Originally Posted by bonnieginnyfan1

Beautiful chappie!!!

Originally Posted by Connie

I love this line! It's so simple, but so insightful, for an eleven year old. Albus is sweet to be so understanding. I wonder why she is acting that way too. She hopefully will become more trusting with her new friends.Some advice. The way I look at it is, when someone sits down to read, it's to relax and be entertained by what they are reading. They have the option to read for just a few minutes or a few hours. It's up to them. I don't think your posts are to long. I think they are a length that is considerate to someone who doesn't have a long time to sit and read, which is probably the best length to post. I understand that comments mean a lot to writers, but try to relax and enjoy your story. I know I am. If your views didn't gradually climb, then I might be concearned that maybe something needs work. But, you've got 264 views in just 15 days. That seems very impressive to me! Be confident in your story telling, and your writing will be successful. I love your story. You're really doing a great job of it. (If you don't want this advice, let me know, and I'll edit it out without hard feelings)