Hey this is the first part of my first story. None of these characters are mine- they belong to J.K. Rowling. However, I made up a few, and the plot is mine.

''Will you marry me?'' He asked. I couldn't believe it. He, Teddy Lupin, had asked me, Victoire Weasley, to marry him.
His glistening eyes bored into mine while I just stood looking at him. I must have looked like a right fool, just standing there when he had just popped the 'big question'.
''Yes, of course.'' I had just realised at that moment what I had said, I had said yes. All I remember thinking was that I was an engaged woman. Wow! We were now engaged! He is my fiancé!
The next thing I know I am being kissed passionately by the most amazing man in my life. My fiancé to be exact. After a long embrace and a little more kissing he, as any wizard, conjured up a black box. I must have had a strange look of shock on my face because Teddy waved his hand in my face and was smiling. He opened the box and all I could think of was fainting. It was looking at me, pulling me towards it. It was a platinum band with a petite diamond set in the middle. It was beautiful, sparkly and most importantly mine.
Teddy took hold of my left hand and slid the ring onto that all important finger. Now that I think about it that hand has been through loads. When I was eight Mum dropped a vase on it due to a dodgy Hover Charm, Granny Weasley had to fix it with that wonderful book of hers. Michael Pott had crushed it in third year at the Hogwarts Quidditch final. I was Gryffindor Chaser, he a Slytherin beater who wasn’t the best at steering. Now that hand had an engagement ring on it.
Teddy had a great look of achievement on his face. No wonder, he had just succeeded in proposing to me. After taking a stroll along the beach we went to Shell Cottage. My parents would have had to have found out at some point. When I knocked on the door instead of walking in as usual I finally remembered that we would have to find a house somewhere. This was no longer my house to stay in. It felt very strange.
Dad was still for all the Secret Keeper malarkey so we always had to answer a question before being let in. He still had some fight in him! Mum told me that ever since he was bitten he has always been very protective. She told me that when Uncle Fred died he became the strong man in the family. Everybody still looks up to him, even Uncle Harry! We answered the question of ‘when is your mother’s birthday?’ and I replied ‘26th May’ meaning we were able to come in. Dad is not allowed to ask the question of ‘which werewolf bit me just before the Battle of Hogwarts?’ if Teddy is there. The first time he asked us that Teddy just went off in one. He thought that dad was trying to criticise him.
Mum had grown to like Celestina Warbeck and her music due to Granny’s persuasion. When we walked in she was listening to the wireless and a Cauldron Full of Hot, Strong Love. She was humming along when I walked over to her armchair. Without speaking I raised my left hand and sat it on top of hers. She took a huge breath and just looked at me............


Well? How is it? Give me ideas that make sense please. I know what is going to happen in the next two or so but I need some more plans. Leave your comments please!

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Omg Katie :O sittin in art haha ur story is soooooooo good PAMS PAMS PAMS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great start, I am looking forward to more

Thanks everyone. The next part will be here very soon.

Hey...I read your story soo far!!
It's really good....i love the starter....I jusr know this is going to be a great story!!
Cant wait for more
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-Evangeline-

Oooo i love it!!!! PAMS PAMS
sammy

Great start! I love the Teddy/Victoire Ship. I can't wait to read more! I love how you call Molly "Granny Weasley"! It's cute!

I really appreciate all the readers so far. There isn’t very many but I hope there soon will be.

‘‘Oh my Victoire!’’ Mum exclaimed in her now semi-French accent. ‘‘Well this is a surprise.’’ She jumped off of her seat and nearly strangled me with one of her warm hugs.
Dad came through from the kitchen, having heard the news that his daughter was getting married, and congratulated us both, unfortunately he didn’t seem as thrilled as Mum. Maybe it reminded him of his ruined wedding day, I wasn’t really sure. What if he thought that I hadn’t picked the right man? Or he was being a normal Dad and thinking that I was ‘too young’. Well if he had known what I had previously done he may have had a fit.
Mum admired my ring for at least an hour then got Butterbeers from the kitchen. Dad changed his for a Firewhisky and drank a glass in one. There must be something up, I thought. I just left it though.
After that we went out a walk and then back to Shell Cottage where Dad insisted that Teddy gets the spare room.

After a good night sleep, Teddy thought that maybe we should go and see Aunt Ginny and Uncle Harry. He said that they ought to know as Harry was his godfather and all.
So, after we got dressed all four of us apparated to Grimmauld Place. The street was still its peculiar self as the numbering was still weird. Muggles thought that the numbers were just a little mixed up but the wizarding community knew that Number 12 Grimmauld Place was completely invisible unless you know where it is. Uncle Harry had inherited the house from his godfather when he died. Sirius Black, he was called. He was friends with both Harry’s dad and Teddy’s. There were four fiends at school but unfortunately all of them were now dead. Unfortunately nobody knows who killed Remus Lupin or Nymphadora Tonks (Teddy’s parents) as they both were killed at the Battle of Hogwarts straight after Teddy was born.
When we got inside we were greeted by the kids. Lily, Albus and James. Lily was the youngest and was due to start Hogwarts in a matter of weeks. Albus had started two years ago, so would be starting his third year and James was about to start his seventh and final year.
‘‘James, I have some news for you.’’ Said Teddy. James and Teddy were quite close as there weren’t much between them. People used to see them as brothers. ‘‘Actually, we have some news for you all.’’
‘‘Aw cool, what is it?’’ James had the exact same attitude as Uncle Ron. He spoke the same as him and found things really ‘cool’ all the time.
‘‘Well, we are engaged! James I would love it if you would be my best man!’’ Teddy was ecstatic as he exclaimed the news.
At that moment Aunt Ginny and Uncle Harry along with Aunt Hermione and Uncle Ron came running up from the kitchen very excitedly. We were all still standing in the hall and we were all packed together tightly.
‘‘Come in to the living room you old bunch of sillies!’’ Said Aunt Ginny, pretending to be slightly annoyed but revealing, through her eyes, that she was whizzing!

New post!

Awww! Fleurs reactions was hysterical! James the best man! Awesome!!! love it

Thanks to RonHermione(L) for also puttin up with me in Chemistry!

All in a days work Katie :L kiddin
This post is reallly good :O i wonder whats wrong with her dad :O
I'll be asking tommorow when we're in Chemistry hahahaha
PAMS PAMS PAMS !!!!!!!!

Well I think you are just going to have to wait! Just like everybody else!

I love it too. The Granny Molly thing I mean!
And the Uncles and Aunts!

Hi. I meant to say to everybody. This is the Summer holidays!

Thankyou everybody. Spread the news!

Sorry too be a bit late!
I love this story! Great detail!

Thankyou! I dont care when but aslong as you read it.

Don't fret on this too much. When I started my fanfic, I had one reader, and now I only have four. But always remember that people on and off the site read them but don't always comment (at least, I think for mine)!


Interesting. I can't wait to see what happens with this!

I love this line! "Old bunch of sillies"

Great post! Keep it up!

Good story, I do like it actually. PAMS!

Great story so far. i am looking forward to more and seeing where it goes, what is up with Bill?

Ohhh awasome post!!
Sorry took a while to read
Ohhhh I loved Fluers reaction
Whats wrong with Bill??
Ohh James best man...yay!!
Cant wait for more
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Well here is part three! Enjoy!
Oh, thankyou veggie_potter, what you said about don't fret about the readers was totally right.
Thanks everyone!
This is just a wee one. OK?
PS. Be prepared with a tissue!


We were all sittting in the Potter's livingroom having a great laugh. Giggles filled the room.
My cousins Rosie and Hugo had come back from their Granny and Granda Granger's house and were now here too. Granny Weasley had been sent an owl and she was drinking some tea and chatting about her wedding day.
''I just wish that Arthur was here to recall the story with me. It feels like sucha lonely day when I realise that we won't ever be able to recite our vows to each other again.'' At this her eyes welled up and Rosie ran over to hug her.
We were all used to her sobbing at the mention of Grandpa, I was actually surprised that Auntie Hermione hadn't started yet. She usually joins in after seconds.Grandpa Weasley had died a year ago. It was very bad, Granny still blames herself.
''That stupid motorbike!'' She always said.
Rosie was now rubbing Granny's hand whilst Lily was using a handkerchief to wipe her face. All us grandkids are really lovely to Granny because we know that everything is so difficult for her. The woman has lost a son, has a son scarred by a werewolf and lost her husband. Then that huge house all to herself, with the occasional visitors of course.
We all find it difficult to comprehend that Grandpa is gone because it was such a big shock. He was in the garage at the Burrow with my younger cousin Henry, Uncle George and Auntie Katie's son- well one of them, when the bike just gave him a shock. Mum ran down the stairs when she heard Henry screaming 'Granda, wake up!' Poor kid, he said that he pushed the big purple button so that Granny wouldn't blame Grandpa for his own death and resent him for it but Granny knew exactly what happened.
''I can't believe that your own grandfather is going to miss your wedding day. It is just so horrible.''
''Just remember Molly that Remus or Tonks will not be there for Teddy either.'' Said Uncle Harry.
''I am so sorry Theodore, I really am. I am just very upset at the moment, sorry.''
''Please Mrs Weasley, call me Teddy. I am fine, I never met my parents so I really don't mind that they won't be able to see me get married to the most amazing woman who I love dearly.'' He sounded quite frustrated as he said this, this lead to an awkward silence disturbed by Hugo and Albus having thumb wrestles.
''I know a way that your parents can be at your wedding!'' Said Uncle Harry.''Do you remember the stories that I told you when you were younger Ted?''
''Course. The beedle ones? Yeah sure. The best are the Deathly Hallows.''
''That was the exact story that I was meaning, you know I told you that that story was a fake, well it is real.''
''What? You mean that I should use that stone thing to bring them back? I need to plan a wedding not go on an adventure for a missing stone!''
''Well I could probably show you exactly where it is, I have the same nightmare about it every night.''
''Really, so they really are more than a picture? My parents I mean.''


Well? What do you think? Sorry someone had to die!

Ohhh the stone...ahhh...
Harry still has nightmares??
Arther died.....*Wail* he cant have!!!!!
I shall cry with Molly
Haha the thumb war....lushhhhh
Teddy gets to see his parents agian...
Awsome chapter
Cant wait for more
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Thankyou you are really lovely! Sorry that he died and yes he still has night mares! I know wail! Remember there is still Bill! Remember?