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08-12-2003, 11:04 AM
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|  His life is like a riverKneazle
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Here is a poem written by Ginny at the end of her fourth year at Hogswarts!
You don't remember all those years ago,
On that dark night when you met your greatest foe.
Our whole world was changed to a safer place,
But you where left with the scar stuck on your face.
But what I want to ask you, when you look in your heart and see,
If deep deep down inside, did you notice me?
Do you remember, when I watched you catch the train?
You dissapeared around the corner, and I felt a new type of pain.
I thought you where gone forever, never to return,
My whole life suddenly, felt like it begun to burn.
You came back one year later, setting Voldemort free,
But all I wanted to know was, did you notice me?
Then came my first year, you saved me from near death,
You stayed by my side, as I nearly gave my last breath.
You fought a giant snake, and then took on you know who,
You did it to save me, but I knew that I loved you.
But a question was still on my tounge, whenever you I see,
that question is quiet simple, did you notice me?
Rolled on the years at school, and so on with my life,
but I still had a dream, to someday be your wife.
And just last year you came from watching Cedric die,
I wanted to hug you and hold you and let you forever cry.
But I wouldn't let your dignity, become set free,
But still I needed to know, if you noticed me?
And now I have come, to my fourth year of school,
And I can see I have been a really stupid fool.
I grew up and over you and got a new boyfriend,
Yet my heart has seem to stay, with you till the end.
You saved me and our friends, from dieing to the evil one,
And I knew my love for you was not done.
I love you still, and I hope you will soon see,
I pray one day that maybe, you may just notice me...
-Ginny Weasley | 
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08-12-2003, 02:42 PM
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| | Erkling
Location: Mee-ah-mee, Florida Join Date: Jun 2003
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Rosie Kertousch
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That was a great poem! | 
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08-12-2003, 08:45 PM
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Location: neverland Join Date: Jul 2003
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that was really good | |
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08-12-2003, 10:30 PM
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that was very very good!!! aww so sad. | |
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08-13-2003, 10:21 AM
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| His life is like a river Kneazle
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Sank u's  So embarrasing, all these replies, nothing negative Darn it! | |
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08-13-2003, 10:40 AM
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That was gr8!!! Harry and Ginny 4 ever!!!!!!!!!!!! | |
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08-14-2003, 10:09 AM
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| His life is like a river Kneazle
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...& ever! | |
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09-01-2003, 11:10 AM
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| His life is like a river Kneazle
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BUMP | |
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09-05-2003, 01:32 PM
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| | Bowtruckle
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I like it. Very good! but you don't really mention the 5th book enough, and the others. There are some bits in it which you should put in there | |
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09-05-2003, 01:35 PM
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| | Bundimun
Location: Singapore Join Date: Aug 2003
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awwww.... nice poem. great. i:wub:harrypotter | |
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09-05-2003, 08:50 PM
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| | Fwooper
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good poems! | |
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09-29-2004, 08:03 PM
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cute cute
Shannon | |
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10-02-2004, 04:18 PM
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You wrote the poem so good........great job | |
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