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04-23-2005, 03:00 PM
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First Year |  Nabiya's Original Poetry and Lyrics
Here are a few poems and songs i have written. I've decided to post my work after some of my friends told me to share it..so,here goes everything! Please tell me what you think of my work, I appreciate any feedback.
too young for love
They say she's too young
She hasn't seen the world
That's what everyone says
When they meet that girl.
She pretends not to care
but inside she's dying
To her it's not fair
because of their talk
her love is dying.
She knows what she wants
She knows that it's true
She's set her standards,
what she wants is you.
She doesn't know what's good for her
that's what people say
She should wait,and save it for later
the words shes told everyday.
She can't take anymore
She's made up her mind.
She's lain down to sleep
and her soul you can't find.
this poem is a bit morbid..but i dont know,i just started writing it and all these words came out of nowhere..hope you like it.
xxx
nabs | 
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04-23-2005, 03:55 PM
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| | Ghoul
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hey dats gud.keep postin.... | |
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04-24-2005, 04:42 AM
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thanks..i have my first reader! *squee*
here's another poem i wrote,its a it different from my usual type.i guess it's because i was really angry at a few people at the time
Go away
You don't understand
What you don’t believe
and you don't believe
What you don't see
There are things I cant say
I cant put in words
You would hear them
If you just paid some attention.
But then you accuse
You point the finger
You don’t want to accept
that it's you who was wrong.
There's not much I can do
So, I take it all in one stride
Try to ignore the feelings
and push them aside.
I'm not a stranger
to hurt and deceit
but what makes me angry
You got away with it.
So this is goodbye
I can’t take anymore
Get on with your life
and leave me alone.
xxx
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04-24-2005, 09:20 AM
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| | Doxy
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If they're song lyrics id imagine the song really catchy..
Though dark.. but catchy..
Err.. you write songs? | |
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04-24-2005, 10:10 AM
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i write the lyrics,and my best friend composes the music. it's cool,the one i posted above isnt really meant to be a song,but i can see it happening. hehe. eirun,you're from malaysia? so am i! | |
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04-24-2005, 01:33 PM
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| | Ghoul
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cool nabiya,keep postin.... | |
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04-24-2005, 01:39 PM
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| | Doxy
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Originally Posted by nabiya i write the lyrics,and my best friend composes the music. it's cool,the one i posted above isnt really meant to be a song,but i can see it happening. hehe. eirun,you're from malaysia? so am i! | Yeah, im from malaysia!
well, thats really great!
ive been searching for someone to do these stuff with me
but so far ive got my sis's bf doing music n all, n thats fine enough, i guess. | |
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05-04-2005, 01:48 PM
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hehe..never give up..i'm recording my demo cd next week..hmm..*crosses fingers*
next poem:
Past Times
Sitting in a corner
All alone
Thinking of the times
Thats long gone
Thinking of your eyes
And feeling your touch
But among all were your lies.
How they hurt so much.
Can't believe you did that
Worse...I didn't see
How much you were hurting
Pretending to love me
You should have just said
How you really felt
About our love that was
Already dead.
I would have walked away...
But what's done is done.
That's what they say
Whats done is done.
Just look forward to a new day
xxx
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05-05-2005, 07:07 AM
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| | Ghoul
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hey dats gud...keep postin. | |
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05-05-2005, 07:15 AM
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| | Doxy
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demo cd! i wanna listen, if thts possible.. lol..
well, thts great! | |
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05-22-2005, 04:20 AM
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hehe..dont woz,the moment i get it perfect,i'll let u hear it.
next poem: A love like no other ‘Ere this night is over I shall go to the moon There I’ll see my lover Don’t fret love We’ll be together soon. Jumping o’er the rainbows Hand in hands like children Where the moonbeam goes There our destination… To a place untouched by man Our love, we’ll make it stronger It’s possible, I’m sure we can We’ll make it last forever.
xxx
nabs
Last edited by nabiya : 05-22-2005 at 04:26 AM.
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05-27-2005, 11:13 PM
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|  Billie is my ManDugbog
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Those are very good!  | |
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05-27-2005, 11:33 PM
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|  desires irresistible waterCrup
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 Hey Nabs!!! I hope all is well with you. Good work!!  | |
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06-03-2005, 10:33 AM
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hi serena! whats up? | |
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