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Old 06-19-2011, 11:20 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Kennedy Stark
Fifth Year

Ministry RPG Name:
Aubrie Cosima Hampson
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Originally Posted by crookshanks_kitty View Post
Ooh I really like this one-shot about Hermione. This part especially, which made me laugh:

It's just the way she said it with anger that makes it funny. I love your writing by the way.

Well she does have a point!

OMG! I was totally taken by surprise at this last bit. Hilarious! And it's even funnier since she's happy that Malfoy said "You're not perfect," as if that's a good thing.

Awesome one-shot! I love your style of writing. And it's nice to see something new as I haven't read many ffs that are narrated in the present tense. Good job!
Thank you my awesome first reader. I'm glad you liked it.

Haha I am a great Dramione fan and decided to put that concept in the end
Thanks so much for reading.

Sarah
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