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01-29-2009, 07:44 PM
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Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Greece
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Oh, my God! Tell me you did not just killed Harry Potter! Please please bring him back! This was an amazing chapter...I always wondered what Ginny, Ron, Hermione and the others would do in the DH if Harry had died in front of them...Please girl add more soon!!!! Love it!!!
-Angie-
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01-29-2009, 07:52 PM
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Wow Voltemort does know how to be really cruel, doesn't he? So does a little girl called lilly who's not showing us any mercy and leaves us hunging!!!!!!lol lol lol....GREAT CHAPTER! I love it, love it, love it! PAMS definitely!
Maria
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01-29-2009, 08:41 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Forks, Washington :)
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Ohmygosh. 
Harry! Come back! Noooooo....
PAMS!
-Emily (:
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01-30-2009, 10:06 PM
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|  SS VaulterFirecrab
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IS THIS WHAT YOU MEANT EARLIER?!?
BAD LILLY! BRING HARRY BACK NOW! 
Sorry about that outburst... * Hangs head*
PAMS
Abi...xox
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01-30-2009, 11:13 PM
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| | Gnome
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Kentucky, USA
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OH MY GOSH!!!! I know you didn't just kill Harry. PAMS!!!!! I have to know what's going on.
~Tori
p.s.- i posted on mine for you
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01-30-2009, 11:28 PM
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YEY! A POST ON TORI'S!
Well there will be a little wait for the next bit on mine lol, i want to know if everyone wants me to bring Harry back lol ?... i got to write it as well which isn't helping lol, im on a course and im job seeking, and im broke and i have writers block which is on my other fic and the novel im writing as well ! so give me a few day and tell me if you want Harry back... Thanks for reading and welcome to all my readers new old and those who will find it in the finished fics in a few chappies x
xlillyx
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01-30-2009, 11:31 PM
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Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Kentucky, USA
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I want Harry BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Tori
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01-30-2009, 11:35 PM
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| Formerly: Dances_With_Potter   DMACJobberknoll
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Of course we want Harry back!! What kind of question is that? lol
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01-30-2009, 11:40 PM
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| | Imp
Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Greece
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No i don't want Harry back! Lol...JOKE! Of course we want Harry back! Bring him Back BACK BACK BACK BACK BACK!!!!!!!!!!! Harry Potter shall live for ever!!!! Lol...
-Angie-
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01-31-2009, 01:48 AM
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| | Fire Slug
Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Neverland
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I agree^ bring Harry back! You can't just go and kill him nor his love with Ginny! You do the right thing and bring him back now Lilly! Love it. PAMS!
Maria
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01-31-2009, 01:51 AM
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Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Komotini
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Wow, that was amazing! Please bring Harry back!
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01-31-2009, 11:21 AM
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Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: melbourne
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OK there'll be a post soon and he will be back.. maybe.. its so hard to write lol im going to get this course finished and then i'll have more time and maybe start a new fic and finish eventually finish illegitimate, i will post i promise lol x
xlillyx
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01-31-2009, 06:34 PM
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| | Dugbog
Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: South Africa
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YAAAAY!! but as long as you bring Harry back!!!
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02-01-2009, 06:14 PM
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| | Streeler
Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Near the sea
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Harry has to come back! Don't let him die that would not be cool beans!
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02-02-2009, 09:23 AM
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| | Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: melbourne
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Chapter Thirty – Nine
It was darkness, pure and simple darkness. He felt nothing, no pain, no worry. Not a thing. Surely this was death; it wasn’t possible to still be alive. He had seen the green light that his parents had and met the same fate, for the wizarding world as his they had for him. And now Voldemort was dead, he had to be because he was and that soul would have died with him. He could hear voices they were getting louder,
He felt a hand on his neck, they wouldn’t find a pulse he was so sure they wouldn’t and then he heard her voice cutting through the shouting and chaos.
“LET GO, I HAVE TO GO TO HIM”
“He’s gone Ginny, he’s not coming back” I’m not gone, he told himself, im not dead, im right here.
“He’s not… he promised me he wouldn’t leave me”
“He’s gone Ginny, I’m so sorry, he’s gone”
“No let me go to him” Please let her come and see she’ll know im not gone,
“Please Ginny, just hold on”
“No Mum let me go to him, please let me go to him”
“Please just wait”
“I WON’T WAIT! I LOVE HIM HE’S NOT GONE!”
He felt a hand on his cheek; he couldn’t move he couldn’t respond to her touch.
“Please Harry, wake up, just for me wake up” He felt the wetness of her tears drip down her face on to his and her hands against his chest as he lay on him. He was trying so hard, he wanted to come back but he couldn’t, his body wouldn’t let him.
“Please Ginny; just let us take him somewhere safe”
“NO, GET AWAY FROM ME” She shouted, “IM NOT LEAVING HIM”
He couldn’t feel his own heart beat and was sure she couldn’t either. He felt so cold, despite the warmth of her body clinging on to his but he just wished he could have moved to tell her he was ok, that he was still alive. Then the darkness came again. He felt so weak, and still as cold as it swept over him and the emptiness surrounded him.
*****
They all watched Harry fall to the ground, Ginny’s scream piercing through the heart of everyone standing around her. She felt her world crashing down around her and there was nothing she could do to stop it. They watched as Voldemort stood, looking shocked for a fraction of a second and clutching his chest before falling to his knees.
The aurors knew what had to be done as they swooped quickly on the death eaters capturing them. Willow and Caleb turned there wands on there fellow death eaters standing proudly side by side with the order having done there job well. Willow drew the sword and handed it to Ginny saying “The snake, kill the snake”
Ginny walked to the Voldemort she held it high slicing the snake in half as it tried to slither away from its dying master. Voldemort let out a final scream and collapsed into a pile of robes on the ground. He was a gone, the suffering was over and he was gone.
Ginny saw Harry lying there, he wasn’t moving, he was supposed to be moving he couldn’t have died he promised not to. She dropped the sword went to run over to him, but felt hands grab her stopping her. She saw an auror kneel down and check his pulse and then shake his head, the hands where still stopping her so she shouted,
“LET GO, I HAVE TO GO TO HIM”
“He’s gone Ginny, he’s not coming back” She recognised her mothers voice in her ear.
“He’s not… he promised me he wouldn’t leave me” she replied
“He’s gone Ginny, I’m so sorry, he’s gone” He couldn’t be, she had to go to him,
“No let me go to him” Her mother wouldn’t let her, she was still holding on,
“Please Ginny”
“No Mum let me go to him, please let me go to him” She was pleading now, she had to go, just to see, just to check.
“Please just wait”
“I WON’T WAIT! I LOVE HIM HE’S NOT GONE!”
. She fought her mothers grip and got away to kneel at his side. She stroked his cheek gently with her fingertips, he didn’t move,
“Please Harry, wake up, just for me wake up” she whispered in his ear, her tears falling on to his body.
She lay down next to him closing her eyes, her arm over his chest.
“Please Ginny; just let us take him somewhere safe”
“NO, GET AWAY FROM ME” She shouted, “IM NOT LEAVING HIM”
“Please Gin-”
“NO!”
She felt a strong pair of arms scoop her up and carry her away “Im not leaving him” she whispered “Im not leaving him” Ron placed her on the floor, out of the way, her head in Hermione’s lap as she stroked her hair. He drew his wand and pointed it to the aurors covering the body in a white sheet and said
“We’re taking him home, we’re taking him back to Hogwarts”
They nodded and Ron walked to Ginny, helping her up supported by Hermione. They had to be strong for her. They apparated to Hogsmeade and made a procession to the gates, the body of Harry Potter floating in front off them as they where greeted by Professor McGonagall.
She saw Ginny and Ron and Hermione and let out a cry of horror. Her hand clasped over her mouth before she opened the gates and led them inside. Hagrid was next to see as he held the body in his giant hands and carried him in to the castle.
*****
She had asked to be alone with him and her requests had been met providing they would wait in the hallway for her and be around the school. Ginny sat in the same chair, he was in the hospital wing they had no idea were to put him and she wasn’t going to leave him until she had to, until he was entombed beside Dumbledore. She had moved the sheet from his face, he wouldn’t be able to breath if it was covered she had told them. It had been two hours and his appearance hadn’t changed he looked… he looked like he was asleep. A thought crept over her, what if he was just stuck? What if this was just like before? She got up and made her way over. She reached out hesitantly and touched his hand it was freezing. She touched his cheek, it was like ice and then she leaned down and kissed him softly. It was like diving head first into a frozen lake; she opened her eyes and sat down beside him holding his hand to her heart. Then something happened, she could see the pink returning to his cheeks, the life returning to his body.
“Harry, if your still there, I’m waiting for you”
His eyes moved under the lids, and his hand turned to squeeze hers.
“HES AWAKE, HARRY’S AWAKE!” She shouted, his eyes opened and he looked at her. She jumped on him and he wrapped his arms around her pulling her in closely.
“I thought I was dead, I thought I would never see your face again” he cried into her embrace, as Lupin, Tonks, McGonagall, Willow, Caleb, Hagrid, the entire Weasley family and Ron and Hermione ran into the room followed by Madam Pomfrey bustling in to see her newly reanimated patient.
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02-02-2009, 10:43 AM
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#241 (permalink)
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Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Greece
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Yey!!! Harry is back! Voldie is dead!!!!!!!!Ginny and Harry can be back together now!!!Yey!!!!! Oh, but does that mean that your story ends soon? Oh, no I don't want it to end!
-Angie-
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02-02-2009, 01:49 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: South Africa
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Yay!! awsome awsome awesmoe awsome awsome awsome awsome awsome awsome awsome awsome awsome awsome awsome awsome awsome awsome awsome awsome !!!@!!!!!!
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02-02-2009, 02:52 PM
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| Formerly: Dances_With_Potter DMACJobberknoll
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YESSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!! HE'S NOT DEAD!!!!! woohoo! Really good. Harry's just like Sleeping Beauty  lol
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02-02-2009, 03:42 PM
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#244 (permalink)
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YAY!!! Harry's alive!!! and Voldie-Moldie-Butt is dead!! PAMS!!!!!!
~Tori
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02-02-2009, 05:36 PM
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| | Chizpurfle
Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a world with Dan
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Wow those last to chaptes were great. they made me cry. It was great glad Harry's not dead. Hope their is more and not ending soon.
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02-02-2009, 07:15 PM
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| SS Vaulter Firecrab
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OMG! YAY!! Harry's back... Harry's back! I love you so much right now!! Even more than the foot of snow outside my front door!
PAMS
Abi...xox
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02-02-2009, 08:52 PM
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#247 (permalink)
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YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!  Harry is back!!!!! Voldie perished and now they all gonna live hapilly ever after (hopefully)!!!!! Great post  you're amazing!!!! Can't wait for more!!! Please don't end it just yet!
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02-02-2009, 09:35 PM
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#248 (permalink)
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Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Komotini
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OMG! That was amazing! Harry is back! Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!
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02-03-2009, 02:31 AM
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#249 (permalink)
| | Firecrab
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: melbourne
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Yey you all liked it ! lol there will be more! Im writing it now, a few chappies left maybe more maybe less...
CADENCE ARE YOU PSYCHIC ! i've wrote some of the next two chappies and i mention sleeping beauty lol!
ABI GOT SNOW! IM SOOO JEALOUS I LOVE SNOW! its been the hotest week in Melbourne history here, im English and i've been in aussie 4 years and im still dying from the heat lol
xlillyx
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02-03-2009, 02:37 AM
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| Formerly: Dances_With_Potter DMACJobberknoll
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hahaha no I'm not.
And we got 13 inches of snow in one night here. I hate it. Ugh!
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