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08-02-2003, 11:46 PM
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Location: neverland Join Date: Jul 2003
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A pain
my sister comes in my room late late at night
she talks and talks and talks until I say goodnight
then she comes and pets my cat until he runs away
my sister that comes in at night surely is a pain
Dedicated to my 9 year old sister Allison | 
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08-02-2003, 11:48 PM
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Location: neverland Join Date: Jul 2003
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hey i hope you guys like it, i wrote it when i was in 5th grade and i will post more poems if u like this 1 | |
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08-03-2003, 12:19 AM
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Location: Montreal, Quebec, Canada Join Date: Jul 2003
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I'm not an expert on poetry - to say the truth I'm awful with poetry! - but your poem brings back old memories of similar experiences with my own sisters. | |
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08-03-2003, 12:19 AM
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Everyone has this thing with newbies it seems...anyway nice poem | |
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08-03-2003, 12:22 AM
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| | Gnome
Location: Canada Join Date: Jul 2003
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its an interesting poem (though im no expert) I thinl that its great, you should post some more!  | |
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08-03-2003, 12:22 AM
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Location: neverland Join Date: Jul 2003
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lol well thank u 4 reading | |
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08-03-2003, 12:31 AM
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|  Here or notBugbear
Location: Here Join Date: Sep 2002
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lol
That's so how I feel about my older sister. | |
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08-03-2003, 12:33 AM
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Location: neverland Join Date: Jul 2003
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hey im glad u all like thanks 4 reading | |
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08-03-2003, 12:51 AM
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Location: neverland Join Date: Jul 2003
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My big brother
A computer whiz all day and night
There's no computer virus my
Brother can't fight
He's nice and tall
He's there throught it all
A pain sometimes all brothers are
Bot mine is different ive meant few so far
My brother's there for me
From the start through thick and thin
Never to far from my heart.
Dedicated to my 17 year old brother Kurt | |
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08-03-2003, 12:55 AM
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Location: neverland Join Date: Jul 2003
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this is my 2nd poem i hope u like this 1 as well as u liked the first poem | |
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08-03-2003, 01:05 AM
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Location: Here. Join Date: Apr 2003
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hehehehehe lolz! he's a comp whiz! ME TOO!  | |
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08-03-2003, 01:09 AM
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Location: neverland Join Date: Jul 2003
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thats my brother | |
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08-03-2003, 01:12 AM
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Location: Massachusetts Join Date: Jul 2003
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This is really good. I'd like to read some more of your poems! Keep up the good work.  | |
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08-03-2003, 01:15 AM
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Location: neverland Join Date: Jul 2003
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My cat
Soft orange fur
In the summer sun
My cat
George
Is a lot of fun.
He lays inmy bed
All day long
Purring his little cat song
Meowing in the morning
For his first meal a day
He lays with you
Never going away
i love my orange cat George so guess who it's dedicated 2 "wink wink" | |
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08-03-2003, 01:16 AM
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Location: neverland Join Date: Jul 2003
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Hope u all like | |
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08-03-2003, 01:18 AM
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Location: neverland Join Date: Jul 2003
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Thanks for all the posts | |
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08-03-2003, 06:16 AM
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Location: Earth ( most of the time ) Join Date: Jun 2003
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I love it! Though I can't really relate, as I have no younger siblings, just older ones. I'm sure they could probably relate, though....me being the pain!  | |
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08-03-2003, 06:18 AM
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I think it's wonderful! I loved my cat, Chloe, but she died a while back of feline lukemia.  | |
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08-03-2003, 06:20 AM
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Location: neverland Join Date: Jul 2003
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i have a cat named chloe and im so sorry about ur cat | |
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08-03-2003, 06:22 AM
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Location: A small under-developed town filled with farmers... great... Join Date: Nov 2002
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That was great! You have a gift for writing poetry. | |
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08-03-2003, 06:24 AM
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Location: neverland Join Date: Jul 2003
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hey i have 1 about my big brother if that helps | |
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08-03-2003, 06:26 AM
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Location: neverland Join Date: Jul 2003
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thank you that means a lot to me to know u really think that | |
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08-03-2003, 06:29 AM
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Location: neverland Join Date: Jul 2003
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do u guys not like this 1 :crysmile: :crysmile: no big deal we all have different tastes | |
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08-03-2003, 06:33 AM
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donnie darko fan Pygmy Puff
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The whole point of this thread is that one user has ONE topic devoted to ALL of their poems. It's incredibly annoying when one user has a new topic for each of their poems. I'm merging all of your poems into one topic. Post the rest of your poems in this ONE topic from now on. | |
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08-03-2003, 05:17 PM
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Location: neverland Join Date: Jul 2003
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Here's another poem hope u enjoy
Rainbows
<span style='font-size:14pt;line-height:100%'>At the end of a rainbow lies a pot of gold a glorious treasure untold.The colors of a rainbow so soft and warm make me feel safe and sound even under a storm. It's array of colors throughtout the sky make any little girl want to cry</span> | |
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