Someone's out there
I really care
To know who knows
How life goes

I've lost quite a bit
I've lost galore
My parents didn't quit
Went friends and more

I try to try
to know all
not to cry
when in the hall

I think of things
Of many stress
My heart doesn't sing
My heart doesn't press

I must kill
Or I must die
My life is frail
And I can't hide

When no one talks
When no one breathes
When no one walks
When no more trees

When death comes near
When there is pain
Someone's here
To clear the rain

So someone's out there
I really care
To know who knows
How life goes

But when I die
And my life ends
The story of I
lives among my friends

What do you think? this was written like a diary entry by Harry

This one is my favourite out of the other ones I've created!!! :sorcerer: :scarejulie:

OMG!!! that's so awesome u definatly need 2 post more!! :flowersmile: :flowersmile:

That pritty kool

Its good but, I thinkyou can also make it better, like maybe write a poem and use metophors and also some oxymorons (dictionary.com will help).

I love your poems