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JeshieRAWR
11-28-2010, 07:54 PM
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Dedicated to LilyLunaGinnyPotter (http://www.snitchseeker.com/members/lilylunaginnypotter-97810).
Hello everybody, I'm Jess! I'm back once more to present to you one of my favorite pieces and I hope you enjoy it!
Disclaimer: Everything in this story belongs to the fabulous J.K. Rowling.
Voices
After the war, Molly Weasley had a thought. Why not a little celebration party that it was over? Yes, that was what she would do. A party to celebrate; it was almost a month and yet, Molly Weasley had other plans than to just mourn. Tonight would be the celebration.
Four hours later, the tent, the decorations, food, and the dance floor were all set up to celebrate. All the while, Harry and Ginny are out in the garden of Molly Weasley's owning. The couple are sitting upon the old, white, and cracked bench that sits in the middle of all the beautiful flowers; the only thing that could make them happy at this moment of time. You only hear the silent whisper of wind that bristles along through the grass and flowers, blowing it from side to side. No word is spoken between the two, seemingly, it makes them feel comfortable. No noises, no screams, no voices who ask them for help. Their job is done from the war and nothing could ever change that.
"Harry, did you hear that? From over there?" Ginny Weasley asked, lifting her head from Harry's shoulder, to look more closely at the flowers. It had seemed that something had been hidden in the flowers.
Harry looked towards Ginny at first; her beautiful red-orange hair glimmered in the sun and her eyes, red; from crying, but that color of her eyes...was shimmering. He shook his head to focus upon the subject that Ginny had brought up. "No need to worry, Gin, it's probably a rabbit or some type of animal." He said leaning his head back upon the bench, closing his eyes.
"Harry Potter...my friend...saved me." Dobby's voice had been heard in his ear, waking up Harry to be faced with...nothing. He turned towards Ginny and she seemed to be looking down at something, a rabbit. So it was a rabbit, but where had Dobby been? "Did you hear that? That voice?" He asked.
Ginny gave him a quizzical look. "Hear what? Are you running a fever?" She asked, putting a hand to his forehead and shaking her head. "No fever." She muttered, confused. The former Gryffindor sighed; he guessed it was normal to be hearing voices after a war that had been going on for so long.
"Are you alright, Harry?" She asked, worried. A rustling of flowers was heard once more and the rabbit had vanished, leaving Harry in his thoughts. "I'm quite fine, Gin." He said nodding, staring at the spot where the rabbit once was.
{I n d e x}
♥ Chapter 1: Voices (http://www.snitchseeker.com/romance-stories/heartbeats-pull-me-through-sa13-77751/#post9971092
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♥ Chapter 2: Longing (http://www.snitchseeker.com/romance-stories/heartbeats-pull-me-through-sa13-77751/#post9978733)
♥ Chapter 3: Competition (http://www.snitchseeker.com/romance-stories/heartbeats-pull-me-through-sa13-77751/#post9992713)
♥ Chapter 4: Amusement (http://www.snitchseeker.com/romance-stories/heartbeats-pull-me-through-sa13-77751/index2.html#post10004408)
♥ Chapter 5: Heartbeat (http://www.snitchseeker.com/romance-stories/heartbeats-pull-me-through-sa13-77751/index2.html#post10089782)
Lollipop!
11-28-2010, 08:31 PM
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Love the banner, love.
Dedicated to LilyLunaGinnyPotter (http://www.snitchseeker.com/members/lilylunaginnypotter-97810).
You're so sweet, Jess.
[I]Voices
I lurve this title. It's really interestttiing.
After the war, Molly Weasley had a thought. Why not a little celebration party that it was over? Yes, that was what she would do. A party to celebrate; it was almost a month and yet, Molly Weasley had other plans than to just mourn. Tonight would be the celebration.
Way to go Molly
"Harry Potter...my friend...saved me." Dobby's voice had been heard in his ear, waking up Harry to be faced with...nothing. He turned towards Ginny and she seemed to be looking down at something, a rabbit. So it was a rabbit, but where had Dobby been? "Did you hear that? That voice?" He asked.
Oh my gosh. -le :gasp:-
:wah?:
"Are you alright, Harry?" She asked, worried. A rustling of flowers was heard once more and the rabbit had vanished, leaving Harry in his thoughts. "I'm quite fine, Gin." He said nodding, staring at the spot where the rabbit once was.
Rabbit? I think not.
I want MOARRRRRRRR.
Love Lily. *luffs on ye:loved:*
potterobsessionist
11-28-2010, 08:39 PM
mieeep, cutest little story ever! :loved:
Four hours later, the tent, the decorations, food, and the dance floor were all set up to celebrate. All the while, Harry and Ginny are out in the garden of Molly Weasley's owning. The couple are sitting upon the old, white, and cracked bench that sits in the middle of all the beautiful flowers; the only thing that could make them happy at this moment of time. You only hear the silent whisper of wind that bristles along through the grass and flowers, blowing it from side to side. No word is spoken between the two, seemingly, it makes them feel comfortable. No noises, no screams, no voices who ask them for help. Their job is done from the war and nothing could ever change that.
luuffed that, well written and just sooo true! *__*
Harry looked towards Ginny at first; her beautiful red-orange hair glimmered in the sun and her eyes, red; from crying, but that color of her eyes...was shimmering. He shook his head to focus upon the subject that Ginny had brought up.
i'm a hermione/ron shipper but i'm also an harry/ginny shipper and that part made me 'aaw' :')
post more soooon? :woot: :loved:
love josefin :glomp:
malfoygrl
11-28-2010, 10:50 PM
After the war, Molly Weasley had a thought. Why not a little celebration party that it was over? Yes, that was what she would do. A party to celebrate; it was almost a month and yet, Molly Weasley had other plans than to just mourn. Tonight would be the celebration.
Ya for Molly!! :)
"Harry Potter...my friend...saved me." Dobby's voice had been heard in his ear, waking up Harry to be faced with...nothing. He turned towards Ginny and she seemed to be looking down at something, a rabbit. So it was a rabbit, but where had Dobby been? "Did you hear that? That voice?" He asked.
Dobby!! <33 But....Wha?
I luffers this story!! :) Post more soon?
xxSara
Jesse_Longbottom
11-28-2010, 11:51 PM
I like ur story so far my friend SarahLestrange says she has read ur stories in the ast and that u r an amazing author so I can't wait to read more :)
!Jesse!
JeshieRAWR
11-29-2010, 09:21 AM
Responses;
Status: Newest chapter will be posted on December 1st
Love the banner, love.
Lilyyyyy! :tackles: Why thank youuuuhh, I try my best. ^_^
You're so sweet, Jess.
Moi? You're the one who came up with the idea in the first place and I had to owe it back to you. Anyways you deserve it! <3
I lurve this title. It's really interestttiing.
xD It's not thaaaaaattt creative. :whistle:
Way to go Molly
Hehe, I love writing Molly's character. :D
Oh my gosh. -le :gasp:-
:wah?:
...I dunnoooooooo :shifty:
Rabbit? I think not.
Uhmmmm...yes? :D
Love Lily. *luffs on ye:loved:*
Awwwww luff you too! :glomp:
I want MOARRRRRRRR.
&& You will definitley get MOARRRRRRR. ....soon. :shifty:
mieeep, cutest little story ever! :loved:
Pshhh, noooooo. *shoves you away and then takes you back* Haha, thank youuuhh! <3
luuffed that, well written and just sooo true! *__*
I think I'm running out of thank you's already. :xd: :glomp:
i'm a hermione/ron shipper but i'm also an harry/ginny shipper and that part made me 'aaw' :')
Hehe, well you'll certainly like this story because from beginning until end I'm pretty sure you'll be awwing. xD --See it's funny now to me, but probably not to you 'cause you don't know what it is. Oh goshhh, I really need to go to sleep. :P
post more soooon? :woot: :loved:
love josefin :glomp:
Yes of course! :)
:tackles:
Ya for Molly!! :)
Yayyy! :) Molly always seems to brighten up a dayyy.
Dobby!! <33 But....Wha?
Uhmm, maybe it's nothing...I mean...pshhh...I only like Dobby and miss him so that's why I put him in there..pshhhh.....it's nothinggg... :whistle:
I luffers this story!! :) Post more soon?
xxSara
Awhhhh thanks! <3 :glomp: && Yushh I will. ^_^
I like ur story so far my friend SarahLestrange says she has read ur stories in the ast and that u r an amazing author so I can't wait to read more :)
!Jesse!
Awwwhhh tell her I said thanks and thank you as well! It truly means alot when I get more readers. :)
:glomp:
bonnieginnyfan1
11-29-2010, 09:50 AM
JESS! :loved:
I love your story! H/G all the way!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :pfd:
Give me updates all of the time! :woot:
Lily<33
11-30-2010, 03:16 AM
Hey there Jesse told me u had another story up yay! :)
and he also told me u said thanks....so ur welcome :)
*lauren*
Mordanyes
11-30-2010, 08:54 AM
Awesome story! Loving your writing! Interesting start! ;)
JeshieRAWR
11-30-2010, 10:50 PM
Responses;
Status: Newest chapter will be posted on December 1st
JESS! :loved:
I love your story! H/G all the way!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :pfd:
Give me updates all of the time! :woot:
:loved: Awwwwhhhh thank you, luffffff! <333
Hehe okay I will! :tackles:
Hey there Jesse told me u had another story up yay! :)
and he also told me u said thanks....so ur welcome :)
*lauren*
Haha yesh I dooo! :yes:
xD Thanks once again! It really means alot that you've been reading my stories and are back for this one! <3
Awesome story! Loving your writing! Interesting start! ;)
Thank you so muchhh! Hope you'll like further posts! :D
SoftballBlondie4
11-30-2010, 11:26 PM
Awesome story! I love anything that has to do with Harry and Ginny!! <3
JeshieRAWR
12-01-2010, 12:04 PM
Awesome story! I love anything that has to do with Harry and Ginny!! <3
Thanks! :D Well hopefully you'll like this story! :glomp:
UPDATE COMING NOWWW. :pfd:
JeshieRAWR
12-01-2010, 12:07 PM
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Longing
Off to the interior of the Burrow, you are faced with Miss Hermione Granger, sitting upon the ground, outside of Mr. Ronald Weasley's room. The girl knocks on the door, tear stains bury her face, and she mutters the words, "Open the door, Ron. Please." And yet, the silence carries on throughout the house except for her constant mutterings. The others are out getting ready for the party or already at the party, waiting for it to start. The brunette hoped that Ron would come out soon though; she couldn't bare handling this on her own. And yet, they haven't even talked about that kiss yet; in the Room of Requirement.
"Open the door, Ron. Please. I can't do this by myself, I need you." Hermione pleaded, it wasn't usual for her to beg. She usually could handle things on her own but not now. Not with her parents still in Australia, hopefully, and with all the tension from after the war.
She heard a quiet sniffle on the other side of the door and Ron's voice. She had thought he was talking to her but she had been mistaken, he was just putting more enchantments upon the door to lock himself in...or lock her out from him.
Hermione stood up and banged on the door as hard as she could. "I. Can't. Believe. You. Ronald. Weasley!" She screamed, running down the stairs; into Ginny's room, passing Molly Weasley who tried to help her; but Hermione just ignored her.
Molly Weasley walked up to Ron's room, disturbed by Hermione's ignorance of her. "Ronald, I will be expecting you at the party in ten minutes. If you're not there, you will be breaking some people's hearts." She said, mostly implying Hermione but her own as well. She hadn't seen her own son in a week. "Especially someone dear to you."
Cassiopia Malfoy
12-01-2010, 04:12 PM
Ooh! I love it Jessluff! Awwww, Harry and Ginny are so cute!
Oh my word.. DOBBYLUFF! :faint: it.. it can not be true! Pleaase don't be dead even though you were buried!! hehe
Ronald.You.Are.A.Git! Hermione, come here for some glomps!
Molly, you go ahead and hit Ron upside the head for me please!
I love both the chapters equally, amazing job!
-Gabberz
potterobsessionist
12-01-2010, 04:48 PM
ohmydraco you didn't disappoint me here either! :faint:
She had thought he was talking to her but she had been mistaken, he was just putting more enchantments upon the door to lock himself in...or lock her out from him.
good written, and ooooh i can feel both their pain! *sniff*
"Ronald, I will be expecting you at the party in ten minutes. If you're not there, you will be breaking some people's hearts."
Pff, this story broke my heart :P luffed it :yes: :loved:
keep me updateeed! :D :bow:
*waiting for a PM* <33
love Josey
Morag
12-01-2010, 06:03 PM
NEW READER!
Aww I love your story! Harry/Ginny ones are my favourites!
Poor Hermione. Ron can be such a git sometimes!
PAMS!
Soph xx
SoftballBlondie4
12-01-2010, 07:06 PM
Love it! Poor Hermione! =[
More soon please!!!! <3
bonnieginnyfan1
12-01-2010, 08:50 PM
I love it, I love it, JESS! :loved:
Keep up the brilliant work! Your so good at writing!
:r/hr:
malfoygrl
12-01-2010, 09:28 PM
Aw!! I hate Ron and always have!!
Poor MIone!! :( *glomps Hermione*
She can do better then that stupid git!
PAMS PAMS!!
xxSara
Lily<33
12-01-2010, 11:08 PM
Awww...
*says in best Molly voice*
RONALD BILLIUS WEASLEY! YOU STOP BREAKING HERMIONE'S HEART THIS INSTANT! HOW DARE YOU!?! SHE IS FAMILY! DON'T YOU DARE TURN OUT TO BE THE GUT-WRENCHING DISAPPOINTMENT THAT PERCIVAL DID! NOW, YOU COME DOWN TO THAT PARTY AND STOP IGNORING EVERYONE!!! such a disappointment....*sigh*
sorry had to get that out of my system...anyways I loved the post :) I think Ron is shutting her out bcuz he is scared of rejection, but I'm not entirely sold on that idea....
Much love...
*lauren*
Mordanyes
12-02-2010, 07:53 AM
Loved the chapter! ;)
Lollipop!
12-02-2010, 07:57 PM
Well done JessLUFF! Loved it. *smothers*
JeshieRAWR
12-05-2010, 10:34 AM
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Competition
Ron's heart felt empty. Almost all of the people he loved had died, the one in mind was Fred; his brother. He missed his brother's laughter and the occasional pranks that Fred would make upon him. The crying had stopped long ago, but the memories were haunting his mind. His mother's words on the other side of the door made him feel even guiltier. He hadn't come out yet because he felt as if he left his room those memories that were special would be left behind. However, he knew that he would have to come out sometime, his heart belonged to Hermione and if he didn't do something about it now, there wouldn't be any time.
The red-haired man fixed his tie and apparated outside on the spot. Sure, he could walk there, but right now, he didn't really want to get in a distance of Hermione. When she was upset, it was quite hard trying to get away from her, especially if she was mad at you.
He walked into the tent where the music was blasting, people dancing, and celebrating. He noticed Ginny at a table by herself and he tilted his head. Where was Harry at? He walked over to Ginny and took a seat beside his sister. "Gin, where's Harry?" He asked, looking around the crowd of people to find him. "Oh, just getting us something to drink." Ginny answered, facing the people who were dancing.
Suddenly, Ginny faced Ron with a surprised look. "Wait a minute; you're out of your room!" She announced, hugging her brother. "Where is Hermione? I need to go tell her! She was crying the entire time about you and complaining about that kiss," Ginny started to go on a ramble and before Ron could stop her she saw Hermione. "Hermione!" She called her over.
Ron frowned at his sister and looked over at the girl he loved. Hermione Granger. She was dressed in a dark blue shimmering gown, she seemed absolutely gorgeous. His mouth went into a smile as he saw Hermione walking over to them, but then someone was in the way. Ron stood up to see who it was, to see who the person that was dancing with Hermione now. It was, no, you've got to be kidding me, Viktor Krum.
Lollipop!
12-05-2010, 10:55 AM
OH NOOOO!
Hermione! You can't have! That's the WORST thing to do when you're upset. *lower lip wobbles*
I NEED my Ronmione!
Loved the chappie Rose. (heheheheh:shifty:)
Love,
ChristinaLilEh xxx
potterobsessionist
12-05-2010, 12:35 PM
oooohmyyyyydraco!! :faint:
loved the beginning when you get to read about Ron's feelings :yes: get to understand him a bit :loved:
oh and what a cliffhanger giiiirl! :eek: stupid krum, get your butt back to durmstrang where you belong. humph.
PAMS! :D
<3 josey
malfoygrl
12-05-2010, 03:35 PM
Oh noooo!!!
Shame Hermione!! No Krum!! Ron is the one you needdd :loved:
I loved itt :)
PAMS!!
xxSara
bonnieginnyfan1
12-05-2010, 08:33 PM
Noooooooooooooo!
Krum can't dance with Hermione! :cry:
Poor Ron! :console:
I love this chappie, Jess! :loved:
PAMS! :pfd:
♥Stef♥
SoftballBlondie4
12-05-2010, 09:39 PM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Not Victor!
LOL as much as I liked them together in the 4th movie, I thought they were cute and I'm quite shocked they didn't have him in the 7th movie at the wedding like the book had, I much rather have her with Ron.
I WANT MORE. Keep it up =] =] I love this!!
hermione19
12-05-2010, 10:39 PM
new reader and i love it!!!!
PAMSPAMSPAMSPAMSPAMSPAMS!!!!
P.S....PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jesse_Longbottom
12-06-2010, 08:13 AM
Hey Krum? GO HOME! Okay? Thanks man.
Okay Ron floors clear, just remember. Duck.
Great posts! Loved it! :)
!Jesse!
Morag
12-06-2010, 11:35 AM
Aww Poor Ron! :(
I'm sure Hermione will see sence soon enough!
Great Chapter!
PAMS!
Soph x
PallaviLove_HHR
12-07-2010, 06:42 PM
woohoo!!!! great one there...
I wud love to have ron get back his girl and specially when he ahs upset hemione I mean The- Hermione..it must be fun!!!
keep it and good going
PM me for the next part..eager to read on
JeshieRAWR
12-09-2010, 12:39 AM
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Amusement
Ginny watched along with Ron as Viktor Krum came and took Hermione to dance with him. She felt bad for Ron, but then again she felt as if he needed a wake up check. She shrugged and stood up, walking over to the back of the tent where Harry was. "Harry, what took you so long to get a drink?" She asked him, curious. Harry shook his head back and forth, focusing his attention back to Ginny. "Oh, yeah, sorry, Gin. Just watching Mr. Lovegood and Luna dance, it's very...unique." He chuckled. "I guess I had gotten caught up into it. It is quite amusing."
"What's quite amusing, Harry?" Luna's voice popped in, as well as her body in the middle of the two; making it quite awkward. "Oh, these...gnomes that I found outside of the Burrow. They happen to dance with each other and I haven't seen anything like it." He answered quickly. Harry took a glance towards Ginny to help, but she shrugged, not knowing what else to say. Ginny thought his story was quite good. "Gnomes? They must have a disease of some sort, you know, they are known to bite." Luna said, nodding.
"Luna, your father wants a picture with the moving trees out in the yard. Care to join us?" Rolf asked, nodding towards Ginny and Harry.
"Oh no, we're fine. We must stay in the tent or my mum will have a fit." Ginny said, genuinely and waved to Rolf and Luna.
"What a nice couple." Ginny said, receiving a laugh from Harry. "They really are though."
"While you think like that, care to join me for a dance, Miss Weasley?" Harry asked holding out a hand for hers. "I would love to, Mr. Potter." Ginny said with a smile and they headed onto the dance floor.
Mordanyes
12-09-2010, 07:06 AM
Love it!
bonnieginnyfan1
12-09-2010, 08:42 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwww! :loved:
That's such a sweet chappie, Jess!
Keep up the great work! :D
Come What May
12-09-2010, 05:31 PM
New Reader!
I love this story :) It consists of short well written chapters! :) Perfect for a college girl like me who has no time at all to be reading long chapters! I wish I did though.
Anyways! Excellent story so far :) Keep it going!
potterobsessionist
12-09-2010, 07:14 PM
Oh I loved that chappie as well :yes:
am waiting for Ron to confront Krum though, I have to admit :shifty: Weasley is our king! *sings* :woot:
Post soooon :bow:
<3 love Josey
SoftballBlondie4
12-09-2010, 08:58 PM
Awwwwwwwww!! <3
Soooo cute. I love it.
I loove looove when my boyfriend addresses me by my last name like that. It's so romantic.
So this scene is super adorable. They should have do a scene like that in the first part of the 7th movie!!
Keep it up!!
MORE SOON PLEASE =]
malfoygrl
12-09-2010, 11:39 PM
Awwwwwwwww :)
I love it! Luna is so awesomee :D
Excellent! PAMS! PAMS!!
xx Sara <33
Cassiopia Malfoy
12-10-2010, 12:51 AM
Jess's Writing+Harry+Ginny=AWWWWWW! So adorable :)
Luna is adorable as well, an amazing character to like, and the gnomes hehehehehe, that is very amusing.. Love the update!
-Gabbeh
JeshieRAWR
12-12-2010, 11:17 PM
Hey everybody! I won't be updating today because I looked up the next post for you guys and I have some editing to do. Hope you don't mind if the next post is delayed for a few days. ^_^
Thanks for reading/commenting! <333
Jess(:
harita
12-14-2010, 05:42 AM
wonderful posts Jess...:)
Lily<33
12-18-2010, 06:45 PM
great post Jess :) so glad Luna and Rolf came into the picture :)
*lauren*
Morag
12-18-2010, 10:09 PM
I like how you put Rolf in a the end. Not many people put Luna and Rolf together.
Cute Chapter!
PAMS!
Soph xx
bassoonbuddy
12-27-2010, 05:38 AM
Aww how cute!!<3
JeshieRAWR
01-08-2011, 06:02 AM
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Heartbeat
Hermione hurried over to Ron, practically running over to him, and taking his hand. "Get up; I need you to come with me." She said pulling on his hand as she ran out of the tent. Ron followed behind her, wondering if she turned into some crazy woman or something. Usually, at this time Hermione would have expected an obstacle of some sort, but luckily there was none and she bursted through the Burrow, taking Ron into the living room. She just stood there in silence, her arms crossed, staring at Ron as if she was wanting something. After a few minutes of silence, seeming as Ron is oblivious to everything, she blurted out something, something wonderful.
"I love you." She stated. "I love you, Ronald Weasley and I can't believe you had me outside your door; day and night, waiting for you to come out and you didn't. I can't believe it, but yet I can because you... are you. And yet, here I am, still to this day, I love you and what do I get? Nothing. Nothing! So tell me how you truly feel. Tell me!"
Ron sighed, in relief and just in general. He hated when she demanded something out of him, then again it seemed like he should have told her this before as well. "I love you too, Hermione. However I probably love you more than you will ever. I didn't...I didn't come out of my room when you were there because I felt as if I ever left my room the memories that I have in my mind will just disappear or something. I don't know what I was thinking, but in the end I knew that my heart belonged to you and if I needed to do something about it, that time was now." He said taking a deep breath of air into his lungs and letting it out.
Hermione was about to interrupt but Ron put his hand upon her lips, quieting her. He took one of her hands and put it on the left part of his chest. "If you died in the war, I wouldn't be able to live, Hermione. I've been wanting to say this for a while..." He said, but then was interrupted by a heartfelt kiss upon his lips by Hermione. He responded back with all the love he had in him and they broke apart. Ron shook his head and kissed his beloved on the cheek, continuing on with his little speech;
"In the end, what matters the most in life, to me, Hermione, is that you're alive. Hermione, your heartbeat pulls me through."
The End.
I just wanted to say that I want to thank everybody for reading this little short story of mine and commenting.
It means the world to me when people read my stories, so look out because I might be posting another one soon.
I hope you enjoyed it and thank you once more. <3
Jess(:
Cedric
01-08-2011, 06:28 AM
OH, OH! Jess, I just stumbled upon this and I love it! Great cliffhangers - you really know how to pull in the readers! xD
Post more sooooooooooon. :)
bonnieginnyfan1
01-08-2011, 10:29 AM
Aw, Jess! :glomp:
I was really looking forward to a lot more. I can't wait for you to start a new FF! :pfd:
Brilliany work! :D
♥Stef♥
potterobsessionist
01-08-2011, 10:39 AM
Aw this was lovely *__* and so romantic *swoon and points to my tag*
what I loved most about aall the chapters was the final line :loved:
"In the end, what matters the most in life, to me, Hermione, is that you're alive. Hermione, your heartbeat pulls me through."
- really?! *squeal* fabolous dear just fabolous :)
don't forget to PM me when you start another FF alright? *eyes you*
:glomp: Jojo
Cassiopia Malfoy
01-08-2011, 02:50 PM
Awwwww! Adorableness :) So sad it's over though, it was awesome Jessluff! Ron's speech was amaaaaazing! Happy Endings make me reaallly happy :xd: I LOVED IT!
-Gabbeh
malfoygrl
01-08-2011, 08:19 PM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!! :loved:
I'm sad that this is the ending but I love tis ending! It's so sweet!
You shall have to tell me when you write another FF :D
:glomp:
xx Sara(:
Mordanyes
01-08-2011, 11:17 PM
Amazing ending! I loved it! ;)
Morag
01-09-2011, 09:01 PM
Hermione, your heartbeat pulls me throughAww that was so cute.
Thank you for such a great story. I'm going to miss this so much!
I'll be looking out for your next FF.
Soph xx
hermione19
01-10-2011, 03:39 AM
Love it!!!!
But I'm said that it's over :(
crookshanks_kitty
01-16-2011, 04:23 AM
I'm probably very late in reading this story, but I liked it all the same. I love your descriptions and the fact that you keep your chapters short but still informative. Keep up the great work. :glomp:
SoftballBlondie4
01-18-2011, 09:30 PM
Before I comment I'd just like to say sorry it took me so long to read this!! After christmas break and then my spring semester started I was super busy and I got a job. BUT BLAH. FInally had time to read this and...
IT IS AMAZING!!!
Yay. About time Ron told her. I mean goodness! lol
Amazing story! TOo bad it had to end :/
But great job =]
:val5::paw1:
JeshieRAWR
02-03-2011, 02:58 AM
Thanks guys for all the comments, I really appreciate it and thank you for reading my story! :glomp:
:tackles:
Lollipop!
02-03-2011, 02:49 PM
I loved this story so much. Thanks for dedicating it to me, meh luff. :loved:
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