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Old 08-31-2003, 03:00 AM   #1 (permalink)
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When you feel a bit drunk in your head,
like the world has pushed a burden in your chest.
Do you bother to stop and listen to it,
do you even take a rest?

Or is it you are afraid?
Do you think you cannot sleep?
I know I can't this night,
but I don't crumple in a heap.

It's just like you don't know,
or you do not care.
But where ever you are going,
know I'll always be there.

You feel a bit ill now,
and you don't know what to do.
But I'll stay by your side,
I'll stay good and true.

My fingers are growing weary,
my head hangs slightly down.
I trusted you, you traitor
But all I can do is frown

I can't help what happened to me,
You should be ashamed.
But dont do it to anyone else
or prepare to take the blame.
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Old 08-31-2003, 03:04 AM   #2 (permalink)
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That was good, very deep... :flowersmile:
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Old 08-31-2003, 03:08 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Anger Crazy (this poem does not rhyme)

It's there,
I feel it.
I know where it is,
I can find it, I know I can.
Let me get rid of it for you?

It's gone now,
But it'll be back.
I can't stop you or it again.
You know I can't.
You'll have to do it for yourself.

You like it?
That's a change.
I can't help it if you do,
But I wouldn't like it if I were you.
You're anger crazy, you are.

It's coming again.
Your muscles are tensing.
I can tell by your strained neck.
You'd kill me if you weren't there and I wasn't here.
I know you would.

You'll strangle me now.
I can feel it.
You hate me.
You're anger crazy.
I don't like you.
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Old 08-31-2003, 03:52 AM   #4 (permalink)
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SnitchSeeker.com

Why do I go on this primitave web site?
There are thousands to choose from,
But I choose this one.
It's like an addiction.
You can't deny, you like it,
After you first try it.

Millions of flashing signs,
Moving emoticons,
People making bonds.
It's like a drug.
You can't seem to have enough,
Even if the going gets tough.

People make different signatures.
Trying to show themselfs off,
Or some old place for a laugh.
I can't believe I've become so sad,
As to visit here myself,
Spending parents wealth.

I stay on here though,
My eyes can't part the screen.
It's an awful sceen.
Looking at some teenager who cannot part.
As if it were their love,
Like it were the person above.

Snitchseeker.com
It's a strange place here,
but when you've been in every place.
It'll start boring you. Soon.
It's not now,
You can't see how.

But you'll be begging to leave,
when there's nothing left to do,
there seems to be no you,
anymore. Just the screen.
It's hard to imagine,
But it will happen.
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Old 09-03-2003, 09:17 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Those were really good! I liked them a lot - they were like amazing - and i mean that as in way beyond the ordinary!
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Old 09-05-2003, 12:49 PM   #6 (permalink)
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The Laughing Smile

It's laughing at me, mummy.
Dad, take it away!
It's laughing at me.

It's smiling at me.
Smiling whilst it laughs.
Take it away, daddy.

You're going away.
Don't leave me, Daddy.
Mummy?

Why? It's laughing.
I didn't do something funny.
Daddy? Mummy?

It's a laughing smile, mummy!
But you don't listen to me.
You've gone with daddy.

I'm alone with the laughing smile.
Daddy's gone. Mummy's gone too.
I'm alone with the laughing smile.

It's laughing at me, mummy!
Dad, take it away!
But you've gone already
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Old 09-05-2003, 01:27 PM   #7 (permalink)
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that last on, the laughing smile, is so sad. It sounds like a little girl saying it. She's all alone OMG! I can't believe any parent would ever do that
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Old 09-07-2003, 10:53 AM   #8 (permalink)
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I Look into your eyes

When I look into our eyes,
I see love, hatred, despair
What do you see in mine?
A life of worry and regret?
A life of sorrow?
Of wonder?
I can not stand it
What do you see in my eyes?

When I look into your eyes,
I see your love.
Who do you love??
Do you love me?
When I look, the warmth
Spreads into me.
I can assure you,
I love you
When I look into your eyes
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Old 09-07-2003, 10:55 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Its a song
In my head
Get it out
Get it out

It wont leave
Sad song
Its singing
get it out

I hate that song
Kill it
Get it out
Get it out
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Old 09-08-2003, 07:24 PM   #10 (permalink)
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those are amazing! and i mean really seriously totally spritually, gramatickally!
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Old 09-19-2003, 11:47 AM   #11 (permalink)
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A song/poem for my sister

Rachel sat,
on a porch, sat she.
Who was she waiting for?
Was she waiting for me?

No, it was draco
/peagreen/tom,
and she didn't
have to wait long.

She said: Come to me baby,
baby right now,
Come to me baby,
I'll always love you somehow.

tom looked at her,
a twinkle in his eye.
that made any normal girl,
faint or sigh.

but rachel smiled back
her stare remaining true
and from both mouths
they uttered 'I love you!'

they both said: come to me baby,
baby right now,
come to me baby,
I'll always love you somehow.
Come to me baby,
baby right now,
come to me baby,
I'll always love you somehow.
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