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06-21-2005, 04:57 AM
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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More Later as soon as I finish some more.
Got to see if my brother or sisters will yell at me a bit. Maybe that will keep me away from writers block. | 
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06-21-2005, 05:03 AM
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Location: Starbucks man. Join Date: Nov 2003
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Thatīs bloody sweet that you have a band! Heh, I actually have one also. However, we have not made a album. *Shrugs* | |
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06-21-2005, 05:26 AM
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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Yeah, we've been together for about two years. I play lead guitar and sing, Thomas( Nuthin'Much) plays bass, Lauren( my twin sister, ~*Keni'sGirl*~) plays trapset, and Nichole (Ms. Sharpie) plays piano. Our band is called Just me or jm for short. Also we all are goth and we al work at hot topic go to the same school and same age. lol
Like I said more tommorrow if I don't have writers block. | |
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06-21-2005, 05:31 AM
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Location: Starbucks man. Join Date: Nov 2003
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Hot topic? I adore that place! However I can not wear their clothing since my Dad will completely freak out on me. So, I gotta remain the īprep lookī. Blah. (Secretly however, I got some sweet skirts and belts. Heh.)
Thats pretty kool. Hehe, I am actually the singer for my band too. However, we only started a couple of months ago....and still donīt have a d*mn name...*Sighs*
Well, hopefully yeh get out of that writers block of yours! Or I will knock it outta yeh!
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06-22-2005, 02:27 AM
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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Being Young
Being young
Is like being in jail
Your told what to do
And when to do it
It doesn't matter
If your doing something important
It only matters
That they are to lazy, ecxcuse me, busy to do it themselves
They say
We worked all day
We're too tired
You haven't done a thing
Excectly
They worked all day
How would they known we've done some work
Unless they have cameras inside the house
You want to scream at them
Say there fricken lazy
But you the child
Your a piece of dust in there eyes
Being young
Is like being in jail
You told what to do
And when to do it | |
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06-22-2005, 03:12 AM
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|  Secretly SlytherinAugurey
Location: through the looking Join Date: Jul 2004
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Tegan
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Your stuff rocks, I love your writing style. People can relate to it all and thats what makes it really work. My favorite was 'Have You Ever' simply because of the whole judging thing. People judge others all the time without ever talking to them, everyone has a label if they're different, it's not cool. Anyways, yeah, I really like your style. Keep it up. | |
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06-22-2005, 04:06 AM
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|  In Sirius denialCourageous Ginny FanShrake
Location: In my own little bubble.....others are welcome--Joshy is love !!! Join Date: Sep 2004
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Lauren-Brooke
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* claps*
THat's my brother
* she says to the person next to her*
Great Job dave
I agree with Thomas when are you going to write the music to these poems | |
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06-22-2005, 06:32 PM
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| | Ramora
Join Date: Feb 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
lilly pad
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ur really good i love ur poems | |
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06-24-2005, 01:50 PM
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|  Caffeine BuzzNiffler
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Dave, I love your poems. I could NEVER write like that. LOL I waste my time writing my fanfic. LOL I have a sad life and I'm not old enough to get a job (at Hot Topic) So I waste my time sitting around on the computer all day. Or I play my guitar, that always helps me relax.....or I dye my hair. LOL sorry I'm blabbering, but anyway, I love the poems Dave. | |
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06-25-2005, 08:13 PM
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| Not a Flake. Ageless Fwooper
Location: leaving a trail of stalker treats for all my stalkers*shifty* Join Date: Nov 2003
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The dark, lonely, corner becomes friendly
Inside yourself its like a debate
Like a war
Can't choose what to do
Wow. I couldn't have said it better myself. All of your poems are great. I know we all sound like a broken record, but it's the truth. I hope you post more soon.
-angel | |
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06-25-2005, 08:26 PM
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| You say Weird...
I say Original Ashwinder
Location: haunted by life Join Date: Jan 2005
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Afia
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omg. i luv ur poems | |
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06-26-2005, 10:54 AM
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Location: The Castle in the Sky. Join Date: Apr 2005
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your poems are sooo good. i'm in love with them. | |
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06-27-2005, 12:41 AM
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| In Sirius denialCourageous Ginny Fan Shrake
Location: In my own little bubble.....others are welcome--Joshy is love !!! Join Date: Sep 2004
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yes my dear brother they are
ok ya'll Dave(gothdude) said to tell ya'll hes having writers block so he will post as soon as make him angry k lol | |
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06-29-2005, 01:38 AM
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| | Plimpy
Location: Um.....where am I. Join Date: Apr 2005
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Thomas Renc
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Umm Ya'll this is a message from the writer of the poems. Quote:
Dear My readers,
Sorry I haven't been able to post in a while. I'm having some family diffuculties. My sister is pretty sick and is in the hospital. I will try to write some stuff at the Hospital but I'm feeling pretty down right now. I will right as soon as I can.
Dave
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06-30-2005, 03:17 AM
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| | Gnome
Location: Ohio, USA Join Date: Apr 2005
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these are really great, and very real, like everyone keeps saying. and they sound like they would make good song lyrics, are they?
Hope your sister gets better! | |
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07-06-2005, 01:02 PM
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| | Plimpy
Location: Um.....where am I. Join Date: Apr 2005
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Another note from Dave: Quote:
Dear Readers:
My sister is better but won't be out of the hospital for a while. Let's just how I know this well she beat me up yesterday. She's back to her normal self. If you want to you can analize some of my poems. I found it is very fun to find out how others analize poems. So have fun and I should if not sure should be able to write something if I'm not in writers block.
Dave
| Yep yep that's all folks | |
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07-07-2005, 02:00 PM
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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I'm back.
I hope ya'll now how to analize poems. See if you can and send me a pm. For every pm I will post a poem. | |
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07-07-2005, 02:14 PM
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Into Your Eyes
Into your eyes
I can see
The stars
Telling the future
Into your eyes
I feel like floating
For you make me wonder
Is it all a dream
Into your eyes
You see the future
Pinch me if I'm dreaming
I can't feel it
Into your eyes
I see understanding
I see knowledge
I see me and you | |
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07-07-2005, 02:18 PM
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| Caffeine Buzz Niffler
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Like your new poem Dave. | |
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07-07-2005, 02:21 PM
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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That was fast thanks. | |
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07-07-2005, 02:24 PM
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| Caffeine Buzz Niffler
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Your welcome. I'm a little speechless for words right now, I would've typed more. | |
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07-07-2005, 02:24 PM
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Imagine By: John Lennon
Imagine there's no Heaven
It's easy if you try
No hell below us
Above us only sky
Imagine all the people
Living for today
Imagine there's no countries
It isn't hard to do
Nothing to kill or die for
And no religion too
Imagine all the people
Living life in peace
You may say that I'm a dreamer
But I'm not the only one
I hope someday you'll join us
And the world will be as one
Imagine no possessions
I wonder if you can
No need for greed or hunger
A brotherhood of man
Imagine all the people
Sharing all the world
You may say that I'm a dreamer
But I'm not the only one
I hope someday you'll join us
And the world will live as one | |
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07-07-2005, 02:25 PM
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Location: In my music.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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The next one is one of John Lennon. I thought it might be a challenge for some people who are planning to analize poetry.
If the poem is not mine it will be in read. | |
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07-07-2005, 02:26 PM
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| Caffeine Buzz Niffler
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I liked that song when I was little. Krista used to make fun of me all the time cause she hated it cause I sang it so much.
Last edited by GreatestSeeker143 : 07-07-2005 at 02:30 PM.
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07-07-2005, 02:54 PM
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|  Ooooh... shiny!Augurey
Location: Dude! like whoa I'm Join Date: Feb 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Danni Veneti
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Originally Posted by GothDude Into Your Eyes
Into your eyes
I can see
The stars
Telling the future
Into your eyes
I feel like floating
For you make me wonder
Is it all a dream
Into your eyes
You see the future
Pinch me if I'm dreaming
I can't feel it
Into your eyes
I see understanding
I see knowledge
I see me and you | i would be happy to pinch you.....o hey reg | |
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