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A sleek black car rolled into the driveway, and from it came an impossible number of people. 9 people to be exact. Harry Potter, and his wife, Ginny Weasley stepped from the right side, followed by 3 children. The tallest had a twinkle in his eyes, always reminding family members of a specific set of twins. He was also the oldest of the siblings. The middle one also had a twinkle in his eyes however it was much more subtle. The youngest was small, had red hair and clung close to a small teddy bear.

On the right side, Hermione Granger stepped out, followed by Ron Weasley, and then by a rather strict looking 11 year old girl, and a small boy about the age of the Potters youngest, give a few years. They convened at the entrance to Kings Cross, luggage in tow. James Sirius Potter ran through the pillar, and as always was taken aback by the beauty of the scarlet steam engine. The family followed, and soon met up with Luna Lovegood and NEville Longbottom. they also had 3 children- all boys. Two were twins, and in there second year, and the other was one year shy. They smiled and shook hands, some hugging. Albus raised an eyebrow.
"I thought you were a teacher Neville?" He asked.
"I apparate as soon as you guys leave this station." He said, smiling. James left his luggage at the entrance to the train were the family were, and ran off to find friends.

Albus looked around. He seemed worried. Why would he be worried? Harry took notice.
"Albus," he said, leaning onto one knee. "Don't let what your brother says affect you..... he's only trying to rile you up," he said. Albus looked down.
"But what if I'm sorted into Slytherin?" He asked. He heard faintly James ranting about Teddy snogging with someone, and Lorcan and Lysander talking with him about it.
"Son, you were named after two Hogwarts headmasters.... one was a Slytherin, and he's the bravest wizard I have ever known." Harry said. Albus nodded.
"Its okay if you get sorted into any house.... but just so you know.... the sorting hat takes your opinion into account." He said. Albus smiled, and Harry ruffled his son's hair. "Go off to Hogwarts, have fun! No matter what house your in, just know we will love you." Harry said, and Albus went to his family, saying goodbye's and giving goodbye hugs.

Lorcan and Lysander and James went into the compartment, followed by Rose and Albus.
"Err, James?" Asked Albus. "Where's Teddy?" He said. Teddy was in his final year. He must be on.
"I think he saw me and is embarassed," He said. Lorcan and Lysander snorted. Albus shook his head, but couldn't repress a smile. Suddenly a compartment door opened.
"hi, could I come in?" The boy asked. He was in his first year. His hair was slicked back and very light blonde. Everyone nodded and he sat.
"I'm... er... I'm Scorpius Malfoy," He said. Everyone said hello.
"I've heard of you," James said. "don't think we'll blame you for anyones mistakes," He said. Albus was genuinly suprised at his brothers show of kindness. That was new.

Scorpius joined in on the conversation, and soon everyone was laughing. James took out a phial of a golden liquid. The compartment chorused with "Whats that?"
"Its a very simple potion. It causes the victim to laugh uncontrollably." He said, smirking.
"James! Thats the one that made the living room roof explode!" Albus yelled.
"Yes, no duh, bro. But you see, I've perfected it...." He said, and unstoppered it. Suddenly the train shook violently, and he dropped it.

The whole compartment exploded with a golden light, and the lights went out in the whole train.
"James!" Said the people in the compartment.
"Sorry, sorry, I'll go fix it...." he said, making his way out of the compartment. Suddenly the train shook violently again. James was thrown to the floor. He heard an explosion in the distance, and looked up. Hundreds of dark plumes of smoke were making their way to the train. The flew through the glass, and formed into the men in dark robes. James shouted, whipping out his wand, and shooting silver flashes of light. his friends spileld from the compartment. Albus whipped his wand at them, and a silvery beam much like the one James was shooting erupted. Soon most people were going by this. The Death eaters dwindled, and one shot a kiling curse that missed Albus by inches.

James was blinded with rage, and began shooting the silvery spell at the Death eater nonstop. The evil being was at it knees. James looked at him.
"Who do you work for?" He yelled.
"The new... dark....lord..... ATROX!" he yelled, before being stunned in the face by James.
"What were those?" Lorcan asked.
"They were Death Eaters, obviously. But working for a new guy, not Voldemort...." Scorpius said, looking at the fallen Death Eaters. They sat in their compartment, discussing this until they got to Hogwarts.
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CHAPTER 2
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Neville stood in the hallway, watching the students arrive from afar. News had traveled fast of the attack, and he had heard who took the Death Eaters out. He didn't realize how long he had been there- students were starting to come in. He went to the Great Hall and took his seat.

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Albus had traversed the lake on a boat, seated with Scorpius, and was now walking into the Great Hall. He was amazed. The candles stood there by magic, the ceiling was no doubt enchanted........ the sight was breathtaking.
Albus walked on, only stopped when he was near the steps. All of the first years were there. Headmistress McGonnagol started calling out names. Albus was slightly scared by that hat.
He looked to the staff where he saw some familiar faces; Hagrid, Neville being cheif of them. He smiled at them, when his name was called. He slihtly sheepishly sat on the stool, and the hat was put on.
"A Potter..... hmmm...... clever, clever, a Slytherin? Hmmmm.... but smart...... very smart.... yes, very brave as well......" The Sorting Hat mused. James sat there, and empty seat next to him. His brother was about to be sorted, no doubt Gryfindor!
"RAVENCLAW!" The hat shouted. James fist tightened. He looked murderous... how.... how could this happen..... that... stupid...hat.....

***

James ate, but there was an anger in his face, although he was laughing and talking much like his brother over at Ravenclaw. They were dismissed, and James made his way to the Gryfindor common room, flanked by Lorcan and Lysander.
"How was he sorted to Ravenclaw?" They asked.
"I don't know! I knew he was smart but honestly....." James went on a rant that lasted five minutes, and he was almost to the common room when interupted by Scorpius.
"Albus, Rose and I were talking," he said. "We think you should teach us more defense against the dark arts.... after all you know more spells than us and these Death Eaters mean battle...." James looked at Scorpius intently.
"Fine with me. Tell everyone to meet on the Seventh Floor near the statue of the Hunchbacked Tree Dweller at 7 O' clock." He said. After all, he didn't want anyone dying because of Death Eaters.
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Albus looked around the Ravenclaw common room. It was mostly blue, but differing shades of blue. He found it very relaxing, all of the blue, but at night the only light was the fire, which reflected across the walls, darkening the colors, which seemed to make it even more relaxing, to Albus at least. He sat on the blue chair. He nearly sank into it, resulting in him grabbing at the arms. He stared at the fire, nearly dozing off.

He wondered about his brothers feelings. Although James always poked fun at Albus, James was vey protective of him. They also had fun layin tricks on people alot, although James did it more than Albus. He had no doubt planned on them having alot of fun at Hogwarts, but the sudden desicion to put him in Ravenclaw slightly ruined that. But now, in time tomorrow they would be helpd by James and the Longbottoms to learn new abilities in magic that first years wouldn't learn until they were fourth years, which amazed him.
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Albus awok the next morning on his warm bed. He rubbed the sleep out of his eyes. He could hear the creaking of bed springs, no doubt meaning he wasn't the only one awaking. He moved the blue curtains and stepped out, taking his robes out. He was slightly aching, no doubt from that fighting. He looked at his schedule. He had potions with Slytherin, Double Charms with Hufflepuff, DADA with Gryfindor. The classes ended just shy of 7 0'clock. He would have to rush to the seventh floor.
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Yes, he is in Slytherin, however everyone such as the Longbottoms, Rose and James and Albus are becoming friends with him.
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CHAPTER 4:
PROFESSORS JAMES, LORCAN AND LYSANDER
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Everyone convened at the statue, near a blank peice of wall. Todays first school lessons were quite boring, so they had plenty of energy after the several naps tooken.
James, Lorcan and Lysander walked down.
"Erm, yes. Got in trouble for talking." James said, smiling slightly sheepishly. He walked to the blank wall, then waved his hand.
Lines began appearing, then deepened, and then turned brown like wood. James knocked, then it opened.

They walked in to a large room, very much empty. They were talking amongst themselves, but then noticed Lorcan and Lysander and James standig in front of them.
"Alright... ROLL CALL!" Lysander shouted, until he was hit by James.
"That was MY line! Erhm. anyways.... Rose? Good. Albus! Er. Yes. Here. Scorpius! Here. I'm happy. Shawn Finnigan? Yes, you are here- thank you Rose for getting him- Lysander? Good, I couldn't see you. Lorcan? Yes. You are here. No need for loudness. James? Uh... JAMES! Were is that ridiculously awesome person.... OH! Ha, I'm him. Here." He said, putting the data into a clipboard, which he threw into a corner.

"Alright, tssk, tssk...... Introduction. Alright. You all know of apparating, of course. Now Albus- not Potter- Dumbledore created this form of it. Its a form of traveling that is more for short range traveling. Like, if your horribly lazy and don't wanna walk, you could just do this......" James' body collapsed into glowing white smoke, and he flew into the air.
"Thats what those Death Eaters did! Only black...." Scorpius said.
"Yes, well...." James began, landing. "You could choose the color. A fun little feature, which reflects Dumbledore's humor. He was a very funny guy, with what I've hear of him.... yes... Anyways, what you do is imagine yourself flying. Really any color. Quite simple, but it requires immense concentration. But you get used to it and can do it in a jiffy. Now.... start!"

Suddenly, the room was fillied with smoke. It was all white much like James' was, however when they flew it was shaky. Meh, they could use practice, but pretty good for a first. James nodded in approval.
"Alright. Now, you can also raise hands, grab things, and shoot spells in this form, although that will take more practice. For example....."
For the next two minutes, the room was full of flashes of light and white forms of smoke. Lorcan, Lysander and James were dueling.
James flew to the ground, groaning.
"Hmmm.... unfair! You both used Flipendo....." He yelled, holding his abdomen and standing.
"OK... ow... class dismissed... ow....."
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haha I enjoyed it immensely! but how are the apparating inside of hogwarts?
Ah, yes i thoght of that. But I think that since the Room of Requirement gives someone what they want/need, (they al need to learn to battle efficiantly in the coming storm of war), and need to know this form of apparating, only this room would really give them the ability too. or, its a subform, but I think a better way to say it is that the "apparating" form was created after all the apparation barrier-stuff, so it doesn't count. Its open to interpratation, I suppose.
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Welll, not like what Harry and Dumbledore did to get to the cave apparating. They don't need to go anywhere, as they are perfectly safe in Hogwarts (for now). They just need to do the, what I'll call, Short Range Apparation, which they did in the previous chapter.
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They were in thick forest, and in front of a throne. Their heads were down, as if in shame. The Death eaters, that is. In front of them, stood in front of a large white marble throne, positioned against a very large tree. A man, tall but strong-looking, sat. His greasy hair was as dark as a starless night sky, and his skin was pale, but not as pale as Voldemort. He had red marks under his eyes, and he looked very angry. Who could blame him?
"You all FAILED to kill the Potter's kids? HOW? Richardson, why?" He asked. The Death Eaters came forth.
"He....he had friends, sir."
"Names?" Demanded the New Dark Lord.
"I-I think there was a Malfoy. And the two Potters. and a Weasley. And a pair of twins but... I....I don't know who they were...." He said.
"Aaaargh! Everyone counts! Avada Kedavra!" He yelled, and the forest was illuminated in green.

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James woke up the next morning, and his abdomen hurt. Horribly. He stood, sat back down, then stood. He lifted up his shirt and looekd to see a bruise on his stomach.
"Lorcan! Lysander!" He shouted. They shot out, trying to escape. Ha. Escape and angry Potter.
"Flipendo! Yes, you too Lorcan! Flipendo!" he said. They flew in different directions. Lorcan slammed into the wall, while Lysander hit the door.
"OW!" They both yelled.
"Yes, well at least YOU didn't fall and hit the solid ground!" He said, and walked out, being careful not to step on Lysander.
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Everything was going normal at the Bulgarian Wizardry & Witchcraft school. People were walking about, talking about lessons and life.
Suddenly, the peace was interupted by screams. Black plumes of smoke flew towards the school, and they went into a barricade of fire from wands. Green flashes of light, or any other color, was everywhere. The school was on fire in places already. People flew away, hitting walls and the ground.

But then a larger black plume flew towards the school. The form of smoke ran into the crowd, causing several students and staff to go flying. The plume hit the doors, which burst open, and a large number of spells met his presence.
Atrox took care of them.
Then he made his way to tthe Dining Hall. He knew what was going on. Standing just out of the doors way, he made it open.
Thousands of spells flew and hit the opposite wall, but that was all they hit. Atrox smiled. He knew how many were in there, but stepped in the door anyways. There were several gasps, as if they thought they could kill him. Suddenly, someone though it was wise to hit him with the killing curse. It hit Atrox, but did nothing. He growled, and hit the roof with a spell. He and his forces flew away as the roof of the dining hall collapsed.
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Albus sat on the bench in the Great Hall, talking with some friends, when suddenly his brother appeared, sitting across from him and shoving a newpaper at his brother, pointing at the headline.

DURMSTRANG MASSACRE: DARK MARK APPEARS AT SCENE

"Its a sign Al. They're trying to say that they will attack any school. And I bet this one is next." He looked around the table as albus read the story.
"Hundreds dead, the Dark Mark casted..... James... we have to train harder. They are better at this than we think." Albus said. James took the paper.
"Sounds good. Tonight.... hmmm.... i feel like two of the unforgivable curses.... 'cept the Killing one..... no one likes that one...."
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Hey guys! So I've been thinking, that this story can't really last for awhile. Sorry! I know this is out of no where. BUT! There are 6 more stories planned, which will be much more longer and detailed. They will be featured in the High Security Vaults because they will be much more gritty and evil-aware, you could say. I'll give this one, say, five more chapters. I promise that this one will go out with a BANG! Also! I must retcon something. Teddy Lupin will be 3 years out of Hogwarts, as will Victorie, making them 20.
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CHAPTER 7
Evil in this World, part 1
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For the rest of the year, school went smoothly. Virtually no Death Eater attacks- but there was a certain tension in the air. Attacks would be imminent.
The lessons by James and Lorcan and Lysander were taught and over. They had a large repertoire of spells and abilities, including the Cruciatus Curse and Imperius Curse, but no one was taught the Killing Curse. But they knew well James could do it.
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The night was odd. It was... heavy, in a way. The cloud were thick and grey, only allowing glimpses of the moon.
The new transfiguration teacher, Binson, replacing the Headmistress, stood in a window high up in the castle. They had been warned that an attack may be possible. Several people arrived- Draco Malfoy, The Golden Trio, Teddy Lupin, who was without his pregnant wife Victorie, and Percy Weasley tagged along as he was also in the Ministry at that time. They were patrolling the castle at the time.

He inhaled the cool night air, closing his eyes. His hands rested on the windowsill, clutching his wand.
Then, suddenly, he heard a noise. Like flapping cloaks. How odd, no footsteps.....
His world ended in green.
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James, Shawn, Lorcan, Lysander, Scorpius and Albus were walking the corridors, hidden by Disillusionment Charms. They walked fast, but stopped.
"Shh.... Guys.... did you see that?" He asked. in the distance, he swore he saw a bright flash of green. Odd.
"Yea!" They all said. Cautiously, they continued, wands clutched in hand. They walked slowly, slowly....
BOOM!
The wall erupted, and they dropped down. Black plumes of smoke went every which way. They heard screams from children, and spells from either side. James looked around, and saw a Death Eater approaching a running first year. He raised his wand, and waved it. A bright green bolt of light erupted from his wand, and the Death Eater flew out of the window. He took of the charms, and they run out, seeing battles rage. He caught site of Teddy Lupin Short ranging*, and followed.
"Stay here!" he yelled to his friends.
"Teddy! Teddy!" He shouted.
"James?" he asked.
"Yea, we came to help!" He said.
"Hehe, teaching everyone some of the trick I taught you?" He said.
"Oh ye-" They ran right into an explosion, and hit the ground, right in front of Hagrids Hut. They looked around, stumbling slightly.
"That was quite an explo-"
"Avada Kedavra!" Shouted a Death Eater who wore long, platinum blonde hair, and was obviously aged. It was Lucius Malfoy!
Teddy dodged it, and James and Teddy began dueling Lucius furiously.
"You've gone back!" Teddy yelled. Lucius was silent.
"Bloody fool! You'll only go to Azkaban now! How are you going to worm your way outta this one?" Teddy yelled, laughing.
Lucius launched another Avada Kedavra.
Teddy fell down to the ground.
Time froze suddenly. James, wand still pointing at Lucius, looked from Teddy to Lucius. It didn't click. Lucius flew away, and James fell on his knees, crawling to his friend, and putting his arms across Teddy's chest, his head in between.
"Nooo!" He cried horribly into the night. He repeated the 'no', as if it would save Teddy. He cried and cried and cried, until he felt the ground shake slightly. Harry, Ron and Hermione had arrived. Harry nearly fell backwards, Ron stood, shocked, and Hermione ran forward. She came down to her knees, looking. James clutched Teddy's body, and harry took his son off gently, pulling him into a hug. James realized his own father was crying as well. The battled at Hogwarts continued, James could see. And he saw Death Eaters. He wrenched himself from his fathers grip, running, running to the castle, tears still falling down his face.
He yelled, and raised his wand.
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*Short ranging is my own name for the smoke traveling/apparating that appears in the movie. also know as Short Range Apparating.
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Ah yes, it killed to write this chapter! I knew I had to kill someone off, but who? And I chose... *don't kill meee*
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