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08-05-2009, 02:27 PM
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| | Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Isla Reeser
Graduated
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Alana Ritter
Department of Mysteries |  Desperate - Sa13+ ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥
Made by: Sarah! [ImAGrape] Thank you!  Hello again!!! This is Jess(Jessica) and Cae(Caley)! This is Jess's 3rd Fanfiction and Cae's 1st! Please read and review! Oh and check out Jess's other stories too!
Disclamer: The characters, as well as the Harry Potter universe, belong to J.K. Rowling. Except for Savannah Hensel, she belongs to us!  Chapter 1 He wanted her. He, Draco Malfoy wanted Hermione Granger. He clenched his fists as he watched Weasley press his lips against hers. She was with Weasley and he could do nothing about it. What did Weasley have that he didn't have?
"A poor family." he mumbled under his breath.
Savannah looked up from her plate of chicken.
"What did you say Draco?" she asked. Draco glared at her.
"Oh, Granger isn't it?" Savannah asked and Draco sighed but nodded. Savannah rolled her aqua eyes.
"She is with Weasel-bee, get over it Draco!" she said sternly. Draco let out a grunt.
"He doesn't deserve her! I do! I mean ever since that night in the corridor I can't stop thinking about her.
4 Months Before...
I was walking down the corridor after the battle had taken place. Voldemort was dead. Killed by the famous Potter. What was I supposed to do now? Most of the Slytherins were dead. Pansy, Crabbe, Goyle, and Blaise were dead. My parents are dead. Who else? I stopped by the wall and slid down it. I put my head into my hands as I thought of what to do.
*trip*
"Ouch!"
"Who's there?"
"Ohh hello Granger fancy seeing you here. Aren't you supposed to be helping Potter and Weasle-bee to clean up the deatheaters?" I said smirking.
"Shut up Malfoy! Why don't you go and help them!?! I mean what are you supposed to do now? Everybody hates you even the Slytherins since they think you betrayed them, when you came onto the light side." Hermione said.
I clenched my fists and shot up. I grabbed onto her cloak and pushed her into the wall. Before I could say anything I saw her face. It had scratches and bruises everywhere. I saw a glimmer coming from her neck that the light shone. I moved her hair away and there was a long scar with dried blood on it. I hated that night. I had watched her get tortured by Bellatrix and yet Bellatrix is still alive.
Hermione moved away and whimpered. She looked one last time at me with tears in her eyes and ran the opposite way.
End of Flashback...
I was about to say Hermione's name again when Savannah took me out of the daydream.
*snap*
"Come on! Stop thinking about Granger and walk with me to potions!" Savannah said.
I sighed but got up looking at the Gryffindor table one last time. She wasn't there.
As we were walking down the corridor I saw Neville coming up to Savannah. He probably likes her. I snickered and left the two alone.
While walking on his way to the dungeons, he could already see Ron walking to potions, with Harry by his side.
"You are with Hermione, Ron!" Harry said and Ron shrugged his shoulders.
"Doesn't mean I can't think other girls are hot." Ron said, Draco could feel his hand shaking, who could be any better looking than Hermione?
"But it's Savannah Hensel, Ron, a bloody Slytherin!" Harry mumbled. Draco's eyes grew large. He knew not to say anything.    
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08-12-2009, 02:18 AM
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| | Puffskein
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Sixth Year |  ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
Im your first Reader!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!
I WANT TO BE YOUR NUMBER #1 READER FOR THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!
PAMS!!!!!!!!!!
-Xavier-
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08-12-2009, 02:33 AM
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| | Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
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Department of Mysteries | ♥ Socelyn | #Jeness | S W A G | ShortPerson&TallPerson | Nade ♥
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Originally Posted by Xavierluffehhh  Im your first Reader!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!
I WANT TO BE YOUR NUMBER #1 READER FOR THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!
PAMS!!!!!!!!!!
-Xavier- Awww sure! *hug*
 Jess & Cae
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08-12-2009, 03:05 AM
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| | Firecrab
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First Year | SS Junior Reporter Junior Varsity Cheerleader
Ooooh! Awesome! I'm reading your other story, Love Is In The Air, and got your message, had to read this one!!
__________________  Thanks so much Marcy!
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08-12-2009, 03:07 AM
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| | Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
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Originally Posted by cursedkatie Ooooh! Awesome! I'm reading your other story, Love Is In The Air, and got your message, had to read this one!! Haha I'm glad you are going to read this one too!
Thanks soo much!!
Jess & Cae
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08-12-2009, 03:13 AM
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| | Nogtail
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Good story so far keep it up. It will be interesting to see what ship will occur here.
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08-12-2009, 03:15 AM
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| | Puffskein
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Hmmm...quite interesting, but I love it! PAMS!
Jess
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08-12-2009, 03:16 AM
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| | Shrake
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Originally Posted by logger31 Good story so far keep it up. It will be interesting to see what ship will occur here. Thank youu!!!
Oh yeah it will be...  
Jess & Cae Quote:
Originally Posted by Jess Hmmm...quite interesting, but I love it! PAMS!
Jess Thanks!
Don't worry we will since we have like 5 chapters already done with!
Jess & Cae
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08-12-2009, 04:06 AM
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| | Puffskein
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Oooh i like it so far!
cant wait for the rest!
PAMS!! 
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08-12-2009, 04:16 AM
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| | Shrake
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Originally Posted by RoseMalfoy Oooh i like it so far!
cant wait for the rest!
PAMS!! I'm glad you like it!
Don't worry I know you'll like the following chapters!
We will definitley PAMS! tehe. xDD
Jess & Cae
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08-12-2009, 04:28 AM
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Did someone say Draco?
LOLOL, nice story, JesserzYAY, I can't wait for more.
-desperately clings to you-
[Yup, pun intended.] xD
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08-12-2009, 04:52 AM
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| | Shrake
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08-12-2009, 05:44 AM
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| | Mooncalf
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Wow! It's really great!
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08-12-2009, 05:47 AM
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| | Shrake
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Originally Posted by Lilyluffehhh Wow! It's really great! Awww thanks Lilyluff!!!
Jess & Cae
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08-12-2009, 09:11 AM
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| | Mooncalf
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Helloooo...Jess....you are honestly on a high with all these fictions coming up...hon...but good post...helloooo...Cae....all the best with your first Fiction....you guys will do great...and as i say always...waiting for more....
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08-12-2009, 09:25 AM
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| | Shrake
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08-12-2009, 02:20 PM
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| | Puffskein
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PAMS I love please post more soon!
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08-12-2009, 04:10 PM
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aww i love it pams!
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08-12-2009, 04:35 PM
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OMG! So much drama! Ron and Hermione are going out. Draco likes Hermione. Ron likes Savannah. Talk about a love triangle. Wow! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
PS: Thanks for telling me about your new story! I'm glad i'm reading it!
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08-12-2009, 06:25 PM
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| | Shrake
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Originally Posted by PotterGirl714 PAMS I love please post more soon! Awww thanks!
Don't worry we definetly will!
Jess & Cae Quote:
Originally Posted by firenjen aww i love it pams! Thank youuuu!!!!!
We will!!
Jess & Cae Quote:
Originally Posted by hermionesclone OMG! So much drama! Ron and Hermione are going out. Draco likes Hermione. Ron likes Savannah. Talk about a love triangle. Wow! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
PS: Thanks for telling me about your new story! I'm glad i'm reading it! I know!
Cae and I are big drama fanfiction writers! xDD
Thank you soo much!!
P.S. No problem! I'm glad you like it!
Jess & Cae
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08-12-2009, 08:10 PM
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| | Ramora
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Wowz....that was....interesting!
Marcy Moo luffed it!
I'm working on the banner right now, just thought I'd stop by and just get some info on how the banner might look!
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08-12-2009, 08:42 PM
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| | Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
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Originally Posted by Marcy Moo Wowz....that was....interesting!
Marcy Moo luffed it!
I'm working on the banner right now, just thought I'd stop by and just get some info on how the banner might look! Awww thanks Marcy Moo!!!!
Yeahh!! Okay can't wait to see it!
Jess & Cae
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08-14-2009, 03:09 AM
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| | Puffskein
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Mauricio Lucien Xanders
Sixth Year | ##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3
I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!! LMFAO!!!!!!!!!
-Xavier -
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08-14-2009, 04:04 AM
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| | Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
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Originally Posted by ##Hermione&Draco## I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!! LMFAO!!!!!!!!!
-Xavier - Lol fine I'll post in a few minutes but only in this story mister! xDD
Jess & Cae
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08-14-2009, 04:30 AM
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| | Shrake
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: oh-hi-yo
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Thank you for all the amazing comments everybody!
They really make my day!
Here is chapter 2!
Please read and review!
Jess & Cae
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