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| | Ye Olde Home for the Olde Poem Finished poetry threads come here to rest and be remembered. |  Have a very Harry day!! 
08-22-2005, 10:47 PM
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Location: Somewhere over the rainbow, way up high. Join Date: Aug 2005
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|  Typical poetry of a 14yr old poser.
I made a mark on my arm today.
With a razor blade, sharpened by hate.
Only to make the pain go away.
This seems to be my fate
I watched the blood flow down my arm.
That left a trail of pain and tears.
I see their faces, etched with alarm.
How horrible their fears.
I can hear the panic in their voices.
And the desolation that followed.
Take your time on making choices.
Don’t see the words I’ve swallowed.
I need you….. | 
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08-26-2005, 05:44 PM
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Location: Somewhere over the rainbow, way up high. Join Date: Aug 2005
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Is everything as it seems?
The people we cherish,
The people we look up to
Are they REALLY gone?
Are they really lost?
So far away from what they used to be?
Do they ever leave?
Do they ever truly leave us? | |
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08-26-2005, 05:49 PM
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Location: Somewhere over the rainbow, way up high. Join Date: Aug 2005
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He looked so strong,
So amazing, so invincible.
Unbreakable…..
As he struggles,
I look upon with horror.
This illusion has been shattered.
I no longer can see the wise
Unbreakable man I used to.
As I look upon with horror,
This amazing man.
Looks so broken. | |
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08-26-2005, 09:24 PM
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Location: I live in a bread wrapper. Good for me. Join Date: Jun 2005
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omg your poems are good.. | |
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08-26-2005, 11:40 PM
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Location: Somewhere over the rainbow, way up high. Join Date: Aug 2005
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Thanks! | |
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09-06-2005, 10:59 PM
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Location: Somewhere over the rainbow, way up high. Join Date: Aug 2005
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My heart,
still pounding beneath my breast,
broken so many times,
has no visible scars.
My eyes,
Darting back and forth,
Blinded by tears,
Still see through the pain.
My soul,
Lost beyond the veil of my heart,
Tainted, and impure,
Prays for salvation.
My thoughts,
Racing inside my mind,
Unsure, and imperfect,
Are my greatest weapon.
Are you ready for the final battle?
Last edited by *~_Hellblink_~* : 12-26-2005 at 05:07 PM.
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09-10-2005, 10:40 PM
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|  Not a Flake. AgelessFwooper
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Katie Minnson
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Great job on the poetry. It's really nice and written well. Keep posting and adding!
- Angel | |
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09-11-2005, 03:48 AM
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|  You say Weird...
I say OriginalAshwinder
Location: haunted by life Join Date: Jan 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Afia
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wow. i really like your poems. there's so....sad....but kinda beautiful....
~*Afia*~ | |
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10-24-2005, 11:42 PM
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| Library WriterSirius AuthorLeftySS100 Triumphant Chimaera
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Eunice Murray
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Wow, you're poems are really deep and intense. I can really see the emotion in them. They're great  | |
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11-09-2005, 08:52 PM
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Location: Somewhere over the rainbow, way up high. Join Date: Aug 2005
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Thanks for the comments everyone. I haven't been on in awhile, but, thanks all the same. | |
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12-02-2005, 11:52 PM
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Schuyler Anderson
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wow, It think your poetry is amazing. | |
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