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Old 12-29-2005, 10:34 PM   #151 (permalink)
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Well that was rather happy... *blinks* [/random]

The 3rd stanza was the best, at least in my book. Keep posting I like reading your stuff.
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Old 12-29-2005, 11:22 PM   #152 (permalink)
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awesomeness dave! Dark, but great ^^ (and don't you be turning into dust anytime soon...that would be weird.)
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Old 12-30-2005, 10:30 AM   #153 (permalink)
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Well that was rather happy... *blinks* [/random]
Random hehe

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The 3rd stanza was the best, at least in my book. Keep posting I like reading your stuff.
Why thank you.
And I shall keep posting.

awesomeness dave! Dark, but great ^^ (and don't you be turning into dust anytime soon...that would be weird.)

I will try not to lol.
THomas and I actually wrote that one together. It is actually about him.
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Old 12-30-2005, 10:53 AM   #154 (permalink)
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Without you as my wings


The wind beneath my wings
So powerful, like you
The whistling
The words you speek
The wind talks to me, but it sounds odly like your voice
It tells me to fly away
Spread my arms
Flap my wings

I goto the ledge
I do as im told
Spread my arms
Flap my wings

As I begin to fall
I look, your gone
Wings gone too
Or were they never there?
I am so confused
Maybe it is for the best

I hit the pavement
I dont feel any pain
I dont move
Dont breath
What has happened to my wings?

My dead lifeless body
Laying there
They see the cuts on my wrists
They say one word
Suicide..

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Old 12-30-2005, 11:05 AM   #155 (permalink)
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This is a quote that I say to myself everyday.


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To cure pain deep down inside you must give pain to yourself
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Old 12-30-2005, 05:16 PM   #156 (permalink)
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Nice addition and I'm glad you're posting once more.
I have a quote as well, very close to that in fact. "To cause pain is to be a pain." I think it's even in one of my poems, She, If I'm recalling correctly.

Voices are always a wonderful thing aren't they? Especially when they never want to leave....
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Old 01-02-2006, 06:05 AM   #157 (permalink)
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Angel without a Halo

Your an Angel
Yes everyone agrees
Your beauty shines over all
But you heart is cold

God let you in
But didn't give you a halo
Only wings
Why did he do that?

He did it so you could think
About all those times
You let people down
That one time you said No

He didn't give you the halo
Because you said NO
To the person who loved you
You broke a heart

God didn't agree
With that
He gave you one chance
You see him sitting on a cloud

You walk up to him
He sees you
He smiles
You shiver

I love you
He says
You stand there
Say No

God looks at you
He shakes his head
I gave you a chance for love
You gave it up
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Old 01-02-2006, 06:13 AM   #158 (permalink)
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Fallen Warrior

He stands there
His sword in one hand
Shield in the other
His guitar layed broken on the grass beside him

He looks at you
You have nothing
You walk up to him
Slap him

He falls back
His face draining
Now pale
You take his sword

You push him down
Jam the sword in his chest
Dig
And pull out his heart

You thow the heart to the ground
Stomp on it
Walk away
The warrior has nothing left
Because you took everything
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Old 01-02-2006, 04:04 PM   #159 (permalink)
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A New Light

There's something
New at the end of this Tunnel
Its bright
But yet you don't know what it is

You walk closer
The jitteres in your belly
Go crazy
Your knees wobble

You don't know what this is
Its a new scent
New light
New everything

You just wonder
What is it
Did it come here for me
Oh is it here just for decoration.
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Old 01-02-2006, 09:08 PM   #160 (permalink)
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Knowing

A sharp pain in my stomach
I haven't felt that since
Since the last time I was sick
The last time i was about to die

I close my eyes praying its not back
Knowing it is
Knowing I may be living my last days here
Knowing I can't do anything

I get my first dose
I have felt this
Sweetyness
Pain in my stomach

It's hard to speak
Hard to think
But I'm trying
I'm not going to give up

I will fight this
I'm to young to die
I'm to young
I will fight this with all my strenghth
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