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Old 07-12-2005, 07:18 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Hufflepuff The Indian's poems


hey guys

I love writing strong poems this is some thing like the song we don't need no education
this is one of my first poems...
(third actually)


It was a foolish cat who curiously cilled itself
they say curiosity cilled the cat
but the critics of curiosity were they callous ones
who laid it down the mat
wonders neva seize to happen
wonders neva stop
one wonder i saw one day
was a cat cilling curiosity
it realized realized too late
curiosity was not fer him
his chances of surviving it looked certainly very dim
the one creature who did survive
who lived to tell his tale
lost his tail and then evolved
into the human race
it was a race to conquor
and among the milestones were
newton darwin and alber
how do you think gravity was explained
how did humans come?
do you say einstein was mad
and newton plainly dumb?
i think not and beg to differ!
it was curiosity which made thomas jeffer
let curiosity linger on, let it grow and crow,
if u think curiosity cilled the cat, think again
a cat has eight more lives to give
a curious man long to live

(g.g.)Sushant Gaur













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Old 07-14-2005, 03:56 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Hufflepuff Cold morning dead evening

Once upon a cold morning i saw
while hurrying down a crowded path
by the looks of him a labourers boy
lying on the ground, twitching without no sound

Wondered whether i should wonder whats wrong with him
i wondered wrong and left him their
reasoned the world is full of people
people who can help and those people will

As evening came and i hurried back home
a cold grey night and i clutched my coat
in my hurry took a wrong decision
and stopped by a dead end

felt colder than ever before
many dead ends i have stood before
but the one dead end i was standing before
was just as dead as the boy bellow

(G.G.)Sushant Gaur



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Old 07-14-2005, 10:00 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I like your poems.........Really cool hope to read more
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Shabash! Great poems. The second one's real good Keep up the good work!
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Old 09-06-2005, 11:33 PM   #5 (permalink)
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can u wright any kind of poem u whant
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Old 12-03-2005, 09:31 AM   #6 (permalink)
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some times it depends on my mood but i can write poems on any any topic ( even if the poems turn out to be lame!!)
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Old 12-03-2005, 09:33 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Me and my band are working on this one, we are gonna give it a really fast beat please check it out:

Runnin down the street for

a lick of lolly stick of

a little red n blue girl

who looks soo cute that-that

the world goes round and round

the world goes round and round



so i,

run up to that little girl

who crashed into my little world

snatch her lolly steal a kiss

and sprint away into the mist

with ma world goin round and round

goin round and round



next day when im shaken up

woken up made to get up

the lolly must be china made

i had a stupid stomach ache

and my world goes round and round

(to-the-loo)round and round



I hear the suckin door bell ring

enter Mr wrestling king

looks like the girl was hogan's thing

and my world goes pound pound pound

and my world goes round and round

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amazing..
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Old 12-03-2005, 09:43 AM   #9 (permalink)
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ARREEE WAHHH its bin 2 seconds and ive even got i reply!!! thanx a ton anusha
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