Woot!!! Kris, this is an excellent story!!!
:up: :up:
Parts that I like-y...
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Winky woke up and when she caught sight of Hermione, she screamed and ran from the room.
Why? Does Hermione have bad breath or sumfink???
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He shot a nasty glance at his assistant and slapped her in the face with the trout.
Dobby... so evil!!! Me like-y!!!
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It was supposed to be haiku, but the only resemblance to those poems which sound like a sneeze (Buffy the Vampire Slayer reference) was that it followed the 5-7-5 syllable rule.
All of the haiku's were great... And I noticed that you're a huge fan of Buffy...
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Dobby immediately hid his hands behind his back and looked defiantly at Hermione, “You is saying we should do what we want and I want pink fingers!”
Yes!!! Let Dobby do what he wants!!!
Don't forget tofix your hair, Dobby!!!
I'm unofficial but I welcome you to our magical world...
*drags Cass, Otus and Zy to read this fic*