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| | Ye Olde Home for the Olde Poem Finished poetry threads come here to rest and be remembered. | Vote for SS! 
07-29-2003, 05:38 PM
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Location: In the Common Rooms Join Date: Apr 2003
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Life
Life comes and goes
It ends before it starts
You trust my heart
I think we belong in this world of Glory
So take my hand into my Life
And we share the rest of IMMORTALITY | 
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07-29-2003, 07:00 PM
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| | Grindylow
Location: MIDDLE TN Join Date: Apr 2003
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Hey,thats pretty good.Try to make it longer.You have the meaning. | |
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07-30-2003, 02:15 AM
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Love between stangers
You don't really know me.
but I'm loving your company.
Me a mear half-blood;you a muggleborn.
Who says it can't happen.
Muggleborn or not
I am deeply in love with you
You are loving and protecting
The love between strangers
can never be mre than us.
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My poems may not rhyme,but they come from the heart. | |
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07-30-2003, 02:24 AM
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HOW COOL!!!!! An hp poem!!!!!!!!! Post more soon! :sorcerer: And some of the best and most famous poems don't rhyme :flowersmile: | |
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07-30-2003, 03:18 AM
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| | Grindylow
Location: MIDDLE TN Join Date: Apr 2003
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Really good Poem!!! | |
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07-30-2003, 04:14 PM
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Location: NY, USA Join Date: Jul 2003
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i like those theyre good u should write more
:flowersmile: a flower for ur good work | |
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07-30-2003, 04:38 PM
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Location: Chicago Join Date: Jul 2003
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Your poems are brilliant! I love them! :heart: | |
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07-30-2003, 05:41 PM
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IMMORTALITY
So this is who I am
And this is all I know
And I must choose to live
For that all I can give
And I dream if I can
Symbol of my faith in who I am
You are truely my only
I have seen a dream that must come true
Every ounce of me will see it through
We don't say Goodbye
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07-31-2003, 01:41 AM
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| | Grindylow
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This is really good!! | |
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08-06-2003, 04:54 AM
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Location: neverland Join Date: Jul 2003
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this poem is besutiful | |
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08-07-2003, 05:18 PM
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Never Close
We may never come close
You really like me but, you hide it
I enjoyed your rescue but, you still don't care
I will never get to meet you
Never get to fufill my dreams
As,my cheek beems while I blush
I still will never get the chance to say
I LOVE YOU | |
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08-07-2003, 06:13 PM
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| | Grindylow
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That is really good Hermy!!! | |
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08-14-2003, 05:45 PM
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[color= darkblue ] My Feelings for you
I hide it from you
I try not to stand alone
You are always in my dreams
Like the time I dreamed you saved me
Like when your hurt I Cry
When you are in Joy I am to
My Feelings For you never end
You are the dream guy
And You will be forever and For Always[/color] | |
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12-03-2003, 11:51 PM
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You tease
You pick on certain things
I think u promised everytime
That i would b close
You have lost a passion
Cos of a rumor
Now, u have no father
And no me
I will fill the void
If you will let me come Back
W/Brown eyes
and wind blown Brown hair | |
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