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Harry stood at the alter in a dashing black suit, just waiting. He looked scared but inexplicitly happy. Ron, his best mate, stood beside him talking him through it all (“Harry, just breathe in and out…”) keeping him as calm as possible (“You look great. And just remain calm.”). Looking up once and awhile, giving him a smile, and patting him on the back.
“Mr. Weasley, the procession is going to start in fifteen minutes.” the priest said to Ron.

Harry turned chalk white and gulped. “Ron…”

“You’ll be fine Harry. Once you see her, you’ll forget everything else,” winking Ron stepped from the alter and hurried up the aisle. He walked a little past the arch and searched for Hermione in the crowd of bridesmaids.

“If you’re looking for Hermione,” said a particularly dreamy voice, “ she is over there by the window.”

Ron grinned down at Luna, “Thanks Luna.” I really do like her, Ron thought as he moved from Luna’s side and pushed through the crowd trying to spy Hermione. Not having seen her all morning he had no clue what she would look like. Probably, he thought, in the dress robes she wore for the Yule Ball. After all, Ginny’s bridesmaid dresses were wearing periwinkle blue. Maybe they did it on purpose?

When he finally pushed past the last person he saw her. And she was definitely not in her dress robes. Her back was to him and she was staring out a window. She was probably analyzing something. She was always analyzing something. But when Ron drew closer he heard a sniffle. He put his hand lightly on her shoulder, “Hermione…are you alright?”

She turned around quickly and threw herself in Ron’s arms. “Oh Ron! I just can’t believe its all over! Harry getting married!” she hugged him tighter, “I just can’t believe we are here.” Ron hugged Hermione closer. "I can't either. But we are, Hermi--"

But than Luna came up to them, “You do realize, that the procession is getting ready to start now? And you,” she pointed to Ron, “need to be up at the alter with Harry.”

“Oh! Thanks Luna,” he glanced at Hermione, “See you up there.” As he walked back through the throng of people he caught a glimpse of Ginny standing in the shadows making sure she couldn’t be seen. He grinned to himself and continued his journey up towards the alter.

“How you feeling mate?” Ron clapped Harry on the shoulder and stood beside him.

“Nervous, so happy, and scared to death. What if she changes her mind?” Harry looked worriedly up at Ron.

“Don’t worry Harry, she won’t.”

“She deserves bett--” But before Harry could finish this thought the Strings version of Unforgettable interrupted him. Both men looked up to see Hermione walking down the aisle.

She wore a deep crimson dress that had a small train that ran along her back and fluttered above the ground. Her wavy brown hair was swept up behind her head in a simple ribbon. Hermione looked at them both, as she took her place on the opposite side of Harry, with a single tear trickling down her smiling face.

After Hermione came Luna, in her periwinkle gown with her pale blonde hair similar to Hermione’s, escorted by Neville who looked uncertain as to how fast to walk. Luna looked up at him and gave him a genuine smile. His facial expression relaxed as he smiled back and took his place beside Ron and Luna stood beside Hermione.

Than Demelza, dressed the same as Luna, was escorted by Colin. Parvati came down the aisle in her periwinkle dress in a flourish escorted by Seamus. Lavender was escorted down by Dean. Than Fred and George walked down the aisle together carrying the rings. When the entire party was in place, they all looked down the aisle at the archway.

And there she was. Her elegant white dress seemed to flow around her. Her auburn hair was swept up into a gorgeous braid that made a hallow on top of her head with a single white lily on the left side. She had a bouquet of white and crimson lilies in her hands.

The entire church gasped in awe. Mr. Weasley came to Ginny’s side, she placed her hand in the crook of his elbow and they began to walk down the aisle. Unforgettable was replaced by the sweet melody of Ave Maria. Ron looked over at Harry and saw him looking straight at Ginny. He had eyes only for her. Ron looked back at his sister and saw that she had tears in her eyes. When they reached the alter Mr. Weasley lifted up her veil and gave her a kiss on the cheek. “I love you Daddy,” Ginny said as he covered her face with the veil again.

As the vows are being said Ron looked past Harry and Ginny at Hermione. She looked over at Ron, as if she knew he was looking at her, and gave him a small smile than looked back at Ginny. But Ron couldn’t look back at Harry and Ginny. The priests voice flitted through one ear and out the other, all he could see was Hermione. It was as if the rest of the world had disappeared and they weren’t at Harry’s wedding anymore.

“…You may kiss the bride.” Ron’s gaze snapped back towards Harry and Ginny and saw them both smile as they leaned in to kiss.






Hey everyone I'm Mione and this is my first FanFic. All thanks to Emma (JoHermione) who told me I should write one! HGFC roxs! I hope you all like it If you have an advice and critique it is most welcome! Thanks!

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I love it! It's a great start! Harry is so nervous and Ginny is so happy. But Ron, however, didn't seem to care about the wedding. Ha ha! PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!!

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heyy, wow this is a great start!!
ron didnt seem 2 interested in th weddin! more interested in hermy!!
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*looks around stunned*...oh my goodness *screams into pillow* Okay this is so exciting!!

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I love it! It's a great start! Harry is so nervous and Ginny is so happy. But Ron, however, didn't seem to care about the wedding. Ha ha! PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!!

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heyy, wow this is a great start!!
ron didnt seem 2 interested in th weddin! more interested in hermy!!
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Thanks so much . Very typical male. lol. I'll try! *hug*

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Wheee!!! Mione that was awesome!! *nodsandtacklesyou* Hehe, PAMS!! Hermione & Ron= HGFC does rock..

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Thank you so much Brittany! :glomps: *dances around in happiness* And now we have a forum Its so exciting

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“Now the bride and groom will share their first dance.” the DJ announced over the microphone. He started flicking his wand about getting ready for the song to start as Harry and Ginny took their places on the dance floor.

“They look so blissfully happy,” Hermione thought from her seat on the side of the dance floor.

Wise men say only fools rush in, but I can’t help..’

Harry and Ginny began a slow dance in a waltz position.

‘..falling in love with you.’

“Hey Hermione,” Ron whispered as he took the seat beside her.

‘shall I stay? Would it be a sin?’

Hermione looked up at Ron. Sometimes she hated how tall he was. Almost gave her a crick in the neck looking up at him all the time. “They look great don’t they.”

‘if I can’t help falling in love with you.’

“Yeah, they look really happy.” Ron sighed.

“I don’t think I’ve ever seen Harry this happy.”

‘Some things are meant to be..’

“He has never been this happy. Neither has Ginny.” Ron said quietly as he gazed over at his best mate and little sister.

‘take my hand, take my whole life too.’

But Hermione’s gaze wasn’t on Harry and Ginny anymore. It was on Ron instead. When did Ron become so emotional? Hermione saw his hand dangling on the side of his chair. She couldn’t take her eyes off of it. She wanted to reach down and grab it, hold on tight, and never let go. Her stomach fluttered at the very thought, “Oh come on…it’s just Ron. I thought we were past this..” She quickly looked back up to see Ron staring at her. Slowly he raised his hand and grabbed hers. He turned back towards the dance floor and didn’t let go.

‘for I can’t help falling in love with you.’

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After the newlyweds were done with their dance and done dancing with their parents (Harry danced his Mother and Son dance with Mrs. Weasley) the rest of the guests began to dance as well.

Ginny, Harry, Hermione, Neville, Luna, and Ron were dancing crazily in the middle of the dance floor. Onlookers couldn’t help but chuckle at their odd dancing. But none of them cared, they were having way to much fun. After dancing for five songs straight, they need a break. They all went to the table and sat down, talked, and joked around.

“Hey Gin, do you want to dance to the next slow song?” Harry asked

“Oh yes,” Harry and Ginny got up from the table and waved to the others as they walked away to the dance floor. They all stared after them with smiled on their faces.

“Hey Luna, can you pass the water jug over please?” Hermione leaned across the table to grab the jug from Luna and poured herself some. “Ron, would you like some?”

Ron nodded, “Yes, thanks.” he paused slightly, not sure how to ask. But he had too. He wasn’t going to make the same mistake…again. “Hermione,” he said as he stood up in front of her, “may I have the next dance?” It felt as if his heart was in his throat as he watched her face. It changed from shock to joy in seconds.

“I would love to dance Ron,” she placed her hand in his and he helped her up from her seat and guided her towards the dance floor. The song soon began.

‘Would you go with me if we rolled down streets of fire,’

Ron placed his hand on Hermione’s waist and grabbed her right hand in his left.

‘Would you hold on to me tighter as the summer sun got higher,’

The slowly began a sort of waltz. But it couldn’t really be called that. There was no counting, no steps, no routine. Only them.

If I gave you my hand would you take it and make me the happiest man in the world’

Ron twirled Hermione out and than pulled her back into his arms.

‘If I told you my heart couldn't beat one more minute without you, girl’

Hermione laughed as she was spun about, Ron smiled contagiously at her. This was heaven.

Let me know if you're really a dream I love you so, so would you go with me’

They danced around the floor without a care about anyone else, or the fact that they gained an audience. All they could hear was this song. All they could see was each other. They were after all, both thought, best friends. Why shouldn’t and couldn’t they dance?

If I gave you my hand would you take it and make me the happiest man in the world

If I told you my heart couldn't beat one more minute without you, girl’

But as the dance came to its end, and Ron kept Hermione in his embrace, they weren’t thinking of any of that. Hermione laid her head just below Ron’s shoulder as he continued to lead her slowly around the dance floor. She knew she would never forget the Spicy smell that filled her nostrils, how his strong arms seemed to almost protect her from the rest of the world, and the soft beating of his heart underneath her ear. She closed her eyes and a soft smile played on her lips. But slowly it disappeared as she thought about what she had to do, how it was the only solution. She had to get away.

Would you accompany me to the edge of the sea.Help me tie up the ends of a dream I gotta know, would you go with me. I love you so, so would you go with me’





Song on is Can't Help Falling in Love with You--Frank Sinatra and second on is Would You Go With Me?-- Josh Turner (yeah I know its Country and this song wasn't written then, but technicalities are so over rated ) I'm so excited you all like it. Advice and critique are welcome!

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?????????????????????????? What?????????????????? What do you mean she had to get away????????????????? Answer me! I don't get it. Here she is, having a great time with Ron and now she has to get away??????????????? Come on Mione.....you can't leave me there. PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!!!!!
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get away?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!!?!?!! is she mad!?!?!?!?! wel i suppose she is kinda touched in th head but that doesnt mean leavin at th best time in her life!!!!! OMG!!!!
u cant leave us like that!!!
PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!
o great post btw! n i love, i cant help falling in love with u!!!!!! it makes me cry!!
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?????????????????????????? What?????????????????? What do you mean she had to get away????????????????? Answer me! I don't get it. Here she is, having a great time with Ron and now she has to get away??????????????? Come on Mione.....you can't leave me there. PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!!!!!
You'll see. tehehehe...the power *chuckles* :buyeyed: Wow lots of PAMS Thanks so much!

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get away?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!!?!?!! is she mad!?!?!?!?! wel i suppose she is kinda touched in th head but that doesnt mean leavin at th best time in her life!!!!! OMG!!!!
u cant leave us like that!!!
PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!
o great post btw! n i love, i cant help falling in love with u!!!!!! it makes me cry!!
Well people can do some crazy things when they think they are doing the right thing. Crazyness. Thanks for all the PAMS! I know! I love that song too! Makes me cry as well. Its just so sweet

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*gaspsandfaints* That was an awesome posttt *squealsandhugglesyou* OMG..Ron and Hermione Hehe..they know they lurrvee each other..PAMS!!
Thank you tons and tons! Ron and Hermione--->

Also! Everyone, I was wondering the next time you post, if you would post your name that you go by? Because I just feel so informal going by usernames. Granted I know some people names already But those i don't. Thanks so much! (and if it takes me awhile to remember, I'm so sorry! I stink at names ) You all rox.

Oh yes! And I'm sorry I didn't post for two days..very rude of me. But tthursday night I was way to tired from band camp and then last night I had my bands Preveiw show so I didn't get on to the computer. Sorry loverlies

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“No…please God. Don’t hurt her…NOOO!” Hermione yelled into the night as she sat bolt up right in her bed. Shaking uncontrollably she hugged her knees in close and closed her eyes in silent agony.

“Why is it always the same nightmare..” she whispered, tears falling gently down her face. Her nightmare flashed before her closed eyes. Her father lying unconscious on the ground--her mother in the center of a circle of Death Eaters who are laughing madly as they slowly torture her--Hermione bound to a tree, able to do nothing but watch and scream for help. She thought about her mother and father spending months in Saint Mungo’s barely able to recognize her.

“I have to leave.” she threw off the covers and wiped away her tears roughly. “I need to get away from it all. All the memories.”



*hides* I know, I know. Its very short. But I'm posting tomorrow. Maybe even twice. I just don't want my posting to get to close to what I'm writing, just incase I have to change something or get writers block. Like right now, I'm stuck on dialog. I'm not going to get into details. But don't worry it's not writers block I just can't find the words, which happens to me to many times to count! lol. But even though it is short I hope you liked it. Comments? Critique?


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btw a short post quite frequently is a gd thing!!
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Ron sat up like a bullet in his bed. He was sleeping soundly having wonderful dreams of the night before. But, he was awoken by what sounded like something smashing and a door slamming shut downstairs.

He scrambled quickly out of his bed and threw on some jeans and a t-shirt and stuffed his wand in his back pocket. He glanced out the window quickly, “Yes…definitely a jacket,” he grabbed the jacket hanging off the back of his desk chair and headed out his bedroom door.

Running down the steps in a catlike fashion he looked around for an intruder. Pepping around the corner to the kitchen he saw a smashed coffee cup but no one in sight. He walked into the kitchen and stepped over the shattered ceramic on the floor towards the door. He opened up just in time to see someone, dragging a large trunk and carrying a few bags, walking quickly away from the Burrow towards town.

Ron’s eyes squinted towards the person’s form, “Who is---Hermione?” He didn’t even pause to think he just flat out ran out the door towards her. As he got closer he slowed down and ran into the cover of the trees lining the dirt road. He kept a fair distance between them and just followed as quietly as possible.

What on earth is she doing? Where is she going? Ron’s face scrunched in thought and worry. Hermione why are you leaving? Why did she break the cup and than run out of the house? These questions plagued his mind as he watched her walk away from his home.

Hermione, he saw, had a determined but sad expression on her face as tears slowly fell from her face. She stopped and shifted her bags to her other side and grabbed the trunk with her left hand. Before starting off around the first bend, the one that would block the Burrow from view, she stood there staring back at it. “Goodbye,” she whispered and turned back and continued her journey.

Goodbye? What does she mean goodbye? Ron worriedly ran his fingers through his hair as he began walking again.




Okay here is the post. Yes agian it is small. very very sorry loverlies. Tomorrow two posts and one if going to be long. Hopefully. matter how much i get written between now and then Enjoy. Comments? Critique?
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you're evillllll Besides, I should have been the first one to post and not anyone else because I've been waiting for this for a long time! So, technically, I'm the first to post, right Mione? Say yes! Well, anyway even if I'm not first to post I'm more dedicated that y'all even though I have some problems getting online this month.

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Hey everyone I'm Mione and this is my first FanFic. All thanks to Emma (JoHermione) who told me I should write one! HGFC roxs! I hope you all like it If you have an advice and critique it is most welcome! Thanks!
Mwahaha! I was mentioned in your FF! I feel so happy. And THANK YOU FOR WRITING IT! Brit, I was mentioned, and you weren't. And HGFC does rock!

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Hermione saw his hand dangling on the side of his chair. She couldn’t take her eyes off of it. She wanted to reach down and grab it, hold on tight, and never let go. Her stomach fluttered at the very thought, “Oh come on…it’s just Ron. I thought we were past this..” She quickly looked back up to see Ron staring at her. Slowly he raised his hand and grabbed hers. He turned back towards the dance floor and didn’t let go.
Aha! So she wanted to hold his hand and you made her hold it and we all know she wants him all. So why don't you do us a favour and give Ron to Hermione, eh?


Your story is so great so far, Mione! But why did she have to leave? Bring her back, they're meant to be together.


Aheeemmm. I do hope that everyone knows that Mione's birthday is
in two days, no? You better have something for her or else..

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