Francis' Poetry Thread

[fr2nc1z]

Apartment swelling as I fall down the drain
In slight blue desperation
With a hint of reddish frustration
Tired blank Eyes linger

That watch the world speed across
That watch you, watch me
That watch you, leave me
That watch me rotting

Yet they lay awake
Under the white sky
That darkens every corner gleefully
Under the broken yellow sun
Greedily spreading its devastating hunger

[Leeness]

very nice ma francis, you need to stop updating so quickly or else i will have to too :o

[fr2nc1z]

^ *cough*
you SHOULD

[Leeness]

i updated i'll have you know

[Leeness]

i am gonna poke you now *pokes* update another one

[fr2nc1z]

ummm back

i'll work on one....

[Leeness]

work on one quicker mrs!

[fr2nc1z]

Circles

I race myself to crimson fatigue
Without even starting the race
Yet all I keep doing, is what I do
And I cannot stop, no will to stop

My head throbs, it aches, it surely dies
Its all running in circles
There was never a return from my hell
Surely, no point of stopping the madness

Hypothetically, it makes no sense
But I really did stop caring
Yet the lethargic question asks away
What shall I do but know the answer?
Shall I run, hide, exhaust, and slay itself
Should I return, go back, and then red away
When all I want is blackened dismay
When everything stops yet twirls and caves

But without stopping, it stops
But without going, it flees
Pushing aside what I wanted
Burying the bright underneath the blackened gray

There is no stopping
There was no choice
But to twirl around and waste away

[Leeness]

yay!!!! an update! i love it Francis! *hugs the poem and you*

[fr2nc1z]

Empty Houses
You play your cards
With your nauseating joker face
And you pretend to have an ace
When all you have is sixes

So why does it matter
That you cheat your way around
Its only because its sadder
That I keep tumbling the ground

Until the window creaks insane
And the air comes crashing down
I will eat your poker cards
And vanish in your gaze

You will hear no more
You will see no more
But an empty shell
Of hollow houses

[Leeness]

you will eat my poker cards O_o, hee hee alright then, i never found a use for them ha ha!

great update though! i think you should do another and let Lee rest *angelic smile*

[fr2nc1z]

Originally Posted by CrazyMoonyFan

you will eat my poker cards O_o, hee hee alright then, i never found a use for them ha ha!

great update though! i think you should do another and let Lee rest *angelic smile*

Aww you didn't get what I meant

I think the meanings in my poems are usually too hidden inside the analogies

[DannyGirl101]

Wow! You are so deep!

[fr2nc1z]

thanks

[Leeness]

i thought you updated which would mean i had to update and my brain is blank now, but thats okay *phew*

Anywayz we want more *pokes*protests*

[fr2nc1z]

awww ok, I will update today.. After I finish an email

[Blackneon]

Wow, these are really good! It makes me wonder if I should post mine too... But still, keep up the good work!

[froeth]

I'm usually full of hate toward poems because people think they are 'so deep and misunderstood... and dark.'

But these are nice, and actually meaningful, and I don't hate them. I actually like them. Especially the "Apartment swelling as I fall down the drain" one.

[fr2nc1z]

Ohh I should check this thread more often lol

Thanks guys!! I promise I will update soon!

Blackneon, I hope you also start writing! Froeth, do you have a poem thread? You should try to write some poems that you do like

[Leeness]

Writing and Updating is harder now that it has to be based on HP, so its understandable Fran. Besides your as busy as a person who goes to Law School! lol