing Ella putting up a guard began to reassure her.
“She won’t say a word.” Hermione said sternly nodding her head.
“Really Ella I won’t.” Said Ginny
Ella reached in her robe took out an envelope and handed it to Hermione.
Both girls sat on the bed with Ella and Hermione broke open the seal and read the contents.


Ella Rae Snape
05/17/1980
Mother Jane L. Bowman
Father Severus Snape
Healer: Thaddeus Legman.

Adopted at 1 day old to
Edward Greene
Deborah Greene

Hermione finished reading and with wide eyes she folded the paper and handed it back to Ella.
Ginny had the same wide eyes expression.
“Well everyone in school was right.”
Ginny said shrugging her shoulders.
“Everyone knew but me????” Ella eyes were beaming at the red haired Weasley.
“Ella, you do have a slight resemblance and well the whole potions thing.” Hermione said

“Do not tell anyone about this.” Ella said in a tone that silenced the other girls.
“Only Ron and Harry will know, and I will tell them”
The girls in front of Ella nodded.

“Hermione, will you do something for me?” Ella said.
“Yes, anything.” Hermione had no idea, what Ella would want.
“ Will you research the name Jane Bowman”
“Your biological mother?” Remembering the name she had just read.
“ Yes.” Ella said.

But as Ginny began to say something , The door to the dormitory opened and Jenny Greene walked in.

“Ella please come back” She pleaded

“What are you doing here?” Ella snapped.

“You’re my sister no matter what . Blood or not.” Jenny said her voice cracking.

Ella jumped to her feat and pulled her wand. In duelers stance she stood pointing her wand directly at the chest of her eldest sister.

“Sisters tell each other everything.” Ella said in a low voice.
“It was us against Dad, Mom , Lisa, and even Angela heck even the world for that matter.” Ella’s voice was getting louder with every word spoken.

“They made me promise, Ella.” Jenny said nearly begging her sister.

“Get out!” Ella said softly.
“Ella, please.” Jenny said
Ella didn’t hear anything. Jenny was just moving her mouth , but nothing was coming out.
She was angry. Was she not aloud to be?
Hermione and Ginny just stared not daring to get involved.

“Jen, I will hit you with a charm if you do not walk out of here.” Ella said with a look of furry on her face.”

“I expected Lisa and Angela not to tell me, but you, I expected differently.” Ella said.

With that, Jenny walked out of the dormitory.

Without saying a word, Ella flicked her wand and the door slammed shut and locked.

Ella sat down on her bed next to her friends and sighed.

“I almost dueled my pregnant sister.” Ella whispered before tears began to stream down her face.”

Hermione patted Ella’s back and tried to comfort her.

“Ella , its me ,Harry, and well Ron is here too!” “What is going on?” “ You ran past me like a banshee, and your sister just ran out of the common room!”

“Please explain, I thought I could , but I guess not.” Ella spoke softly so the boys would not hear her.

Ella watched as Ginny and Hermione took the Birth Certificate and walked out to tell Ron and Harry what was going on.

“But Snape is evil!” Ella heard Ron say.
“Not to Ella.” Hermione said.

“He put my name in the goblet of fire!” Harry shouted.

“You do not have concrete evidence.” Hermione said sternly.
Ella heard their shocked voices.

She plopped back down.

Her wand twirling through her fingers.

After a few twirls she grasped her wand tightly and spoke “ordo sonitus” and from her wand came sweet classical music. She closed her eyes as the music comforted her.
She knew her friends could here the loud music, but she didn’t care. It calmed her.
She had a huge test tomorrow, and she wasn’t prepared. She needed to study. Poor Harry had his next challenge and she hadn’t even helped him with it. She began to breathe at a normal pace and her nerves began to calm down.
She opened the door to the dormitory and saw her friends outside sitting on the floor.

“Ok I am done.” Ella said shaking her head as if she was trying to reassure herself.

“I need to study.”
“You guys are amazing , and I am sorry I had to bring all this drama into the lives of people that REALLY don’t need it.

“Ella , you found out you were adopted.” Harry said standing up
“You are allowed to freak out.”
“Well thanks for everything, you guys really are amazing.”

“No problem” They all said in unison.
Ella hugged each of them and went to the library.

She sat there for a good while reflecting the pensive over and over in her mind.
He showed emotion when he read the letter from Jane. Her mother Jane. No her mother was Deborah. Deborah Greene. Edward Greene. Those were her parents. Controlling, obsessive, loving, endearing. All which described her parents. Ella’s mind was fighting a battle over the truth and what was in her heart.
As the battle continued, she did not notice the man who was the center of the conflict sitting in front of her.

“Oh my, you scared me.” Ella jumped at the sight of Snape.
“Sorry.” a whisper came out of his mouth.

“I don’t know what to say.” Snape said
“You don’t have to say anything.” Ella said solemnly.
“I thought about you every day.” “I fought myself daily on whether I should get you and raise you myself.”
“If only you should understand the situation I was in.”
“I know of the situation, but I dare not say it out loud.”
Snape nodded.

“I don’t expect us to be close, right away.”
“Has my family left?”
“Yes.”
“Your sister was distraught.” “It seems you were a dueler at Salem.” Snape said with a hint of a smile.

“Champion all three years.” Ella smiled.
“I play qudditch too.” Ella said as if she was in an interview .
“But I prefer dueling.” " But I feel so horrible wanting to stun Jenny" " I mean I can tell she is with child and I shouldnt of done that."
" Wait what?"
" She is glowing and she is never that sappy with me."
" Sirius, was never very responsible." Snape's face began to twist in disgust.
" You dont like him very much do you?" Ella knew the answer, but felt like asking him anyway.
" He is irrational and doesnt think" " We went to school together , he was the same then as he is now." Snape's voice was stern and hateful.
“Maybe this summer I can stay, and we can get to know each other.” Ella said shyly attempting to change the subject.
“ That would be nice, of course if and only if your parents allow it .”
“Yes of course.” Ella said nodding her head.
“No one can know about this.” As he said this he pushed in the chair and began to walk away

“I understand.”

Ella saw him leave the library and she began to study. She had lost a few hours of studying and needed to prepare for the exam which was the following day.

Heather!

Wow! I just commented on your last chapter in time! Another great chapter, Heather! I thoroughly enjoyed Ella's reaction after she woke-up from fainting. Your descriptions were very vivid and not too over the top. I can just see Ron's mouth hanging open as Ella runs past them, and Harry's raised arm as he tries to stop her to talk...

I'm glad you chose to include Ginny in Ella's little secret. I always liked her and felt her to be rather level-headed. I can't wait until Hermione starts to delve into Ella's biological mother's past.

I was happy to see that you softened Snape's image up a little bit. We all know from reading the book that he has one, and it's nice that he is going to share it with his 'daughter'. I think this relationship is really going to do a lot for Snape's character. It was easy to see that he really does love Ella, although the circumstances may prove it hard for him to show them. I like that he revealed to Ella his desire to be with her. Hmmm. again with the similarities though... Will Ella actually get to spend the summer with Snape? I mean, Harry never got to summer with Sirius...

Lastly, SIRIUS AND JEN ARE GOING TO HAVE A BABY!!! I can't wait for that to happen. Will it happen during the story? Will you focus on it at all? I can't wait!

A very informative chapter, Heather. I look forward to the next one. I need to read about Ella's adventures during the upcoming exam, and I always enjoy your take on the retelling of Harry's antics. Somehow, you always make them a little more interesting!

Great work,
Katie

Katie,
Thank you soooo much for the lovely comment!
I will post soon and I am EXCITED! ( Getting overly excited as I speak)
= DDDDDDDD


-Heather

Hello Heather. Very nice writing. I wonder why her dad is so ridged and emotionless. He reminds me of Snape. And this is totally not anywhere in the story, but, I'm wondering if Ella's birth father had anything to do with them moving to where he can keep an eye on her. Or maybe sense she excels at potions the Greens wanted her to be at the best place under the best Potions Master to be able to challenge her and be able to help her succeed to the best of her potential. And also it would be the safest place for her now that Voldemort is causing such problems. I think Ella needs to think about what she just said and think if there hasn't been things she didn't share with anyone, even Jenna. At any rate, she needs to calm down and not cause pain for Jenna. She is obviously struggling. Pregnancy demands a strength that people don't realize. Ella could be causing her problems. Nice touch Heather. I hope she sends an owl to Jenna right away. Or maybe Sirius visits her, and Ella can tell him her burden. At any rate, you've written a very fine chapter, and I can't wait till you get the next one up. I'll be thinking on this till you do. Nice work Heather.

Hey everyone, sorry for being late. Spring semester is already kicking my butt! Not good.... = D


Chapter 16

After hours of potion making , she glanced at her cabinet.
“Well at least I am making quite a collection” Ella said aloud. She had all her vials lined up and labeled. Each potion made at leas three to four vials which quickly filled her cabinet.
“Talking to yourself again, Miss. Greene?”
“ Madame Pince, you know me so well.”
“ Well I must say I know too much.”
Ella laughed at the old woman. At least she helped keep your mind of her troubles.


“ You need to eat”
It was near 9pm when Dumbledore appeared.
“ I know I know , but the exam is tomorrow.” Ella said.
“ Your sister will be here in a couple days, I suggest you talk to her.” Dumbledore spoke softly.
“ I will.” Ella felt guilty, like she was being punished.
“ Good.”
“ She is loyal , and in these times It helps to have your family and friends surround you.” Dumbledore said with a strict tone.
“ Sir.” Ella said looking up “ How long did you know?”
“ For quite some time.” Dumbledore nodded.
“ It was pretty immature of me to blow up at her.”
“ Your fourteen.” “ You were just handed life changing news.”
“No one blames you, Ella.” Dumbledore put his arm on her shoulder.
“ Playing the victim will not help.”
“ Yes sir.”
“Now, study hard, but eat this.”
“ Don’t stay up to late, make sure you sleep well.”
“Yes sir.”

Ella sat there pondering what Dumbledore said.
Don’t play the victim…..
Was she?
She gathered herself and ate a few bites.
What potion could they throw at me? Ella thought
Dumbledore said they were not that sneaky.

Ella read more of her advanced potions book year 6 and then went to year 7.

By midnight she completed 5 standard potions.

“Ella, it is midnight.” Madame Pince walked by.
“ I know, I’m packing right now.”
“Well good luck!” Madame Pince said as Ella was packing and ready to leave.
“Thank you for allowing me to study and dealing with my craziness.” Ella smiled.
As she walked , she felt anxious but confident. Maybe she could do it.
To her surprise her friends were wide awake.

“We are trying to help Harry.” Hermione said looking distraught.
“I wonder what potion , they are going to have you brew.” Ron said.

“I have no idea” Ella herself was mentally drained from the entire day.

“Harry, do you mind if I help you tomorrow?” Ella asked
“Of course.”
“Thanks!”
Ella ran off to her bed, and passed out.


At 5 am Ella awoke ready to get the exam over with. She brushed her hair and pinned it up and in a loose bun. Her robes were not wrinkled, and she made sure she looked professional. It wasn’t every day you meet the Minister of Magic.
She shrunk her cabinet and grabbed her wand.

“Good Luck , Ella” Lavender Brown whispered through the curtains as she was leaving.
“Yeah, good luck” Came her other room mates.
“Thanks guys!” Ella smiled and walked to the great hall.

As she made her way down the stair cases, she could hear the paintings wishing her good luck.

“Well thank you” She replied
Ella finally reached the main floor and stopped in front of the doors.

“Breakfast will be served in your respective common rooms.”
“Testing BE QUIET!”

She read the signs and laughed.

“So you are the one they are talking about.” Said a raspy voice.
Ella looked around and didn’t see anyone. She heard some coughing and followed the sound a few feet from the doors to see a painting of an old man sitting in a chair.
“What are they saying?” Ella asked.
“They are saying many things.”
“Like…..”
“You are the first student in many years to take this exam.”
“I know that.”
“Well, and that you take a liking to a certain professor.”
“ Hmm.”
Ella knew what she was doing, she was looking un phased so that the painting would talk more.
“Well if you already know , then why should I tell you anymore!” The man walked away into another paining and began to pout.”
Ella laughed. Her plan didn’t work. He was a stubborn.
“Thank you sir, you were of much help.”
“Well, your welcome.”
She left the man in the painting and walked in the great hall.


The minister of Magic, Cornelius Fudge was sitting where Dumbledore normally sat.
“Are you Ella Rae Greene.”
“Yes” Ella said.
“Good.”
“Take out your wand and allow me to inspect it.” Ella gave him the wand and he began to inspect it and started to perform simple spells with it.
“Good.” He handed her back her wand
“ Take out everything in your cabinet and put in on the table.”
She did as she was instructed and she began to unload all her potions and ingredients and supplies.

The minister came down from the professors table and examined each item thoroughly.

With a flick of his wand, everything was placed back in her cabinet, except her cauldron, ladle, and dropper.
He laid parchment paper in front of her and two quills with ink.
He then took out jars of herbs and other ingredients. The jars were blacked so Ella could not see what was in them.
“You have two hours.” “In one minute, it will be 7am.”
“Here in this envelope is a paper with the potion you will brew.”
“I have many ingredients available for you.” “Some will be the right ones, and the others will be there to take you of course.”

“You may begin.”
Ella saw an hour glass appear and start to time her.
She took a breath and opened the envelope.
“ Veritaserum”
Ella stared blankly at the card.

You got to be kidding me.
Ella wanted to laugh
She had watched Snape brew it right in front of her.
Step by step he had taught her exactly how to brew it.
The potion was highly regulated by the ministry. No wonder the minister himself was here.
Ella began to start her notes.
She opened the first jar and smelled it.
“Ok, not this one.” She said as her nose hairs were beginning to singe off.
She began to brew. It was hard and she didn’t know if she could get it right. 6th years should know how to brew it, and she was only a fourth year.

She just passed her 1 hour mark and she knew she had to hurry.
She wrote her notes with depth. She knew they had to be lengthy and neat. She checked on her potion which seemed to have some color to it.

The serum was supposed to be color less and odor less. There was no odor, but some color was diluted.
She stirred and stirred and even added heat.

“10 MINUTES!” she heard the minister say.

Finally the Veritaseruim turned clear like water.

“Time.” He said.

“The serum will not be tested until after 28 days.” “Then we will test it and get back to you.” He said filing the vials and putting them into a box.

“Sir , it was nice to meet you.”
“ And you , young lady” Fudge looked please glancing at the vials one by one.
“ You are causing a stir at Hogwarts.” “Potions is sometimes sidelined here, it is good a young person is taken to the subject.”

“ Have you been thinking about a future?”
“ Yes, actually, I want to teach, Potions of course.”
“Really?” He seemed surprise.
“ Here or in the states.”
“Here, home.”
“He smiled, well Good luck to you then.”


Ella felt a relief. A huge weight was lifted. She didn’t know if she succeeded, but at least she tried. She ran to Snape’s office to tell him the potion.

She waited for a few minutes and when the bell rang she walked in. Second years were filing out, when she went up to him.

“Veritaserum.”
“ Your joking.” Snape said with out any emotion.
“ Nope, just finished it.” Ella said with a smile
“ That is wonderful” Seeing her excitement he finally caved.
Snape smile was large.
He asked her every question he could about the test and the potion.

“Well, I am proud of you.” ‘In twenty eight days , we will know.”
“You can stay here and help grade if you like?” “ If you want to teach you need to know how to”
She agreed and for the rest of the day she helped him grade papers and listened to his lectures.

He was quite mean she noticed. She would tell Harry not to feel bad and that he is like this with all of his students. All day she listened to him yell and berate his students.
She wouldn’t be like him. Yes she would be tough, but she wouldn’t be mean. Ella was starting to wonder if being there was a good idea after all.
When the lessons were over, she left abruptly.
She didn’t want to hear the mean Snape. She wanted to hear the one who was nice and thoughtful the one who was patient.

She left to eat supper but she didn’t see her friends at all.

Then the thought hit her. Library. She knew she was supposed to help Harry. Tomorrow was the task.
“You again.” Madame Pince smiled.
“ Oh how you would love it.” Ella said
Ella smiled and found the trio in the back.
“Ok, sorry I was in potions all day.” “Harry, your not the only one he mistreats.”
They didn’t say a word , but kept looking.
“What am I looking up?” Ella said.
“I need to breath under water.”
“Wow.” “That is going to be ..” Ella saw the looks of her two other friends basically telling her to be quiet.
“Its going to be pretty easy, you will be fine.”
She stopped talking, knowing she was making it worse.
They stayed until the library was about to close.
“Ronald Weasley and Hermione Granger, come with me.”
McGonagall grabbed them and walked right out of the library.
“ We will be back Harry!”
“ I wonder what’s up?” Ella said walking out of the library with Harry.
“Go to sleep, Ella.” “You need rest.” Harry looked like he had given up
“Harry you’re the one who needs rest!” Ella said arguing with him.
“You took a very hard test and have had a longer day than I have had.”
“Fine.” Ella didn’t feel like arguing. Harry was right, Ella was so tired she could barely breathe. She felt bad she had to leave Harry, and where was Hermione and Ron?
Her thoughts were stopped when she drifted off to sleep.

Ella awoke with her roommates. Everyone was abuzz about the task, and Ella was nervous for Harry. She had hoped he had found the solution.
She got up, fought for the shower and mirror space and tried to look presentable. She was not going to be the victim. Plus she had been away from her classmates for 3 days and she wanted to step out. She straitened her hair, did her makeup and dressed in warm clothes. She grabbed her knitted hat and walked out with the rest of the students to eat breakfast. It felt good to be apart of the crowd. So much had went on that she forgot to be a teenager.
“Hey Ella!” Ginny Weasley ran up to her.
“Could you do my hair next weekend?” “For Hogsmeade?”
“Sure!” “Me and Michael are going on a date.” Ginny was blushing from blurting it out.
“Oh, no problem!” Ella smiled. She never understood why she was so unwilling to be friends with Ginny, she was quite nice.
“Ill meet up with you at the lake.”
Ella nodded and ate her eggs.

She put on her coat and with the crowd and walked towards the lake. Her mine was drifting , when she noticed she was far from the pack.

“Ella, oh Ella!” She turned to see Pansy Parkinson waving her down.
Ella kept walking.
“Hey I wanted to say I am sorry!” Pansy said huffing and puffing.
“ Lets be friends.” She put out her hand for Ella.

Ella stepped right up to Pansy’s face.
“Listen you will never be my friend.”
“I accept your apology, but until you stop tormenting my friend Hermione Granger, you will have me as an enemy.”

As pansy walked away, Ella put on her mittens and began to head over to where the Gryffindor’s were standing.

“Excuse me” Ella turned expecting to see an angry mob of Slytherin girls.
“ What is your name?” A Durmstrang student was standing with some Slytherin sixth years.
“Ella, and yours?” she said with a smile. She knew she was flirting but didn’t care.
“ Demetrius.” He said in his deep voice.
“I would like to take you to Hogsmeade this upcoming weekend.” “On a date.”
“ How do you know I will accept this date?”
“ You will.”
“noon, meet by the clock tower.”
Ella smiled and turned to walk away. What was with today?

Ella walked further trying to catch up.

Ella saw him from a distance and froze.
Draco Malfoy was standing against a tree.
She should of kept looking strait ahead and not even glance at him, but she couldn’t help it.

“Demetrius Huh?”
She didn’t say a word.
“ Good Chap.”
“Good in your terms, or what the normal person believes to be good?” Ella couldn’t help it.
“No, Ella he is good.”
He smiled at her. She couldn’t even look at him
“Your looking nice.”
“Thanks.”
“I shouldn’t talk to you.”
“ I want us to be cool.” “ You’re an amazing girl and I screwed up.”
“You really did.” With that Ella walked towards the tents and finally made it next to Neville and Ginny.

“What took you so long?”
“ I am very popular person didn’t you know that?” Ella said laughing.
Ella tried to put on a smile, but she simply couldn’t. Why was he messing with her head?

Ella couldn’t see Harry and it was almost time to begin.
Then from the corner of her eye, she saw someone running.
“Its Harry!!” She yelled.
Ludo Bagman caught up to him and directed him towards the tent.
Everyone was confused and did not know what was happening.

The champions were rushed towards the edge of the lake and began to dive in. Ella watched as Harry stood there for a few minutes.
“What is he waiting for?”
Then he jumped.

As the Champions were in the cold lake. Ella pondered what she would do if she was Harry. He was so brave and she was weak. She couldn’t even stop thinking about someone who treated her badly.

Ella saw her sister from far away. Her quill was writing fast.
" I will be back." Ella said to Ginny


“FLEUR DELACOUR”
Ella stood on her toes to see fleur crawling out of the lake, forfeiting.

“That’s too bad.” Ginny said holding in a smile.
Ella laughed at Ginny’s sarcasm. She kept walking till she met up with her sister.
" I cant stay long, but I am sorry."
" Me too."
Ella made her way back to her friends.

It wasnt much, but at least they were ok again.

One by the one the Champions came out of the lake.

Then Ella saw Harry carrying Ron and a little blonde girl out of the water.

She began to cheer with everyone else.
Harry had done it.
“Is that Victor with Hermione?”
“Yes it is.” Ginny said.

They ran to their friends congratulating Harry and getting the scoop from Hermione and Ron.

When the points were announced and Harry’s moral fiber was awarded they all had a good laugh.

June 24th was the next task and Ella was going to help Harry in any way she could.


“Good Job Cedric!” Ella said passing by

“Thanks Ella!” He smiled back.
“He is cute, but he is just too good.” “Cho and him are good for each other.”

“Viktor wants to see you in the summer?” Ella whispered to Hermione.

“He just wont leave me alone.” Hermione said
Ella shrugged her shoulders.
They walked up to the common room to get ready for supper.
“Ronald, stop it.” “You could of scared them by snoring!” Hermione said yelling at him.
Ella smirked.
Ron was sure enjoying his new found celebrity.

Ella sat and wondered. Was this test worth it?
She had to meet with all her professors, and try to catch up with what she missed. If she failed it would be all for nothing.

She started making a list just like her father would do. What I need to accomplish. She wrote down each of her classes and began calculating how much work she would probably have to do.


“Hey Neville, How was Herbolgy these last few days?”
“ Kind off Difficult.” He said.
“ I can help you when you get the Homework.’
“That would be great.” Ella smiled, Neville was so kind.

Before Ella could ask him anymore questions McGonagall entered the room.

“Ella , come with me.”
Ella got up apprehensively
Do not worry the professors are meeting to discuss what you have missed.

Grab your books and parchment, you will be writing a lot.

Ella was hoping that tonight would not be the night she would get her massive amount of Homework, but she grabbed her books, paper and quills and got up and left with her professor.

“Now remember, you can always ask for help” McGonagall said .

“I know.”

Ella walked into her transfiguration class to see all her teachers standing.
Each with notes and labs and everything Ella was not looking forward too.

One by one the teachers unloaded there massive amount of work that needed to be done. You have one week to get all of this done and keep up with the work we give you in class.
Ella groaned.
She only missed a couple of days yet it seemed like she missed a lifetime.
Binns ,was the last one to give the homework.

“6 pages on the fifth Goblin rising.” He said in his wheezy tone.
Ella nodded.

“Now Ella, you don’t want to fall behind.” said Professor Flitwick.

Ella struggled to carry all her homework and was glad there was no sign of peeves.

She returned to the chaos of people still celebrating.

" You know whats strange?" Ella said
" What? Harry said."
" No matter how many times I see Binns, he still creeps me out."
They all laughed.


“Oh my , Ella” Hermione said pointing at Ella's workload.
“I know. I know.” Ella groaned “ I have a load of work to do.”
“ How are you going to do it all?” Hermione began thumbing through it.
“ Easy one day ,one class.” Ella shrugged her shoulders
“You should do a little of each a day.”
“ I am staying up tonight and knocking out my easy classes like divination and charms doesn’t seem to bad.”
“What about tomorrow?” Hermione looked shocked
“No hogsmeade, so its basically going to be lounging around.” “ So I will sleep.”
“ Your crazy.” Hermione was shocked.
“ I am not like you Hermione I cant go to class , do that homework and then have all this extra work too.” “ I have to get it done right away.” Ella was geting mad. She knew what she was doing.

“Don’t forget we have dates this Saturday!” Ginny said laughing.
“ Well that to, I need time for my hair and to pick out an outfit.”

“ Well Ella , I think it is irresponsible of you to think about a boy rather than school work.” Harry and Ron turned bright red.Hermione was there best friend of three years,and they knew how she could get.
“ Sorry Hermione , I do enjoy having the attention.” Ella went up to her ear and whispered loudly so everyone could here it.
“ And I know you do too.”
Ella laughed and grabbed her things and went to her dormitory where she could think .
She sat in her bed and brought out her charms work.

“Depulso!”

Ella laughed at the new charm. It wasn’t hard and she had learned it in Salem.

“You should of seen Neville try that in class. Poor professor Flitwick was being banished around the room because of him.” Lavender said walking back to the common room after getting a sweater.

“Must be able to perform spell at a satisfactory level and have notes on its importance to receive full credit. Also read and outline Chapters 6 and 7 .” Ella read his instructions.

She practiced the spell for another hour and got decent results.
She then worked on her outline for the chapters which took longer than she thought.
It was now midnight and the Gryffindors were ready for bed. All but Ella and Harry and Ron.

“ Hermione gone to bed” “ Yes.” They said.
“ The snoring was getting loud.” Ella said laughing.
She worked as they played chess, often performing spells to annoy them.

"Ella, I want to win” Ron said annoyed
“ Well, I would like to catch up, Ron!”
Ella continued to work on her charms and finally the boys left.


“ Ella are you still up?!” Hermione said racing down the stairs to meet her.
“ Just going to bed!” Ella looked groggy
“ Its 8 am!” Hermione said angry.
“ So, I finished more classes than I thought!”
“ Transfiguration , wasn’t even bad!” Ella was pleased. Three classes.
“ Hermione, I am not arguing with you.” ‘ Now, please move so I can sleep.”

Ella walked up the stair and curled up in her bed, and would stay there until supper time.

Heather!

It was an enjoyable chapter, but not as thrilling for me as some of the others have been. Mind you, I can understand a busy schedule!

Now... I love the relationship that has slowly developed between Madame Pince and Ella. Ella's sarcastic sense of humour seems to have brought the rather stern librarian's to an almost likeable level! It's funny how Ella is able to bring out the good in people. I really appreciate that trait in her.

I really enjoyed the conversation Ela had with the old guy in the portrait. I'm wondering who it was or whether it really matters... My first thought was that it was Phineas Nigellus Black? The old Slytherin headmaster? I know it probably doesn't matter, but was it him? He sure was snide enough to be! lol.

The exam was really quit interesting, especially how Fudge checked for cheats. I liked the fact that you took the labels off of the ingredient bottles and threw a few extras in for good measure! Good thinking. It made the it a lot more of a challenge and more fitting as an all-consuming exam! Veritaserum was also a great choice for the exam potion, which leads me to a question... Now that Ella has some Veritaserum, or will have once it's returned to her, will she have need to use it later on? Hmmm... I wonder!

I enjoyed the interplay between Ella and the various Slytherin characters. The conditions she gave Pansy for friendship, the conversation with a jealous? Malfoy and the invitation to Hogsmeade with Demetrius. I'm wondering if she and Draco will ever get together again? For a girl who is supposed to dislike someone, as much as Ella does Draco, she sure perks up when he talks to her!

The next part is the part I was a little, "Oh well..." about. I know you had to include the second challenge, but it didn't lend much to your actual story. I would have liked a longer conversation between Ella and Jenny, but I realize Jen was busy writing for the paper.

It also bugged me that Ella was given so much homework, and the fact that it would take her a week to catch up... she only missed a couple of days, right? Remeber when Harry and Ron missed all those days of homework in book five and Hermione wouldn't let them copy? They always seemed to get caught-up over the weekend.

And finally... I loved the conversation between Daddy Snape and Ella when she disclosed the potion she had been asked to produce. I can just see the look of glee and superiority in Snape's eyes. The fact that HIS daughter would've aced that particular potion. One question though? What did Ella end-up doing in order to make the potion turn crystal clear? Was it simply a matter of patience and time?

Ohhhh.... I almost forgot Hermione!!!! I LOVE how you have Ella challenge and argue with Hermione over things that Hermione usually argues with Ron and Harry about! It is refreshing to see someone finally put Mss Know-It-All in her place!

I did enjoy this chapter Heather. I am really looking forward to the next one. I hope you intend to include the date between Ella and Demetrius...? It might make for some very interesting reading. lol! I'm thinking Draco's nose might just be a tad out of joint.

Great work, Heather!
Katie

Hello Heather. I did read this right when you posted, and I'm sorry I haven't commented yet. You've done another good job on your story. I was hoping for more of a get together though, for Ella and Jenny. Sorry I cut up your story, but I wanted to just say that I wanted there to be more to the sisters getting to talk things out. I do love how you had Dumbledore looking in on her and giving her that stern but caring little talk.

I really like how Ella and Hermione can be at each other's throats one minute, but yet perfect friends later. That is a very good trait you gave them. To be able to overcome differences and not let them come between a friendship is quality writing.

It's good that Ella studied so hard for the Potions test. I'm glad she (apparently) did so well on it. At least she is very confident she did it well.

I am disturbed that the other Professors gave her such a heavy load of homework to do. Harry was pardoned from loads of schoolwork because he was in the Tri Wizard Tournamant. It seems the same pardon should have been extended to Ella. But no matter, she was able to get it done.

All in all, it was a very enjoyable chapter, and I can't wait for your next one. You know, the more you writ, the better your writing skills get. Keep it up, your already doing great.

Phew. Ok, sorry about how far apart my posts have been, but a lot of things are going on. This chapter is long, but it really needs to be. The year is wrapping up and I probably will be doing a year 5 with Ella, starting in the summer, but things will be really different. Thanks for the patience and I love reading the comments.

Disclaimer: Everything in the world of Harry Potter belongs to Jk Rowling.


Chapter 17


Ella awoke, angry with herself. Everyone was asleep in the dormitory, so she slipped on her bath robe, and drowsily went down the stairs. She wasn’t surprised to see Harry there, but she was hoping to be alone.

“Couldn’t Sleep?” He asked sighing.

“Nope you?” She said sighing.

“Bad dream.” He was direct and just stared into the fire.

She couldn’t say a word to Harry because she felt guilty. She couldn’t tell him that she dreamt of Draco Malfoy. He had haunted her dream, stalking her every movement.

Ella stared at the fire. It was warm and inviting. In their silence the two friends fretted about there lives.
The common room filled up quickly and Ella wasn’t ready for the day. She had Potions with the Slytherins, and she knew for sure Draco wouldn’t miss it for the world.

The day drug on .Ella soon had to realize that the weather was a tad bit different than in the states. It was March and the wind in Scotland blew her hair and robes everywhere. Every class she attended the student’s hair looked ruffled and worn. Charms were an easy day, but soon it would be time for Potions.

“Ella , are you ok?”

“Potions is next, it is your favorite.” Ella who was flushed reassured Harry she was fine.

“The weather.” Ella said under her breath. “ That’s all.” She walked into the classroom with her friends, prepared to face the crowd.

“Oh look who is back.” Pansy Parkinson snickered to her ghastly friends.

“It’s the best student of potions in all of Hogwarts history, well since Snape anyway.”

Ella just rolled her eyes. Trying to ignore pansy was hard enough, but defending of the whole gang would be difficult.

“Oh , I almost forgot.” Pansy said with an evil grin.
Ella glanced back at what she was doing.

“Look who else is famous.” Pansy started cackling.
Just as she said it, she tossed the newest copy of witches weekly to Hermione.

Hermione looked confused, but in a confident manner she flipped though the copy to see. Harry Potter's Secret Heartache, by Rita Skeeter. Ella read the article in disgust.

“Hermione, you know it’s false.” “I know.” Hermione didn’t flinch at the article; she knew it was all false.

“Is, Ella brewing some love potions in the Gryffindor Common Room?” Pansy smirked.

The class erupted in laughter.

“I wonder how she knew about Viktor’s invitation.” Hermione whispered.
“Well, what did you say!” Ron asked trying not to sound angry.
“Chill , out.” Ella whispered to Ron. “ You know the truth.” Ron looked at her rolling his eyes.

“ Take a seat.” Snape spoke quick and swiftly.
“ Ten points from Gryffindor, for talking” “ 10 more for having that nonsense in class!” the sounds of groans echoed through the chamber.

Ella glanced at Snape wondering why he was acting this way.
He grabbed the magazine and began to read it allowed, which brought laughter from the Slytherins.

“ You three , are being split up.” “ Sir, She was the one who started this mess.” Ella spoke up pointing at Pansy.

“ Parkinson , and granger” “ Pair up” Ella couldn’t believe what he was doing. Had he not heard her?

“ Do as I say, or I will deduct more points. “ Mrs. Greene,and Malfoy.”
Ella’s eyes got huge. “ Sir, not to be rude, but do you think that is a good idea?” The comment did not come from Ella, but from Draco.

All Snape had to do was give him a look and he sat down.
“ Well lets try and do this.” “ You mean I do everything like every other time.” Ella was not happy.

“ No, not like every other time.” “ I will help.” “ I swear.” Draco covered his hand with hers. “ Don’t do that.” Ella stammered taking her hand back.

“ I will not do this.” She whispered.
“ Do what?” Draco grinned.

“ Stop playing games.” That was the last she spoke about there feelings. She knew he wanted to be with her. But she simply couldn’t. Her friends were too important to her, and she didn’t want to get hurt again.
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“ Stir.”
“ Not like that.” She rolled her eyes.
“ Figure eight.”
“ Like this ?” Draco asked.
“ Your getting it now.” Ella smiled.
“ I am not that bad, you know.” Draco said under his breath
“ Yes you are.” Ella said laughing.
“ Why are you laughing?” Draco whispered.
“ Because you posined me.”

“Funny , I was talking about potion making.” Draco’s smile was wide.
Draco said nothing, and kept stiring.Ella on the other hand, stood there blushing. To quickly deter from the embarrassing situation, she quickly started spitting out directions.

“ Now, the directions say the final solution should be black.”
“ It is !” Draco looked at her with a huge grin.
“ See , was that so hard.”

“ Were the first ones done.” Draco said looking around at the struggling class.
“ We need to refine our notes.”
“ Really?” Draco groaned.

“ A great potion needs accompanying notes.” Ella said laughing.
“ You will be a great teacher.” Draco said pouring the potion into the vials.

“ Thanks, I hope to be.” Ella was editing their notes , making sure everything was included.

They walked together up to Snape’s desk and began to turn everything in.
Looking around the classroom, Ella could see the others struggling. Deep down she wanted to help them, but knew Snape would not allow it. He should be walking around, making sure everyone was helped. Her thoughts were interrupted by the appearance of Igor Karkaroff.

“ I need to talk to you .” “ After class.” Snape didn’t seem the least bit frazzled.

“ You are avoiding me.” “ But I will wait.”Karkaroff seemed spooked.

He turned around to be right in front of Ella. She only knew him as headmaster for Durmstrang, He looked unsettling and frightned.
He looked at her, as if he was looking in her soul.

“ Who are you?” He spoke in a grumbling tone.

“ Ella Greene.” She was trying to be strong, but this man was a foot away from her.

“ You look oddly familiar.” “ But your accent , indicates American.” His tone was in a whisper. Like the very thing he wanted to say was on the tip of his tongue.

“ I told you to wait till after class!” Snape said standing up and looking utterly anxious..

“ Fine.” Karkaroff took one last glance at Ella and walked outside the door.

“ What is everyone looking at.” “ Finish up!” Snape said yelling.
They made there way back to their seats.

“ What was that all about?” Draco said walking back to their seats.

“ I have no idea.” Ella was curious too.
When the bell finally rang, Ella ran towards the door. She did not want to be seen by the Durmstrang head master.

“ Hey Ella, do you want to sit with me at lunch?” “Draco that would not be a great idea.”

“ Why not?” He smiled at her.

“ I am sitting with my friends.”

“ Fine, but you will miss me.” He was becoming too cocky.

Ella was getting angry at how confident he was becoming. She knew she wanted to give in , but her head was telling her he was bad news.

“ Hey guys!” Ella ran up to Harry, Hermione , and Ron.

“What are you guys talking about?”

“ Oh Karkaroff showed….” But before Ron could say anymore He was hit in the ribs by Harry.

“Its not that big of a deal.” Harry said stammering.

“Umm ok.” Ella not really understanding what was going on walked into the great hall with them.

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The days began to drag on until finally it was Friday night.

“Professor McGonagall, wait up!” Ella ran beside her professor.

“I want to do something different with my hair.”

“Ok, then do it.”

“Well I want to put red streaks in it.”

“ Red, is a natural hair color, so I suppose you can do it.” “ But be tasteful, we have guests.”

“ You rock! “ Ella said speeding away before McGonagall would change her mind.

“ She said yes!”

The girls in their common room bathroom cheered.

“She said red was a natural color, so I can give everyone highlights!”
Hermione, Ginny, Lavender, Parvati took a step back.

“ Ok, I will do mine , and you will see.” Ella said laughing at their scared faces.
The four girls breathed a sigh of relief.

“What shade are you doing?” “A blood red.” Ella smiled.

“ It takes a few minutes to brew, and then I will take this brush and apply it where I want it to go.” “First, I have to wet my hair .”

“Why don’t you use your wand?” Lavender piped up.

“ Don’t ever use your wand for your this.” “I am serious your hair will either look like crap, or you will not have hair on your head.” “ Your choice.”

Ella was very serious. She was very young when her sister Angela tried dying her hair blonde for her trip to California, but she would never forget her hair as it leaped off her head.

With Ella’s hair was wet she took her comb and lightly parted the top of her hair to the bottom. She clipped her hair to the top of her head, took the potion off the fire and began to streak her hair. One perfect chunk at a time she made sure the dye was neat and perfect. Once it looked good, she s stopped and began to speak.

“ Now, we wait a few minutes and then I will rinse my hair and dry it. Then it will look fantastic!” Ella was excited.

“ Now, how long will this last?” Hermione said.

“ A few weeks.” Ella said rinsing her hair.

“ Oh, that’s not so bad.” Hermione said glancing at the dye in the cauldron.
Ella then took her wand and dried her hair. She brushed her long dark hair and turned around to show the streaks.

“ Wow, that looks so great.!” Lavender said admiring the new look.

“ Could you do it to mine?” The three girls looked at Hermione in shock.
She was the last one they would expect to dye there hair.

“ Yeah, and can I straitened it.” Ella said grinning.

“ You can try, but I am telling you the Yule ball is as strait as it gets.” Hermione said matter of factly.

“ Oh, herms.” “I grew up with three older sisters, and one is a model and fashion writer.” “ I can do it.”

The crowd in the bathroom grew and it seemed like the entire group of Gryffindor girls were crowded to see the magic Ella was making.

“ Hermione when are you going to just go out with my bone headed brother.”
Ella glanced over to see Ginny smiling.

“ Weasley, really Hermione?” One of the sixth years said trying not to laugh until Ginny shot her a look.”

“Hey, Hermione is lucky.” Ella said carefully examining the strand she was working with.
“What!!!?” Everyone said in unison.
“I would totally go after him, if he didn’t have thing for Hermione.” Ella didn’t even mind the glances she was getting.
Everyone began to laugh.

“ You know what, he is very nice” One girl said. “ Oh and he is funny too.” Said another student.
Ella smiled not because her plan worked, but because Hermione was too.

“Ok, Miss. Granger, I need you to lean back so I can rinse your hair.” Ella carefully rinsed her hair and began the drying process.
“ Ok , now for the straining process.”
“ I want to see the streaks.”
“No, you have to wait till it’s all done.”

“What’s going on in there, Hermione I have to talk to you.” Harry’s voice echoed outside the girls bathroom.
“ GET OUT!” all the girls screamed.
“ Whats going on in there Harry?”
“ Oh, they wont let Hermione out.” Harry said.

Ella ignoring Ron and Harry’s voice began to use her wand to straitened Hermione’s bushy hair.
“ I will write the directions down for you.” Ella said to a shaky Hermione.

“ Ok, everyone I am done.”
The girls gathered around.
Ella turned the chair so everyone could see her.

“Oh my gosh, you look amazing!!!” Ginny was the first to speak, while the others just stared in awe.

“ If Ron Weasley , doesn’t say nothing to you , I will kill him!” Ella said to a grinning Hermione. They filed one by one out the bathroom door, each with a grin on their faces.

Ella was the last before the premiere of the new Hermione.

“Ok guys attention up here.” Ella spoke loudly so everyone could hear her.
“We need your opinion .”

Ella paused and smiled at the sound of all the giggling from the girls.
“ pss…Come out!” Ella said to Hermione who was behind the door.

Hermione walked slowly beside Ella with her head down. Then with all her might she lifted her head to see the stares of all the boys’ faces.
“ So??? What do you think?” Ella said knowing their answer.
Cheers erupted.
“You look great!” Fred Weasley yelled
“ Go Granger” Seamus Finnegan said.
“You really do look nice.” Neville said coming up to her.
Ella eyed Ron and gave the look that he better say something. Slowly Ella watched as he came to Hermione.
“ Mione, you look beautiful. I didn’t mind your old hair though.” Ron said blushing.
“Thanks Ron.” Hermione said smiling.
Ella saw Ginny smiling and they both slapped hands, knowing they did good.

The room began to disperse and the gang sat talking the night away.
“Ella, you would love the burrow.” Ginny said.
“There is a pond we swim in.”
“Ginny, she doesn’t want to hear about it.”
“Ron, shut up.” “It sounds lovely. “ Where I lived it was small and quaint and I loved it.

Ella flipped through her potions book. It was already Friday night and
tomorrow she would have her date.
“Why did I agree to that stupid date!” Ella said mumbling.
“Do you like someone else?, Because Demetrius is handsome”
“ No…Its not like that.” Ella said reassuring herself more than she was Ginny.
“ I am just not feeling it .” “But I cant cancel.”
“Ella, it will do you some good getting out of the castle.” Harry said
“ Your right” “ The date wont last to long.”
Ella put down her book and said her goodbyes and headed off to bed.

Ella tossed and turned all night. She finally awoke with the sun had risen and the rest of the Gryffindor’s still were sleeping.

She washed her face, and began to get ready.

The morning went fast and the next thing she knew it was noon.
She was at the clock tower at exactly noon. “Where is he?” she spoke aloud.

“ Hey you three!, why do you have all that food?” Ella asked her friends who were sneaking food right next to her.
“ Picnic, yep picnic.” Harry said stuttering over his words. They hurried down the hill towards Hogsmeade.
Hmmmm…
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“ Ella ,I am sorry I am late.”
“ I had to study.”
“ Ok, then why didn’t you tell me that.” “ I waited hear for twenty minutes. “ Did you not realize it is windy out here?”
“ Lets go.” Ella felt defeated. Any excitement that was left of the afternoon was sucked away.
They headed to the hogs head for lunch. “ Here is a table.”
“ I want next to the window.” “ Um… That’s fine.” Ella was looking at him oddly. They sat down and Ella began to look at the menu. Demetrius seemed restless.
“ Is there a problem?” Ella said glancing up.
“ I am just hungry , that’s all.” “ Oh, well me too.” She said.
They ordered there meals.
“Please , I would like another butterbeer.”Ella asked the server.
“ I really enjoy the taste do you?” She said trying to engage in some sort of conversation.
“ No.”
“ What is your deal?” Ella voice grew loudly.
“ Are you paying?” he said flatly.
“ Ella got in her purse and threw the money down.”
“ I am done.” Ella took one last swig of her butter beer and walked out.
Ella couldn’t believe she subjected herself to that. Everyone said this guy was nice, but he didn’t act that way towards her.
Ella walked over to a bench . “ Where are my friends. That’s who I need.”
“ So, how are you?” Draco sat down.
“ Your friend, yep he is your type of good.” Ella said with her arms crossed. “ How could girls like him?”
“ Let me take you out, I would show you a good time.”
“ No, I need to find my friends.”
“ Who needs them, when you can have me.”
“ What is your vendetta towards them?”
“ Here we go.” Draco said rolling his eyes.
He put his arm around her, “Listen , Ella we are meant together.”
“ What are you talking about?” Ella said glancing up at him.
FLASH FLASH FLASH
“Awww a rekindled romance.” Said the cool voice of reporter Rita Skeeter.
“ I also got some nice shots of your date with Demetrius.” “Only a half hour apart, a record.”
“ You are a vile human being.” “ You disgrace the name of journalism.”
“ Your words don’t affect me, but mine affect thousands.” “ They will love to see what is happening to the pretty American at Hogwarts.”
“ Thank you Draco, and oh where is your friend?” Rita said throwing him some coins.
Ella turned around to face him.
“ Funny isn’t it?” “ I fell for it again.” Ella stormed off
She couldn’t keep doing this to herself. She needed to find Hermione ASAP. She walked into every shop in Hogsmeade and they were no where to be found.
“Seamus, have you seen Harry, Ron or Hermione?”
“They went that way, there acting weird.”
“Thanks!” Ella took off.
It was nearly two and she still couldn’t find them. The cold wind made her cheeks burn as she walked away from Hogsmeade. She walked along the mountainside to tired to notice that she could barely see the tiny village in the distance.
“You’re being reckless.” She heard it as clear as day. “It came from the mountain.
“Where is the food?” Ella followed the voice into a clearing.
She stopped before an opening of a large cave.

“How is Ella?” It was Sirius black
“Good” They said in unison.
“You haven’t told her about your suspicions with Snape and Karkaroff?”
“Nope.”
“Good.”
Ella debated just walking in and confronting them, but she didn’t have the courage. Instead she just turned away and walked back to the castle. She regretted the day for it had been a bad one.

Hello Heather. I enjoyed this chapter very much. I don't mind the length at all, and you did a very good job writing it. You had a lot going on in it, but you put it together quite smoothly.

I love the beginning how you have Ella and Harry both sitting before the fire each in their own solitude, not bothering the other with their problems or offering to help the other. They were just sitting there thinking of their own distressing situation.

I'm not surprised at Snapes rudeness and ugliness, but I am surprised he paired everyone up the way he did. Why would he do that? And especially putting Draco and Ella together. I can't wait to see what is going on with that. What's going on with Draco? This whole thing with him and Ella is very suspicious to me. When I read this I began thinking all kinds of things. Very nice work shifting my thoughts along, not letting me think to much on any one thing to long. I know she is close to Snape and all, but, why wouldn't Harry let Ron tell her what they was thinking about the two Gits.

I loved the part where the girls are getting ready, and I love that Hermione trusted Ella with the hair treatments to color and straighten her hair. It sounds like the treatments were a success. And I LOVED this part, And I also loved this bit, Was that a quote from the book? I don't remember, but it was brilliantly said regardless of where it was said.

I wish she would have stayed and talked to them about what she overheard. And I wish they would have included her in on the visit to Sirius's. How could they think they would be able to keep it from her?
Anyway, great chapter Heather. I hate to think of this ending. I would love to keep reading what's going on.

I'll be watching for your next post.

Heather!

I loved this chapter! There was a lot of conversation between Ella and the many canon 'Harry Potter' characters, which really helped to bring out Ella's true character. I loved her tolerance or should I say intolerance of Pansy, her coy embarassment with Draco and her mothering attitude with Ron. Very nicely done.

What I'm wondering is: What is bothering Snape. He was rather rude and abrupt with Ella in this chapter, and even though we know why Snape doesn't want Karkaroff interacting with his daughter, why is everyone else, including Sirius, so adament that she doesn't know what is going on? Is it simply because they don't want Ella to see Snape as they do, for her to know that her birth father is a Death Eater, or is there something going on that we just don't know about yet?

I loved the personal touches you put into this chapter. The interaction between Ella and the other Gryffindor girls in the washroom was priceless! What really made me laugh was I, too, was wondering why Ella just couldn't use magic to streak the girls' hair! It was a very inspirational addition to the story line and added depth and weight to the chapter. I also like how Ella has become so failiar with all of the charaters, especially the usually unapproachable McGonagall. She, Minerva, does 'rawk' doesn't she? I also loved how you strategically had Ella sway the other girls' minds concerning Ron and what a great catch he would be. It was hilarious! I'm sure it made Hermione think a little bit, as well as, make her feel special and a little it jealous!

Hmmm... Demetrius... you really had me going there. I just wanted to smack him for being such a heel, but then, I thought maybe Malfoy threatened him or something... that maybe Malfoy said that Ella was his and to just get out of the date quick. But then, we saw the true reason for Demetrius' displeasure, he didn't like what Rita and Malfoy were planning to do to Ella, right? Somehow, I don't understand why Malfoy chose to hurt Ella again... In fact, I don't believe it, even though Malfoy is a toe-rag! Is there something going on there, or am I just giving Draco too much credit?

Lastly, we are back to one of the questions I had earlier in this comment. Why is everyone trying so hard to keep Ella in the dark? Is it because they don't want her to know about Sirius? But he's married to Jenny now, right, so why the secrecy...? Ella knows he's on the run... and where is Jenny while Sirius is in hiding? Not a great way to begin a marriage. I definitely think I'm missing something here. Is it simply as it seems? Do they simply want to protect her from the truth about Snape just because he is her natural father? I think, if it was me, I'd warn her about Snape and Karkaroff, and their Death Eater ways... or not... hmm...

An excellent chapter, Heather. I really look forward to your next post, but there's no way you can get from March to June in one chapter! Maybe you should write a few more... ? Please? I really love your idea of a continued 5th year. I need to know what happens with Ella and Snape... and Ella and Draco... and Ella and the trio... Well, you must get the general idea of where I'm going with this; I simply don't want it to end!

Keep up the great writing!
Katie

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Chapter 18


Ella rushed back to the castle ignoring the sounds from the shops at Hogsmeade Village. She wasn’t mad at her friends, but she wanted answers. Her mind couldn’t help but race. Sirius and Snape had a past, she knew that. But what did Sirius know, and the bigger question why was it a secret?

“ Professor?”

“Yes, come in”

“What seems to be the problem?” McGonagall glanced at Ella with her glasses
on the brim of her nose.

“Professor, I am really sorry to be a bother, but can we talk?”

“ Of course, have a seat.”

“ I want to know about Jane Bowman.” Ella spoke clearly , sitting down while she talked. “ Was she a death eater?” Ella was blunt, she didn’t care. She needed answers.

“She was never initiated as a death eater, but we think she knew detailed
information”.”

Ella sighed in relief.

“But she never helped the aurors either.” “They questioned her, numerous times.” “We knew she was in over her head when she fled to America. “ McGonagall finished speaking and pursed her lips together.

“When I was in the memories of Professor Snape, I read a letter, from Jane.” “She said he was in too deep.”

“What does that mean?”

“ I cannot be the one to tell you that my dear.” “You , especially need to learn, that not everything is as it seems.” “Now, go and study , your scores were low this week.”

“Thanks, Professor.” “Oh wait.” “One more thing.” “The Bowman’s, are they alive?”

“I believe so.”

“Thanks.”

Ella was pleased on the outcome of her conversation. She left McGonagall’s classroom with more information then what she came in with.

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“Madame Pince, my dear , the loveliest lady at Hogwarts.” Ella was speaking in a grand way, bowing towards the librarian.

“What do you want.” She was blunt, but spoke with a smile.

“I need help.” “ I am looking for a record of wizarding family.”

“ Ok, last name.”

“Bowman.”

“Follow me, I think I can help you.” Madame Pince walked away from her desk and began to lead Ella through the maze of sections.

Ella couldn’t believe how many books there were in the library. “I think this place grows everyday.” “ I stayed in here for three days strait, and it seemed smaller, I swear by it!”

Ella thought she heard a chuckle and didn’t know if it was from the books, or from the librarian.

“Here.” She took the giant book from the dusty shelf and handed it to Ella.

“Thanks.” Ella took the large book to the nearest table and brushed off the
cover to reveal the title.

“ Wizarding Family Profiles Presents: The Bowman’s” Ella read the cover and opened the first page.

Hours later, Ella finally found what she was looking for.

Peter M. Bowman and wife Jacqueline reside in Spinners End. He is a retired Magical Maintenance worker and her, a retired secretary for the ministry. There only child, Jane Bowman died at the age of twenty.


“It’s true, there still alive.” Ella said in a whisper. She read further.

Peter M. Bowman was born on May 1st 1930, he attended Hogwarts where he was placed in the house of Slytherin where he achieved average grades and played Quidditch on the house team. He did not meet his wife until he became a Magical Maintenance worker and she was a secretary. Finally, a child Jane Bowman was born on February, 9, 1960. Sadly at the age of twenty a telegram was received from America that there daughter died. The official date and what happened was never released. Peter and his wife still live in Spinners end.

Ella couldn’t contain her excitement. Finally a lead. She turned the page to see if there was more, and she jumped at the sight of small collection of family photos.

She read the captions aloud.

“Peter Bowman and Jacqueline Boardman on their wedding day.”
The picture began to move and Ella saw Jacqueline glance up at her adoring husband.



“A beater, Peter played Quidditch for the Slytherin team.
The picture showed a young teenager smiling proudly on his broom, waving on his broom. Ella smiled seeing her grandfather so happy, she too loved Qudditch,


“Jane, born February 9, 1960.”
Ella glanced at the photograph of a baby clapping her hands.

“Jane, a Slytherin during her fourth year.”

Ella finally found a photo of her biological mother. Ella stared deeply at the picture, as if Jane herself would talk back and answer some questions for her. She was pretty, but somewhat plain. She wore no makeup, and had strait brown hair. She looked normal, like someone who tried not to be noticed. It was hard to fathom, that this girl was her real mom. She saw the resemblance, but didn’t want to acknowledge it.


“Jane age, 18”

The girl from the past photo had become women She was thin, and looked physical and mentally drained. Her eyes had deep dark circles, and her hair was in a tight pony tail.

Ella couldn’t help but weep. Two more years and she would have been born. The thought of not growing up with her family disturbed her. The could have been life with Jane rushed through her brain. Young and alone, in a new country. “What if she didn’t give me away, and died?” “What if she lived?” Ella said the questions aloud, as though the book would tell her the outcomes. She began to feel sick. Maybe Hermione should have done this, she thought to her self. She turned the page to see a small article and not a photograph.


MISSING
Jane Bowman aged 20

Please contact Peter Bowman or Jacqueline Bowman, if anyone knows the whereabouts of their daughter.





She picked up the book and found her way back to the front desk. “ I need this ….for research.”

“ Bring it back in a week.” Madame Pince said softly.
Ella walked out on a mission. She had one more stop before retreating back to the common room.

“What is that?” Snape’s voice was low.

Ella opened to the page of her mother. Ella looked up to see Snape’s eyes fall to the floor and his already pale face lose even more color.

"You were friends.” Ella said.

“ Yes.” He couldn’t make eye contact.

“ Do you have any contact with her parents?” Ella felt like a dective , trying to solve a case.

“ No.”

“ Why?”

“ They blamed me for her disappearance ,and her death.”

“Did you tell them about me, or even about the note?”

“No, there hearts were already broken enough.” “ To know there daughter already had a family for you, and not had given you to them, they would have been even more devasted..”

“ Jane was sensible.” “ She knew to protect you , she had to get you away
… away from England.”

“ You mean around you.” Ella’s voice was calm.

“ Yes.” He said.

She had pushed enough.

“ When I come and visit this summer, I want to meet them.” “ After all, they are my blood.”

Ella gathered her things, and began to leave.

She stopped at the door, and bit her lip, and turned around.

“ Oh, yeah…Ummm..”
“
Well what is it?” he seemed amused.

“ I might be in a scathing article in Witches Weekly , and or well maybe The Daily Prophet !” And with that she took off through the corridors, hoping Snape wouldn’t follow her.

Snape shook his head, and began to laugh. He was happy, amidst all the sorrow, he had Ella, his own flesh and blood to make him happy.

“There you three are.” Ella said as her Hermione, Ron, and Harry walked into the common room.

“ I need to talk to you guys in private.”
Finally, when everyone was situated, they talked.

“ Ok, first of all, I know Jenny’s husband was in town.”

There eyes got large.

“ How did you know, it was supposed to be a surprise?” Harry said trying to keep everything in code.

“ Well, I was tricked by Rita Skeeter, Draco and that idiot Demetrius.” “ It will be in the papers.”

“ Oh, Ella.” Hermione said shaking her head.

“ Being single, is quite nice, I mean working on homework and getting your
studies done is more important.” Hermione spoke directly to Ella.

“ Hey Hermione, How’s loneliness treating you, it’s a drag huh?” Ella said laughing.

“ I am just kidding” Ella said patting her shoulder.

“ Well, to move on…” “ I asked around, you know me being upset and all, and they said you were hiking up a hill.”

“ So I followed , in that direction.”

“ Yeah, so basically I hiked a cliff, to hear my friends talking to my brother in law , and the kicker is it was about my father.”

Ella watched as each of her friends jaws dropped at the same time.

“I am not mad.”

“But I figure it was time to get the whole story.” “ I have looked up my mom’s history..” Ella proceeded to big up the large book and point at the picture.

She would never call Jane her mother, but she didn’t want others to eaves drop.

“He didn’t love her, well I think he loved her as a friend.” Ella said quietly.

“ My father, he well I have a hunch he dabbled into some practices I wouldn’t approve of.”

The gang shook their heads in response, and Harry took out a piece of paper and began to write.

He handed her the paper.

HE WAS A DEATH EATER. WHO SUPPOSDLY CHANGED HIS WAYS. WE THINK HE STILL HAS TIES WITH YOU KNOW WHO, AND MIGHT OF PUT MY NAME IN THE GOBLET OF FIRE.


Ella took out her wand and whispered an incantation and the paper floated right into the glowing fire , where no one else’s eyes could read the contents.[/FONT]