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NarcissaLongbottom80 04-30-2010 08:57 PM

Breathe - Sa13+
 
Hi everyone, I’m Sonny, a girl, and this is my first FF. This is a two-shot. (Unless I hear otherwise!) This is a song fic based on the song Breathe by Taylor Swift. The gold is Narcissa’s POV, the red is Albus’ POV, the text is in grey and the song is in aqua.
DISCLAIMER! None of these characters are mine except Narcissa and Alexis Dayton. (PS: what does PAMS and PAMSOID mean? I’m sorry but I’m kinda un-cool.)


I stumbled into the dormitory, flung myself onto my bed and burst into tears again.
“What’s wrong, Cissy? Why are you up crying at 2 a.m.?” My best friend, Rose Weasley asked.
“Albus Severus-” I burst into fresh tears.
“What happened with him? If he hurt you I swear I’m going to beat that cousin of mine up!”
“He… broke…” I was unable to finish.
“He broke up with you? Oh my god he’s going to get it! But, first, what’s the story?”
“Albus told me to meet him in the common room at 1:45 a.m. When I got there, he was sitting on the couch with Alexis Dayton! He said, ‘Narcissa, I don’t love you like I did before. I’m sorry but Alexis stole my heart away. I’m breaking up with you.’”
Rose got up and left, probably to go beat up Albus in the boys’ dormitory, where he would be shamed. Instead, she came back a minute with a cup of water.
I thought about the song Breathe, by Taylor Swift, and how that song related to what just happened. I picked up my phone.



That's all for now so please comment! I know it doesn't sound like a song fic but the second part will. Enjoy.

AmbiguouslyMe 05-11-2010 11:47 AM

Welcome to Other Stories!

I can't wait to read the second part!

NarcissaLongbottom80 05-15-2010 06:58 PM

Cissy
 
I'm waiting for more people to comment. Thanks, by the way.

NarcissaLongbottom80 06-03-2010 08:46 PM

Cissy
 
I think I shall post the second part tomorrow, I hope U don't mind waiting!

draco'sgirlraquel! 06-08-2010 01:46 AM

Love it! By the way, PAMS means Post Alot More Soon! :) Can't wait for the second part!

IluvvDracoMalfoy 07-05-2010 08:38 AM

Aww:[
Btw PAMS can also mean 'please add more soon'. Lol I have no clue what PAMSOID is. Haha

Cassiopia Malfoy 07-08-2010 01:15 AM

Ohmigosh! That's so sad, Albus.. I'M GOING TO PUNCH YOUR LIGHTS OUT! :xd: I feel so much better now!

I loooooove TS!!! She's da best! (ohmigosh, I'm writing a Breathe ff right now! That's soo freaking awesome!)

NarcissaLongbottom80 08-03-2010 12:27 AM

You guys are cracking me up! And some of your avatars are so funny! I said I wanted DEACAF! lol! Thanks for helping me with the lang. that helps! Posting now. You can punch Albus's lights out now....

NarcissaLongbottom80 08-03-2010 12:42 AM

Alice Longbottom
 
Here's the second part to the ff. Sorry I haven't posted... I was waiting for more people to comment and then I went to camp...
Enjoy!

I walked back to my dormitory and flopped onto my bed. Then, my phone buzzed. I picked it up and looked at the text.

Listen to this song. It’s my feelings about what just happened Mr. Albus Severus Potter. Narcissa Longbottom

‘True feelings about what happened?’ I thought about the text. ‘I think Cissy isn’t too happy that I broke up with her. It’s just that Alexis is cuter, more my type, and man, she is hott!’ I smiled. ‘I wonder what Alexis will say when I tell her that.’ I focused my attention on the text. At the bottom of the message there was a play button. I clicked it. The song Breathe by Taylor Swift, a Muggle songwriter, sounded from my phone’s speakers.

I see your face in my mind as I drive away
'Cause none of us thought it was gonna end that way
People are people and sometimes we change our minds
But it's killing me to see you go after all this time.

Mmm, mmm, mmm, mmm, mmm, mmm, mmm, mmm
Mmm, mmm, mmm, mmm, mmm, mmm, mmm, mmm
Music starts playin' like the end of a sad movie
It's the kinda ending you don't really wanna see
'Cause it's tragedy and it'll only bring you down
Now I don't know what to be without you around.

And we know it's never simple, never easy
Never a clean break, no one here to save me
You're the only thing I know like the back of my hand
And I can't breathe without you, but I have to
Breathe without you, but I have to.

Never wanted this, never want to see you hurt
Every little bump in the road I tried to swerve
People are people and sometimes it doesn't work out
Nothing we say is gonna save us from the fall out.

And we know it's never simple, never easy
Never a clean break, no one here to save me
You're the only thing I know like the back of my hand
And I can't breathe without you, but I have to
Breathe without you, but I have to.

It's two a.m., feelin' like I just lost a friend
Hope you know it's not easy, easy for me
It's two a.m., feelin' like I just lost a friend
Hope you know this ain't easy, easy for me.

And we know it's never simple, never easy
Never a clean break, no one here to save me
I can't breathe without you, but I have to
Breathe without you, but I have to
Breathe without you, but I have to.


Hoped you liked it. Please comment!
Sonny

NarcissaLongbottom80 08-10-2010 08:26 PM

If U want me to change the colour of the song just tell me! :)

draco'sgirlraquel! 08-10-2010 09:30 PM

I love it!!! :)

CharGryffindor 08-15-2010 08:45 PM

i adore that song :D
your really good, im intrigued :)
i didnt know what PAMS meant either, until now, so its all cool :)

sooooo....

PAMS :D
xx

NarcissaLongbottom80 08-25-2010 11:18 PM

I might write more if u guys want me to... I need some thing to keep me busy. Im in costa rica right now and can't post v often and im only here for 2 more days. it's been great but the keyboard's very wierd. its not like you average one. I'll start working on the rest right now. *starts mumbling to self* ugg this wierd keyboard is driving me crazy!!!!!!!! :banghead::banghead::banghead:

I like your Team Hogwarts avvie!


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