My World

If I gave you my world for just one day,
what would you do?
What would you say?

If I gave you my world,
Would you treat it with care
or would you act like my heart is not even there.

If I gave you my world
would you give me yours
or would you just shut me out, closing the door.

If I gave you my world
would you fill the empty space
or would leave it behind without any trace.

I gave you my world for just one day,
and now what should I say...
you tore it to pieces without a care

All I can do now is try to repair.

Heavens Coming

October was drizzling its cool air
and many colors in a whirlwind of falling leaves down upon us
I swear I can still hear the finest of your whispers
humming melodies in my ears

I ran my hands across the top of the cold
smooth granite stone
longing for just one last glance of your face
your warm loving smile
the deep blue oceans in your eyes

I lift my own eyes away from yours
wishing I hadn't
as you faded away
and I traced the engravings with the tips of my fingers

I could feel the tears start to fall down my cheeks
watching them hit the ground
bringing life to the wilting once red roses

even after I ran as far as I could
these words were still etched on my heart
Heaven Came for her
and indeed it has.

Eternity

As she dashes across the lonely road
through the falling rain
not one soul could see the tears caused by her
overwhelming pain

She tries hard not to cry
as the streetlights dance across her face
slowly falling down her
revealing blood behind the lace

"how could he do this to me"
is the only question that crossed her mind
"all of this is my fault"
was the only answer she could find

she crashes to the pavement
her delicate heart now torn
she wouldn't believe it was a lie
forever loving her he'd sworn

the promise had been broken
he had forced her life to end
she had a broken heart
that would take eternity to mend.

Broken Angel

heres the story of a young girl
a young girl I thought I knew
as each endless day passed her by
the pain inside her grew

She sits alone crying
sobbing deeply in despair
the tears, they keep on falling
why doesnt anybody care?

With no hope for the world to stay
the cold blade she places on her wrist
helps the long days of broken hearts
quickly pass away

forgotten and alone
the blood is flowing from her arm
the only broken heart that she could find
was her own

lying desperate on the hardened floor
she cries herself into eternal sleep
a reckless suffering life she led
shes not caring anymore

this broken little angel
caught in the hands of fate
cries with a crooked halo
at heavens golden gate

the one who held her last breath
will forever regret they didn't care
the haunting memory of this girl
is something they'll have to bear.

omg. Carly, u got a poems thread? omg, and u didn't tell me? your poems are so beautiful. hehe, sry i alwayz say hehe, check out my poems if u want.

Carly I love your poems. I love the first one. Pretty. They're beautiful, write more carly.

~Luv, Ish

These are wonderful carly. I like the first one, but then I have a special liking for Broken Angel. (who would guess?)

Keep up the good work. To bad poetry has to be HP now.
-angel