Hey Allison. Very nice work. I keep wanting to comment on things but there is so much, I better not. I found myself holding my breath just like I did in the book. I couldn't believe Hermione cheated like she did in the book. But, I'm thinking MAYBE... she was going to say something to Abby about Mundungus, and it was exactly when Cormac needed to block the Quaffle, and in her excitement she said Confundus instead of Mundungus.
I was wondering something though, all kidding aside;
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Hermione turned and looked at me with panicked eyes. "Abby, you know Cormac is going to win this in the long haul."
Would Abby have seen Ron loosing if Hermione hadn't changed the future just then? I mean, does she see the future the way it turns out? Or is what she sees the future as it could be? I don't know if I'm making sense as to what I'm asking, so if I'm not then never mind. My mind is far away today. My husbands Grandma died this afternoon, and I'm not thinking clearly. But I do know that I loved your chapter. I'll be watching for your next.
