well i just started posting poems so enjoy. Im not a perfect poet but i love writing poetry so rell me if this is good for a first poem thanx.


My first poem
the first poem i'v writen
my words don't seem fittin'
some much work redone
working right under the sun
looking for inspiration
throwing work in the trash bin
i dont feel satisfied
the words dont seem to glide
after a long time of lurking
my words seem to be working
now that im proud with it done
poetry for now will be more fun


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i hopes its ok

This is a good first one. Write more.

well thanx here i go
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Fear
People fear of many things
even as odd as a women sing
we fear of clowns,spiders and bears
all these give us a scare
but also we fear of change
from things that woulnt range
even though what we fear most is mere
its obvious that it is fear.
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well there u go

well no one posted so any ways its still the same day and i thought up another poem so here it is
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[u]back
now you are back
you were the one i lack
and now you are finally here
i dont have to shed my tear
i have longinly missed you
our love has always been true
now that you are back
i have no one to lack
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there u go

Ahhhhhhhh no one has replies this makes me sad but ill write one soon

lol I know what you mean I'm all the way on the second page and only three people have replied. I have three pages too....lol. But like I say I'm not doing it for other people it's for me and my soul.

Anyways those are good.

thanx well so far are the only one replying The Boogeyman so ill try to think up another one

great poems, i needed to check you poems since you are a reader of mine and they arefantastic, i love your first one

heres a new one
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greatness

there is so much greatness in the world
theres enough that u will endore
though somtimes theres not enough
dont worry thats just a bluuf
though not evryone one has it
greatness for them is just not a fit
even though the world needs more
theres enough for us to enjoy
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cool i like writing poetry on here its fun lol

lol ^ me too, great update

well nothings coming to me rite now but ill think of one soon

That greatness poem was
really comforting!
Its good for someone's who's under pressure..
hehehe...

Hey Mark you never told me you did poetry lol so do I lol i also did it for school i had to recit it in front of other kides

Hey mark hers one i just wrote
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Fellings
Every day I cry inside
No one seem to know
I just lock the door and hide
The fellings that are so

Why dont i just tell?
The reason i cant seem to find
I am no longer well
Thes thoughtes, they hunt my mind

So I right them down,
In poetry you see,
And that is how i get around
The Fellings inside me

So read along
you might relate
or not really care
but those smart well relize
thes fellings every one can compare

I hope you like it

it's good mark. keep writing more

hey tera thats was a great


andy
~X~

thanks you guyz

Tonks7 why dont u send more poems?????

hers i poem i wrote early this yera i just found it today and couldent believ i wrote itwell here i go
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The Mirror
When i look in the old glass mirror
I do not like the reflection I see

I see sorrow, and death in her eyes
I hear her long, heartbracking crys

Can't take no more or it would appear
Suddenly I hear a lovely symphony
I became happy smiling but near
Near to defeat it reached out and saved me

I look no longer afraid of what i see
I just see smiling and happy me

its gud.keep postin

lol ok

Life
To many people its a game of luck
to others its a punk
to most people its worth enjoying
but life is very going
and we all need to savore it
or your life will be a fit.

That was good mark