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08-06-2005, 03:08 AM
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#126 (permalink)
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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Dark Passions
A silent click
As the door locks behind you
You smile
And sneak off into the Darkness
A whisper from no where
A Bush moves
The street light flickers
And a smerk not to be seen
You hear a soft moan
And another
As you sneak up to the spot
You peak in and gasp
Your heart has shattered
Left to pieces on the grass
The picture left in your mind
Of you love making love to someone else | 
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08-06-2005, 05:20 AM
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#127 (permalink)
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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This is to my parents where ever they may be.
Wondering
Birthdays without you there
Morning without you there
Where could you be
My dear parents
Could you be dead
No
I shall not think like that
Could you be out there in this cold and unsure world
Wait what am I saying
I hate you
I hate you for leaving me and my sister
On the day we were born
I hate you
For making us work from age 5 to age 15
I hate you for giving us this grief
You left everyone of 8 children
All of us think of you everynight
We wonder where you could be
Than say no who cares
But deep down we want to know you
I know Lauren and I do
We never even saw your face
We have no clue
Yet we still dream and wonder about when you might come back
Why did you leave all of your 8 children
With no money
No nothing but a cold world to face
All I can say is we are better without you two
We don't need you any longer
We have lost hope
Of ever knowing
That your comfort might be come back to us | |
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08-06-2005, 05:29 AM
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#128 (permalink)
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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Well, I'll wait for some comments before I post any more. | |
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08-06-2005, 05:32 AM
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#129 (permalink)
|  Ooooh... shiny!Augurey
Location: Dude! like whoa I'm Join Date: Feb 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Danni Veneti
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very cool dave....cant wiat for more..you a awosme writter | |
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08-06-2005, 05:42 AM
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#130 (permalink)
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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Beat Down
Beat down
For living
Beat down
For caring
Why though
You may ask
Do they love me
Do they care
They hurt me so
There's nothing I can do
But sit and
Take it
Why do you take this beat down
You don't deserve it
I would take your place
To protect you
Than I would stand up
And say no
I would tell than to stop
Or else they will pay
Why can't you
You can't let them do this to you
You just can't
Please Fate please just tell
So you can live to see the next day. | |
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08-06-2005, 05:46 AM
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#131 (permalink)
|  Keeper of Ginny's CutenessNiffler
Location: ♥ Getting stal Join Date: Dec 2003
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sophie Marnie Woozylib
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I love your poems, can't wait for more...I wish I was as good. >.< You're the best. | |
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08-06-2005, 09:44 PM
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#132 (permalink)
| | Skrewt
Location: I'm here >.> Join Date: May 2004
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Wow, Dave--those are amazing. But, please, be careful not to forget, "Learning From My Past" You have this amazing way of expressing your pain--and you seemed to be well, buried in it. I certaintly can't help you but rememeber, you have 8 siblings who love and care about you 
Anyway, great work--keep it up! | |
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08-07-2005, 09:07 PM
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#133 (permalink)
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Must do What I have to do
I wish I could tell you
But I doubt you would understand
I'm lost in a world
That I knew only excisted in my dreams
I sit here in this cold dark place
Worrying about what is to become
I hear voices in the distance
But I'm to weak to follow them
My blood runs cold
The hairs on my neck stick up
It's getting colder
And I don't know why
If only I could tell you
If only you would understand
Why I must do this
Till the end | |
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08-07-2005, 09:07 PM
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#134 (permalink)
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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Thanks Lexy
And yes I know | |
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08-08-2005, 07:35 PM
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#135 (permalink)
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Must do What I have to do <----- I really liked that one, keep up what your doing! | |
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08-21-2005, 08:25 PM
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#136 (permalink)
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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thanks ppl im having writers block but im trying | |
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08-22-2005, 03:04 PM
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#137 (permalink)
|  Not a Flake. AgelessFwooper
Location: leaving a trail of stalker treats for all my stalkers*shifty* Join Date: Nov 2003
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Katie Minnson
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I haven't been reading that much lately so I had a couple pages to read. I found them all interesting and well written. I hope you over come that writers block soon. I know it can be rather annoying at times having all this jumble in your head and not being able to get it out. | |
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10-03-2005, 10:44 AM
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#138 (permalink)
|  Caffeine BuzzNiffler
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Hey Dave, you're an amazing writer, post more as soon as you can. | |
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10-14-2005, 01:27 AM
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#139 (permalink)
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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A Love
A love so true
That you can't believe it
A love so everlasting
It stuns
Such a beautiful being
How could she be for you
But she is standing in my doorway
How can she love me
I have sin beyond anything possible
I'm rotting as I speak
I never thought she could be mine
The one I could hold and not get slapped or scolded
She's dear to me
But the question rises
Will my life turn a different direction
Will I be on that same path I have been so many times before
Can we love each other?
Are lives different
Are spirts different
But the love everlasting | |
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10-14-2005, 01:30 AM
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#140 (permalink)
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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Sorry I haven't updated in such a long time. I've been deadly sick for the past couple of months.
Well this is one of my recent poems put into one of my songs for my band. | |
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10-14-2005, 01:33 AM
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#141 (permalink)
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Location: somwhere Join Date: Aug 2005
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omg, I LOVE UR POEMS!!!!!
u rock, kepp posting PLEASE | |
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10-14-2005, 01:54 AM
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#142 (permalink)
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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Lol thanks I will soon | |
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10-15-2005, 05:06 AM
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#143 (permalink)
| Not a Flake. Ageless Fwooper
Location: leaving a trail of stalker treats for all my stalkers*shifty* Join Date: Nov 2003
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Katie Minnson
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Hehe Dave your getting smooshy on us... (GoF pun).
I still liked it though and I hope that you are feeling better these days. Keep up the great work.
- Angel | |
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10-15-2005, 12:43 PM
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#144 (permalink)
| Caffeine Buzz Niffler
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Haha, nice Angel. Hey Dave, post more soon. This is Anikka at the moment, don't let Reg know I was on her name! HAHA You should write one about Reg and Thomas (just to set her off lol) Post more soon! | |
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10-17-2005, 11:41 PM
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#145 (permalink)
|  Faeries are love.
Unseelie Faerie Queen
Faerie LucianoErumpent
Location: Faeryland ♥ Join Date: May 2004
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-pops up- Well dear I must say,well done.Just your last poem reminds me of the one I worte in my thread.You know the one I wrote just for my dearest.But other than that I love them all.Thank you for showing you care as well. -runs off- | |
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10-18-2005, 01:11 AM
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#146 (permalink)
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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Dust to Dust
Does the blank and sadness end
Or do these times get worse
People in black
Mourning the death of a teenager
He was so young
So full of life
But took a wrong turn
Into the dark
He tried to turn back
But things got worse
Than it all came down
And now he's dust
He was so yound
So full of life
But took a wrong turn
Into the dark
Before he died he sang just one song
His guitar in his hands
Blonde hair over his eyes
Swift movement of his fingers
He sings
Dust to Dust
My body fades
Dust to Dust
I die | |
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10-24-2005, 08:42 PM
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#147 (permalink)
| | Plimpy
Location: Um.....where am I. Join Date: Apr 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Thomas Renc
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great dave | |
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11-03-2005, 09:25 PM
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#148 (permalink)
| Caffeine Buzz Niffler
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*dances around* doo de doo great poems Dave, post more soon. | |
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12-27-2005, 02:17 AM
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#149 (permalink)
| | Plimpy
Location: Um.....where am I. Join Date: Apr 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Thomas Renc
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hey brother get to posting or shall i sneak in your room find your song journal and post them for you | |
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12-28-2005, 02:48 AM
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#150 (permalink)
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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Life as I know it
Life as I know it is dead
I shouldn't even it call it life
I should call it h e double hockysticks
Maybe worse than that
My music has stoped
There is no soft melody to it anymore
No nothing
No music
I see my life in black and white now
No excitement
Just sorrow and disappointment
Nothing more
I just want to slit my wrists
Bleed
Till I can't anymore
That's all I wish now
THat's all I wish
Last edited by GothDude : 12-28-2005 at 02:53 AM.
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