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| | Ye Olde Home for the Olde Poem Finished poetry threads come here to rest and be remembered. | Vote for SS! 
09-01-2005, 03:59 AM
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| | Doxy
Location: NY Join Date: Mar 2004
Posts: 439
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lucy Winters
First |  Nikki's Poems
These aren't very good. I just tried writing some one day and this is all I got. lol.
I shut myself away.
The door to my soul is locked.
My heart is forever enclosed in a box
Where no one can see
The way I really feel.
Not a soul can hear
these trapped, deafining songs
that I sing. When I scream,
Not a soul can hear
Even when my throat burns.
All the pain, seems to never end.
This bleeding inside me.
I've come to realise
that it wasn't even real
It was all in my head...
Here's another one.
Forever lost in your eyes
The windows to the soul.
I see differently
in a world of your own.
You take all the fear
and all the pain
and lock them deep inside
throwing away the key.
Hmm... yeah, not very good... ah, well. It was worth a try. *tee hee*
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09-01-2005, 07:24 PM
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| | Doxy
Location: NY Join Date: Mar 2004
Posts: 439
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lucy Winters
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Aww... nobody likes my poems? Hah... just kidding.. I know the yare horrible.
Here's some I did today for fun.
This one is for my puppy Razzy:
You Just a Razzle-Dazzle up my world.
Razzy Dazzy
You just a Razzle Dazzle up my world.
When it seems
that I'm down and grey
You come wagging your tail
happy as a sunshine ray
Razzy Dazzy
You just a Razzle Dazzle up my world.
You are the joyful bliss
in my gloomy tommorrow
I love your wet kiss
with not a trace of sorrow.
Razzy Dazzy
You just a Razzle Dazzle up my world.
Haaha.. this one I did for fun:
Golden Song
Ding Dong
The pendalum swings
The whole world stops
but the clock moves on.
Singing that Golden Song.
Hello time
the arrow's pointing to you
Giving our world
It's rightful due.
The wooden frame
the stars will sing
to the merciful abyss
where the pendelum swings.
Singing that Golden Song.
Kinda stupid and corny. Ah, well..
This is for my fishies in my fishtank:
Shining like stars
covered in glitter
they swim through the plants
that never wither.
The water tickles
These sparkley fish
and splashes about
in their joyful bliss.
Resting at the bottom
of there peaceful dome
are colorful pebbles
making them feel at home.
But even with the comfort
they still wish
to be on their own
just like regular fish.
They still feel trapped
even with these
plastic treasure chests
they wish they were free, oh please...
Books- I love books, so I wrote this. *tee hee*
Their many pages,
their glowing look
makes me feel
like I am a part of the book.
When I read,
I read for fun.
There is no telling
when I'll be done
For reading puts me in
an enjoyable state
it takes me away
to a different time and date
The feel of all the pages
puts a smile on my face
I never want to finish
in such a haste.
Haha... hope you like!
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09-02-2005, 07:44 PM
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|  Tom's Shnuggle
Colour Crazy
Prongs' Left Hoof
Bonnie's Curls-ezClabbert
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I guess I'm officially your first reader!  They're all very good Snooty Snitch, but it would be better if you gave them names. Keep posting! I want more!  | |
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09-06-2005, 12:12 PM
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| | Doxy
Location: NY Join Date: Mar 2004
Posts: 439
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lucy Winters
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Haha, I gave, like, 2 of them names... I'm bad at that. Oh, well, I'll try. lol.
Thanks for reading! I am very happy! Yay. I didn't think anyone was gonna reply. ha. | |
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09-06-2005, 07:20 PM
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| Tom's Shnuggle
Colour Crazy
Prongs' Left Hoof
Bonnie's Curls-ez Clabbert
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Originally Posted by Snooty Snitch Haha, I gave, like, 2 of them names... I'm bad at that. Oh, well, I'll try. lol. | No, the names that you gave were perfect. Add more soon --- or else! 
Thanks for reading! I am very happy! Yay. I didn't think anyone was gonna reply. ha. Quote: |
Originally Posted by SnootySnitch
Books- I love books, so I wrote this. *tee hee*
Their many pages,
their glowing look
makes me feel
like I am a part of the book.
When I read,
I read for fun.
There is no telling
when I'll be done
For reading puts me in
an enjoyable state
it takes me away
to a different time and date
The feel of all the pages
puts a smile on my face
I never want to finish
in such a haste.
Haha... hope you like!
| This is such a great poem!  When are you gonna write more??
Last edited by Jessica : 09-06-2005 at 07:24 PM.
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10-10-2005, 04:40 PM
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| | Doxy
Location: NY Join Date: Mar 2004
Posts: 439
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lucy Winters
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Ha. I guess I'm working on one, its not finished though. So, I'll tryyyyyyyyyy as hard as I can. Woo!! YEah, well, i need ideas. If you've got any, help me pleaseeee.
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10-29-2005, 06:43 PM
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| | Hippocampus
Location: In my house... Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 284
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I really like your poems, you're an excellent writer, keep posting! I would try to give you some ideas but I've got a little case of writers block. Anyway, please post more soon!
Edit: Oh no! my computer was on my friends username!  eh, anyways this is really from FireboltFreak not HocusPocus1313.
Last edited by HocusPocus1313 : 10-29-2005 at 06:45 PM.
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10-29-2005, 06:55 PM
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| Tom's Shnuggle
Colour Crazy
Prongs' Left Hoof
Bonnie's Curls-ez Clabbert
Location: In the Middle of Now Join Date: Nov 2004
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Hiya Firebolt Freak! So you and HocusPocus are frnds? Cool! Snootu Snitch, something on friendship plz. I'm tired of waiting. | |
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11-19-2005, 04:51 PM
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| | Flobberworm
Location: nonya bizness Join Date: May 2005
Posts: 24
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I love poetry and I really like these poems they're sooo cool I especially love the first one | |
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12-07-2005, 10:51 PM
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| | Doxy
Location: NY Join Date: Mar 2004
Posts: 439
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lucy Winters
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Wow it's been a while! Sooo Sorry! School and stuff, but heres that one on friendship. It's dumb...
My Best Friend
A helping hand
in a time of need
a shoulder to cry on
when the world is full of greed.
You're my best friend
what would I do without you?
You help me through the bad times
and through the good ones too.
You lend me a smile
when all I have are frowns
You help me through
All of my ups and downs.
You're my best friend.
Here's another poem:
It's almost like a fairytale
it's happening, but it doesn't feel true
a moment when the world stops
and all i see is you.
It's like a smile
in a world of frowns
A circle of life
that has it's ups and downs.
And then you fade away
Away from existence, away from pain.
You are no more to hold
and it feels like I'm going insane. | |
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12-07-2005, 10:53 PM
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| | Doxy
Location: NY Join Date: Mar 2004
Posts: 439
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lucy Winters
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If only you'd wake up and see
My love is breaking through
climbing higher, reaching out
just to take hold of you.
I want you to see
My love as it breaks free.
Caressing you, touching you,
without really meaning to... | |
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12-08-2005, 08:07 PM
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| | Doxy
Location: NY Join Date: Mar 2004
Posts: 439
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lucy Winters
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Well, Here's a love poem.. stupid guy. I've been writing these alot.. haha.
Someday My Love
Someday My Love
The truth will break free
and we'll be together
Just you and me.
Someday My Love
You'll begin to realize
That we were meant to be
Just open your unseeing eyes.
And then we can finally breath
the words that were meant to be said
We'll hold on to each other
Until the very end.
Someday My Love. | |
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12-08-2005, 08:12 PM
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| Formerly: XoxXtinaxox09  SBFC Promotion Officer
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Join Date: Jan 2005
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Awesome updates!
They're really good.
Keep it Sweet and simple 
~~RQT | |
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12-08-2005, 08:17 PM
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| | Doxy
Location: NY Join Date: Mar 2004
Posts: 439
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lucy Winters
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My love for you is out of control
I take a glance at you
My breathing stops, my heart plunges
My eyes linger onto your face
hoping to stay
My love for you is out of control.
I look the other way
Afraid of my feelings,
but wanting to feel.
I can't help it, I'm attracted to you.
My love for you is out of control.
Your personality is just right
I laugh when I want to cry
I find amusement in the strangest things you say
anything you say.
My love for you is out of control.
Everytime I think of you
My heart skips a beat
I seem to float
And I can't breath
My love for you is out of control.
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12-08-2005, 08:19 PM
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| | Doxy
Location: NY Join Date: Mar 2004
Posts: 439
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Lucy Winters
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Awwh, thanks xoxxtinaxox09!!! | |
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