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12-20-2005, 10:18 PM
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| Tonks' Auror Skills Demiguise
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jenna Rebecca Gevanson Sixth Year | A Christmas poem (yes, it includes HP stuff) - Sa9+ I Want World Peace for Christmas The Goblet of Fire videogame
Is one thing on my list,
But, no, it is not, as a matter of fact,
My biggest Christmas wish.
My mum knows Karen, who has cancer
Karen is a good friend,
I want her to survive the cancer and
Never have it again.
There's a girl on SS who writes fanfic
Her name is Shannon
She's depressed because her boyfriend died
And I know that she's cried and cried...
And those things are important to me,
But yet again I tell you,
These aren't my biggest Christmas wishes
I hope the biggest one comes true:
I want world peace for Christmas,
It might not come so soon,
But, hey, there's still a chance
For my biggest wish to come true.
I know I might not get it,
But I still really want this:
I want world peace for Christmas
And I hope I get my wish.
I want a Daniel Radcliffe poster
To hang on my bedroom wall,
I'd be happy but it still isn't
My biggest wish of all.
That would be world peace for Christmas
It's all I really need
There's a difference between "need" and "want"
Because wants aren't always needs.
So...
I need world peace for Christmas,
The most important thing I've known
Is that peace is what we all should have
So that proves I'm not alone.
There's always someone needy
That needs some Christmas cheer.
So, stop thinking you're unlucky!
Open up your eyes and ears!....
Help and pray for the needy
And you'll help to bring world peace,
So that no more wars will happen,
And depression starts to cease.
Do all you can while living,
Because you don't get second birth....
Oh, all I need this Christmas, God...
Is peace on Earth.
What do you think about my poem? Who else here wants world peace?
My siggy says world peace, too.
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01-26-2006, 02:14 AM
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| Keeper of Sirius’ wand Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jas Emily Evans |
ya cool peom!!!!!!!!!!!
ya 1st POST!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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01-26-2006, 02:17 AM
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| Keeper of Sirius’ wand Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jas Emily Evans |
ya i just realized, we have the same avatar!!!!!!!!!!!
hehehehehehehe
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01-26-2006, 02:20 AM
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| LVFC Promotions GWFC Graphics Guru DAVP Faerie
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Padme Akret Magical Creatures |
AWESOME POEM!
My mom had two friends who died of cancer! It's so sad!
I want world peace too!
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02-08-2006, 01:21 AM
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| Tonks' Auror Skills Demiguise
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jenna Rebecca Gevanson Sixth Year |
Heheh, it's waaaaaaaay after Christmas, but I'm still thanking coolgirl05 and hermia123 for appreciating my poem
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11-15-2006, 06:15 PM
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| | Bundimun
Join Date: May 2005 Location: Pennsylvinia
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kintanie May Leigh Third |
...wow...it's quite a nice poem! keep it up
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03-28-2007, 09:21 PM
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| | Horklump
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me and my friend mika think it is kinda stupid?....oh well you tried
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05-09-2007, 03:03 AM
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| | Vampire
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Jenna, I love you and you know it...I love you poem too
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05-27-2007, 06:39 PM
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| | Hippocampus
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me and my friend mika think it is kinda stupid?....oh well you tried
that is sooo rude!!! I thoght it was good!!!!
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06-02-2007, 01:20 AM
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| | Bundimun
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Hogwarts RPG Name: unsorted | ~Yeah, I thought it was good too! I especially like the end! God job, and keep writing!~
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01-12-2008, 10:49 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Alaster Dawlish Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
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great poem! i know 6 people that have died of cancer and 3 more that have cancer at the minute so I know how you feel about wanting them to survive
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02-17-2008, 07:50 PM
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| Formerly: accio.brain FC & LC Moderator SotS Co-Manager Runespoor
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Mr. Shifty Man Accidents & Catastrophes | Brain Summoner Mrs. Shia LaBeouf This is a very nice poem. I hope that you will post some more poetry on SS, because your poem rocks my socks!
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02-24-2008, 04:49 AM
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| | Grindylow
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I give that poem a A++++++!
that was really good. 110%
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03-21-2008, 11:23 AM
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| Formerly: accio.brain FC & LC Moderator SotS Co-Manager Runespoor
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You should continue to post poetry here, love. You're really good.
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06-16-2008, 07:48 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Natasha (Natka) Leskanya Fourth Year | Horses Forever!
Great poem - touching, well-written, and it flows well.
Good job, write more!
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11-26-2008, 06:31 PM
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| | Bowtruckle
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Originally Posted by FairyHr ...wow...it's quite a nice poem! keep it up totally
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11-27-2008, 03:47 AM
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| | Clabbert
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Travis Adamo Cobain Sixth Year | Taghunted Team USA!!
Very inspirational poem you've written. I like it.
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11-27-2008, 04:43 PM
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| | Grindylow
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awsome 
i liked it
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