that is really good!! do you like this one?! its relle not that great though :ermsmile:

when trouble stirrs
i will be there to mend the herd
to help
and save
in any way
i possibly can
so a new day dawns
and an old one sets away
but i will be there
when anyone goes astry

good!! heres another one.

Thro dying suns and midnights dim
Yet teachers gone and faith grown dim
Whatever dark the world may send
Still firends meet at journeys end

it doesn't relle rhyme but thats ok :ermsmile:


death by dark
life by light
someones passes
when someone joins our world
but do not fear the darkness
there will always be light on the other end

awesome...how was mine????? :sorcerer:

poetry doesn't have to rhyme.. its an expresssion of feelings... and Lupin's Daughter, I REALLY like you poem! Gymchic's is good too!!!

yours was great!!!

I've got a short one for ya:

Lonely nights are all I know
Some spared of mournful tears
But tonight I cry, salty tears pour down my face
Stream down my face
Flow into the river of my soul

which one?

that is relle good! how is this one


when i look at you
my heart seams to fly
like an owl in the sky
soaring and gliding
sky high

when you hold my hand
my heart seams to drift off to another land
just me and you
and the big blue
with little white shapes
and even dimonds too

when your lips touch mine
i seam to fly
a mile high
into the sky

but when you leave
i feel all alone
like a stary cat
on the road
begging for food
and a home

so don't leave me all alone
i don't think i will make it on my own

*applauds Gymchic* very good!

and Lupin's daughter, I liked this one alot... describes how I feel sometimes:

Thro dying suns and midnights grim
Teachers gone and faith grown dim
Whatever dark the world may send
Still friends meet at journeys end

it is supposed to be stray cat. shot i hate it when i mess up!
oh and thanks

I love all these cool poems. Here's one:

I thought you cared about me
Tears stream down my eyes
I thought you loved me, so now I cry.
If Love was here
and Hate was there.
I don't think I would be anywhere.
So if you love someone,
here's my advice to you:
A loved one might break your life in two.

oh thanks ::blushes::

GinnyHPfan
that was relle good!!

thanks!

yeah awesome!!

ok here is another one

if there was someway i could die
in your arms i would fly
like an angel in the sky

i there was someway i could cry
without you there
i might die
you hold me tight
and protect me with all your might

i don't know what i would do
with out you there
i might be through( you know she would be dead)

::pulls fake tear from her eye::


buetiful!! no really good!

::grins::

Thanks*blushes* :wub:

okay, I wrote this about 2 weeks ago, and i'm really nervous about posting it, so here it goes:

A hole in my heart,
A big, gaping mass.
It shattered to pieces,
Like fine, thin glass.

This could not be right,
This could not be true.
My throat was tight,
That December day, 2002.

As I stared into the casket,
Memories flashed by.
She had once put eggs in my basket,
But that was before she had to die.

But the memory that stood out,
Was just the past day.
I had screamed, cried, and shouted,
Like a horse stuck in clay.

Six bullets in her body,
Two in her chest.
My step-dad was naughty,
The doctors tried their best.

If I could hold her one more time,
That would be enough for me.
She was beautiful, sweet, and kind,
I'll miss you, mommy...

Its a poem about my mom, Last year (Dec. 15 2002) my second step-dad shot her to death. (I had another step dad, but she got divorced, then married to the person who killed her later on...) I like writing poems about my mom, and I feel kind of strange posting it here, but I just felt like doing it, so please tell me if its good... :flowersmile:

I'm sorry your mom died, you have a great talent to write poems,and I'm sure your mom really loves you and shes looking down from heaven each day glad that you are her daughter.

wow, thank you! My teacher thought it was really good too!
And I know she's glad I'm her daughter, because out of the four kids she had, she only meant to have me! The other ones she got pregnant without wanting to...I wont go into details...(ewww..)