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crookshanks_kitty Ooh I really like this one-shot about Hermione. This part especially, which made me laugh:
It's just the way she said it with anger that makes it funny. I love your writing by the way.
Well she does have a point!
OMG! I was totally taken by surprise at this last bit. Hilarious! And it's even funnier since she's happy that Malfoy said "You're not perfect," as if that's a good thing.
Awesome one-shot! I love your style of writing. And it's nice to see something new as I haven't read many ffs that are narrated in the present tense. Good job!
Thank you my awesome first reader. I'm glad you liked it.
Haha I am a great Dramione fan and decided to put that concept in the end
Thanks so much for reading.
Sarah