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| | Ye Olde Home for the Olde Poem Finished poetry threads come here to rest and be remembered. | Vote for SS! 
11-02-2003, 02:30 AM
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| | Horklump
Location: Delta, BC, Canada Join Date: Jul 2003
Posts: 59
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Though several minutes seems like an eternity
I will remember your stillness
Your love
Your heart beyond the soul
Sometimes, the memories fade away
And I miss you
Need you
Those memories are what I should hold to
When you leave to do your stuff
I nurture your wounded heart
I carry your pain like it's my own
I stand beside you day after day
When I watch you play on broomsticks
I hold my breath with every move you take
I am like you
I am with you
When your done
I congratulate you
I hug you
I missed you
Now, many years later
I am still with you
I may be gone
But I am still with you
When you cry
I lend a touching shoulder
For you to cry on
As I plan your life
Now you life is ending too
And I await your return
Like I did when I was with you
Alive
We will reunite
Day after day night after night
I miss you
I love you
My dear
I'm with you
My Oliver
I'm with you | 
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11-02-2003, 07:05 PM
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| | Fwooper
Location: Call me Jessers or Jesserbear. Icon by Me. Join Date: Dec 2002
Posts: 9,363
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Aura Devereaux
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Its good, touching | |
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11-07-2003, 10:41 PM
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Location: neverland Join Date: Jul 2003
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its really good *wipes tears from eyes away* | |
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11-07-2003, 10:43 PM
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Join Date: Sep 2003
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awwwww!!!!!!! that is wonderful 'n' v. touching!!!!!!! | |
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11-11-2003, 11:43 PM
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Location: At your neck! Join Date: Apr 2003
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nice job nice use of words | |
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11-11-2003, 11:55 PM
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Location: Lodge Farm, Surrey Join Date: Sep 2003
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thats really pretty. I like it. | |
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11-12-2003, 02:28 AM
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sorry I have to say it again it's good | |
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11-13-2003, 03:45 AM
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| | Bundimun
Join Date: Oct 2003
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I love it, it's really touching... :flowersmile: | |
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11-15-2003, 09:30 PM
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| | Horklump
Location: Delta, BC, Canada Join Date: Jul 2003
Posts: 59
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I hope ya'll like it!
Chocolate Cherries, PART 1
Our favourite was Chocolate Cherries
Really sweet and secret
Like our hearts and love
They were always great
But ever since our life's renewed
The Chocolate Cherries spell broke
The love ended
As did our time together
Our Chocolate Cherries lay forever
In the past
Our Chocolate Cherries forever
Lie in our future too | |
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11-17-2003, 08:30 PM
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Location: At your neck! Join Date: Apr 2003
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very good. i like it its a bit on the sweet side, not something i usually write, but you make it work really well! nice job, keep up the good work! | |
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