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Old 03-31-2010, 05:38 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Disclaimer:This fan fiction is based on a wonderful series by J.K. Rowling.I do not own any spells,potions,classes,Hogwarts,flying creatures,wands,characters,or Harry Potter(I wish).I own nothing besides three characters and my plot.
Author's Note/Other Disclaimer:I have not finished the Harry Potter series yet.Nor have I played any of the video games.I apologize if I use a first name that has already been used in the books or video games.I will try to refrain from doing so.Please correct me and I will change a character's name.
I am also pretending Cedric is alive.
Chapter one:

I was facing Voldemort.I was all alone.
"Kill her," Voldemort hissed.
"NOOOOOOO!" I yelled.
I saw a green flash.The first year Hufflepuff was gone.I tried to help her.It didn't work.I withdrew my wand.
"AVADA KEDAVRA," Voldemort yelled.I was dead.

My fingers twitched. My scar hurt. I could feel the sweat trickling down my forehead.I could feel it on my arms too.
"Harry?" Hermione whispered.I found myself surrounded by the entire Weasley family,Fleur Delacour,Hermione,and Cedric Diggory.
"Yeah?"I whispered back.
"Are you okay?"She whispered.
"Yeah"I responded
"What is it?"Cedric asked.
"My sc-Cedric?"I questioned.
"Yes?"Cedric asked.
"I thought you were dead," I said,hoping not to insult him.
"Voldemort brought me back,"Cedric said,looking at me.
"At what price?"I asked.
"My parent's lives," Cedric said,falling silent.
"Well,let's get some breakfast.We've got a busy day ahead,"Mrs.Weasley said.
She was right.Tomorrow I go back to Hogwarts.But I don't want to find out what my nightmare possible meant.
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CHAPTER 2:
For countless hours, we got all of our school supplies for Hogwarts.
"When you see me around Hogwarts, call me Alexander," Cedric told me, Ginny, Ron, and Hermione.
"Why?" asked Ginny.
"Because I'm supposedly dead. I have to be someone else. So I've joined Hogwarts under a fake name- Alexander Canson ," he explained.
"Oh," Ginny replied.
"If anyone asks, I'm a cousin of Cedric," he added.
"Okay," I said.
We finished our shopping. We went back to the Burrow for some dinner and a good night's sleep.

We were on the train to Hogwarts. I felt happy.
Luna, Ginny, Ron, Hermione, Cedric aka "Alex" and I were crammed into a compartment.
"Alex, how old are you?" Luna asked him.
"Sixteen," he replied.
Luna shot him a puzzled look.
"I transfered from Durmstrang," he said.
"Oh," Luna said, deep into The Quibbler
"Yeah," Cedric said.
"You remind me of a boy named Cedric Diggory," Luna told him.
"I'm his cousin, or at least was," Cedric said.
"Oh. I'm sorry for your loss," Luna said.
Later, we were at Hogwarts.

"Okay before we get sorted, I'd like to let you know that we have a student that has transfered from another magic school. His name is Alexander Canson, so make him feel welcome. He is technically in his sixth year. He does stand out from the others being sorted tonight, so be nice. Let's get sorted now," Dumbledore announced.

The first years, and one sixth year entered the Great Hall.

"Grace Armstrong," McGonagall announced.
Grace became a Ravenclaw.
"Aaron Boothroyd,"
Aaron was a Gryffindor.
"Alexander Canson," everyone sat on the edge of their seat. I wondered if Cedric was going to be a Hufflepuff.
"He looks exactly like Cedric," I heard Cho whisper.
"Hufflepuff!" the sorting hat yelled.
He sat down with his table mates.
Later, I heard an "Elizabeth Greensleet,"
I watched her walk up to get sorted.
She was the girl from my nightmare.
She has a twin brother. Right after she became a Hufflepuff, "Ross Greensleet" became a Ravenclaw
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The Ravenclaw Prefects went to take all the Ravenclaws to their dormitories. Luna passed Cedric as they left the Great Hall.
"Hi Alex," I heard her dream-like voice say.
"Hi," Cedric responded. He seemed to fit in nicely with the Hufflepuffs, even though his friends had left Hogwarts already.

The Gryffindors were right behind the Ravenclaws.Ron and Hermione led us up the stairs. Luna and Cho were talking.
"You know the new guy Alexander Canson?" Cho asked her. Cho could barely believe the fact that the guy that reminded her of Cedric already knew Luna.
"Yes," Luna replied.
"He looks a lot like...Cedric Diggory," Cho said in a soft voice.
"Alex is-or was Cedric's cousin," Luna responded.
"How did you meet him?" Cho asked, eager to know.
I met him on the train. He sat in a compartment with Ginny, Harry, Ron, Hermione and I. He is currently living with the Weasleys because his mother and father were killed, and no relatives would take him in," Luna explained.
"Oh," Cho said.
I wanted to kiss Luna. She said everything perfectly right. She didn't even know that Alexander WAS Cedric.
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I'm going to go ahead and post the fourth chapter. Because I'm bored.


CHAPTER 4:
Everything was in full swing at Hogwarts. It was October now, and Cedric's false identity was working.

Cedric looked upset as he walked over to Ron, Hermione, and I.
"Things are missing from a first year," Cedric said in one breath.
"Huh?" I said.
"Things have been stolen from a first year Hufflepuff; Lizzy Greensleet. You probably remember her as Elizabeth Greensleet, she goes by Lizzy," Cedric explained.
"What kind of things?" Hermione asked.
"Quills, Books, Wand, Trunk, Owl, and even an ancient key," Cedric told us.
This was strange. It seems as if I will never have a normal year at Hogwarts. Ever.
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Lizzy Greensleet was hit with the killing curse once again. That's when I woke up again. I didn't really know what next. Hermione had figured this mystery out, but only to have it change, rapidly.
My scar still hurt, but I put on my glasses. A folded piece of parchment was at my side.
Dear Harry Potter,
I'd figure this out now, or else your little first year Hufflepuff will be taken. Hurry Up

It wasn't signed, and I felt dizzy. I went to go wake up Ron.
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Chapter 6:
"Are You Sure?" Neville asked.
"Yes, absolutely sure," I responded as I pushed the piece of parchment toward him.
"How much longer do we have?" Ron asked.
"It doesn't say," I told him.
"We should tell Hermione," Neville said.
"But we can't get up to the Girl's dormitories!" I said.
"True," said Ron, "we'll just have to tell her at breakfast."
"There's got to be someway to tell her!" I said.
Ron and Neville just went back to sleep.
I went down to the common room, and Hermione was into some book she checked out from the library.
"Harry!" Hermione exclaimed quietly "it's good to see you, I had something I wanted to show you!"
"Not now Hermione," I said. I went into detail about everything that had happened, from the nightmare to the note.
"Harry we've got to do something about this!" Hermione exclaimed.

Chapter 7:
An owl arrived for me at breakfast. It contained yet another unnamed note this one said:
Dear Harry Potter, You're too late, Elizabeth Greensleet is on her way to being killed. You better act now, or else. She is hidden in a secret place, you have been there once before, and you have killed a dangerous creature in it
Hermione took the note from me.
"Where could it be?" Hermione asked, thinking.
"The Chamber of Secrets," I said. The adrenaline was pumping through my veins. "Well, Come on!" I hissed!
I was running as fast as I could to Moaning Myrtle's bathroom.
"Harry, what brings you here?" Myrtle said dreamily with a giggle.
"Not now Myrtle, I'm trying to save a little girl right now?"
"Oh, Lizzy Greensleet? You might be too late," Myrtle said.
Ignoring Myrtle, I jumped down the Chamber of Secrets, Ron and Hermione behind me.
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I was pacing through the Chamber of Secrets, Adrenaline still pumping through my veins.
"Lizzy, Lizzy, Lizzy," I thought.
Finally, I reached the part of the chamber where a basilisk once stood. I heard a girl quivering, and a voice hissing at her. The voice sounded nothing like that of Voldemort, Snape, or even...Malfoy. It was definitely a teen's, but it sounded nothing like Malfoy. I withdrew my wand, and prepared to duel. Lizzy Greensleet wasn't going to die because of me.

"Shut up," said the voice. I entered.
There was Sage Patterson. He was a seventh year Slytherin. Why on earth was he tormenting a first year Hufflepuff?

"Kill the girl," another voice hissed. Voldemort.
Sage had his teeth bared, and he was breathing hard.
"Avada Keda-" Sage began.
"EXPELLIARMUS!" I bellowed, and a stream of red light shot from the tip of my wand. Sage's wand flew out of his hand. His wand was handed back to him by Voldemort.
"AVADA KEDAVRA!" Sage yelled. Lizzy was gone, for sure. What was Ross going to do? They were twins, they were so close. Blinding pain surged to my scar once again.
A sword appeared at my side. It was Godric Gryffindor's sword.
Sage was screaming, I was blinded in pain, and I was chasing Voldemort away.
That's when Dumbledore, Snape, and McGonagall appeared.
"The girl's dead," McGonagall said, "someone should send an owl to the parents.
"He was possessed," Snape said, looking over Sage's broken body.
Madame Pomfrey was there in a jiffy.
"I'm afraid his injuries are far worse than I can handle," Madame Pomfrey said, "He'll have to go to St. Mungo's!"
This was all going to fast for me. I could still feel adrenaline pumping through me, and I couldn't believe what had just happened.
Chapter 9:
It was the last day at Hogwarts before summer holiday. Ross Greensleet approached me carefully.
"What really happened to my sister. Did You-know-*****ally kill her?" Ross asked.
"No. Sage Patterson was forced to kill her by Voldemort," I said.
"Why didn't anyone stop him?" Ross asked.
"Ross, I tried my best. I almost got Sage too," I replied.
Then, he said something I didn't expect him to say.
"Thank You Harry," Ross said.
"You're welcome," I said. He handed me a small picture of him and Lizzy.
"Keep that, remember me and her," He told me.
"Won't I see you next year?" I asked.
"No, my parents are request I be transferred to Durmstrang," he said.
He made me sign a book, called The Rise and Fall of the Dark Arts. I remembered that my first time on the train here, Hermione said that she read about me in that book and a couple others.
"Just to prove I met you," Ross said.

Epilogue:
I woke with a start in the middle of the night. The same feeling of a nightmare crossed over me. Sweat dripped down my arms.
"Harry, are you all right?" Aunt Petunia asked. That was sort of out of character for her. She looked very drowsy and pale.
"Yeah," I said, "did I wake you up?"
"Yes," she said. She looked horrified.
"I'm sorry," I said, looking at her, hoping she'd leave soon.
"Try telling that to Vernon," she said, sighing.
"Good night then," I said.
I turned away from Aunt Petunia. I heard the door close. I sat up. Right on the table beside me was the picture of Lizzy and Ross. Tomorrow, I would be on my way to The Burrow, and I would get to see Ron and Hermione. All was well. I returned my glasses to the table beside me and smiled as I fell asleep.

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