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08-02-2003, 06:20 AM
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|  Swimming ShakespearetteVeela
Location: Mee-ah-mee, Florida Join Date: Jun 2003
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I am not exactly the best poet but I thought of a poem and thought I may post it here. Well here goes:
Friends
Friends have fun
Till the day is done
Friends hang together
Even if it means forever
Friends sometimes cause trouble
But you are there for them on the double
Friends may do pranks
But to you ten is their rank
Friends as you can see
Are always meant to be
Even if they move
They will always love you
What do you think? | 
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08-02-2003, 07:36 AM
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Location: Sydney, Australia Join Date: Dec 2002
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I think its...
WONDERFUL! | |
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08-02-2003, 06:09 PM
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|  Here or notBugbear
Location: Here Join Date: Sep 2002
Posts: 11,996
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Great!
It really captures the spirit of a friendship. | |
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08-03-2003, 06:30 PM
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these are great!!!!!! | |
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08-05-2003, 08:41 AM
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| Swimming Shakespearette Veela
Location: Mee-ah-mee, Florida Join Date: Jun 2003
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thank you all here is another one it doesn;t ryhme but it is a poem
F is for the friendship you and your friends share
<span style='font-size:14pt;line-height:100%'>R is for the rought times you and your friends have been through
I is for the intelligence you all share
E is for the elegance you all have
N is for all the nice times you have had
D is for the dremas you all all share whether good or bad
S is for the secrets you and your friedns have and will share no matter what it is.</span> | |
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08-05-2003, 08:43 AM
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| | Clabbert
Location: Northern California Join Date: Jul 2003
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I like them!Really good!I like the 2nd Poem you did, I've always liked that format. | |
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08-06-2003, 11:40 PM
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| Swimming Shakespearette Veela
Location: Mee-ah-mee, Florida Join Date: Jun 2003
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Thanks here is one that has nothing to do with friends...in fact it is the exact oppisite.
[color= darkblue ]If you leave me
Then you shall please me
If you come near
Then I feel fear
When I feel pain
I feel the same
But if I am glad
Inside I feel mad.[/color] | |
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08-06-2003, 11:41 PM
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Location: Earth ( most of the time ) Join Date: Jun 2003
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Cool poems! I loved the first one! :up: | |
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08-07-2003, 09:42 AM
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| Swimming Shakespearette Veela
Location: Mee-ah-mee, Florida Join Date: Jun 2003
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Thank You. Here is another one:
My Rose and My Heart
My rose is like my heart
Each petal holds one part
When my rose or I are alone
I let out a long sad groan
Because a petal just fell off
Making my rose feel smaller
And me...well I feel like I lost one hundred dollars
Now my heart
Just lost another part
But if I laugh
Which I will do
Cause now I don't feel so blue
And now that I think about it
My heart I just think grew
one million times two
There it is. | |
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09-05-2003, 02:45 PM
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| | Bowtruckle
Location: Everywhere Join Date: Sep 2003
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HPANGEL! Wow, these are good, I didn't know you wrote poetry either! That's so good! | |
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09-05-2003, 09:20 PM
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| Swimming Shakespearette Veela
Location: Mee-ah-mee, Florida Join Date: Jun 2003
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Thanks. I am not the best poet but I try so thnaks. Right now I can't think of anything so I'll post more later when I come up with somehting. | |
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09-05-2003, 09:23 PM
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Wow! Those are really great, hpangel! On my fanfic you told me you weren't a poet! Of course you are! Those were awesome; extremely well written. don't ever stop writing. | |
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09-05-2003, 09:33 PM
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| | Fwooper
Location: Call me Jessers or Jesserbear. Icon by Me. Join Date: Dec 2002
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Aura Devereaux
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you aren't a bad poet! really! poems need to be catchy and yours are! | |
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09-09-2003, 09:48 PM
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| Swimming Shakespearette Veela
Location: Mee-ah-mee, Florida Join Date: Jun 2003
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oh wo w thanks guys, there will be a new poem soon since I have to write one for school. So by either today or tomorrow I there will be a new poem, again thanks. | |
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09-12-2003, 03:04 AM
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| Swimming Shakespearette Veela
Location: Mee-ah-mee, Florida Join Date: Jun 2003
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Thoughts can be confusing things They can be hard to thread But once you found that string Thoughtfulness and kindness start to spread Good Thoughts and being kind Can do good deeds Whether it is helping the blind Or helping nature by planting a seed
k I here it is. hope you liek it. I knwo my friend did.  | |
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