There's something about your poems that I like

thanks,

Love

Have you ever been in love?
I don't mean like a young love,
Like a crush! No not that something more,
I mean have you ever been in love love?
Where you've almost reach the verge of stalking?
And maybe passed it?

I have,
And the problem is,
The guy I like likes me back!
Your probobly sitting there thinking "Is she insane",
The truth is I'm not!
We arn't compatible,
I have one class with him,
And wow i feel like wringing his neck sometimes!

I feel bad because of it!
Why does love have to screw with your mind so?
Why does it have to mess your life up!?
Almost make it a "living Hell"
Thats my life for you!

Down to earth

Down to earth
What I need to be,
Strait from birth,
What I want to see

Call me when your down!
Don't you even speak!
Don't you start to frown
I'll call you a freak

Don't swollow that jagad Pill
Don't let your heart chill
Let your heart fill
And don't wait until

You are down to earth again
You are down to earth again

Hey Guys,
I might not be writing for a little while, 2 weeks or so, I am in my schools production and from wednesday the fifth and for the next to weaks. I will be practicing alot and in my spare time away from practice doing cheerleading and guitar! Also, i have to fit homework in there at sometime!

Man, those are good
I like the one called 'Dad'

There used too be a poem titled 'dad' not Daddy but'dad'

And I can't seem to find it

Did you replace it?


Maybe I didn't see it here

Sorry I found it.

I looooooooooooooooove that poem

It's okay, im only on a little while. more poems after the 21!

The Harry Hermione one was really good. :flowersmile:

very very nice

that last one seems very very emotional

nice job tho, nice formulation

deep

These are great

thanks they are really "slam"

Cry
Cry and let the tears fall
It sounds so Simple!
But is is it really?
As easy as it sounds?
You would think, yea...just will yourself!
WELL!? No, i have to be phisically hurt to cry!
You ask me why!?
I'll just reply
Because I fear crying

The Light
The light it shines through
A veil of black,
A layer of ice,
And the ice cracks,
What is going to happen?
Once the light is back again?
What will be What will be!
My eyes they burn and the tears,
The want to flow,
But just right know,
Thats a place I can't go!

wow, these are really good. keep it up! :flowersmile:

thanks it's been months since i wrote a poem here. because of school...eeks....exams are OVER!

Stolen
I hate this word,
Stolen, stolen, stolen!
Have you ever been robed?
I have! MY favorite CD and was stolen!
I HAVE SUCK RAGE!
I must get it out!
STOLEN STOLEN STOLEN!

I love it... i so totally know how that feels!!! UGh.... it's unfuriating!!!

Invisible
Am I invisible to you?
Does it look like you can see the wall behind me when i am there?
Am I really here?
Are you really there?
What Is going on?
I can feel the tears burning in my eyes!
I can feel the heat,
Starting to rise
I can feel the pressure start to build
I can feel the pain,
The Pain of being invisible!
Harry Potter has to have a cloak to be invisible
I don't I was born with It,
You never know,
Becuase I am invisible to you...
But to me I am real
And this is what you get
I can't promise you some fake girl
Some spaz is what i can be
But I know that I can be
The girl I want to be
when I want to be
But its just that no one will notice
When I die
No one will care
When I cry
Why do you ask why?
Why ask why?
Because I am invisible!

The Flames
The Flames grow
They Lick and tickle
They don't hurt
They just blaze
Fore ever and ever
Just love to keep them blazing
My flames are ice
They do not grow,
They shrink
They die
They are smuldered
No love here
I feel so un-loved
I feel so un-wanted
I feel so burdened
I feel so cold
So freezing cold
If you want love
I don't know how to give it
I don't know what it feels like
I just know how to act,
How to seem
Romantic
But my flames are sheer ice

Blue Destiny
I look over at you
Looking at me
This is so weird...
This is so confusing

I was the one
Who liked you
I dind't think...it was mutual...
Is it mutual?
Or is it fake?

Am I being weird?
Or am i being sane?
I do not know

Know this is like
A blue destiny
But i do not know
If it is ment to be
Do you like me?
Or is it just me?

Here is a song I am writing:

Songs: By, Jesse S. Hoffman of Blonder than Hell,
Title: Waiting

V: Waiting so long to go home, my heart is beating so fast, a plane fly’s in I stand up and see it is some one-way French delight

C: When will it come? When will I ever be free? When do I get out-a, this darn place! When, when I ask you W-H-E-N!

B: When oh when?

V: It’s been too long, my hope almost gone. I wonder if anyone else from de Gaulle air-ways is waiting for this same darn flight! I doubt it! It’s been too long! MY HOPES ALMOST GONE!

C: When will I get away? When will it come? When will I ever be free? When do I get out-a, this darn place! When, when I ask you W-H-E-N!?

B: Out of this darn place!

V: Too many nights gone by and many, many too many days… Finally someone is coming my way…has it come for me? Am I finally free! Just too long for me to be here just too long to sit in this place! I am running low on cash it looks like I haven’t taken a bath in my life!

C: When will it come? When will I ever be free? When do I get out-a, this darn place! When, when I ask you W-H-E-N!?

B: When, oh, when?

(Talking security person): Madam? Are you ok? What plane are you waiting for? You…look ill…
(The person in the room, they are yelling): I have been waiting too long! I can’t fell my bottom! I can’t afford a car; I have too little money to spend every day! So I go and get a filling thing!
(Security): Sorry I can not help you! I need a time in days, months, weeks you know of how long you have been here *starts to write down everything the person is saying*
(Person): This is so dull! My life is a waste! How long has it been since 1993?
(Security): Oh, that’s 10 full years! Your name, age, and erm…we will get you some food and clothing…
(Person): I just want to go home! I want to be away from darn old…here! I WANNA BE FREE!

V: Now its time to say my good byes! Ha, I just want to say “NEVER GUNA MISS YA!” Never gunna go on a plain again, never gunna set foot on or near an air port! Now its over! For good finally I am free, free and away!






Song: The Bush
V: Even dumber than, oh, than an ape! You got to be kidding me! Can someone not know? That they got the lenses of a binocular still on when they are trying to use them! How dumb can they get!?

C: Oh dumb, dumb! Dumber than Dumb! They can be as dumb as they want! I once saw a picture that said I see dumb people! Ha!
V: You can be a jerk to me, you can throw away they key and, wait…you never locked me in because you don’t have any brains! Well, I guess you have some enough to scratch your tiny head!

C: Oh dumb, dumb! Dumber than Dumb! They can be as dumb as they want! I once saw a picture that said I see dumb people! Ha!
V: Into money and controlling oil! What do you want? To rule the world? Well, darn… if so, you are as dumb as a bush! You little shrub! You mustn’t have listened in world history! Because all the other people wanting world domination failed, and died! And if you are trying to make America the best nation! STOP WHERE YOU ARE! ‘Cause all the big nations fall and then, there government fails! So what’s up with you? Are you sitting there sucking your thumb!?

C: Oh dumb, dumb! Dumber than Dumb! They can be as dumb as they want! I once saw a picture that said I see dumb people! Ha!
V: I am getting all my anger out today saying what looser the president is! He said some things that are very dumb! Taking away PBS! What’s your problem? PBS is a “public’s” station so go and hide in a tree! What’s that? Can’t climb a tree!? Oh, don’t worry go on an elevator… wait trees don’t have elevators! Be a good boy bushy-poo is probably something you mummy called you!

C: Oh dumb, dumb! Dumber than Dumb! They can be as dumb as they want! I once saw a picture that said I see dumb people! Ha!
V: Don’t be a jerk! Don’t make your nation revolt around you! Don’t make all the children of this world think you are a worthless person! So go and a clean up the darn mess you made of the world! As they said in the black eyed pea’s song, where is the love, they say: When go abroad to fight terrorism when we have it right here! America it ain’t the best! I am a citizen and am ashamed of that! So go and never come back!

C: Oh dumb, dumb! Dumber than Dumb! They can be as dumb as they want! I once saw a picture that said I see dumb people! Ha! Guess whose head was faded in the back? Easy, easy I would say! George W. Bush’s the little shrub himself!

V: Don’t make your citizens revolt! Don’t make your people go away! Don’t make America fall! Don’t make this any worse! DON’T BE A JERK! Ok, ok just don’t! I don’t think America Is perfect! April 11 2003 a cool day for America! The students revolted! Had a walk out and if you keep it up we will make it annual!

C: Oh dumb, dumb! Dumber than Dumb! They can be as dumb as they want! I once saw a picture that said I see dumb people! Ha! Guess whose head was faded in the back? Easy, easy I would say! George W. Bush’s the little shrub himself!

Swallow
Swallow hardenough
And maybe it will disapear
Cry long enouhg
And maybe it will become no fear
Screan Loud enough
And maybe it will change the world
Swallow your fears
Is what i am told,
Swallow your emmotions
Is what I am told
Swallow Swallow swallow
Its hard to swallow down
The emmotions that you have