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08-05-2003, 05:19 AM
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Location: In my own little world, care to join me? Join Date: Nov 2002
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These are my poems enjoy | 
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08-05-2003, 05:24 AM
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Location: In Joel Maddens arms Join Date: Dec 2002
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Ohh Manda your poems are so great! i hope you write more of them | |
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08-05-2003, 05:30 AM
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I'm glad you're posting your poems again, Manda. :flowersmile: | |
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08-05-2003, 05:35 AM
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Friends
When I look back I see us,
We were happy and so close,
What happened to those times,
The times I need you most,
You choose to run away,
You choose the evil Vs. good,
The hurt I feel is unbearable,
But you enjoy every sip of torment,
Every breath of hurt I taste,
If you never cared I wouldn’t mind,
But you were my friend,
Through all the lies.
© Amanda DiMartino/Crazy4wood | |
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08-05-2003, 05:37 AM
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Death
I hate my life
I want to die
To leave this world
And go buh bye
Why must I stay
And suffer still
When I could be in heaven
Free of pain
The pain of parents
The pain of ex-friends
The pain of life in whole
The reason for my fall
I don’t know if I will stay
Or if I will go
But please remember my friends
I will love you still
© Amanda DiMartino/Crazy4wood | |
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08-05-2003, 05:39 AM
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Pure
in the meadow,
all green and light,
there lives a creature,
purer then light
the creatures white,
almost clear,
and when you get up close,
you never fear
its the angel of good,
and the fear of evil,
don’t be mean to it,
and it wont be mean to you
the creature is a light,
a pixie of sort,
it will give you strength,
and help you cope
so if you dare,
ask for its prayer,
its the good in all,
though you don’t know at all
©Amanda DiMartino/Crazy4wood | |
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08-07-2003, 08:47 PM
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**applause**
Encore Encore!
(you know I love your first one! My favourite!!!) | |
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08-07-2003, 09:02 PM
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Hmm... This is interesting. And ABSOLUTELY FABULOUS!!!
Heartbreak
Do you know what it feels like,
What it feels like to be in love,
Then have your heart ripped out,
And crushed into a million little pieces
It’s the feeling you get when you have failed,
You don't know exactly what you did wrong,
And you don't know what you did right,
You just know you did something wrong
You felt the ground fall underneath you,
You think the worst has come,
But what do you do,
You try to get back up but cant,
Well when you do get up,
Wipe off your knees and look towards the future,
There’s more to life then heartache,
And you feel all better again.
©Amanda DiMartino/Crazy4wood | |
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08-08-2003, 06:23 PM
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Location: About 2,000 miles from here Join Date: Dec 2002
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Wow Manda! That last on is Fantasamastic!!! (try saying that five times fast!) | |
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08-08-2003, 06:27 PM
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your poems are aswesome!! keep writing!! :sorcerer: a rose for u :rose: :rose: | |
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08-09-2003, 10:45 AM
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thx but i thinkim gonna stop writing...im glad you all enjoyed them | |
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08-09-2003, 10:52 AM
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Oh Mandas don't give up *cries* They're the awesomeness! | |
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08-09-2003, 10:56 AM
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thanks but i just dont think io want to write anymore, besides i can always send you my new ones if i ever write any ever again, my life is falling apart and everyone doesnt wantto hear about it so i am not gonna write...sorry | |
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08-19-2003, 10:51 PM
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ok guys...i might start up again but my aunt is on her deathbed and in a coma and i dunno what im gonna write about so here goes nothing
I see your face,
I hope you are happy,
That you can finally be free,
Free from all the pain
I will miss you forever,
even though I never thought I would,
I know that you loved me,
Even when we argued
So I hope you go peacefully,
And leave us with love,
Look down on us,
From way way above
And remember I love you,
And that I really did care
You'll be in my prayers forever,
And stay in my heart aswell
This is dedicated to my Aunt Rose | |
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08-19-2003, 10:54 PM
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ok a happy poem now
Roses are red,
Violets are smirkle,
Cheez-its are great,
And so are you.
lol i know that was suppose to sound stupid..haha | |
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