goooodd and goooood!!! *claps* keep it up

Happy with his friends
Always wants to do what’s right
Realizes that Voldemort has to be fought
Receives unwanted attention from strangers
Young and vibrant; brave and strong

This one is pretty much self-explanitory. I hope you like it while I write more HP stuff.
-angel

Slytherin


They are serpent’s kin
Who are full of tricks and whims
They will do anything to get what they want.


They are dark and mysterious at times
With many secrets to hide from others.
They aren’t often cared for, but still have friends.

Gah. It's not the best, I know that. I'm still trying to get used to writing HP stuff. So bare with me everyone.
- Angel

lol, to be honest, like u said these arent ur best, u seem to be hatin this HP poetry stuff, but c'mon i know u can do it, we'll "bare" with you *hugs*.

C'mon girl, remember the first song we sang in the chat?? The Killers - Somebody told me, ok, this is kinda stupid but this makes me remember the part of... It's not confidential, I got potential.

So, it may sound stupid but, it's not confidential YOU have potential, dont rush it , lol, we'll wait.

lmao lety. Thanks for the support really. I have something to post while I try and figure out how to work out my HP stuff.

She

She sits in her room
Confused and scared
Lonely and misunderstood


She thinks about her life
About how boring and ordinary it is
She wants to have fun,
To experience adventure and laughter


She acts if all is right,
When it is far from that
Her emotions are all a blur


She thinks about her life
About how boring and ordinary it is
She wants to have fun,
To experience adventure and laughter


She rather hurt herself than hurt another
To cause pain is to be a pain in her mind
And pain is the one thing that she can feel


She thinks about her life
About how boring and ordinary it is
She wants to have fun,
To experience adventure and laughter


She wonders why she feels so alone
How she can have so many friends
And still feel empty and cold


She thinks about her life
About how boring and ordinary it is
She wants to have fun,
To experience adventure and laughter


She looks in the mirror and cries
She sees through the mask of happiness
She sees the inner turmoil and confusion


She thinks about her life
About how boring and ordinary it is
She wants to have fun,
To experience adventure and laughter

Okay this poem reminds me of Hermione, but then again it reminds me of Murtle. So I guess it's a mix of them both. I hope you all like!
- Angel

good stuff good stuff... post more. may i offer a little constructive criticism?? to ease the HP writing?? you say the poem 'reminds' you of Hermy or Myrtle, but it's not really 'about' them, is it...?? try to make the poem about the characters next.. just keep thinking along those lines, then sort of fit the characters in there, like molding the poem around the person or persons. i mean, you write great poems.. now, when you write the next one, think of the character that it most relates to and mold it around them.... yeah?? i agree with Padfoot017, you definitely have potential... keep it up!! i love reading your poems!!

Thanks Laieesha and Lety. I'll try that the next time I have time to write. I'm really busy now so I'll definately remember that for the next poem. Hopefully it'll be a whole lot better.
Thanks!
-angel

Dear Ex-Professor Snape,


How could you do such a thing?
How could you kill such a man?
With a flick of your wand, he was gone.
Now everyone is at a loss including you.


How could you kill such a man?
Dumbledore trusted you and you threw it all away.
Now everyone is at a loss including you.
You will someday look back and regret what you did.


Dumbledore trusted you and you threw it all away.
He showed compassion and never steered you wrong.
You will someday look back and regret what you did.
Someday you will feel the pain, all the pain that you’ve caused.


He showed compassion and never steered you wrong.
How could you do such a thing to him?
Someday you will feel the pain, all the pain that you’ve caused….
With a flick of your wand, he was gone.


*beams* Okay I know I said it'd be awhile, but I had inspiration so I ran with it. I think this is definately a lot better than what I've been doing. Not as good as The End. That one was plain brilliancy. But I hope you all find more joy in reading this one.
- Angel

*claps* all hail Angel!! that was awesome!! definitely a lot better! PAMS

by the way, i was going through all your poems, and i noticed you had one titled The Tree, which is funny because if you look in my thread, the very first poem i have on there is called The Tree! they're different though, but i just found it funny!

Haha thanks! I do find it a bit odd that we have poems titled the same. I've found though that a tree is a common metaphor. *shrugs* I'm really glad that you liked that one. I'm proud that I actually wrote it.
I'll add more next week, I'll have to start something from scratch. So it may take a little while.
- Angel

ANGEL! I WUFF YOU!
These are so good. I haven't posted in a while, but Like I've said earlier, I shall always come back!
I especially like The End...it's so....*No words can describe*
I already hate the Hp rule on poems... (Sry, As I explained in Lai's thread...it sort of discourages alot of peeps) Thank god Lety (BTW, I MISSED YOU LETY ) and the rest of your readers were here to get you to get back on the horse!
And seriously, take my Stalkees advice...she's awesome!
Anyhoo....PAMS! I'd quote each and every poem but you already know how much I luff them!
~~RQT
P.S. Doesn't the Hufflepuff one sound so much like a riddle? Awesome!

Im back (wheter u like it or not, lol), Thanks a lot Tina, i missed u too. But this all about Angel and her poetry goodies, surely Laieesha has given a nice advise and like always Angel has the intelectual capacity to put it to work, well done girl. This Snape one is a whole lot better...

*claps* I'll surely be back again, waitin for an update...

Yes...all about Angel.... *Forgets that her message is spamful* Well, anyhoo, Like Lety, *Claps* I'm waiting for more "goodies" !!! LMAO
PAMS when you can Angel!
~~RQT

Now listen real close
To a young women boast
Of an unfair past
That thankfully didn’t last


It started out sad
But turned out not so bad
She cleaned up her act
When she was stabbed in the back


All it took was one of her own
To make her fell all alone
Now she’s wrote all her wrongs
Now she no longer longs


She can support her own self
She doesn’t need anyone else.
She’s played all the games.
In the end it’s all been changed.

Okay, I hope you like this one. It for some reason... reminds me of Tonks, who I was kinda thinking about when I wrote it, but at the same time... it doesn't really work for her. *shrugs* I've got another Harry Potter peom coming, I just have to find time to finish it.
- Angel

oOOH, I love that one!
I luff Tonks, so you know... It comes natural!
Ooh, and I luff all that you write! With that siad,
PAMS when you can!
~~RQT

that was a nice one Angel!!

Poetry "goodies" lmao, sometimes im so outta myself. But they are poems, and they are good...sooo...poetry goodies! YES!.

And they're really good this time Angel, I loved this Tonks one...though i dunno if it reminds me of her but...dah, i liked it and thats what matters. Bravo Angel...

I'm rather busy at the moment, but when I get a chance I'll sit down and write. I think I have a few started, but I'm not sure. Hopefully the next update will be next week!
- Angel

P.S. Thanks for the coments!

Thoughts
Everyone walks into class and sits down.
Soon the teacher walks in and starts the lecture of the day.
Not long after my mind starts to wander.
I start to think about everyone in the room.


What do they mean to me?
Who are they really?
Do they think the same thoughts as I do?
Do they feel as isolated as I do?


The teacher calls on someone and I snap back to reality.
I look at the teacher’s current victim and feel some pity.
Finally the answer is received and the teacher goes on with the lecture.
With a small sigh of relief I resume my drifting.


Why did I take this class?
Will I ever use it in the future?
Why is everyone else here?
Will they use it, or do they need the credit?


Once again I’m interrupted but this time the person in front of me is the victim.
I sit up a bit straighter and enjoy the bewildered actions.
She has never been very nice to anyone; she deserves to feel the heat for a bit.
She sadly gives the correct answer which makes the teacher happily continue on.


Am I the only person who dislikes her?
Does she realize how she makes me feel?
If she’s so smart why does she attack helpless people?
What makes her feel so superior to everyone else?


This time it’s the bell that startles me and the teacher dismisses the class.
Everyone tries to scramble out which causes to much noise at once.
I walk out into the hall and head toward lunch watching everyone else.
I see two people walk by hand in hand and my thoughts take over.


Do they really love each other?
Are they only together so they can say they have someone?
Will I ever feel what it’s like to hold someone’s hand?
Could that ever be me?


I hug my books closer and sit down at a table.
I watch the couple for a bit longer but my thoughts hurt too much.
I glance over and see the star athlete and a teacher talking.
My thoughts burst out full force and I start to feel over whelmed.


Does he really like sports?
Or does he only play so that he’s popular?
Is he trying to get the necessary grade to play tomorrow night?
Will the teacher give in and give it to him?


I turn back to my notebook and sigh.
I start the assignment slowly and complete it half heartedly.
After I finish the homework I feel the need to go back to drifting.
So many thoughts and so many different situations to analyze.


Does anyone question things like I do?
Do they feel the need to know the truth?
Does their mind’s over whelm them at times?
Do they think the same thoughts as I do?

Sorry it's been so long. I decided that I should update since I was afraid people would stop coming. I hope you like!
- Angel

Whoa. Hi angel!! i love this!! i can so relate to this. a million things go through my head when i notice things around me. this is very good.

Haha! Here was thinking that everyone had drifted away... Thanks for the comment.
I'll try and write more some other time... it hopefully won't be as long this time though.

Harry Potter was his name,
And he did the unexpected…
He survived the impossible.
But, can he do it again?


He did the unexpected…
He saved many innocent people.
But, Can he do it again?
The odds just seem against him.


He saved many innocent people.
He set just as many people against him by doing so.
The odds just seem against him.
How can the impossible be surpassed again?


Harry Potter was his name,
And he’s become a hero to many.
How can the impossible be surpassed again?
We’ll just have to wait and see…

Well I found some short time and just wrote this down quickly. It isn't as great as some of the poems that I've written, but I still think it is worthy of posting. *shrugs* What do you all think?
- Angel

i think it's very good. brief, but good. simple, yet it says a lot. well, to us who know what he's been through. but between you and me, i don't think he'll live pass book 7 hehehe

Lol, i dont think he'll live past book 7 either.

Nice posts Angel .