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hotleopardmama Didn't know we couldn't use Canon names, but with a name like Leolaine Swiftkneazle, I guess I'm lucky to not hafta worry about my character. I'll definitely file that away for future characters, though. It's getting more fun with every post!
I am finding it hard to be concise while I'm feeling out my character's personality, behavioral patterns, family dynamics, and history. Long-winded here, for example, while I was trying to flesh out some of Leolaine's background:
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Any pointers on keeping it simple? Or is it okay the way I'm doing it?
This isn't really the place to get feedback, you should take a look in the
Hogwarts RP Information Forum There is plenty of help to be found there.
Additionally, you should join school RPG addicts so you can access the school chat, you'll find a whole lot of RPers willing to give you feedback. to join the addicts you go
here in your user cp and scroll down and select "~Fan Club: School RPG Addicts" then you'll be able to access
the Haven