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| | Ye Olde Home for the Olde Poem Finished poetry threads come here to rest and be remembered. | Vote for SS! 
07-11-2005, 08:48 PM
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|  Ooooh... shiny!Augurey
Location: Dude! like whoa I'm Join Date: Feb 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Danni Veneti
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love the poems,keep it up!
~*krista*~ | 
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07-11-2005, 09:01 PM
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Location: Why ask hard questions! Join Date: Aug 2003
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wow.....wow..those were awesome. My favorite one was ability. You should get paid for this stuff. | |
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07-11-2005, 11:37 PM
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Location: I live in a bread wrapper. Good for me. Join Date: Jun 2005
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wow dude, that's awesome-better than most of my poetry  | |
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07-20-2005, 01:42 AM
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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sorry ya'll i have band camp and all and its hard to post ill post when i can | |
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07-20-2005, 08:36 AM
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|  Caffeine BuzzNiffler
Join Date: Mar 2005
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w00t! Go band camp!!! "One time, at band camp..." Yeah! Anyway, you have amazing ability Dave, it won't surprise me when Just Me makes it big time!!!
~*~Regina~*~ | |
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07-20-2005, 11:56 AM
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|  In Sirius denialCourageous Ginny FanShrake
Location: Troy, Al Join Date: Sep 2004
Posts: 12,865
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Arabelle Adriana Meyer
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And I can't wait too | |
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07-20-2005, 10:25 PM
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#107 (permalink)
|  Secretly SlytherinAugurey
Location: through the looking Join Date: Jul 2004
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Tegan
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Wow, I love your work so much! Wish I could write like that, you people are too talented for me. Lol, anyway, keep it up, I'll be checking in for more. | |
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07-20-2005, 10:34 PM
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| | Dugbog
Location: My Own Little World.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
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Wow, there amazing Dave. There so......dark and mysterious. I Love em!, Keep up the good work! | |
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07-22-2005, 09:35 PM
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| | Erkling
Location: My bed... zzz Join Date: Oct 2002
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Hey Dave,
I just read all of your poems, and I must say you are an amazing writer. I loved some words here and there that you chose. They fit perfectly well, and there are some poems I can relate to. Keep it up... | |
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07-24-2005, 01:28 AM
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| In Sirius denialCourageous Ginny Fan Shrake
Location: Troy, Al Join Date: Sep 2004
Posts: 12,865
Hogwarts RPG Name:
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Well I thought my brother would have posted by now.
Oh and WeasleyTwinsRox I like your siggy just so you know.
Also everyone do me a favor here. If you haven't already go to Dave's profile and look at his profile picture that I drew for him. And yes that's really him. Do ya'll think he looks like an muscian who writes poetry or just a normaly everyday guy. It says in papers that if you look at someones picture you can tell what they love to do by the way they look. Tell me what you think of his picture. Please | |
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07-25-2005, 11:25 AM
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| | Bowtruckle
Join Date: Mar 2005
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Your poetry is rad. I <33 it! I could never write anything as good as you! Hope you write some more soon. I <33 all of it.
<33 Sammmmmmy.
Teehee.
Take care. | |
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07-29-2005, 04:04 PM
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| Caffeine Buzz Niffler
Join Date: Mar 2005
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Lauren, I could NEVER draw like you! Ha, I've mastered stick figures and animation but that's it. Anyway, Dave, please post when you get the chance, it helps to read poetry for me at the present moment and time. Thanks,
Regina
AutumnTears: LOVE YOUR SIGGY AND AVVIW!!! That picture scares my twin. She freaked out when she saw it and she felt bad for the teddy bear when I laughed. | |
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07-29-2005, 10:52 PM
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| | Skrewt
Location: in mah bed :D Join Date: Jun 2004
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Karma Atkins
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Your poems are VERY good. I really like them, a lot. Keep writing and doing your best, they're excellent. By the way, how long have you been writing? | |
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07-29-2005, 10:55 PM
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| | Bowtruckle
Join Date: Mar 2005
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GreatestSeeker413; Teehee. Thankies Yay! I <33 scaring people. It's fun. | |
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08-01-2005, 08:19 AM
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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well I've been writing well since about 7th grade and im now in 10th, but more on its way. | |
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08-01-2005, 08:22 AM
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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This one I'm dedicating to someone out there. I hope she knows who she is and gets the message.
Worried Thoughts
Worried thoughts
They flood me
Drowned me
And tear me to shreds
Why won't she listen
Does she care
I try my best to help her
But than she gets torn down even harder
I feel like there is nothing else to do but
Wait
And Listen
To the Worried thought of the day | |
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08-01-2005, 08:24 AM
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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Sorry that it was a short one I shall update tommorrow writing a note now leaving it one my desk.
And to the mysterious " her " I hope you understand. | |
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08-01-2005, 03:37 PM
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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An Ode To Music
Here is and Ode to Music
The one thing that is always there
She keeps me alive
Keeps me well
And never makes me fret
She speaks one language
Not millions
But one
So it's spoken all over the world
Surprising it's not
Her sweet tunes
Fill the air
Her soft meledoies
Lift me up
They make me whole
If she wasn't here
What would I do
I don't know really
All I can say is
Thank you God for Making her
For you knew that music is the speach
That I can not talk to in front a crowd
Can't express in any way
Except to grab and instrument of any kind
And bring out it's music
That's the only way everyone knows
What's in my heart
That's why we all need
To raise are glasses
And sing and ODE TO MUSIC | |
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08-05-2005, 12:53 AM
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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My eyes
Don't look at me
Those aren't my eyes
You are looking at someone else
Someone not there
My eyes don't hold my secrets
My eyes don't hold my sorrows
My eyes don't show me at all
They are just there for decoration
You may see happyness
But you don't
You may see me smiling
No that's me hiding my feelings
Don't say you know what im going through
Because you don't
No one ever will
No one
So leave me here
All alone
And just remeber
My eyes don't hold my secrets | |
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08-05-2005, 12:54 AM
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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Cutting
Cutting is nothing
To me
But to you
It's a large thing
Cutting helps me calm down
My feelings sweep out through my blood
You may see it differntly
But I don't
It's a normal
Everyday thing
For me
I say
You say
No
Stop
You start crying
I'm not going to
I like my blood
Or shall I say seeing my feelings
Sweep through my skin | |
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08-05-2005, 12:57 AM
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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Leave me be
Leave me be
In a dark room
Or alley way
Just leave me be
Don't try to talk to me
Don't say I know how you feel
BECAUSE YOU DON'T
Just leave me be
I want to shoot myself
Scream out
Kill myself
But I can't
I just can't
Just leave me be
Till the sunrises
Leave me be
Just leave me be
Till the roaster sounds his wakening call
Till the sun seeps through the clouds
Showing a new day
Just leave me be
Don't talk to me
Don't stare at me in silence
JUST LEAVE ME BE | |
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08-05-2005, 01:04 AM
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| *sniff* I love you, man *sniff* Crup
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Dave, these poems are sweet as h*ll. They rock, i like the last one, it's really true. Kepp it up.
~Ish | |
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08-05-2005, 04:59 AM
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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Taking control
Lost and stranded
In my own mind
Confussed and teary eyed
For the likes of you
I tell you one
But you don't listen
I tell you another
You still don't listen
WHY
WHY DON'T YOU
I'M JUST TRYING TO SAVE YOU
To save me
You don't see
Everything you do
Either makes me happy
Or I'm cutting my arm up into pieces
Just listen to me
I cry
Just listen to me
And take control | |
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08-05-2005, 05:14 AM
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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Holding back
Holding back my life
It flashes before my eyes
Why is it on pause for you
Can't you see
I can't hold back
Any longer
I can't hold back
For my fate is near
My fate rests
With this bloody knife
I fell like your holding me back
Why though just let it go and it will be all over | |
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08-05-2005, 02:48 PM
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| Caffeine Buzz Niffler
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Dave you are giving me the chills again. Serisouly, you are. I love the poems but they are scaring me *cries* Get on AIM when you can, we can talk. Post more soon.
Regina | |
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