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Old 07-29-2003, 05:16 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I would normally never post because I am really shy but Firebolt suggested I post a poem so here I go:

All around me I am lost
Eyes like tunnels stare at me
Wicked hearts cold and full of hate
As I walk down this road of life
I feel lost
Only pain is here
Only love can protect you

I know it is not the best,but please reply.If you like it I may post more.
- Life
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Old 07-29-2003, 06:04 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Thats good!!
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Old 07-29-2003, 06:14 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Yay someone replied,and liked it!
Thank you! :embaressed:
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Old 07-29-2003, 08:17 PM   #4 (permalink)
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It's really good, life! Write more! Oh, sorry - I mean PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :up:
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Old 07-29-2003, 09:18 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Ok here is another poem this is a haiku:

Summer

The sun is burning
The hot sand between my toes
Cool water splashing

What do think? :ermsmile: Reply please.
I want to know if like the first one better because I have a few more free verses like that.
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Old 07-29-2003, 09:51 PM   #6 (permalink)
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The first one was longer and more deep, but they're both really good :up:
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Old 08-01-2003, 02:13 AM   #7 (permalink)
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i agree.Its still good!!!
You can make it deep by posting a lot of Hiaku's and stringing them together.
For an example you can look at mine.
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Old 08-03-2003, 12:21 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Thanks, everyone! But I've decided not to write anymore in case these get into the wrong hands, because I may be planning on writing a book with them. Thanks for understanding! :rose: Flowers for everyone!
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Thats what I do with my poems. :o
I write here mostly though. :mrgreen:
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Old 08-03-2003, 05:22 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Hey everyone I had Firebolt post that I wouldn't be posting anymore poems.She said that just saying I wouldn't was not right and I need a reason so she wrote that.I am not posting partially because my poems have become more personal and not enough people have replied.Though you never know writing them and publishing a book sounds like a good idea.
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