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| | Ye Olde Home for the Olde Poem Finished poetry threads come here to rest and be remembered. | Vote for SS! 
09-25-2005, 11:07 PM
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| | |  Werewolf's Moon - Poetry Sa9+
This first poem is to go with my name: Werewolf's Moon.
I stare up at the sky
Waiting,
Anticipating
Night to fall.
Watching the clock
As the minutes slowly
Tick away.
My palms sweat,
My heart pounds,
As the sun sinks
Below the horizon.
I watch the moon rise,
As if taunting me,
knowing that I'm
To transform.
I look up,
My breath gets short.
I let out a loud howl,
I no longer have control of myself.
Hunchback,
Fur,
Sharpened teeth.
I am now
Wild!
Free!
I can do as I please!
Willingness
To take the blood of another.
To make them suffer
The same
Horrible fate as I do
On the Werewolf's Moon.
I know, I stink at rhyming! That's why I didn't try! This was Remus' first full moon after being bitten. Please, tell me what you think! I came up with this off the top of my head so, I really don't mind if you say it's horrible... it probably is! | |
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09-25-2005, 11:57 PM
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| | Bundimun
Location: In the pages of the books in which I so despritely cling. Join Date: Sep 2005
Posts: 21
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I liked it and just because it doesn't ryme it doesn't mean it's bad poetry. | 
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10-30-2005, 10:31 AM
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Location: Somewhere alone reading "A Zombie Survival Guide" by Max Brooks. Join Date: Sep 2005
Posts: 362
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sara Salazar
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Poems don't have to ryme! It can be free verse! But it was realy good!  It put you right into Mooneys point of veiw! Lupin is hot! | |
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11-22-2005, 05:44 PM
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Location: vienna, austria Join Date: Oct 2005
Posts: 418
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like it | |
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02-03-2006, 02:33 AM
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|  Library WriterSirius AuthorLeftySS100 TriumphantChimaera
Location: Signing off SS for good…blame the workload and the hectic-ness of life. I’ll miss you all…:cry: Join Date: Jun 2005
Posts: 7,213
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Eunice Murray
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I like and write poems that rhyme and those that don't, and this one's great! I love the idea and the way that it is written. Beautiful.  | |
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02-03-2006, 02:35 AM
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| | Plimpy
Location: Fighting off orcs and Death Eaters with Legolas,Wolverine, and Ginny. Join Date: Oct 2005
Posts: 1,061
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Nikky
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love the poem! | |
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02-16-2006, 02:24 AM
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| | Bowtruckle
Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 241
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it was very good
but the part of the blood stuff sounds sort of EMO | |
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02-16-2006, 05:10 PM
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|  Not a Flake. AgelessFwooper
Location: leaving a trail of stalker treats for all my stalkers*shifty* Join Date: Nov 2003
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Katie Minnson
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I think you did a great job. Keep up the nice work.
- Angel | |
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02-17-2006, 04:49 AM
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|  La La BicyclePadfoot’s squeaky ballShrake
Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 12,808
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Poems are unique... they're for expressing feelings and doesn't need to rhyme...  your poem!  | |
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04-07-2007, 02:09 PM
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| | Bowtruckle
Location: well...my nose was in the middle of DH, but I finished it, apparated here and idk where my nose is.. Join Date: Dec 2006
Posts: 250
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ambora
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I loved it! and i agree with many of the people here - I write poetry as a hobby and alot of it doesn't rhyme. I loved the point of view, it was original and not many others would think of it! I think it was wonderful!
And I have my own poem thread also, and I was wondering if you wanted to come see - it's in the second page, Tales of Hogwarts Hearts. I would like to know what you think of my writings.
Happy writing! ::waves:: | |
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