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01-06-2007, 02:30 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005
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| Black Roses, New Year~Sa13+ Hello!
My name's Adrienne, I have three fics on Snitchseeker so far, two of which are finished. This is a one shot that I've written that goes with the song "Black Roses Red" by Alana Grace.
Comments are LOVELY my dears!
Here we gooooooooo: Can I ask you a question please, promise you won't laugh at me. Honestly, I'm standing here, afraid I'll be betrayed.
"Liz, please!" He said hoarsely. "We can make this work! I know we can!"
Lizabeth shook her head, tears gathering gently in her eyes. "We...we just can't, I'm sorry."
"Why?" He asked, grabbing her arms and turning her to face him. "Tell me." As twisted as it seems, I only fear love when it's in my dreams.
"Because I'm scared." She whispered, raising her eyes to his. "Are you happy now? I'm SCARED!"
"Of what?" He asked bewilderedly. "What are you scared of?"
"Vulnerablilty." She answered. He was shocked. Drowning in my loneliness, how long must I hold my breath? So much emptiness inside, I could fill the deepest sea.
"Lizabeth. No, love, don't do this." He pleaded. He hugged her close to him. "I'm not anyone you should be scared of! I love you."
"No, no, no, no." Lizabeth pulled away, frightened. "If I get to close, this is going to hurt more than it needs to." I reach to the sky as the moon looks on, my one last tear has come and gone.
"Lizabeth, look at me." She looked into his dark eyes. "The things that hurt the most are the things worth living for."
She was overcome with emotion, knew she wasn't going to be able to stand it much longer.
"I...I..."
"Please, love. Just look at us. Look at me. Do you think I would hurt you?"
She looked hard. Dying to let your love rain down on me.
He came closer slowly, afraid of scaring her by moving too fast. She was torn. One half of her told her to run, never look back. The other half was willing her to let go, fall fast and live dangerously for once in her life.
Ten. Nine. Eight. Seven.
She was fighting with herself as he inched closer, his eyes on hers.
Six. Five. Can you turn my black roses red? Oh, can you turn my black roses red?
"I...I..."
Four. Three. Two. One.
She moved into the space between him, hugged his tightly, and kissed him passionately. Outside the corridors, people were yelling, "Happy New Year!"
He kissed her again, on her forehead, her neck, once in a while, even kissing her mouth. "I love you, Lizabeth." He whispered.
"My New Year's Resolution was to not fall in love and get hurt. It's only a minute after New Year's and I've already broken it."
"I love you, so much." He whispered.
"I suppose I shouldn't be worrying about that now, though." She was talking to herself, basically.
"Lizabeth! I love you!"
"I love you too." She said softly. "I love you too, Sirius." Finished
Comments are loved!
.:Adrienne:.
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01-06-2007, 06:40 PM
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| Dark Force Defence League Ramora
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: My own little world!
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| Crazy Hufflepuffian Sirius 'bout Sirius That was beautiful! Oh my legs are feeling all wobbley! Like I said before it's so amazingly beautiful! I can't think of any other word to describe it
I love this part of the fiction Very nice I must say! Quote:
"Why?" He asked, grabbing her arms and turning her to face him. "Tell me."
As twisted as it seems, I only fear love when it's in my dreams.
"Because I'm scared." She whispered, raising her eyes to his. "Are you happy now? I'm SCARED!"
"Of what?" He asked bewilderedly. "What are you scared of?"
"Vulnerablilty." She answered. He was shocked.
Good luck and keep up the wonderful work!
Love Cat xxx
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01-06-2007, 07:30 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005
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HEHEHEHEHEHE!
My first reader!
Thanks soo much! I'm glad you liked it!
Love
Adrienne
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01-06-2007, 07:42 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Canada
Posts: 2,438
| I love it! Keep up the great work Quote:
"I love you too, Sirius."
-tear tear-
Least it's a... happy ending! Beautiful... (only word that can describe it)
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01-07-2007, 10:23 PM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Australia
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| Ha ha! You can't hide from me, Adrienne...LOL. I haven't read yet, but I will soon. I know it'll be excellent, so I can't wait! *love and huggles* Shan XoXo
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01-07-2007, 10:31 PM
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| Rossignol Mooncalf
Join Date: May 2006 Location: the beginning.
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| awww! makes me wanna cry!
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01-08-2007, 12:48 AM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005
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Hah!
Hey there Shan! Glad you're here =)
luv_snuffles: Aww! Thanks so much! I'm glad you're here *hug*
Love
Adrienne
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01-08-2007, 07:56 AM
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| Banshee
Join Date: Aug 2006
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x2 x3
| Fortress of Brilliance ღ Mommy Quad That was really pretty! Great job! . -Grace. |
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01-08-2007, 04:47 PM
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| Billywig
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Australia
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| Aww...excellent writing, my dear! Very cute...
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01-11-2007, 01:10 PM
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| Russia's Glam Girl Firecrab
Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Ozzy Land
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that is sooooooooooooooo sweet i love it its great!
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01-12-2007, 01:15 AM
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| Hippogriff
Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: In the stars.
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First Year | GWFC/BWFC My <3 Ohhh Adrienne! I adored it, it's so beautiful! Good job! Imi xxx
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01-28-2007, 11:35 PM
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| Puffskein
Join Date: Dec 2005
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Thanks so much everyone!! It's OFF to the finished section!
Love you all!
.:Adrienne:.
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