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Old 04-25-2011, 03:34 AM   #29 (permalink)
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Janet Lynn Gordon
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Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions

Hey Allison. I read this when you posted and was afraid you'd post another chapter before I got to comment on this one. As I was reading her conversation with Dumbledore, I was thinking of questions to ask when I was finished reading, but you already asked them in your story.
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So these dreams, or should I say memories, were real, but what did they mean? And why was Dumbledore unable to tell me now? Kicking a stone that had crumbled off the wall I let out another grunt of frustration. As usual I went to Dumbledore for answers and instead left with even more questions.
I just loved the way you wrote the ending of this chapter. All of it, but the ending was my favorite part, starting with, and going to the end;
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"And you say you don't recognize the boy in the dream?"
Now I hope you are able to write soon. I'll be watching.
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