AMAZING as usual my love! I love the interacion between fred and george. It was definatly something i could see them saying in the actual books/movies.

Keep it coming darling!!!!!!!


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Suzy

I don't want to seem redundant, but that really was a great chapter. I almost want to argue against the idea of it as a "filler chapter."

And it was nice to have this to read when I'm sort of looking for something to occupy me. It's like an old friend is back.

love it!! can't wait for more!!

~Codi~

I missed your story!!!
I loved it and cant wait for more!!!

I don't know where my brain has been. I've been so busy with the end of school (and the simple fact that my students have been driving me up a spike wall for two weeks) that I haven't been able to really get down and write. Well, I found time tonight so here it is. I'm nearly at the end of this year and soon it will be on to a real meaty year in the life of Raven. I'm excited b/c there isn't a lot to edit so my chapters will pop up quicker. Thank you to everyone who is reading this. My appreciation to you has no bounds. Here it is........

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Chapter 10

“SIT!" Lupin yelled once they reached his office. "You are going to sit there and not say a word. You will not talk to me like you do your uncle."

Raven rolled her eyes and nodded. She wondered to herself if he even knew the situation with Draco. Because if he knew, he wouldn't be yelling at her now, he would be yelling at Draco.

"I don't know what happened up there," he said. "But I will say this, attempting to kill a student or pretending like you are going to is not acceptable. I will have to give you detention and take points from Gryffindor. Now what do you have to say for yourself?"

"Oh, I'm allowed to speak now?" she said.

"Don’t get smart with me," Lupin said. "Now explain what happened up there."

"What does it matter? You're going to punish me anyway," she said sitting up in her chair. "And what am I going to do? Not tell you? You might attack me on the next full moon."

"Excuse me?" asked Lupin who was a startled by the change in subject.

"See I know my uncle's secrets, so giving him a hard time for it only heightens the effect of our horrible relationship," she said with no resentment at all. "But you want to punish me for wanting to kill Draco, when you quite possibly have blood on your hands, Professor."

"Your Legilimens is strong. How long have you known?" he asked finally cooling his tone down a bit.

"Since Dumbledore announced you at the beginning of term feast. But enough chit chat. You are going to punish me for something that was initially not my fault?" she said deviously. “No one ever wants to punish Draco in fear that his father will come down on them. I guess I feel it is a civic responsibility to take care of the trash that no one else will bother with.”

"No, it’s not your responsibility to punish anyone. And for that, I will be taking points away from Gryffindor for your actions," he said. “No matter how much you hate Draco, and for what ever the reason may be, you must learn to control your anger."

"I hate him more than you will ever know," she said feeling quite agitated. “This only makes it worse.

"I know you hate him, but killing him will only make it worse for you," he said sitting next to her. "You don't want to end up like your uncle Sirius."

"How did you know?" looking back at him because he turned the tables on her.

"That he was your uncle?" he asked. "We were friends at school. I know all about your family. He told James and I about your mother’s fake adoption and when your mother married Severus’s brother."

"So it seems we’ve ousted each other," she said with a bit of a laugh, feeling bad for what she said to Lupin. She always had respect for him and hoped he wouldn't hold her bad attitude against her. “Look, Professor, I’m sorry. I said some harsh things to you. My anger brings out the worst of my character.”

"Apology accepted. As far as outing each other, yes we did. But I won't tell if you don't," he said putting his hand on her shoulder.

"I have no reason to tell," she said. "But do I have to serve detention? It's not my fault. I was trying to walk away."

"No detention because once word is out about what happened, you‘ll likely be expelled. I know that Draco can make life difficult for people. After all, he is Lucius Malfoy’s son. But I do have to take away those points," he said getting up and going back over to his desk. “That is all. I’m not going to save you again. Next time you answer to Dumbledore.”

Professor Lupin looked at her and gave her a calm smile. As she walked out the door, she realized how lucky she was not to be expelled. The next time she has a confrontation with Draco, she may not get off that lucky. She had to stop letting Draco get to her. However, looking back at the whole situation she realized something. Although a relationship between Draco and Pansy Parkinson, a Slytherin third year, was clear, Draco seemed to be looking in another direction. She couldn't see it before and then it hit her square in the face: Draco liked Raven.

After the next few days, Raven couldn’t look in Draco’s direction, not that she really wanted to anyway. One day he spoke to her. Actually, it was a rude comment and Raven wanted to break his face in ten different pieces. In the end, she was proud of herself. She didn’t acknowledge his existence and kept walking.

It didn’t take long after the incident with Draco for him to tell Snape what had happened. Snape was able to persuade Draco not to inform his father. However, Snape wasn’t about to let Raven go unpunished.

He called her into his office and didn’t make the conversation as nice and sweet as it was with Lupin.

“Why do you insist on letting Draco Malfoy get to you?” he asked.

Raven thought about that for a second. She wondered if a sarcastic remark would be appropriate. It just seems so easy to smart off to him. He left himself open. For the time being, though, she was going to be nice. “He’s not a nice person. Someone had to put him in his place. You aren’t. His father certainly isn’t.”

“If I had known that Draco was doing anything wrong-”

“That’s just it, you did know! I tried to tell you a while ago but I guess you chose not to listen. When are you going to get it through your thick, greasy skull that Draco is up to absolutely no good?”

“I don’t care about him! I care about you!”

“I have a horrible time believing that. You are getting ready to punish me for something that could have been avoided if Draco had not pressed on!”

“When I hear what happened, I can’t help but put the punishment in the proper place.”

“Proper place? Are you kidding? You don’t even know what happened! People are so quick to judge based on what they saw or what they were told! And Draco told you. You believe him? You think he was just minding his own business and I just attacked him for no reason? Do you think I’m that ruthless?”

“I don’t think you’re ruthless. I think you don’t think.”

“Then what do you want me to say, Uncle? I’m not going to apologize for what I did to Draco. He got what he deserved. I wasn’t going to kill him. I was hoping to scare him.”

“I don’t think you did. I think you only fueled his fire even more.”

Raven thought about the comment Draco said to her that day. She realized she hadn’t scared him and that her uncle was right.

“So what am I supposed to do since you aren’t going to do anything?”

“I wrote his father and carefully explained the situation. I will have another talk with Draco once I have received a reply from Mr. Malfoy. Other than that, there isn’t much I can do. You are the one who attacked a student. Draco really did nothing wrong.”

“Oh really? You think so?” Raven’s sarcasm was about to pop. She had to let a little comment out.

Snape didn’t like it, of course. He pursed his lips together and gave her a stern look. “In the meantime, I can’t let what you did pass by unnoticed. Lupin is much kinder than I am. The rest of this week you’ll be spending detention with me.”

“What?” Raven was furious. “So Draco is going unpunished…again.”

Snape was oblivious to her objections. “You are going to learn to control your anger. And who better to teach you than me.”

“I hope you are not going to teach me how to take a beating because you’re good at that.”

“Tonight, after dinner, you will join me in my classroom for detention. That is all.”

Raven jumped up and slammed her hands on Snape’s desk. “Why are you doing this?”

“Because I can. You need to be punished for what you did. Now, that is all!”

“You know I hate you, right?”

“You have made that abundantly clear how much you hate me. Frankly, I don‘t care if you hate me or not, you cannot get away from what you did.”

Raven left Snape’s office but not before slamming his door so hard that she heard some bottles shatter on the other side. She got halfway to the Gryffindor common room when she spotted George, Fred and Lee.

She kept her punishment from Snape a secret for the time being. However, George could tell something was going on, as Raven was very quiet. Everyone decided to go back up to the common room and wait around for dinner.

On the way to dinner, Raven whispered to George the situation. They were both in agreement that it was fairly reasonable for Raven to have detention, however it was completely unfair for Draco to walk away as if he did nothing wrong.

“What kind of hold does Draco have on this school anyway?” Raven asked.

“He is the son of Lucius Malfoy. If he were anyone else, that wouldn’t be enough. However, for him…well, Lucius can make things happen or not happen. Look at what he’s doing with Buckbeak. We all know that it was Draco’s fault that he was hurt. But because he was hurt by Buckbeak, Buckbeak has to die.”

“I would love for someone to take him down or at least take him down a notch. If no one else wants to do it, I guess it’s up to me.”

“I can’t stop you but, I can say that people don’t come out smelling like roses when they mess with Lucius Malfoy. Just be careful.”

“Always.” Raven smiled and the two walked hand-in-hand to the Great Hall for dinner.

After dinner, Raven moseyed to the dungeons where Snape was waiting patiently for her to arrive. She threw herself into a chair and threw her feet up on the desk.

“I’m here for my undeserved detention. So what is it? Lines? Cauldron cleaning? Bowing faithfully to the potion master?”

“First you will clean my personal pantry. Once that is finished, you will alphabetize and reorganize said pantry. If you have finished those duties by the end of the week, the student pantry will need to be cleaned and organized.”

Raven rolled her eyes on hearing her list of chores. “And what is that supposed to accomplish?”

“With each task I will make you so angry that if you haven’t learned how to control that temper of yours, it will be another week and another week of meaningless tasks. Now, I believe you have some work to do. Here is my key. I will be along shortly.”

Once again, Raven rolled her eyes. She got up quietly and walked toward Snape to get the key. She reached out her hand and just as she was about to grab it, Snape pulled it away.

“By the way, the bottles that you broke earlier need to be cleaned and the ingredients inside to be replaced. Of course, that will mean preparing and bottling. That and half the pantry needs to be finished by the end of the night. Oh, and I’d like to get to bed at a decent hour. So make it quick.”

Raven snatched the key and walked toward the area with the broken bottles. Her anger was so hot right now; it wouldn’t take much to cause some chaos.

“I am very particular about bottling my ingredients. If they are done wrong, I will demand that you redo it.”

“Well, nothing but the best for you, right? I mean, you’re working your dream job and all.”

“That is strike one, Miss Snape. Two more and you have another week. There is no time for talk. Get to work!”

Without saying a word, no matter how much she wanted to, Raven walked over to the ingredient shelf to see what ingredients she needed to prepare. The so-called detention was unjust in her mind, or at least too harsh. If her uncle wanted her to be on her best behavior, he will get nothing but kindness from her. Her manners will be so disgustingly good that he’ll think either she’s a transformed into a human being and it will ride high on his ego or he’ll be so irritated that he’ll end the detention early. Raven hoped for the latter.

Chapter 11

Great job....omg I love your story! But you already know that! I love the conflict between snape and raven. It's so interesting to see how much she hates him.

Anyways, love you wifey! and keep writing!


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Suzy

I so love your story girly!!
I love the love/hate relationship between Raven and Snape...
They love to hate each other...
Can't wait for more...
Jamers

Sry for not posting in forever!
Raven... with disgustingly good manners? that'd be the day. I love the Snape/Raven relationship too, they make me laugh
Cant wait for the next update! PAMS!
~Sarah

What a cheeky little character. D=



I looooove her. I've only read a few of the recent posts but dude, I'm actually getting more interested with each new one. (whereas, I usually get bored after reading too much of something).

Keeeep posting, kay?

F'wanks,
Your new fan.

Yay!! It didn't take a month for a new post! I must be butter cuz I'm on a roll!!!!

Enjoy!!!

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Chapter 11

Over the next week, Raven spent her evenings with her uncle doing her detention, or as she liked to call it, “a major violation of child labor laws.” She did end up serving her detention and served it impeccably.

Snape tried to the best of his ability to make Raven angry. He would come through and do a sort of white glove test with the shelves in his private pantry.

“It appears that you have missed several spots on this shelf. And this ingredient doesn’t belong here,” he said rather snobbishly.

“Oh, I‘m sorry.” Raven had to admit that him coming over every five or so minutes to critique every little detail was frustrating, but she was never going to allow Snape to physically bother her. She would just smile and fix what ever mistake she made. “Let me get right to that.”

Snape would peer over shoulder, observing her every move. He watched as she picked up the misplaced bottle and wiped it with a cloth. She then took the bottle and placed it in its appropriate place, rearranging the other bottles to make space. Then, to clean the spots on the shelf, she stood on the ladder and picked up each bottle, wiped underneath it and put it down, remembering to keep the label facing front.

“Was that what you had in mind?” she asked, wiping her brow.

The fact that she wasn’t lashing out at Snape seemed to upset him more as the days went on. He couldn’t find anything wrong with her bottling of the ingredients. Raven thought that he should have known that she knew how to prepare and bottle ingredients, her father brewed potions for a living while in America. It was as simple for Raven as washing her hair.

Raven served her detention without any kind of test from Snape, despite his best efforts. He nit-picked every minor detail, from the bottles not being flush against the edge of the shelf to a bottle’s label being a smidge away from facing the front. Raven did not let a single thing Snape had to say bother her. However, by the end of the week Raven was ready to never see him again.

“The student pantry is cleaned and organized. I did have to re-label a few items because they were falling off.” Raven loved doing a few extra things to irritate Snape. “I believe it’s Friday and I do believe that means it’s the end of the week. I have completed all tasks set before me, and then some, without so much as a mutter of discontent. Is my detention over now?”

“You did serve your detention well. However a little too well.” Snape was clearly annoyed by Raven’s lack of outbursts through the week. “I know that you only did your job out of spite. You wanted to prove a point and you did.”

“Sir, is my detention over?” she asked again.

“Yes. But I assure you the next time you serve detention, it won’t be as pleasant.”

“I’m sure it will. But I assure you, there won‘t be a next time.” Raven turned and walked towards the door. Just as she put her hand on the door knob, Snape stopped her.

“As much as I enjoy you’re silence, if you have something to say, you need to say it.”

Raven never turned away from the door. “What angers you more, Uncle? That my father made you responsible for me? Or are you angry because I beat you at your little detention game?”

“Your detention was not meant to be a game.”

“Regardless or what it was called, you had a plan for this week. You had a plan to control my anger issues. You failed, miserably. Here is the thing,” she turned away from the door to face her uncle, “I don’t think that upset you as much as I would like to hope it would. I think you’re frustrated because I was never part of your life plan. You never planned to be responsible for the well being of someone. You look at me as a hindrance, a thorn in your side. Tell me I’m wrong.”

“It would be easy to tell you that you’re wrong. But that would be a lie.”

His honesty, although it was what she wanted, hurt. Hearing the truth was maybe not what she really wanted to hear. “Then why keep me around?”

“It’s true that you were never a part of the plan for my life. But I made a promise to my brother. I must take my responsibility and do the best I can with it. It would be a good idea for you to try and do the same.”

“Then start accepting who I am.”

“I can accept who you are. But your constant sarcasm and back talk are not acceptable. I should blame my brother for that aspect of your personality but I don’t think he had anything to do with it.”

“My father taught me to stand up for what’s right! Everyone here is so afraid to tell anyone the truth in fear of repercussion from the wrong people. If no one else is going to stand up to them, who better than me.”

“Your cause is noble but your actions are sometime disrespectful and dangerous.”

“Why? Because I say what should be said to those that need to hear it? I could start pulling out my wand and blasting people. Does that sound familiar?”

Snape looked defeated. At the same time, Raven didn’t want to hear anything else he had to say. It seemed both of their points were going unnoticed.

“It’s late. You did good work this week,” mumbled Snape.

Sincere compliments seemed hard for Snape to give. On the other hand, taking a compliment from Snape was hard for Raven to digest. However, considering how tired she was, she thought that she would try.

“Thank you,” she said.

She walked toward the door and hesitated. Raven felt like there was more to say. Instead of pressing the issue, she decided to leave.

When she arrived at the common room, George was waiting up for her on the couch. She plopped down next to him and leaned into his shoulder.

“It’s over. No more hard labor,” she said sounding exhausted.

“So, you got through with no incident? I’m impressed,” said George, and then kissed her head.

“Yeah, no incident at all.” Raven was troubled by her conversation with Snape. She wondered to herself if he really deserved her ill treatment of him. She realized that someone who was never a father, or father material for that matter, suddenly inheriting a fifteen year-old girl has to be unsettling. At the same time, her suddenly having to look to another man as a father figure in her life is equally as hard. Raven pondered if their relationship will ever get past the anger and resentment and finally live their lives as a family.


The end of the year was drawing to an end. Everyone was extremely busy studying for end of the year exams. Raven had never felt so overwhelmed in her life. All of these assignments and exams were almost too much to comprehend. Raven found herself many nights in the library and even studying till the wee hours of the morning.

One Thursday afternoon, after Divination class, Raven was sitting in the common room thankful that her exams were over and she could finally relax. She sat on the couch in front of the fireplace and closed her eyes for a moment when Harry interrupted her.

"Hey Raven?" asked Harry, putting his hand on her shoulder. Raven opened her eyes and sat straight up. She knew she wasn't sleeping, but she got so comfortable that Harry completely startled her. "Sorry to bother you, but we are going down to Hagrid's to be there for him when they execute Buckbeak."

"That's today?" asked Raven, her heart still pumping hard from being surprised. "With all of the exams this week I completely forgot."

"Do you want to come?" he asked. "Ron and Hermione are coming as well."

"I don't think that would be appropriate, Harry," she said. "You three are extremely close to him and I don't know him at all. Besides if a Ministry official is there, I might say something to them and it's likely it won't be good."

"No problem," Harry said. "I'll see you later."

"Yeah, bye," Raven said as he, Ron and Hermione left the common room.

As they left, she thought about Buckbeak. He is such a gentile animal if you know how to handle him. Because of Draco's jealousy of Harry, Buckbeak has to die. Then her thoughts became livid. If Draco hadn't been so stupid, Harry would be going down to Hagrid's for a pleasant visit. Just then she felt a warm kiss on her cheek.

"You look deep in thought," said George as he sat down next to her. "What are you thinking about?"

"Just thinking about Hagrid and this mess with Buckbeak," she said, still deep in thought. "I hate Draco! If only he would go away!" she said raising her voice a little.

"Hey, hey," he said grabbing her hand and holding it tightly. "Let's not talk about him. Let's talk about my mom."

"Excuse me? Your mother?" Raven asked looking at George like he was losing his mind.

"I got an owl from her today and she wants to meet you. She is inviting you to come spend a day with us over the summer, provided it's okay with your uncle," he said pulling out the letter and handing it to Raven.

"Of course I will come over. Snape won't care," she said smiling. "After a couple of weeks together he’ll be glad to be rid of me for a day."

"Can anyone say no to you?" George asked with a curious smile.

"Well, yes. But I wouldn't recommend it," she said with a grin that turned into a laugh for the two of them.

Raven and George joined Fred and Lee later and enjoyed a fairly quiet dinner. Occasionally Fred would spit out an idea for an end of school prank, George would offer up an opinion, but it was only brief. As dinner progressed, Raven got a sick feeling in her stomach, not from the food, but a feeling as though something bad was happening.

As the night went on the feeling was progressively getting worse. Just as dinner was ending, she heard a voice in her head. It was Snape. He wasn’t in the Great Hall. Something had to be wrong. She turned around again to see her uncle, looking frantic, coming in from the side door of the Great Hall and rushing towards Dumbledore. Excusing herself from her friends, she made her way to the front of the hall and walked up to her uncle who was in deep conversation with Dumbledore. As she approached the two professors, they looked at her with concern, and then looked back at each other.

"You wanted to see me?" she asked hesitantly. Raven could sense that they were hiding something.

"Yes, Miss Snape," said Dumbledore getting up from the staff table. "Your uncle will fill you in. Now, if you both will excuse me I have some business to attend to."

"I didn't interrupt anything, did I?" Raven asked looking at Dumbledore as he walked away.

"No, but let's go," he said rushing her out of the Great Hall.

"Okay," she said questionably. "Am I in trouble? Because I didn't do it and I don't feel like fighting with you today."

"Not now, Raven," he said angrily.

"Where are we going?" she asked. There was no answer from Snape, he just kept walking. His strides were so long it took two of Raven's steps plus an occasional little jog for her to keep up with him. Then it hit her why Snape was so frantic and she stopped walking. It took several steps for Snape to realize that she wasn't next to him anymore.

"Don't stop! We have to go," he said walking back to her then grabbing her arm and pulling her a few steps before Raven pulled away.

"NO!" she snapped as she took a few steps away from her uncle. "They found him didn't they? They found Sirius Black and he's here."

Snape stared at Raven for a moment. Raven couldn't tell by the expression on his face, if he wanted to yell at her or to crumble.

"Where is he?" she asked softly. Her heart began pounding so fast she could hear it in her ears. She wanted to see Black, but what would she say to him?

"In the tower waiting for the Dementors," he said smugly. "I forbid you to go to him. As a matter of fact, you‘re going to London. You will stay at the Leaky Cauldron until I get you."

"Excuse me?" she asked angrily. "You cannot forbid me to do anything and you‘re not sending me anywhere. Now if you'll stand aside, I have another uncle to see."

As she walked away, Snape once again grabbed her arm. Raven looked up at her uncle and noticed he had fear in his eyes.

"He doesn't know you. You are not like him. There is a very good possibility he could make you angry. Do you really want to be angry with him when the Dementors come and take his soul? Do you want to be angry with him, when he becomes worse than dead, an empty shell of a human being?" he asked this in such a way that reminded Raven of the times when her father would scold her. Angry but calm enough to think that they got their point across.

Raven looked at her arm, which was still in Snape's tightening grip. She made him let go of her and she walked over to a nearby window where she could see the tower where Black was being held.

"You're right. He may make me angry. He could make me sad, happy, scream or smile," she said calmly then turned back to face her uncle. "This is my only shot to talk to my mother's brother. My chance to talk to someone who was close to her. My chance to find out about her."

Snape turned away from Raven and put his head down and let out a sigh. She knew that he had some animosity towards Black, but he was going to have to understand that there would be no backing down from this. Raven was going to see Black whether Snape liked it or not.

"If I don't, uncle, I will never have another chance. Asking Narcissa Malfoy or Bellatrix Lestrange about my mother would be looking for trouble," she said walking behind him.

"How do you know you are not looking for trouble by asking Black?" he said turning around swiftly.

"I feel that what my mother wrote about him in her journal is true," she said then paused for a moment to think about the uncle standing before her. Raven sensed fear in him and not just for her. It seemed that he felt that if Black was innocent and let go, she would rather live with Black instead of Snape. Snape was afraid, it seemed, of being alone.

"If is makes you feel any better," she continued, "my father wanted me to live with you. And although you're a pain to deal with and somehow enjoy making me suffer, I will respect his wishes and continue to live with you. Meeting my other uncle will not change that. Besides, I'm getting used to your stubbornness and I'm actually starting to enjoy arguing with you. To have to get used to that with someone else would be severely damaging to me."

Raven gave her distraught uncle her confident smile in an effort to reassure him of her intentions. It seemed to work because before another word was spoken he summoned a broom and gave it to her.

“You need to hurry,” he said. “The Dementors will be here soon.”

Chapter 12

WOw Curlzy.. That was fast!!!
I love it...
Cant wait for more!
Jamers

It's rare that I read a George/OC ship, but it is good. You discribed it wonderfully. For me there are no faults in the grammar and other from that stuff. Keep going on with that story and I hope you post asap another good chapter.

Finally we get to see the soft side of snape!!!!! Amazing my darling! I also love how sweet Georgia is with Raven.So cute!


Love ya!


PAMS

Suzy

Snape ain't always the bad guy! Yay!
Fast update. Can't wait for more - it's getting all intense. Love it.
PAMS!
~Sarah

Oh damn!
Go Snape and I hope that Raven can really talk to Sirius!
Update ASAP!!
~Norah!

This is a shorter chapter. Short and sweet. Before you read, this is probably not book canon. I don't remember to be honest. Parts of this, at least the end, you might be saying, "uh, Heather, that didn't happen." Well, I'm sorry but at the time I wrote this I watched the third movie a million times and couldn't get it out of my head. And sometimes I can't differentiate between the two. Sometimes my brain can't do much. Anyway, hope you enjoy! Oh and tell your friends! Enjoy!

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Chapter 12

Raven ran outside as fast as she could, hopped on the broom and immediately flew towards the tower. She had no clue as to what she was going to say to Black. There was really no time to think about it before she reached her destination. She came in slow and quietly landed on the tower in front of a small room with a cell door. Inside was a scruffy looking man, who looked as though he hadn't bathed in years. Raven's first thought was he was nothing like the man that her mother described. She knew there would be some wear and tear from being in Azkaban for twelve years but she couldn't help but think if it was really him or some weird forest man that was mistaken for Black.

"Are you going to tell me what you're doing here or are you just going to stand there and gawk at me?" he asked with a rough scratchy voice.

"There is no need to be hateful," she said coming out of her deep thoughts about her first impression of him. "I've come to talk to you."

"What does a young Hogwarts student like yourself want to speak to me about?" he asked.

"My, my! Aren't we hasty? The Dementors won't be here for a while, so we have plenty of time," she said walking up closer to the cell door.

"I'm sorry if I don't want to spend my last few moments with my soul in tact to talk to a kid," he said turning away from her.

Raven loved this exchange for some reason. She realized at that moment that she does have a dark side. Raven wanted to spill the fact that she was his niece. But wasn't ready for him to hear that. It seemed that toying with him felt justified. Her goal was to stay cool and collected.

"Tell me what you know about Persephone Black. Who was she?" she asked like an interrogator. Sirius had no clear expression on his face. Raven wondered for a moment if she had crossed the line.

"Persephone. I have not said that name in years," he said quietly. "How do you know her?"

"I don't know her. That's why I asked," she said. Raven felt warranted in what she said. All she knew was that Persephone was her mother. She had no idea who she was or what she was like. Therefore she didn't know her, she only knew of her.

“Why should I tell you? Not to sound rude but I’m going through a bit of a crisis and don’t know if going down memory lane is appropriate.”

“The way I see it, it’s not like you have anything else to do. I mean, you are sitting there contemplating your life, are you not?”

There was a small silence as Sirius thought about what Raven had said.

"I haven't spoken to her since I found out that she was going to marry your potions professor's brother, Tobias Snape Jr.," he said standing and walking over to the cell door. "Persephone was a good person despite all that she went through growing up. She had a big heart, and she was funny. Very funny. She definitely got that from her mother, not mine. You see...she was my half sister."

"Yeah, I know that much. So what did she go through?" Raven knew the answer already but wanted someone else to say it and maybe shed some information that she didn‘t already have.

"My mother never liked her," Black said. "She was the child of my father’s previous marriage. When my mother got married to my dad, she convinced him that Persephone couldn't live there, mainly because she did not exhibit powers when she was young; my mother thought she was a squib. It would have been a dishonor to the Black name to have squib in the family."

"So let’s fast forward a little. Persephone goes to live with your aunt and uncle under the idea that she is their adopted daughter. One day it’s discovered that she has powers but your mother still isn’t going to let her live in her house. Andromeda, your nice cousin, lets Persephone know the truth; that she a true Black and that your mother is basically an evil, resentful woman. Have I got it right so far?”

“How did you know she lived with my aunt and uncle? Wait! How do you know any of this?”

“I’ll tell you in a bit. Please, continue.”

Sirius looked at her with curiosity. Raven seemed to touch on a topic that hit a nerve. "When it was discovered she had powers, mother was more annoyed than anything. She never wanted the truth to come out because it inconvenienced her to have to tell people the truth," he said sounding rather annoyed himself at his mother's behavior.

"What about your father?" she asked, never knowing her grandfather’s side of the story. "Surely since Persephone was his daughter, he should have had more say so in her life."

"It never bothered him one way or the other," he said. "He got to see her as her an uncle and didn't have to listen to my mother complain all the time. My mother was a very forceful woman." The expression on his face changed from frustration about his family to, again, one of curiosity reflected towards Raven. "How do you know about my sister? She was never fully recognized as a member of the Black family. This story was never made public.”

"In a minute," she said quickly not wanted to reveal herself just yet. "Why did you stop talking to her?"

Sirius looked down as if to think about how to word the question properly. Then he popped his head back up. "I did not support her marriage to Snape. It was not unknown that her fiancé supported You Know Who. She was better than that, better than him, better than that miserable family. Last I heard they fled to America probably because of his crimes. I never heard or spoke of that name after their marriage," he said quietly.

There was an awkward silence between them. Sirius stared at Raven while Raven pondered whether to walk away or tell him the truth.

"Are you innocent?" she blurted.

"Would I be here waiting for Dementors if I was?" he snapped.

"Yes!" Raven snapped back at him. Knowing the ministry, there were plenty of prisoners in Azkaban who were likely innocent. Sirius was not the first and not the last. “Considering the people that put you there, of course I believe that you could be here undeservingly!”

"Why so many questions? Why are you so curious about me and Persephone?" he shouted.

"I need to know if she was right about you!" Raven felt the truth about to come out. She couldn‘t remember her heart ever beating so fast and so hard. "I just needed to know that what she said is true."

"Who? Who told you all of this?" he asked.

"Persephone!" she said. There was another pause between the two, more out of shock as to what just came out of her mouth. "Persephone is my mother. You…are my uncle.”

His mouth fell open. "She had a daughter? You're my niece?” Sirius took a few steps away from the cell door. He rubbed his forehead then marched back up to the door. “How is Persephone?"

This is the one topic, more than any other, that she had been dreading if she were to ever get this moment. After she swallowed what felt like her stomach, she told him all she knew of her mother. Raven also broke the hard news to him that her mother passed during childbirth. She told Sirius about the journal her mother kept, and then spoke of her father and his recent death. The whole time she spent talking, Sirius was listening intently. He seemed to be sad at the loss of his sister, but was happy to hear that Raven's father assumed responsibility and took good care of Raven.

"So you're living with Severus," he said, leaning up against the side of his cell. "My apologies."

"Surprisingly, he is trying to do as my father did and take responsibility for me and do the best he can by me," she said with a smile. "Truth is, he really does care for me and wants the best for me. He just has a strange way of showing it and I don't give him much help."

Sirius never took his eyes off of Raven during a still silence. "You know you do remind me of her," he said walking up closer to the bars of the cell. "She had a good heart and I see that in you," he said holding out his hand. "I never got your name."

"Raven," she said grabbing his hand. She glanced over at the clock tower. They had been talking for a long time. Raven realized if she was caught up here, her troubles would be bigger than she could fathom.

"I need to go," she said sadly.

"You do," he said letting go of her hand. "Can you do me one favor?" Raven nodded as she mounted her broom.

"If you answer my question," she said. Sirius agreed. "Are you innocent?"

"Yes," he said. Raven smiled at him and stepped toward the edge of the tower.

"Tell Harry Potter that everything will be okay," he said. "And I’m sorry we didn't have more time to spend together, Raven."

"I’m sure he knows Sirius, and I do too," she replied. Raven looked around and saw a dark figure moving towards the tower. For a moment she thought it was a Dementor, but then realized it was Buckbeak. "Sirius, you will not see a Dementor tonight and we will have more time to speak. That I can promise you! Oh, and I was never here!"

Once again she smiled at Sirius, gave him a wink and then took off toward the castle. As she got further away from the tower, she noticed that the figure was Buckbeak and riding him was Harry and Hermione. Sirius Black was free.

Chapter 13

So...i freaking love this chapter. I think you did a great job. I cant remember if its off cannon for the book or not, but its still awesome. I love how she and sirius connect. its great!!!!


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I haven't read in a while. I'm sorry I've been in a FF slump
Anyway... I'm all caught up now and I have to say that it's fabulous
I'll continue checking in on your story when I remember to

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Very good Love!!!
Keep up the good work!
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So this one is long. I remembered when I wrote this chapter nearly 2 years ago that I was VERY hyper. And you will definetly see that reflected at some point. I am nearing the end of the third year. I think there will be one or two chapters before the fourth year will begin. To all my readers, thank you for checking this out. And to my commenters thank you. I may not acknowledge you all enough but I am thankful for the comments and love. Okay enough of my jib-jab. Enjoy!

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Chapter 13

In the back of her mind, Raven always held a bit of animosity towards Sirius, though she would never speak of it. She never understood or knew the reason as to why he stopped talking to her mother. She thought that he turned his back on her mother after the truth came out about who she was. Raven thought that Sirius was no better than his mother for abandoning Persephone as she did. After her long conversation with Sirius, Raven felt much better about him. After hearing the truth, Raven came to realize that, with everything going on at the time with Voldemort, it wasn't surprising that Sirius was upset with Persephone for marrying one of Voldemort's supporters and stopped communication with her out of anger.

Once she landed back at the castle, she quickly put her broom away and went straight to the common room. Raven knew that there was an attempt to rescue him, and wanted to get up there before anyone realized it could have been her. She got to the common room and rushed to her dormitory and grabbed a book to read, then ran to her usual table to start reading. Raven wanted it to look like she had been there the whole time. She honestly had no clue what she was even reading, it was just to pass the time before someone walks in wanting to talk to her.

After a few moments, Harry and Hermione came in to the common room, looking like they had both gone into battle. Once they noticed Raven, they walked over to her and sat down. They all exchanged hellos and Raven couldn't contain the pressure anymore.

"Sirius told me to tell you that everything would be okay, Harry," she said quietly. "But you already know that, don't you?"

Harry and Hermione shared awkward glances at each other. “How did you…it was you that left the tower before we got there, wasn't it?" asked Harry.

"Did Sirius and Buckbeak make it out okay?" Raven asked. Harry and Hermione nodded. "So what made you change your mind about him, Harry?" Raven asked putting away her book.

Harry began explaining the whole story of what happened to them earlier that evening. He told her about Sirius being an animagus. Then, the incident inside the Shrieking Shack, where it was revealed that Peter Pettigrew was the one that betrayed Harry's parents to Voldemort and that Sirius escaped to find Pettigrew, who was in fact Scabbers.

Harry then went on to tell of Lupin, unaware that is was a full moon apparently, turned into a werewolf. Then Lupin, in his new form, and Sirius, in his dog animagus form, fought. Harry's tone changed when he began talking about the Dementor attack and how he conjured a Patronus charm to combat them away.

“What happened to Ron?” asked Raven.

“He was injured. Madam Pomfrey is positive he’ll be fine,” Hermione said.

"That‘s good. So, anyway, somehow Sirius gets captured. Is that where your Time-Turner came in?" Raven asked Hermione, who looked shocked that she even knew about that.

"How did you..." Hermione started to say.

"I've known all year. Especially when you come into class unexpectedly, and not in the traditional way," she said giving a wink to Hermione. "I can sense presences. One moment yours wouldn't be there and in the next it would. I just never said anything because I knew it was a secret that you didn't want anyone to know about."

Hermione looked at Raven with a stunned expression. "Why do you assume I used a Time-Turner?"

"How could you have rescued Sirius without one?" she asked. "With the way the story unfolded, there would be no way you could have rescued him without altering time in any way. Don't worry, I won't tell anyone."

Hermione then explained to Raven how they rescued Sirius using the Time-Turner. Everything made complete sense to Raven now.

"Did you speak to Sirius much?" asked Harry. "Does he at least know who you are?"

"Yeah, but we didn't get to talk as long as I would have liked," she said looking down at the table, then looking back up at her two friends. "But it seems we may have more time, one day."

Harry looked at Raven and gave her a look that said, "I'm sorry for doubting you." Raven smiled at Harry as if to say, "I know." Soon George, Fred and Ginny came into the common room and made their way over to where the small group was seated.

"Will Ron be okay?" asked Hermione.

"Sure! If you don't mind his whining," said Fred.

George sat next to Raven and said that Dumbledore, McGonagall and Snape needed to see her in the Headmaster's office immediately.

"Wonder what for?" she asked giving a sarcastic look to Harry, who had a small smirk on his face.

"Didn't say, but they're waiting for you," George said.

Raven left, knowing what this was going to be about. Of course she didn't rescue Sirius, but how was she going to handle it. She knew from Harry's story that Dumbledore knew who rescued Sirius, so why did he want to talk to her? The only reason he has to talk to her is about Sirius' second escape.

As she approached the headmaster's office, her stomach was flipping about. When she entered his office, she saw Dumbledore sitting at his desk; his head down, looking at Raven over his glasses as she walked in. In a chair, across from Professor Dumbledore was Cornelius Fudge, Minister of Magic, looking cross and annoyed at something. On one side of Dumbledore, standing nervously was Professor McGonagall and other side of the room, in a dimly lit corner was Snape. Raven knew that whatever was going to happen was not going to be good. But she had to find a way to make it fun.

"Thank you, Miss Snape, for coming at such a late hour," said Dumbledore.

"Your welcome, sir," she said with a small smile. "Is everything okay?"

"No, I'm afraid it's not," he said finally raising his head to her.

"The Headmaster and your uncle have informed me that you saw Sirius Black unsupervised this evening," interjected the Minister scooting his chair close to Raven who was now seated in the other chair in front of Dumbledore's desk. "I will get right to the point, Miss Snape," he said putting his hand on her shoulder.

"Please, Minister," Raven interrupted putting her hand on the Fudge's shoulder, "call me Raven. Formality has always been so...annoying to me."

Raven smiled at the Minister, and then looked over at Snape who put his hand over his eyes and shook his head. Dumbledore looked as though he was trying not to smile.

"Yes, well," said Fudge a little perplexed at Raven's comment, "did you help Sirius Black escape?"

Raven looked at all of the adults in the room, one right after the other, until she got to Snape. She gave him a grimacing smile then looked back at Fudge with a serious but confused stare.

"Sir, I haven't the foggiest idea where Azkaban is. Besides, Dementors freak me out. That soul sucking thing is really creepy," she said acting quite innocent but only playing a part. Raven wanted to see how long it would be for Fudge to lose it.

Snape turned toward the wall out of embarrassment. Dumbledore covered his mouth in an effort to not laugh and McGonagall was looking confused and concerned, rubbing her hands together nervously.

"Not from Azkaban, young lady!" exclaimed Fudge. "Please pay attention!"

"Well, I'm sorry, Minister, if I don't understand. Maybe if you used student words instead of Ministry words, I would get what you are trying to say," Raven said sarcastically enough for her to notice, but Fudge on the other hand, thought she was completely that dense. This proved the point to her that Fudge should never have become Minister at all.

"SIRIUS BLACK ESCAPED FROM THE TOWER! THE TOWER THAT YOU WERE AT EARLIER THIS EVENING! DID YOU HELP HIM?" Fudge bellowed. Dumbledore's knick knacks all over his office rattled. The same vein that pulses in Snape's head when he's angry was pulsing through Fudges head.

"Me? No, not me. He was there when I left," she said now looking extremely concerned. "Is he gone? Did he escape again?"

"Do not pretend with me young lady," Fudge said getting extremely close to her face. She could tell that he had more than a few brandies tonight by the smell of his breath. "You were up there with him and now he's gone. Where did he go?"

"You're asking the wrong person. I, personally, don't know and don't care where he is," she said getting up and walking over to Dumbledore's pet Phoenix. "What's his name, Professor?" she said to Dumbledore.

"Fawkes," said Dumbledore.

"He's beautiful," she said petting the bird.

"Thank you." Dumbledore seemed to catch on to what she was doing and decided to play along.

"Have you had him long?"

"He's one of my oldest friends, he..."

"How did you help him?" yelled Fudge.

"Help who?" Raven asked, still petting Fawkes.

"SIRIUS BLACK!"

"Help him do what?"

"ESCAPE!"

"I didn't help him. He was there when I left," she said still never looking at the Minister. Raven did though catch a glimpse at Dumbledore who was staring admiringly at Fawkes.

"Severus, please! Feel free to help out at any time," said Fudge whose patience was beyond repair at this point.

"Raven, just tell us what happened at the tower," Snape said walking up behind her.

"We talked and I left," she said turning to face her uncle. "That is all."

Snape gave her a piercing look. Raven knew he was using his ability of Legilimens to see if she was telling the truth. She didn't try to manipulate him or give him any reason to think that she had something to do with Black's escape. In fact she didn't need to try, because it was the truth anyway.

"She's telling the truth, sir. Raven had nothing to do with Black's escape," said Snape to Fudge who was now back in his chair with another glass of brandy.

"That's what I've been saying," Raven said throwing her hands up in the air.

"Did you see anything unusual while you were up there?" asked McGonagall.

"I saw a black figure heading towards the tower. I thought it was a Dementor so I left. They freak me out with that whole soul sucking thing," she said looking at Dumbledore, giving him a wink.

"So we've heard," said Fudge too busy with his glass of brandy to notice Raven wink.

"Are we done now because I really need to use the little witch's room," she said smiling, and then looking at her uncle who was clearly as frustrated as Fudge.

"Yes, thank you Miss Snape," Fudge said. "This was truly…enlightening," he said rolling his eyes.

"Your welcome, Minister. I am so glad I helped you in this matter. Please catch Black. He's dangerous," she said putting her hand on the shoulder of the distressed Minister.

Raven left Dumbledore's office feeling quite proud of herself. She couldn't help but wonder how Cornelius Fudge ever became Minister of Magic. He was such an idiot. The thought of his head exploding in anger made her laugh.

"Raven Snape!" shouted Snape behind her.

"Once again Satan, I don't want to go with you. I'm already there," Raven then turned around to see that it was her fuming uncle. "Oh, uncle, it's you. You know? You always sound like someone else."

"What was the meaning of that display in there?" asked Snape. Raven once again pictured a head exploding.

"Did you like that? That performance was some of my best work," she said looking away to reflect on her conversation with Fudge.

"Did you use Occlumency to lie to me or were you telling the truth?" he asked.

"I'm not stupid."

"Well, you were playing it pretty well in there."

"Thanks! But, really, I would never get myself involved into something that the Ministry should have taken care of in the first place."

"What might that be?" he asked folding his arms.

"Find Sirius not guilty of the charges and find the real culprit," she said. "You know it was Pettigrew, but you won't tell that to the Minister and get the charges dropped. If the Ministry had done the right thing, Fudge wouldn't be calming his nerves with brandy right now. All of this is the Ministry's fault."

"Strong accusations from a fifteen year old," he said unfolding his arms.

"And you know I'm right," she proclaimed. "You're just mad at me because I embarrassed you. Welcome to fatherhood, Daddy Severus! That's what kids do. It's our job to embarrass you!"

"Excuse me?"

"You heard me. And don't worry; I will never call you that again," she said appearing to be ill at the thought of calling Snape "daddy."

"You may have ruined your shot at abolishing the contract with the stunt you pulled in there," he said calming down enough as to not sound incredibly angry.

"Then I deal with it another day," she said walking away.

"It won't be long before Lucius finds out what happened in there. He is close to the Minister," he said. Raven came to a complete stop.

"And what's he going to do? I'm only fifteen. He doesn't need me yet," she said turning back to him.

"Can I not be the slightest bit afraid of what would happen if you were to marry Draco?"

"What are you really afraid of? Completely letting my father down? Or is it you are actually concerned for my well being?" she said walking swiftly towards him.

"Both, actually. I made a promise and I intend to keep it this time."

"Then help me."

"I am," he said looking down.

"I know," she said trying to look at his eyes. Raven was becoming more shocked at how hard Snape was trying to be good to her. She was beginning to sense how much of a heart, although still quite small, he seemed to be developing.

"Do you know how much you remind me of your father? He was sarcastic and confident. No matter how wrong he was he would argue you down until you were forced to surrender. He, no doubt, got some of that from our father," he said with an air of reflection in his voice and face.

"I am his daughter. Only I was the only one that could knock him down off his pedestal. Our relationship," she said pointing to Snape and herself a couple of times, "reminds me a lot of the relationship between father and me."

"Only you hate me and you loved him."

"I don't think I ever hated you and don‘t sound like such a baby!" she said stopping to think about what she just said. "And honestly, I think I hated the situation."

Raven and Snape began to walk and no words were spoken for many slow steps.

"Do you really like that Weasley boy?" he asked back to his hateful and demeaning tone.

"Do you really have to be a jerk?" she said back to her usual witty tone. Raven smiled, while Snape surprisingly managed a very tiny grin.

"Uncle! Is that some resemblance of a smile?" she asked wide-eyed and amazed.

"No!" he snapped, adjusting his robes and regaining his composure. He stopped suddenly. "Here is the girl's lavatory. Don't you need to...go?"

What?" she said. She then, remembered what she told the Minister to get out of that meeting. "Oh no! Part of my act. Believable, huh?"

Snape rolled his eyes and Raven laughed.

"Your sense of humor, as irritating as it is, came from your mother," Snape said, sounding frustrated.

"Father was funny too. But hateful and funny," she said smiling, "brilliant combination, don't you think?"

"Brilliant," he said sarcastically.

"See, uncle, you're getting there," she said patting his arm. "Next time, don't make it so obvious that you're trying to be sarcastic. The end effect will have a much better result."

"I'll be sure to keep that in mind," he said looking exasperated.

"Right, then. Good night, Uncle."

"Good night, Raven."

Chapter 14

So this is NOT the end, right? Just makin sure! I dont want it to end
great update xD loved it! :heart2:

No this is definetly not the end. We still have 4 more books to cover!!!!

Thanks for the comment!!!!!

wow I loved it!
Raven got to talk to Sirius and the part with Fudge was funny!
Post soon!
~Norah

BWAHAHAHA! my most favorite chapter ever. I love raven...and i love what she did to fudge..its just hilarious...my favorite part...



lol i think i quoted that the first time you posted this on the other site...favorite part in the whole thing right there!

Keep writing!

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Suzy

Hey all!! Just had a question to pose for you guys...would you like to seethe chapters shorter? Like cut in half or is the current length okay???

Just needed to know. Trying to figure out a way to attract more readers. Thanks!