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12-27-2005, 07:05 AM
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^^Awwww ANgel's that's adorable....
I think out of all the poem threads I go to on SS, yours has the most creativity...Seriously, almost every poem is so much diff than the last yet just as good...
Keep them coming 
**Looks at LETY** As for you, any reader would love for you to comment on their poems even if it has to do with crazy red cowboy toads...  
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12-29-2005, 06:39 AM
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Umm, thanks Tina, lol. Says the red toad too...
Angel, cool one. Right there's hope and its a light one, I very much liked it and very much agree with Tina up here, though i have never been on a poetry thread other than yours, i have read some other poetry and yours has a bright future...
keep writting! | |
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12-29-2005, 06:51 AM
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OMG Angel that's awesome...!!! Keep up the good work...!!!  | |
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12-30-2005, 01:04 PM
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Bon Magnifique. Very good work. I love reading your poems. Can I come to the book signing party? | |
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12-30-2005, 04:49 PM
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Katie Minnson
Third |  Just a Kid
I don’t want to grow up
I want to stay a kid
I’ll trade the simple for the complex
I’ll give up the clouds for the clear sun
I want to stay a kid.
Where the grass is always green
I’ll give up the clouds for the clear sun
Just to spend another day in blissful ignorance
Where the grass is always green
And I’d give up the social drama
Just to spend another day in blissful ignorance.
Surrounding myself with my imagination.
And I’d give up the social drama
Far away from the back stabbing and pain.
I’d surround myself with my imagination.
Immersed in a kingdom all my own, where I’m just a kid.
Okay after a ohh so wonderful day yesterday I wrote up 4 new poems which I'll be posting in the order that I wrote them. This can from a conversation with a very wonderful person. With out her I wouldn't have got the spur to write soo much.
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12-30-2005, 06:17 PM
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*clings* Angel. Your poems are the best. <333333333333333333 | |
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12-30-2005, 09:35 PM
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Feel that way all the time. Good poem. | |
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12-31-2005, 02:34 PM
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Umm, thanks Tina, lol. Says the red toad too...
Angel, cool one. Right there's hope and its a light one, I very much liked it and very much agree with Tina up here, though i have never been on a poetry thread other than yours, i have read some other poetry and yours has a bright future...
keep writting
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Anyhoo, Just a Kid was awesome...I could really relate...Remember I want to run away with Peter Pan to Neverland...**Wonders what being ageless might mean**
Angel, I'm looking foward to the four poems...**Obsesses like a fan girl**
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12-31-2005, 02:46 PM
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Great Poems Angel!!!! I love them!! <33333 Keep up t3h good work!!! | |
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01-01-2006, 09:56 PM
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Third |  Children of the Land
Children of the land Why have you abandoned me? I gave you all that I have And yet you just turn away. I gave you food when you were hungry I covered you with shelter when you were cold I made a stream flow by your house for drink I provided you with friends But you don’t seem to want to get along. All you do is wage wars. You don’t want to get along of that I am certain. You don’t protect the defenseless You don’t feed the hungry You don’t clothe those who need it the most I have provided you with everything that you could need And yet you still turn away. When will you notice your wrongs? When will you come to your senses? Here is the second one. I'm glad you are all enjoying these. I have no idea where this one came from, it's different but none the less I still like it. - Angel | |
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01-02-2006, 11:51 PM
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Favorite so far...Just a Kid. It's just a lot of me there, lmao.
I like the second one too. Wherever it came from was a nice place to spend some time, lol.
Last edited by Padfoot017 : 01-02-2006 at 11:52 PM.
Reason: just because...
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01-03-2006, 04:30 AM
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Lety... I'm going to have to find away to make it so you can't edit your posts... I have a feeling you keep taking out wonderful comments. *pokes*
That nice place... well... it was a person. A person that means more to me than the world itself.
Once again... no editing of the posts Lety... I like to hear what you say. *nods* | |
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01-03-2006, 09:48 PM
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Here is the second one. I'm glad you are all enjoying these. I have no idea where this one came from, it's different but none the less I still like it.
- Angel
| So true. Too true....
As sad as it might be, we all know that's what most of the world is coming out to be....
Your poems are getting more specific and less general.... Awesome! 
Keep them coming!
:Worship:
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01-03-2006, 10:13 PM
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OMG! I love your poem Just a Kid! Thats just the way I feel at times! This bit took me though: Quote:
And I’d give up the social drama
Far away from the back stabbing and pain.
I’d surround myself with my imagination.
Immersed in a kingdom all my own, where I’m just a kid.
| Back stabbing! It's like everywhere! For me that is the ultimate task each day. I never like to be two faced about people. It always seems to kick me right back if I do. The world would be so much nicer with out it! *Hugs all*
Please keep it up! Poems like yours make the world so much happier! *almost cries*
Love Cat xxx | |
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01-04-2006, 12:41 AM
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Okay HP stuff coming soon... I hope. >.<
I just can't seem to get in the mood for HP. Maybe I'll come up with something, if not real soon I promise it'll come after the next two poems. *pokes self* Think... think... think... EDIT: Thanks for all the comments guys! I may add another tomorrow, or the day after.
Last edited by Angel8807 : 01-04-2006 at 12:44 AM.
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01-04-2006, 01:25 AM
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| "Good poem.. but what if we were critics?"
Love reading your poems, angel. Cant get enough of them. Heres a thought of what all these comments would be like if we were critics:
"I'm telling you, lets get a book signing started and ready before the publishers break down your door to sign you up. You're gonna be big! "
"Another Good poem; another good thriller."
"Three thumbs and and a pointer finger all up!"
"9.53 / 11 for sure!" | |
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01-04-2006, 01:26 AM
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I love your poems Angel, keep up your awesome work! | |
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