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Okay, I just finished. And you can call me Gracie . Now, though I should be patient and just comment after your next chapter, I have that urge to comment right now.

Firstly, aw You're welcome! Hehe. I definitely noticed all of those things, they weren't too obvious at all and I loved every bit of it. You're doing an amazing job, honestly. I'm going to have to read your drabbles!

And please, don't apologize! You should be glad, being able to cause emotion like that in your readers is a good thing as far as I'm concerned. I meant it as a compliment.

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To Harry, the words sounded rather empty as he recalled the family of fighters Teddy came from and how young they had all been when they died. Even the most recent, Andromeda, had only been in her late sixties when she had passed away a year earlier, which was hardly old for a muggle, let alone a witch. A surge of bitterness rose up in Harry’s throat. He saw Sirius laughing as he fell through the veil, Ted showing him where the portkey was, Tonks with blond hair at the wedding, Remus toasting the birth of his son, Andromeda green from dragon pox and now Teddy, limp and grey…
You are seriously going to make me cry one of these times. My eyes sting now You are a brilliant writer, did I mention that before? *goes to see* You definitely paint the perfect picture with each chapter, often leaving me speechless and eager to read more and more.

Once again (for good measure ), bravo! *sets up beanbag chairs and waits for the next part*
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This is for Steph, because she helped me decide the first bit, it has her man in it and it's a bit... well you'll see. I watched The English Patient last night, blame it on that


Six, part four, Grey

Eight weeks later, Teddy was sat in Harry’s garden in Godric’s Hollow. The house had been rebuilt after the second war and Harry had lived there ever since. Lilly was enjoying being his nurse, bossing him around and fussing over him. She had tucked a blanket around his knees because he had been feeling cold. Now she was bringing him a cup of tea. He had asked for coffee, but she had refused on the grounds that coffee might “over excite” him.

“There you go. Victoire is coming to see you this afternoon.”

“Oh, is she? That’ll be… lovely.” He tried to sound enthusiastic, but he couldn’t. During his convalescence, Teddy had thought a lot about Victoire. He remembered the how his parents had looked at each other, the way that they had spoken to each other and it had brought him clarity of thought, allowing him to come to a decision. He just didn’t think that it would be a popular decision.

Lilly was chattering away, telling Teddy about her exams and how the new astronomy Professor wasn’t as nice as Professor Sinistra.

“Well, Professor Sinistra is a one-off; you’ll never have another teacher like her. I’m sure that Professor Schofield is well qualified. How’s Neville?”

Lilly’s answer was interrupted by the appearance of Victoire at the kitchen door. Lilly jumped up, ran over to her cousin and hugged her, gave Teddy a grin and a wave and disappeared into the kitchen. Victoire kissed Teddy on the cheek, her strong perfume filled his nostrils, causing him to cough and gag.

“Is that a new perfume?”

“Yes, don’t you like it?”

“It’s a bit strong, that’s all.”

“Oh. How are you today?”

“I’m alright, I’d be better if I was allowed to have a cup off coffee, but Lilly’s in charge so I’ve got no chance.” He tried to smile, but his lips were not co-operating.

“Right. Would you like me to smuggle some out for you?”

“No, no. I wouldn’t want to get you in trouble with Lilly. She’s like Ginny when she’s cross, scary.”

The conversation was stiff and formal somehow, as though they had argued. Teddy took a deep breath.

“Vic, I need to say something, and I need you to listen.”

She nodded, waiting for him to continue.

“I’ve had a lot of time to think recently. When I was unconscious, I had a weird experience. It was like being inside a memory. I was listening to my Mum and Dad talking and I could see how much they loved each other. It made me think about a lot of things, but especially about you and me. You deserve someone who’s completely devoted to you, who will love you to the bottom of their soul and that, well, that’s…”

“Not you.” Her voice was steady, but cold. “I’ve been waiting for you to say that. I’ve known you all my life Teddy Lupin, did you think I hadn’t noticed how different you’ve been since you came out of St.Mungo’s? At first I could put it down to you being ill but I was kidding myself. You’ve been pushing me away for ages, ever since Andromeda died. It’s like you were expecting me to leave you, so you pushed me away first and to save yourself the heartache. That was tough but since you’ve been ill, you’ve been so far away and I can’t reach you, no matter what I try.” She looked down at her hands and slid her engagement ring off her finger. “Here,” she put the ring in his hand, “I can’t keep that. Do what you want with it.” She stood up and walked away, not looking back.

Teddy sat in the garden for a long time, thinking about what he had just done. He was sure it was right thing. The feelings that he had for Victoire were a pale imitation of real love, he was certain about that.

Ginny appeared at the kitchen door.

“Are you ready to come in? I’ve made sausages and colcannon, just the way you like it.”

“Sounds great.”

Ginny helped Teddy to stand up and supported him as they walked back towards the house. “When you were a baby I told your mother that you were so handsome, you’d be a heartbreaker when you grew up. It looks like I was right, doesn’t it?” Ginny’s voice was light, she wasn’t scolding him but Teddy felt his cheeks flush.

“I know it puts you in a difficult position and I’m sorry. I didn’t want to hurt her but isn’t it better for me to be honest now than to let things get any further, to get married and then have to tell her that I don’t love her. That would be just awful.”

Ginny nodded in agreement. “You are more like your Dad than I think you could ever realise.”

“Is that a compliment?”

“Most of the time.”

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Teddy stood in the lift, giddy with the excitement of being back at work. It had been six months since he had fallen ill and he had been desperate to come back for the last three. The lift announced that it had reached Level Two and he walk into the familiar corridor. He opened the door of the Auror Headquarters to see them all waiting for him. The entire staff of the Department of Magical Law Enforcement seemed to be packed in there, along with some friends from other departments. Kingsley strode across the office and grasped his hand, shaking it vigorously. “I’m glad you’re back boy, we’ve all missed you.”

Teddy was stunned by the warmth of the welcome. “Thanks everybody.” He made an effort to try and at least say hello to everyone before Kingsley called out. “That’s enough now everyone, he’s come back to work, not to socialise.” People began to make their way out, some of them waving to Teddy. Keith made the motion for “let’s have a drink later” as he made his way back to Department of Magical Accidents and Catastrophes. Teddy nodded, giving him a thumbs up.

Harry walked over to him. “You’re on office only duties for the next few weeks, Hermione’s instructions. We’ve got a new recruit who needs training up in our methods. She’s from the French Ministry; she’s got plenty of experience, so it won’t be like training a school leaver. She’s waiting for you by your desk.” He clapped Teddy on the shoulder and walked into his own office. Teddy walked around the half height wall that made up one side of his work space. A young woman was sat at his desk, her long black hair neatly plaited. She seemed to be looking at the photographs and newspaper clippings that he had pinned to the wall. She turned round and Teddy saw a familiar pair of intensely blue eyes.

“Amelia?”

She smiled widely. “One and the same. How are you Teddy?”

“Better for seeing you! So you’re my trainee?”

“I suppose I am yes.”

They spent the next few months getting to know each other again, both at work and in private. Teddy was so glad to have her back in his life, he was totally refreshed and re-energised by her that he felt like he had never been ill. Eventually she was given her own cases and they didn’t work as closely. Teddy felt bereft of her company and daft for feeling that way, she was only on the other side of the cubicle wall after all. He wanted to be fifteen again, when kissing her had been so easy. He wanted to ask her if she had thought of him at all. They had written to each other for a few years and visited each other during the holidays, spending intense hours together, talking and exploring each other, but just after he left Hogwarts the letters tailed off. Teddy had thrown himself whole heartedly into his Auror training and it would seem that Amelia had done the same. He wanted to ask her if she had loved anyone but he was afraid of what the answer might be. Sometimes he found himself staring at her when he should have been listening during meetings. He knew that eventually he would have to say something or do something because if he didn’t, she would find someone else.

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Sirius was angry. He was banging the cups, plates, teapot, cafetiere and kettle around and muttering under his breath as he prepared drinks for the evening meeting. On and on he went, picking things up only to put them back down again, the rage he was feeling negating any ability to concentrate. Eventually he slammed a cup down too hard and broke it. A stream of violent swearing followed from Sirius.

“You did learn something from your mother then.”

Remus was leaning against the doorframe. “Should I ask or do you just want me to let you get on with it?” He flicked his wand and repaired the cup.

“Snape!” Sirius spat the potion master’s name, “You know that the slimy, greasy turncoat is going to be giving Harry Occlumency lessons. I’m sure that he’s going to use it as an excuse to torture Harry. Why on earth Dumbledore can’t do it himself I don’t know. If Harry hadn’t got in the way yesterday I would have plastered his brain all over the wall.”

“Well, it’s a good job that Harry was here to get in the way then. I’ve told you a thousand times that you shouldn’t let him get under your skin. We’re not sixteen anymore Padfoot, you need to control your emotions a little better than you are at the moment.”

“Oh you’re very good at that aren’t you Moony?”

“What’s that supposed to mean?”

“Well we both know that there’s a little Nymph desperate to get to know the big, bad wolf.”

Remus flushed.

“Oh-ho! I see, she already has! Let me think, it’s one of two things. Either she doesn’t meet your lofty expectations or she’s told you that she’s got feelings you. That’s why you’re being so cold with her.”

At these words Remus felt his own anger flare. “You don’t know what you’re talking about.”

“I think I do Remus. You’ve become so icy with her I’m surprised that the poor girl hasn’t got frostbite. She’s the best thing that could happen to you, but she wants more than a fling and you can’t handle it. You’re really pathetic.”

There was a loud bang and Sirius was blasted off his feet. He hit the dresser with a sickening crunch of ribs.

“Don’t talk about things you don’t understand Sirius. You may have stopped at sixteen, but the rest of us kept growing.”

“Oh mother of Merlin, you love her.” Sirius was tentatively trying to stand, but breathing was difficult. His own anger was dissipating slightly, returning to the tight ball of resentment that constantly sat in his stomach. They glared at each other for several long minutes, both panting as though they had been running. When Remus finally answered Sirius his voice was measured and calm again.

“What does that matter? Nothing can happen, it can’t go anywhere! Can you imagine the technicolour cubs? They’d be outcasts. I can’t do that to her.” His anger had subsided, leaving a tide of self loathing in the pit of his stomach. He walked across the kitchen and healed Sirius ribs. “Just keep it to yourself. She’ll move on, find someone else.”

“Whatever you say old man, whatever you say.”

Later at the meeting, Sirius watched as Remus and Tonks steadily avoided having direct eye contact. He also noticed that they were both stealing glances at each other. He doubted that either of them would move on, their feelings for each other were so strong Sirius could almost smell them.

*****


“Ted, you’ve been pushing those potatoes around your plate for ten minuets. Are you going to eat them?”

“No, I’m not hungry.”

Amelia looked at him quizzically. It had been his idea to have lunch in the Leaky Cauldron, rather than eat in the Ministry.

“Can you remember the first time we met?”

“I’ll never forget it, you almost died.”

“Yeah, well, the second time then. At Harry’s party.”

“Oh. Yes, I remember.” She remembered that party, kissing Teddy in the orchard and the fireworks that had exploded in her chest.

“Well, what I was wondering was, well, if you still felt like that.”

“How long have you been wondering that?”

“Ever since I saw you sat at my desk on your first day.”

She smiled. “I’m glad it wasn’t just me then.”

He reached out across the table and took her hand. “Amelia, will you, could you, be mine?”

She smiled. “I’ve always been yours. No-one else has ever made me feel the way that you do.”

Teddy’s heart swelled. This was it. This was love.
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Aw! That post was so cute! When Teddy realised he was in love! Aw! I felt like crying for Victoire. That must have been so sad! And when she took her engagement ring off, gave it to Teddy and walked off, i actually cried. I loved the Remus flashback, though. It was so funny, the way Sirius knew there was somethin going on between Remus and Tonks. Well, sort of. Sirius is so cheeky! You've portrayed him really well. And you can tell Remus loves Tonks. It's really, really obvious. I love the remark you made about Sirius nearly being able to smell Remus and Tonks' feelings for each other. Brings out the dog in him.
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Aw! That post was so cute! When Teddy realised he was in love! Aw! I felt like crying for Victoire. That must have been so sad! And when she took her engagement ring off, gave it to Teddy and walked off, i actually cried. I loved the Remus flashback, though. It was so funny, the way Sirius knew there was somethin going on between Remus and Tonks. Well, sort of. Sirius is so cheeky! You've portrayed him really well. And you can tell Remus loves Tonks. It's really, really obvious. I love the remark you made about Sirius nearly being able to smell Remus and Tonks' feelings for each other. Brings out the dog in him.
You cried? Oh I'm sorry! I wanted to tug at some heartstrings but I didn't mean to make anyone cry Blame it on The English Patient, all that angst!

I'm glad you both liked the flashback, I had to rewrite it a few times before I was happy with it. I was worried about having Remus attack Sirius, but I thnk it works
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I liked it And the flashback was awesome--you portrayed Sirius and Lupin perfectly! I loved this line

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I liked that as well Lissy! And the bit with Lilly and Ginny.

I also slipped my mother in there, I wonder if anyone can spot her.

I really am glad people liked the flash back. I thought that you might not like Sirius and Remus having an arguement but even the best of friends have disagreements. And with those two, you just know that Sirius would go too far eventually.
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Hey, don't worry about it! I was crying about something else from before so i was already emotional. And anyways, it shows that your writing is really good! The Remus attacking Sirius part really does work! It shows that Remus likes Tonks as well but doesn't want to admit it for some reason. Well, sort of.
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Seven, part one, Red

Teddy was sat at his desk, reading a report on The Movement. It was worrying; all the indications had been that they were beaten and dismantled more than ten years previously. Teddy had been at the battle, he had seen his wife take on the leader, known only as Morgana. She had supposedly taken the name of the enemy of Merlin to mark herself out as formidable. The group that she founded, The Movement for the Advancement of Wizardkind, promoted the old prejudices of both Grindelwald and Voldemort. They had swept through Europe, gathering followers and metering out punishments to those who would not join their cause. They had operated in secret at first, but as their ranks were swelled, they became less cautious and moved into the open. They made an attempt to take over the French Ministry of Magic. Almost all of their Agents had been in Paris when the attack came. Fortunately, a web of well placed spies had warned the French Ministry, who had appealed to other nations for help. Along with other ministry volunteers, the Auror department had gone to join the fight. During the battle, Amelia had come face to face with Morgana. The duel had been breathtaking, the air had sung with the spells that flew between them, the marble beneath their feet cracking as though struck by lightening. Teddy had been facing a masked Agent himself when he heard a terrible scream. Amelia’s face was bleeding and Morgana was cackling with laughter. His wife’s grip on her wand never faltered and she used the distraction of Morgana’s own laughter against her, hitting her in the chest with a spell. For a reason that was never fully understood, Amelia’s stunner had stopped the witches’ heart and she was dead before she hit the ground.

Killing her had tortured Amelia ever since. She had said, over and over again, that killing was not the reason she had become an Auror. She came back to work in the department, but not straight away. She had said that she didn’t trust herself. Teddy had even suggested that she consider transferring to another department within the Ministry. It seemed to be this suggestion that brought her back to work. Smiling at the memory, Teddy wondered if any other woman was as stubborn as his wife.

“Lupin!” Harry’s voice carried across the department. Teddy stood up and made his way into Harry’s office. The walls were filled with photographs, maps, plans and reports. There were a few leather armchairs and sitting in one of them, next to Harry’s enormous desk was Keith Moore.

“Right then, I need the two of you to go and move the occupants out of the safe house. Moore, I need you to remove their memories of the last six months completely. Give them this Befuddlement Draft” he handed over a large bottle “and take them to St. Mungo’s, the Healers will be expecting you. They will be told that they have had an accident and have been unconscious for a long time.”

“Sir, can I ask what it is that these two know?”

Harry gave Keith a long appraising look, as though trying to make a decision. Finally he said, “Morgana had a daughter. Hardly anyone knew, including the girl herself. A Movement Agent took it on himself to tell her. She was devastated, and it’s unclear what happened next but the Agent is dead. She is at risk while ever she knows, mainly at her own hands. She’s incredibly unstable. As I understand it she’s tried to take her own life twice. Save for the occupants of the safe house, only a few people know, you two, me, Hermione Weasley and some high level French Ministry officials. It stays that way. The French ministry have gone to a lot of trouble to make sure that this is suppressed.” Harry’s tone was firm. “Moore, you’re the best Obliviator that we’ve got, so I’m relying on you to wipe the girl’s memory.”

“How old is she sir?”

“Fourteen. She’s accompanied by Susan Bones at the moment. I need you to wipe her memory too.”

Keith’s eyebrows shot towards his hair in shock. He looked deeply uncomfortable.

“I’m sorry sir, but she’s my superior, she trained me… I can’t… She’ll be able to tell, she’d kill…”

“She asked for her memory to be wiped. She is more concerned with keeping the child safe.”

Teddy could tell that Keith still had misgivings. “Are you going to have us wiped too?” he asked Harry pointedly.

“That’s up to you. This information will make you a target, but so do you jobs. You must never tell anyone, including your wives.”

They both nodded grimly.

“Moore, do you know where the safe house is?” Keith shook his head. Harry told him the address and wished them good luck. Teddy and Keith gathered their travelling cloaks and made their way down to the Atrium.

“Ted, mate, is the pillar box red hair a good idea? Considering where we’re going and everything?”

“Good point” Teddy screwed up his face and turned his hair a grey flecked tawny brown. Together they turned on the spot and disappeared.

There were two faint pops as they instantly re-appeared in a rather anonymous London square. There was a scruffy patch of grass which had houses on all four sides. It had not changed very much in the last thirty five years, the houses were still grimy, windows were still broken here and there, doors still had peeling paint and as far as the Muggles were concerned, Number Twelve did not exist.

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Remus was trying to read in his room. The room had the same faded grandeur that the rest of the house had, with green and silver silk hangings over the ornately craved bed and a beautiful mahogany desk in one corner, where Remus was now sitting. He had spent a week here, using the books that the Black family had amassed over the centuries to try and find some information for Dumbledore. He wasn’t having much luck and this, coupled with the fact that the portrait of Sirius’ mother seemed to be screaming and cursing every five minutes, had left him feeling deeply irritated. After ten whole minutes of calm, there was a loud crash and she was off again.

“Blood traitor’s brat! Be gone from my house! Shame of flesh, get out of my -”

“Oh shut up you stupid old cow!” A young voice that Remus didn’t recognise was giving as good as it got.

“Foul abomination!”

“Oh, look who’s talking you old banshee!”

Remus chuckled. He stood up and went to the balustrade, leaning over to see who was trading insults with the formidable Mrs Black. He was surprised to see a tall woman with dark hair standing with Sirius, berating the painting. She looked as though she could have been Minerva McGonagall’s sister and her voice just didn’t seem to suit her.

As the meeting was due to start in less than an hour, Remus abandoned his fruitless search and set off to join Sirius and his guest in the kitchen. He made his way down stairs, pausing to pick up the troll’s foot umbrella stand that had caused Sirius’ mother to bellow. He entered the kitchen to find Sirius and the woman talking quickly as he made coffee.

“There you are Remus! I thought that you weren’t going to come down at all.”

“Hello, how’ve you been?” asked the woman, smiling in a very familiar way, as though she was an old acquaintance who Remus had lost touch with.

“Great, thanks.” Remus felt a little awkward as Sirius and the woman exchanged amused glances.

“You’ve not got a clue who I am, have you?” She seemed to find his confusion funny.

“None.”

She screwed up her face, as though she was concentrating, and her features began to change. She became shorter, younger and her hair turned from dark brown to vivid pink.

“Merlin’s beard! Nymphadora?”

“I prefer Tonks, but yes.”

He was struck by how beautiful she had become. The last time he had seen her, she was a child throwing snowballs at his head.

“How are you? What are you doing now? Are you here to join the Order?”

The string of questions tumbled out breathlessly; he had a burning desire to know everything about her.

“Well, I’m fine thanks, I’m an Auror and yes, I’m here to join the cause.” She smiled at him and he found that he was completely captivated.

Sirius presented them both with a cup of coffee. More order members began to arrive and they settled around the kitchen. It wasn’t really big enough for the meeting, but the rest of the house was too dangerous. Hestia Jones had cornered Remus, dragging him away from Tonks and was chattering in his ear about not having seen him in years. After Dumbledore arrived and the meeting was called to order, Remus found that his attention was divided between the discussions of priorities and strategies and Tonks. More than once he realised just in time that someone was speaking directly to him. When their eyes met, he felt a charge surge through him and his body tingled. The rational part of his mind seemed to be completely absent, he couldn’t understand it. What was it about this young woman that had so ensnared his senses?

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The interior of Number 12, Grimmauld Place was radically different. The house would be totally unrecognisable to anyone who had been in the Order of the Phoenix. A Ministry team had completely decontaminated it and Filius Flitwick had broken the Permanent Sticking Charms on the portrait of Mrs Black and her precious family tree. It was decorated quiet neutrally now and felt almost like a guest house.

Teddy and Keith stepped through the front door and felt the cold breeze that was gusting through the house. The old building was totally silent.

“This is really wrong.” Teddy’s voice was tense. “There should be…” He fell silent as Keith grabbed his arm. They crept through the hall, wands gripped tightly. When they reached the foot of the stairs, a voice rang out behind them from the drawing room.

“Stay where you are and put your wands on the ground or I will kill the girl.”


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I always had this idea that he fell for her first and then got scared and stupid about it when she fell for him in return, that's what I was aiming for.

I had to get rid of Mrs Black, spiteful old harridon that she was. I have this mental image of Harry stunning her painting and then throwing it on the fire.
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Haha! That would have been so funny! I'm glad you got rid of her! Didn't like her too much! I love the flashback! Remus is so lovestruck! I like Harry's comment about Teddy's hair! I couldn't help smiling - even in the seriousness of the situation! OMG! First Grindelwald, then Voldemort, now Morgana! Honestly, don't these people realise that they're doomed?! Poor Amelia! Glad she's ok. And she's Teddy's wife! *claps whilst jumping up and down* Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
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I'm enjoying those flashbacks loads! And it's very odd you said lovestruck, I had Remus thinking that, but then I thought it would be better if he couldn't work it out!

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“Blood traitor’s brat! Be gone from my house! Shame of flesh, get out of my -”

“Oh shut up you stupid old cow!” A young voice that Remus didn’t recognise was giving as good as it got.

“Foul abomination!”

“Oh, look who’s talking you old banshee!”

Remus chuckled. He stood up and went to the balustrade, leaning over to see who was trading insults with the formidable Mrs Black.




I laughed so much at that!
Hey! I'm not a new reader but I've not commented on your FanFic before, so I guess I'm a new commenter?

Anyway, this FanFic is really good. Like, stupidly good =)
Your style of writing is unique, in the way that you flick between the present and the past, but it's a good type of unique (Y)
Excellent storyline, and I'm so glad that Teddy and Amelia got married!

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Seven, part two, Red
Teddy felt a chill run down his spine. He knew that voice, but it couldn’t be true, it just couldn’t. Slowly he turned, still clutching his wand but pointing it at the ground. In the doorway of the drawing room was a teenaged year old girl. He could see a wand pointed at her throat. Her eyes were brimful of tears but she was giving Teddy a burning look. Slowly, she edged out of the room and Teddy saw a large hand clenching her shoulder.

“Wands on the ground gentlemen. I will not tell you again.”

Teddy could now see the man who was issuing the threats. His icy glare was disturbingly familiar, but Teddy had seen the man die, so how was it that he was stood in the hall of Number Twelve Grimmauld Place, with his wand at the throat of an innocent child?

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Remus ran, trying to keep up with Dora’s impressive pace. At five months pregnant, she could still run faster than him. The Death Eaters had been following them for a fortnight and had chosen the day after full moon to attack, expecting Remus to be weak. He realised too late that they had run into a dead end. They were trapped. Remus only just managed to block the spells raining in on them. They traded spells with the Death Eaters, the air cracking with light.

“You have to Apparate!”

“But what about the baby?”

“We’re both going to be dead in a minute if we don’t go! You first!”

He aimed a stunner at Dolohov and it hit him in the face. He fell backwards into Travers, knocking him off his feet. Travers struggled underneath Dolohov, who seemed to be pinning him to the floor. Two more masked Death Eaters stepped over them, taking their place in the fight, firing off green jets of light. They missed Remus and Tonks by inches. The wall behind them was becoming chipped; bricks were cracking as spells hit them. It seemed that either the Death Eaters would kill them, or the wall would fall on them.

“Those are Killing Curses Dora! Apparate now, please!” Remus tried to keep his mind focused on defending his wife and child, his family, but already there was a whine of panic in his mind. He could not stand to loose his family.

There was a cackle of mad laughter that seemed to cut through Remus’ heart. Bellatrix. She was striding towards them, unmasked.

“Go now Dora! Please! For me!”

Remus knew that Bellatrix wanted to kill Dora because she had married him. The woman was a complete maniac, but she was also a powerful witch who was merciless in pursuit of her quarry.

“Please darling, go now.” It seemed that the tenderness in Remus’ plea coupled with the fact that he usually only called her darling in private made Tonks realise how serious he was. Concentrating hard, so as not to splinch either of them, she gripped her swollen belly protectively and turned quickly on the spot and disappeared.

“Werewolf!” Dolohov had been revived by Travers and they now stood side by side with Bellatrix and the others. “Your shame is never ending! You are guilty and you will die Werewolf! We will make it so! And we will take your woman too!”

Remus shot more stunners at the Death Eaters and Apparated. As he turned on the spot he saw five jets of light heading in his direction.

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“Your quarrel isn’t with the girl, just let her go.” Teddy’s tone was resolute and even but his heart was hammering in his chest, pumping the adrenaline around his body. He had not relinquished his wand.

“Put your wands down” The man hissed the command at Teddy, and a tear ran down the girl’s cheek. His grip on her shoulder increased and she winced, but did not try to shrug him off.

Keith asked “Where is Susan?” and the girl began to cry in earnest. “What have you done to her?”

“PUT YOUR WANDS DOWN NOW!” That was the voice Teddy remembered, bellowing orders across the French Ministry at Movement Agents. Teddy had believed Emil Nequam to be dead for ten years and yet here he was, threatening to kill the daughter of his leader. Teddy was desperately trying to think of a way to keep his wand and save the girl. The last thing he wanted to do was to put his wand down. Nequam had issued the order four times without harming the girl. Did he know who she was?

“Let her go Emil. You’re scaring her.” Nequam slackened his grip on her shoulder, but didn’t lower his wand.

“You’re in no place to make demands Cub.” His eyes glittered with malice. “Shall I tell her who her rescuer is? The filthy offspring of a lycan? Maybe you’ll eat her, save me the bother of killing her myself.”

The girl’s eyes filled with horror. She looked from Teddy to Keith desperately. She was no longer crying but she was clearly terrified.

“Yes, my father was a werewolf, but I’m not. Let the girl go. I’m sure you don’t really want to hurt her Emil.”

“How does she know she can trust you? You might be lying.” Nequam seemed to have forgotten his edict; Teddy and Keith were still tightly grasping their wands.

“Well, I’m not pointing my wand at her face for a start.”

Nequam snorted. “This is getting us nowhere! Put down your wands, or she dies.”

“I don’t think you’ll hurt her. You know who she is, or you wouldn’t have gone to the considerable lengths it must have taken to get in here. How did you do that?” Teddy knew that Nequam wouldn’t be able to resist boasting about how he had got past the Fidelius Charm and in to the safe house.

Nequam gave a nasty laugh. “Your Ministry really needs to teach its staff how to recognise when a person has been Imperiused. I had one of your transport people connect this place to the Floo Network just long enough for me to get in. It was ridiculously simple.”

Keith shifted slightly behind Teddy. Unseen by Nequam, who was too busy with self-aggrandisement, he traced a long line on Teddy’s back, starting at his shoulders. He then traced a series of letters; U G G I S N. Then he traced the number three. Teddy flexed his right hand.

“Impressive. So Emil what do you want? You must be here for a reason.”

“I want Hermia!”

“You’ve spent the last fifteen minutes threatening to kill her. What do you want with her?”

“She will take her mother’s place at the head of The Movement. I have spent twelve years searching for her.”

Tears were now flowing freely down the girl’s face. She shook her head. “I won’t go with you! You might as well kill me! I’ll never be like her, never!”

“You will embrace your destiny! You are a powerful witch, just like your mother.” Nequam span her around and shook her. Teddy and Keith took their chance. Teddy wrenched the girl from Nequam’s grasp and pulled her to the floor. Keith sent three Stunners at Nequam. All three hit him and he fell backwards in to the drawing room, hitting the highly polished floor with a loud thud. Keith walked to him and dragged him further into the room, pointed his wand at his lifeless form and muttered “Petrificus Totalus”. Nequam became rigid. Teddy relaxed his grip on Hermia and they both sat up.

“You’d best send Harry a message, let him know what’s happening. He might want to come and see for himself.” Teddy nodded in agreement and gave his wand a flick. Something silver shot out of his wand and disappeared. Teddy turned his attention to the girl. She looked pale, her sleek raven hair was in disarray and her eyes were red rimmed.

“Where’s Susan?”

The girl started to cry again. “She’s in the kitchen.”

“Stay there.” Teddy stood up and made his way down the stairs to the cavernous kitchen. He wondered about his job and how long he could stand up to one psychological drama after another. Shaking his head, he pushed open the door. “Susan?” There was no reply. He stepped into the room, realising immediately that it was a mistake.



Confession time! Those of you who have read my Remus drabbles may recognise the start of the flashback because it is a drabble I liked it and it seemed to fit, so I expanded it.

A non-SS friend who is reading this challenged me to put four lines from her favourite song, Drama! by Erasure in this chapter. I managed two, but they are for her to spot
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OMG! That person! Back from the dead?! Woah! That is seriously creepy! I'm glad the girl is ok! I loved their plan! It was really, really good! OMG! What happened to Susan?! And who's that person in the kitchen?! What happened to Teddy?! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
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Lupinfangirlx - It did fit, didn't it? I've been making references to the others all the way through - did you see get the one with Remus' werewolf bite? No-one commented on that, so maybe it was rubbish

Kita, there are only so many ways that I can be cruel to Teddy! Don't worry, there's the rest of Seven and Eight to go and then there's the Epilouge, so there is plenty left to go. I thought that I'd best warn you so you could get used to the idea.


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I don't know how to do that hiding thing so you have been warned! If you highlight the secton below you'll be able to see them.

Hopefully you, like Teddy, are questioning if he saw Nequam die or was it someone else??? I'm trying to stick to JKR's rules, so people can't come back from the dead...

by the way, in latin Emil means rival and Nequam means lazy or dishonest. I think he's proved he's not lazy...

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