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Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
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Chapter 10 Part 1
Chapter 10 Part 2
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
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SPOILER!!: Prologue
A young woman, age 21, sits in her house with her baby girl. She is so happy to have such a beautiful child, she's happy to have any child at all. But she's also afraid. Her baby girl, with her already dark black locks, is in danger. From the same person every other baby is in danger from. Voldemort. But the woman was not afraid; fos he was an auror. She was determined not to let anything happen to her beloved child. But not even the strongest determination can stop what is supposed to happen. Fate will come no matter who, or what, stands in its way.
The woman stands up from her chair and walks into her kitchen. She takes a can of soup out of a cabinet and begins to cook it. After a few minutes it is done, so she purs it in a bowl and sets it in on the counter to cool. As she walkes back into her living room she hears an unusual noise. The second she realizes what it is she rushed down into the cellar and closes the door behind her.
"Lumos," she whispers as she hurries down the stairs, her long blonde hair flying behind her. She goes to the bottom and sets her hair in a pile of blankets.
"My precious child." Her voice has a panicky edge to it, but her baby smiles on, blissfully unaware of the dangers about to happen. "Wherever you or I end up, always remember that I love you." She wraps her child in a pink blanket and holds her close to her. She reaches into her coat and takes out a jade green locket. She puts it in the fold of the blanket right as the door to the cellar flys open.
Even the feircest fighting can not stop what is meant to happen. Fate will come no matter who does or doesn't want it. That night, because of fate, a woman is hidden, a baby girl is gone, and a bowl of soup sits on a counter, slowly getting cold.


I sighed and and sat down on the thin mattress that covered the top bunk of the rickety bunk bed. Today was my 16th birthday but, like all my other birthdays, there would be nothing special. Well, except for the 16th year celebration thing. Which, I suppose, is kinda special. But not really. Once a year all newly turned 16 year olds meet and get assigned to what they have to do.

"Ella, time to go." I immediately jump down from my bed and join the person who had just opened the door. It was Jade, the girl who lived below me. We weren't what I'd call friends, but then again no one had a friend here. And by here I meant our village.

We lived in a small village with a bunch of bunkhouses where the children lived. When we turned 10 we were sent here, away from our families. Except my brother didn't have to come, he was sent to Hogwarts. Because he's 'special.' All of us here are taught magic here, and we're all very good. Especially at duelling. Most of us didn't live with our real families, even before we came here. Our parents were probably killed, either that or they hid without hope for their children. But most likely the first option, the Dark Lord is not sloppy. Yes, we're working for Voldemort. But I'd rather not get into that.

Then we arrived where we were going. It was in the middle of the village, and most people were already there. Today all the 16 year old would get assigned the the duties they would perform to the Death Eaters. It was held every year, for everyone who was over 16 as of that day. Ironically it was on my birthday, so I was exactly 16.

"Attention all." A woman stood on the raised stage at clapped her hands together. "All sixteen year olds come here." Short, sweet, and to the point. It was how everything was. We all learned to obey now and ask questions later.

So, it was time. Time to become what I dreaded most, a death eater. Tonight, all us sixteen year olds would get the dark mark, and officially become one of them. We were all there against our will, but it was what we had grown up with, so we accepted it. It was either that, or die. So we accepted it. I took a deep breath and fingered my locket before walking up to the stage with Jade.

There were five of us sixteen year olds. Me, of couse, and Jade. There was also Flora, the only person who I called a friend. Her real name is Fiorella, but everyone calls her Flora. The other two sixteen year olds are boys. Christian, the mysterious one who no one wants to mess with, and Brad, the cheerful one.

"Jade Mesmoriso." It is apparently going to be Jade's turn first. She steps forward, her head held high and confident. "You will be in charge of the postal interpretation." Which meant she would send messages between the many different groups of Death Eaters. Jade bowed her head and stepped back into line.

"Ella Malfoy." Yes, my name is Ella. Or at least, that's my given name. Given by my 'mother.' My real mother is alive, I know that for a fact. Or at least, she was when I was taken from her. She is/was an auror, and they didn't want to risk losing people, so they just took me. But not before my mother gave me the locket I always wear. It has her picture in it. I was raised by the Malfoys. The brother that I mentioned before, the one who got to go to Hogwarts, is Draco Malfoy. He went to Hogwarts because he is the real son of the Malfoys, whereas I am not.

I stepped forward to recieve my duty. My eyes were fixed ahead, with a confident air in them. I would not flinch, I was trained to take anything that was thrown at me without any emotion in my eyes. "You will be a caretaker." I step back with a slight happiness in my eyes. I get to take care of the young kids. It was exactly what I had wanted!

One by one the rest of the people got their assignments. Christian became a duelling instructor, Brad became a secret agent, or whatever they call it here. He would sneak all over and spy on people, it sounded kind of exciting. Lastly was Flora, she became a caretaker, like me! When it was over we walked back to our bunkhouse together. she lived in the same room as me and Jade, in the top bunk on the wall opposite of mine.

"Anza, I'm scared," she whispered. I looked at her and saw pure terror in her eyes. Anza is the name I gave myself. Actually, it's Esperanza, it means hope. Because hope is what we need here. I smiled weakly at her. "It'll be alright Flora."

"No it won't Anza." Actually, that was completely true. I was terrified too. I did not want this! I wanted to live with my mother and go to Hogwarts like a normal person, well, witch. I said nothing to Flora, and she interpretted my silence correctly. We each took comfort in the other's company.

We passed the bunkhouse and went into the woods. We would know when to come back by the position of the sun. We sat under a tree and watched nature for a while. It was peaceful, I could almost forget the situation we were in. When it was time for us to leave we walked back together. It was time for us to become one of the most dreaded people on the planet. The most dreaded to other peope, and to us.

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The next morning I arrived for my job at promptly eight o'clock the next morning. In case you forgot I became a caretaker, which means that I get to look after the young kids. They range from age ten to age fourteen. At fifteen they live elswhere with kids their age.

I'm so glad I got this task. It is exactly what I wanted! I love the little kids, they are so young and innocent. I hope I can persuade them no to get sucked into evil ways before it's too late. I hope they don't become as evil as the Death Eaters at least. It is against human nature to be that evil.

"Good morning Ella and Flora, thank you for coming." The door opened and a woman with long blond hair opened the door. Her name is June, I like her. She is cheerful and always kind, she definately did not join willingly. Today her hair is pulled back in a ponytail.

"Good morning June," I replied softly, with a small smile. It's hard to give a sincere smile, considering what happened last night. "Reporting for duty ma'am." She smiled and stepped aside so we could enter.

When we entered I felt momentarily sick. The room looked exactly like the one I had just left! It had a bunch of bunk beds lining the walls, with kids sitting around in groups. The only thing different were the people, they were much smaller.

"Hello." A small girl with long blonde hair stood close to June and looked up at me. Her light green eyes were shining with curiosity. I sent her a friendly smile before replying.

"Hello," I knelt down and looked into her eyes. I noticed a silver chain around her neck, but the end was hidden under her shirt, so I couldn't see it. "My name is Ella and this is my friend Flora." I pointed toward Flora, who was still standing. "What is your name."

"My name is Sophia," she said softly with a small smile. "Sophia Malfoy, it's a pleasure to meet you Ella." She curtsied to me. I giggled before standing and looking questioningly at June. Malfoy?

"She grew up with the Malfoy's also," June said, noticing my look and guessing my meaning correctly. "In fact, she arrived only a few days after you left." How odd. She must have been four when she joined them, so she must've known her mother.

"Really?" I looked back down at the small girl. "I grew up with the same family that you did. Did you like it? Were they good to you?" They were perfectly fine to me, I could not imagine Narcissa ever doing anything bad to a child. But they were Death Eaters, you could never assume anything.

"They didn't mistreat me or anything." Sophia fingered her necklace, which I saw was a locket similiar to mine. She looked down at the ground. "But I didn't neccesarily like it. I liked living with my mom. I didn't want to have to leave." Her voice was bitter, and I saw a tear slide along her cheek.

"It's okay." I knelt down again and put my arm around her. She looked at me with tear stains on her face and fresh tears shining in her eyes.

"It's not okay," she said. "My mother is dead, they killed her! And now they expect me to cooperate, and become one of them! They're stupid! I will never be one of them!" I shush her, this kind of talk could get her in trouble.

"Come on." I stood up and took her hand. She followed me over to her bed and gladly sat down. I hugged her again. "It'll be okay, I'm here." But I felt bad; because I had a mother. I vowed to myself that if I ever found my mother- I would find her- Sophia would be my sister.

The rest of the day I did my tasks and took care of the children. It was everything I had thought it would be. And it was a lot better than some other things I could have gotten. When Flora and I were leaving we heard a voice echo through the village.

"All the sixteen-year-olds report to the main building." Flora and I exchanged a look, then began walking towards the main building.

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When Flora and I reached the main building we saw that everyone else had already arrived. The woman I had mentioned before, whos name is Aletta, was standing on the steps waiting for us. As soon as we arrived she began speaking.

"We need you to go on a mission." She scanned her eyes over all of us, as if she was inspected us. I recognized that expression. Last year she called all of last years sixteen-year-olds to a meeting. I hid behind the bushes and watched them as they talked. She had told them they would be going to get an envelope that was very important, then she gave them all that same look she was giving us now. None of them ever came back.

"Isn't that Brad's job?" I asked. "And his co-workers?" His task was to sneak around spying on people, and do secret missions whenever they were needed. Aletta looked at me sharply, but she couldn't see anything different about me. The fear in my heart was not in my eyes.

"Yes it is Miss Malfoy, but as you know each group gets a mission that they must complete as a team." Dang it! She was right. Everyone the same age was in the same group, this was our group. And, as she said, they had to complete a mission as a group. But they normally didn't get their mission this early.

"Well what is it?" Christian was looking at her, his dark eyes not betraying any expression. However, I could tell that he was impatient. He wanted to recieve it and get it over with. He believed we could do this...without dying.

"You have been instructed to capture someone, a woman. We need to have her captured and brought here. We're not completely sure where she is, but we have a pretty good idea. Here is a picture of her." She handed a picture to the person closest to her, who happened to be Christian.

"You may all go and pack your personal belingings. You'll be leaving at sunset." She walked away, leaving all of us in a group. We exchanged a look before the girls walked to our room and the boys went to their room.

We were silent on our way to our room, and throughout our packing. We didn't really have much to pack, because we didn't have many personal belongings. I had a small leather pack with a small folded up pink blanket in it. Wrapped up in the blanket there was a china unicorn Narcissa gave to me. In the front pocket was a charm bracelet with colorful flowers on a silver chain that I had gotten from Draco. They were the only things I had, and I treasured them.

We were all done fast, but we didn't speak. I knew we were all dreading what was coming next. I know I was, and I knew they were too, even though they hadn't heard what I had last year. When sunset came we got up from the beds we were sitting on and walked back to the main building.

"You guys ready to go?" I was suprised that Christian had asked that, but I also wasn't. I knew, that even though he didn't show anything on the outside, he really cared about us. But I was kind of confused, because he was staring right at me.

None of us said anything. Because the answer was no. We were not ready, we didn't want to go. But we had to. Slowly, one by one, we nodded. Christian took the picture out of his pocket and passed it around.

I was sad to look at it. i felt sorry for the woman, she did nothing to us, but we had to kill her. But I guess we had to get used to it, killing or hunting the innocent.

When It got to me, I hesitantly looked down at it. And when I did, I gasped. Something struck me and I was certain of something. Even though I had never been able to open my locket, I knew without a doubt who this woman was. She was my mother.

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We started walking then, which seemed kind of stupid to me. Why start your walk at sundown? After walking for about an hour it was already starting to get dark. But we kept walking; I think we all wanted to get as far away from that place as possible.

"You look sad." I was suprised when I heard a voice next to me; no one had talked the whole time. I hadn't known anyone was next to me, I was lost in my thoughts. But I shook my head to come back to the present and I looked at Flora.

"Why do you say that?" I composed my face so my ecpression was suprised. I was not ready to tell anyone yet, not even Flora. That was our forst lesson, trust no one. I trusted her, but I still wasn't ready to tell her this.

"You just looked sad," she replied. Her light green eyes searched my face, they were filled with concern. I knew that she knew something was up, but I also knew she wouldn't press. She knew that I would tell in due time.

"I'm fine," I said unconvincingly and quickened my pace so I was in the group of other people, instead of by Flora; my sadness wouldn't be as apparent to them. And none of them questioned why I was suddenly there, everyone was silent.

We finally had to stop when it was too dark to see much. We found a small clearing between some trees and set up camp there. We were all underage, so we couldn't use magic without being found by the Ministry. That was the last thing we wanted now. Sometimed I considered turning myself into the ministry, and turning in the location of the village. If I did, it wouldn't be so bad for me, but I still might be put in askaban for assicoation. And now that I had the mark on my arm, it would be worse. Even if I wasn't jailed, if anyone escaped they would go straight for me. Or someone else, maybe even Voldemort himself. If that happened, there would be no possibility of me living.

I hated it. Sometimes I really hated it. No, not sometimes, all the time! I hated it; living with fear always present. Fear of being found, fear of going to prison, fear of dying. That one was the worst. Most of all, I hated voldemort. If he had just made normal friends and became a normal person, none of this would have happened. Not as many people would turn evil, not as many people would have to die.

"Ella?" I looked up in suprise at the voice. It wasn't the voice that suprised me, it was the person it belonged to. Christian. Christian, the mysterious one. Chriatian, the one nobody could ever tell what he was feeling. Christian, the one who stayed to himself and never talked. He was talking to me. Me? Why?

"What?" My voice held suprise, and I struggled to get it out. But that was a feat I could not perform. I was so suprised that I hadn't realized something. He must be talking to me for a reason, Christian would not speak without a huge reason.

"You're crying," he pointed out. I was? All of my suprise at christian talking was replaced by a different suprise? I hadn't realized I was crying. While I had been lost in my thought a hot angry tear rolled down my cheek. "Are you okay?"

Was I okay? No, I most certainly wasn't. I was here. Here and most definately not okay. I knew that wasn't what he meant, so I nodded slowly. I was even more suprised when more tears started rolling down my cheeks. But I embraced it and started sobbing. Without conciously realizing it I sat down on the ground. Christian came over and sat beside me, putting his arm around my shoulders comfortingly. I forgot to be shocked as I buried my head in his shoulder and let my tears run out. When they ran dry I looked up at him.

"Where is everyone else?" I hadn't realized, until just then, that no one else was there. I had felt sort of a nagging in my mind when Christian told me I was crying. I was wondering why Flora hadn't comforted me, she was usually the first to notice. As earlier had proved.

"Sleeping," he said quietly. "They were out the second their heads touched the ground." Normally people would say pillow in that sentance, but we didn't have any pillows. "And Ella," he didn't bother waiting for an answer from me. "It's okay. I understand. Sometimed people just need to cry, they don't necessaily need a reason."

He walked away then. I was still in shock; I had just had a conversation with Christian.

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"I think we should go into town," Christian declared the next morning. Wow, this talking thing was getting more shocking, because HE KEPT TALKING!

"But people will see us," Brad pointed out. That when I first realized that he was stupid. Of course people would see us...duh.

"So?" Being half asleep, Christians logic seemed genious. Apparently it didn't make as much sense to other people, they looked worried, and they were looking at him like he was crazy.

"So, what if something happens and we have to take out shirt off?" Okay, so maybe he wasn't stupid. Being half asleep, both sides of the argument made perfect sense.

"When will we ever have to take our shirts off?" Ah yes, a flaw. I had suspected something, but I hadn't known what it was yet. Good thing Jade wasn't half asleep; she could actually think clearly.

"Um...well..." Brad couln't come up with anything to further his argument. I was beginning to think of it as a lost cause, until he spoke again. "What if we get in a terrible tennis accident and they have to take off our shirts to give us surgery?"

"Stay away from tennis courts," Christian said, then he went to pack what little stuff we had. Everyone else packed their sleeping bag too, apparently Christian was a self proclaimed leader.

I went over to my sleeping bag and rolled it up then I put it in my small backpack. I took my locked and fastened it around my neck. Then our whole group met in the middle of the clearing. We all exchanged a look then began walking.

After walking for a while we came to a town, we all hesitated before going in, even Christian. Then we walked in, with long sleved shirts secure over our arms.

"Hello." A man wearing a floral T-shirt and white pants came over to us. "Have you come to town for the world famour carnival?" Christian nodded, it was better than no story. "Well then come with me." The man led us to a small building that was very long. The sign said Motel.

"This is where all visitors visiting speciallu for the carnival stay," The man said. I decided that I didn't like him, he was too cheerful. Some cheerfullness was good, but not all the time.

"Okay, thanks," Christian said. "Um, my dates have been confused. When is the Carnival?" His tone was serious, he wasa very good actor. But thr man still looked confused, apparently people didn't forget about the Carnival.

"It will take place in two days time." He didn't say confused for long before he was back to being cheerful. "I'll see you then. Oh and by the way, my name's Al." He waved, cheerfully, before walkind away. Even his walk looked rather cheerful.

"Come on," Christian said. We walked into the lobby of the motel, it was rather small. It had an eggshell colored carpet, with tan walls. In the middle there was a rickety wooden desk with a man sitting behind it. Next the right wall there was a set of stairs.

"Hey, you!" All of our heads simultaneuosly turned to look at the man at the desk. "Yeah, are you people here for the carnival?" Christian nodded. "Good, then come here." We exchanged a glance before walking to the man. "Sign this." He handed us a sheet of paper that looked like it had been written by Cheerul man. It read;

Welcome good people,
Our world famous carnival is in town. Are you here to enjoy it? Well of course you are, otherwise you wouldn't be here. We're known all around for our wonderful service. So sign your name below to get a room. We're happy to serve.


Christian signed his name, with a fake last name, in big loops letters on the line at the bottom of the paper. The man took it and put it in a file. Then he handed each of us a key. "You're in room number 108, have a fun stay." We looked at eachother and back at him; he sighed. "Go up the stairs and to the right, you'll find your room along there."

We followed his directions and came to room number 108 after 4 doors. Christian inserted his key in the lock and opened the door. There were two single beds, a small mattress and some blankets, looks like some of us would have to sleep on the floor. But that wasn't very bad, we had thought we would have to, having even one bed was fortunate.

Across from the two beds there was a dresser with a T.V sitting on top of it. Next to the T.V was a bucket that had ICE written on it. On the other side there was a channed guide and a mirror behind it. Between the two beds was a bedside table with a phone and a clock. There was a light above each bed, with a switch on the light.

"We'll have to take turns with the beds," Jade said. "And the mattress. Two people will have to sleep on the floor." I could tell by her expression that she was thinking what I had been thinking earlier.

"I'll take the floor tonight," Christian said. I didn't know if he was just trying to be manly, or if he honestly didn't care.

"So will I," Brad said. If it was some manly thing, Brad would not be outdone. "The girls can take the beds."

I was glad to get a bed, but I hoped they didn't think I should get it because I was girly and fragile. If they did, then they were sadly mistaken. Because I could punch either of them without even thinking.

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I was standing in a place I did not recognize; and it was dark. The moon was shining in the sky, so I knew it was night, that's why it was dark. My eyes scanned the scene and I noticed there was a lake in front of me. On the beach there was a bench, there was a shape on the bench; a dark silhoutte of a woman. For reasons unknown I walked toward the woman. But I wasn't moving forward, my feet were trying to move forward, but it was like I was walking in place.

The Woman stood up and looked at me. I couldn't make out her face in the dark, but I could see her eyes. They were piercing green, and they seemed to take in everything. Her eyes washed over my face, and she said something softly; too soft for me to tell what it was. Then she spoke again. "Anna," she said in a ghostly voice, and I knew she was talking to me.

"Anna." A sudden urgency came into her eyes as they locked on something I could not see. Suddenly a green light flew past me and hit her directly on her heart. She flew backward and I could see her no more.


My eyes flew open and I quickly sat up. My eyes didn't show the fear I was feeling inside. There was a knot deep in the pit of my stomach, and it refused to untie. I looked around to see if anyone was awake yet, and my eyes met Christians. His deep blue eyes rested calmly on my face.

"Hey," I said quietly so as not to wake up Flora, Jade, or Brad. I wiped the sleepiness from my eyes and got out of the bed. I went into the bathroom and brushed my teeth, then I brushed my hair. After brushing my hair, I tied it into a ponytail and put on a hat, putting my ponytail through the back.

"Want to go outside?" Christian asked. I was a little suprised that he was talking, but I was beginning to get used to it. I nodded and followed him out of the room, down the stairs, and out the main door. He led me over to the fountain and we sat down on the edge. We were silent for a few minutes, and I was beginning to wonder why he had asked me if I wanted to come with him, but then he spoke.

"Last night you were talking," he began and sent my mind whirling. The only thing i remembered dreaming was about a woman on the beach, and I wondered what I had said. "You said...mom. And i was wondering if there was a specific reason why." I looked at him in suprise and saw that his eyes were filled with sincere worry.

"Oh," I said. I wasn't sure why I had said mom, I didn't remember dreaming anything where I would have reason too. I had never called anyone mom, I had always called Narcissa by her name. The only person I had thought of as a mom was...but I hadn't dreamed of her. Had I? The woman...

"Ella?" I was pulled back to reality when Christian said my name. I wondered what my face had looked like when I was lost in thought. "Ella, is everything okay?" I wasn't sure what to say, was everything okay?

"I don't know." I hesitated, then told Christian about my dream. I started t the beginning, the darkness, the moon, the woman, and lastly, the spell and the nothingness. "Do you have the picture of the woman we're supposed to...find." Christian nodded and reached into his pocket. He unfolded the picture and handed it to me.

I looked at the womans eyes and, sure enough, they were a peircing light green. I froze. My breathing became ragged, then panicky. There was no way to hide the level of panic I was feeling.

"Ella?" Christian put his hand below my chin and gently lifted my head so my eyes were locked on his. I could only imagine thr expression he was seeing in my eyes, panic, worry, and fear. "Ella what's wrong?"

"Everything," I whispered, my voice barely audible, even to myself. "We...I... her...mom." I couldn't fit any of the words into a sentance that made sense. I closed my eyes and took a deep breath, then I opened my eyes again. "The woman is my mom."

"Are you sure?" Christian asked, and it looked like he was truly worried about me. I hesitated, then nodded. Christian locked his eyes on me for a bit; his eyes soft. Then he slowly leaned forward and kissed me.

"Everything will be okay," he said when he pulled back. And, even if just for a little bit, I believed it would.

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And who was the one who killed her mom in the dream??
And I hope that they find her Mom and save her instead of rescue her. *coughhinthintcough*
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"So, that are we gonna do today?" Flora, Jade and Brad had found Christian and I sitting on the edge of the fountain. We had all agreed to go to a cafe to get something to eat, because we were all starving. The cafe was green, which was odd, but at least the inside looked normal. It had tables and a small fireplace, it was very cozy.

"We have to figure out some way to find the woman," Brad said. He was eating a donut like it was the last food he was every going to eat. And if he continued chewing with his mouth open, it might be.

"We could make flyers," Jade suggested with a wry smile. She was stabbing a carmel roll with a fork, and I had no idea why she was so angry. She had looked angry all morning.

"What would it say?" Flora asked. "Missing person? I think the police stop looking if the person is over 18." Technically we had no way of knowing if she was over 18 or not, besides the fact that I had a strong feeling of her being my mother. I was not completely positive about that, but deep inside, I knew she was.

"Oh yeah," Brad frowned, but then he took another bite of his donut. I looked down at my half eaten cinnamon roll and felt sick. And no, it wasn't because of Brad's disgusting chewing. I didn't know why.

"Ella do you feel okay?" Flora asked. I shook my head; I couldn't say anything, because I was afraid I'd throw up if I opened my mouth. Then i concentrated on breathing without throeing up, and I couldn't hear what was going on around me. I heard muffled talking and chairs moving. Then I heard a voice next to my ear; Christians. "Ella are you allergic to anything?"

"Not that I know of," I managed to say. Then I felt myself being lifted into the air. I had no idea what was happening, but the next thing I knew I was laying on a bed with everyone gathered around me. There was a man in the room that I did not rcognize; he was wearing a white coat and I realized that he was a doctor. Dang it! Hopefully he did not need to roll up my left sleeve of take off my shirt for any reason.

"Ella, can you hear me?" Barely. I could just make out Flora's soft tone, but then I heard a louder voice. It must have belonged to the strange man in the white coat who I thought was the doctor. I still wasn't positive about that.

"Ella, how are you feeling?" The man in the coat walked over to me and smiled down at me. "Fine," I said, trying to get out of the bed. I felt myself being pulled back down by my friends.

"You had an allergic reaction to something in your breakfast," the doctor man told me. "I did some blood tests..." I panicked at that and the rest was droned out. I looked down quickly and saw that my right sleeve was pulled up with a bandage over where the blood had apparently been taking from. Wow, I'm lucky. Well, except for the fact that I have to kill my own mother.

A few minutes later I found myself outside with my friends. Wow, everything was happening fast, and it all seemed like a blur to me. Maybe it was part of the reacton too..."What am I allergic to?"

"Cinnamon," Flora said, and I could tell she was holding back a laugh. Apparently she thought my not paying attention was funny. I was confused, that was weird, I had eaten cinnamon before. The allergy must be something new. I was also sad, I liked Cinnamon rolls.

"Well that killed three hours," Flora said. "Now what are we going to do?"

"Three hours?" I was shocked, I had been out for three hours? I had no idea it had been that long. It had seemed like only a few minutes to me, I must have been unconcious or something.

"Yeah, you were unconscious for a while," flora said, and I saw worry in her eyes. "That was some allergic reaction." I glanced at everyone's faces, they were all filled with worry. Except for Jade, she still looked angry. And I still had no idea why.

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We decided to get jobs; there was nothing else to do. We had to stay there until the carnival so we might as well do something. Besides, that way we could observe our surrounding while doing something purposeful. So far we had just slept, kissed, eaten breakfast and gone to the hospital. Well three were good, but that's beside he the point.

I decided to sell ice cream; because I love ice cream. If I have to do something purposeful it might as well be around ice cream. Mmmmmm. ANYWAY. We went to a big office with a sign above it saying;

EMPOYMENT OFFICE

Below that was a smaller sign saying.

We employ

"I wonder what this stoor holds," Christian said dryly. We all laughed, it was good ot have some humor when things were so unhumorless. But Jade still looked angry, and I was getting more curious by the minute.

"Why hello!" A rather man with brown hair and a beard greeted us the second we stepped through the door. "How are you all this fine morning." Wasn't it afternoon? I needed a watch. We exchanged a look, maybe this man was related to Mr. Cheerful.

"We're fine," Jade said. "We're looking for jobs." Short and sweet, without giving him time to ask questions without being a good buisness man. Jade was still clerver even when she was mad. I still didn't know what about...it had only been a few seconds since I lat wondered...

"We have jobs for all kinds of people with all kinds of interests," the man said as he walked across the room and sat behind a desk. "We have jobs including book,s fish, salami, sushi, elephants, zebras, baked goods, frozen fruits, delicious food, baked alaska."

"Just tell us some available jobs," Jade said. She looked at him sharply and some irritation shadowed the anger, I didn't blame her. This man was more annoying than Mr. Cheerful himself.

"For you miss sassy pants I would suggest Dog Trainer. You help people yell at dogs until they jump through hoops." Jade took the paper he was holding, turned on her heel, and swiftly walked out. She still looked mad.

"And for the quiet one over there I would suggest cat sitter. You get to take care of a cat for one day." Flora shyly stepped up and took the paper. Then she stood back and waited for us.

"For Mister Mysterious and Mister brown hair I would suggest cook and cook's assistant. There's a new resturant in town and they're hiring." Christian and Brad each took one of his papers. "Mister mysterious as the cook," he added as they left the building.

"I want to sell ice cream," I told him before he could say anything to me. He looked suprised, but he dug in his desk and pulled out a paper. I took it and Flora and I left the building.

"See you later," I said to Flora before we parted ways. Then I looked down at my paper. It just said where to go and what I had to do. I walked along a path and went to a park. There was a man selling ice cream there. I went over to him, because the paper said I was supposed to, but I didn't know what to say. So I just handed him the paper.

"Welcome to the job," he said. "I'll give you a quick job tutorial before I leave. The ice cream is in here." He pointed to a clear slideing door on the care clearly marked, ICE CREAM. "The scoop is in here, and the cones are here." He pointed to a drawer labeled SCOOPS, then a tube with cones sticking out of it. "Put the ice cream in the cone with a scoop then give it to the customer, and take their money."

This was going to be very difficult.

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