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Old 05-02-2005, 01:51 AM   #1 (permalink)
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List of Contained Poems (in order, 54 total)
Happiness
There's a Monster Under my Bed
Shooting Star
I'm Just Like You
I Am
I Trusted You, Called You Friend
The Dog
Ode to Amaris
Ode to My Great Defender
Life
I Want...
Super Mod
Sorry
Scorpio
Love?
School
My Ode to Jello
My Not So Secret Secret ( 2 poems)
Lety
There's Something On the Roof
The Tree
My Box, My World
Gothic?
Love Of My Life
Nail Polish
Ishy Ish Ish
The End
Thanks
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Harry
Slytherin
She
Dear Ex-Professor Snape
Now Listen Real Close
Thoughts
Can He Do It Again?
Do you...
I'm Not...
Perfection
Take Me Away
I Bite My tongue
Why Do You Drink?
Hero or a Zero
Dear Journal
Snow Fall
Happy Holidays
Words
You're Talking, But I'm Past Listening
Invisible
All Because of Your Words
The Girl and The Boy
Just a Kid
Children of the Land

Happiness

If I could see happiness,

It would look like young animals playing with each other.

If I could hear happiness,

It would sound like children laughing in the school yard.

If I could smell happiness,

It would have the bouquet of blooming lilacs during spring.

If I could taste happiness,

It would taste like a deep rich chocolate, milky and smooth.

If I could touch happiness,

It would feel like a purring cat lying in your arms, undisturbed, calm and serene.

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Old 05-05-2005, 08:53 PM   #2 (permalink)
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This poem is one of my first ones that I wrote. hope you like!


There’s a Monster under My Bed

There’s a monster under my bed, and it snores really loud.

There’s a monster under my bed, that tells me all it’s secrets.

There’s a monster under my bed, and he needs to take a bath.

There’s a monster under my bed, and he’s blue with green and purple polka-dots.

There’s a monster under my bed, and who cries at night, for she’s scared of the dark.

There’s a monsters under my bed, and they’re all my friends.

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Old 05-06-2005, 07:36 AM   #3 (permalink)
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woo hoo you got your own poetry thread! go you girl! i love the second one, the last sentence just makes the whole poem rock! its so mysterious as well. Excellent job! post more soon
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Old 05-06-2005, 09:03 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Ok i know iwouldnt spam, But i have too tell you they are so good! LOl, I CAN'T WAIT TO HEAR MORE!! oh and this will be the last time i post, Keep going!!
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Old 05-10-2005, 08:54 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Thanks lee and tina for reading. Tina you can post as many times as you want, I was just telling people not to spam so people weren't posting stupid things. But anyways... here is another one of my peoms. It just happened to pop into my head one day.

Shooting Star


You are my shooting star
My one and only star
I will love you always
Because you were my first star
My very first shooting star
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Old 05-11-2005, 09:54 PM   #6 (permalink)
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OOO-HOOO!!

I love the second one, it's great really. Keep going! i also very much like the last sentence in the first one

Oh, and you cant stop me from saying stupid stuff it goes against my nature, lol, jk.

GO ANGEL!!!!
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Old 05-13-2005, 05:12 AM   #7 (permalink)
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aaww.. those are cute poems!!
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Old 05-13-2005, 09:19 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Thanks soo very much everyone. lol lety I know you are just full of a bunch of silliness. *wink* Hey laieesha, my fellow huffie! welcome to my poems.

I’m Just like You



Why have you put me on such a pedestal?
I’m no better than you. I’m no less than you. We are the same, you and me.


Why do you all despise me, but when you need me for homework why am the only one?
You don’t talk to me like a friend. You talk to me like I’m your slave; I’m only there to help you with your home work. You make me feel like I’m only on this world to make sure you get your homework done.


Why can’t you see what you are doing to me?
I feel like I’m walking on egg shells when I’m around you. It seems no matter what I say it’s not the right thing. You are taking advantage of my compassion. I only help you all because I don’t want to be the one that causes you to fall. This is strange because you don’t have a problem with watching me fall.


Why don’t you notice how you treat me, how you treat others?
You treat me like I’m so smart, like I know everything, well… guess what… I DON’T! You treat me like being smart is a disease that you should stay away From me because it could be catching. To bad smartness wasn’t.

Why do you act the way you do?
You act like you are better than everyone, like everyone should be grateful that you even talk to them. You walk around like you are the one on the pedestal. You make everything seem happy and sane, but it isn’t.


Maybe I’m just not good enough for you and maybe I just don’t wanna be like you”


- You Don’t Mean Anything, Simple Plan




This is also one of my older free verse poems. I hope you like it. The last part is a quote from simple plan that seemed to fit what I was feeling when I wrote it. Enjoy!

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Old 05-13-2005, 09:43 PM   #9 (permalink)
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*stares at that poem in awe*
wow... that is....beautiful... i have nothing more to say than that cause that pretty much says everything.
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Old 05-14-2005, 12:07 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Whoa!!

Girl, you.... are just very good taking your feelings out, wich is very much amazing cause i CAN'T, lol.

Seriously that's a nice one, you should write songs then I could go barkin... singin i mean (im a nice singer). Keep going !!!!!! *throws roses* (or any flowers you like, and if you dont like roses then i'll throw cookies or bricks or anything, *yells: everybody duck!!*)
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Old 05-16-2005, 09:22 PM   #11 (permalink)
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lol thanks lety. Roses are fine with me, I prefer yellow though. Thank you all for reading. If you want lety we could work on trying to write a song together. I would find it quite fun.
Here is my next poem. I hope you all enjoy.

I Am




I am talented and trustworthy.
I wonder why tall towers still stand.
I hear tap dancing turtles.
I see tiny pickup trucks.
I want to stand on top of a tall steeple.

I am talented and trustworthy.
I pretend to tickle the tops of my toes.
I feel hands tightening around my torso.
I touch tan colored tigers that have no strips.
I worry about too many people talking about me.
I cry about true stories and tiny toddlers dying.

I am talented and trustworthy.
I understand tons of people tell tall tales.
I say not all things are true.
I dream of tiny toys trying to trap me.
I try to take in the world that is around me.
I hope to travel to tons of different towns.

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[SIZE=3]Angel!! This are good, They so cool and they're getting better per post!
OMG, THESE are so friggin good! LOl, I used to be able to write down my feelings, but now just simply can't. Man.. this reminds me..I might try and write...doubt they'll be any good or even close to yours!
These are good, So, i guess there's more to Angel8807 than what meets the eye? Wait i ahve a question. Do you write while your experiencing it? Or do you jus twrite whenever and whatever? Or maybe you get ideas for poems? Sorry, but this sorta thing really interests me!
Well, i can't wait for more.. I hope they'll be posted soon. But no rush.. I CAN WAIT.. After all.. the best ones take time!
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Old 05-16-2005, 10:22 PM   #13 (permalink)
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[SIZE=3]Angel!! This are good, They so cool and they're getting better per post!
OMG, THESE are so friggin good! LOl, I used to be able to write down my feelings, but now just simply can't. Man.. this reminds me..I might try and write...doubt they'll be any good or even close to yours!
These are good, So, i guess there's more to Angel8807 than what meets the eye? Wait i ahve a question. Do you write while your experiencing it? Or do you jus twrite whenever and whatever? Or maybe you get ideas for poems? Sorry, but this sorta thing really interests me!
Well, i can't wait for more.. I hope they'll be posted soon. But no rush.. I CAN WAIT.. After all.. the best ones take time!
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Ok tina. Here are some answers for your questions.
1. There is alot more to people than what meets the eye. Strange enough people here know me better than those that I actually see.
2. I normally write after experiencing things. My poems are a collection of many events piled into one.
3. I do normally write when ever I feel like it. Things pop into my head and I have to hurry to write them all down.
4. I get most of my ideas from my experiences, music, and from watching other people.

If anyone else has questions I'd be willing to answer almost anything, but with limits.
I plan to post again by next week.
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Old 05-17-2005, 07:07 PM   #14 (permalink)
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OMG and just when I thought I couldn't open my eyes wider in surprise, they pop outta my orbs!*bends to get her eyeballs* followin on Tina's words your stuff keeps gettin better and better, readin the answers you gave I can tell you'd be a great physcologist, how can someone I dont know be so familiar and mysterious at the time? I guess Im nuts....yeap, that must be it.

Things pop into my head and I have to hurry to write them all down.

LOL, that sounds a lot like me! but I dont write I draw or paint.
We could go and try to write a song, we'll have a word later about it, meanwhile let us see a little further inside your thoughts, ok? We'll wait for the next poem as much as we have to.

*goes get a cheerleader costume* GOOOO ANGEEEL!!!!
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Oh, ohhh! I have a question!! *puts hand up*

¿how old are you? just jokin' , jusstt jokin'
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Old 05-18-2005, 10:42 PM   #16 (permalink)
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well, ... I had more time then I thought so I'll post another poem. Lety, dear, please don't spam more thread please. Take the poke as a warning.
Here is the next poem it's pretty self explanitory so I hope you enjoy.

I trusted you, called you friend
Through all the good times we had.
You hurt me, chose others over me.
We thought we’d be friends until the end.


Through all the good times we had
You took advantage of my compassion.
We thought we’d be friends until the end,
But now we are straying from each other.


You took advantage of my compassion.
I thought that I could always count on you,
But now we are straying from each other.
I would give anything for another day with you.


I thought that I could always count on you.
I trusted you, called you friend.
I would give anything for another day with you,
But you hurt me, chose others over me.
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Aaww... I feel you on that poem. Sounds like most of my poems, all about hurt and disappointments and all those good stuff.. lol but yeah...I like that one...
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I am sorry, very sorry...oh so sooorrry!! about spamin' but hey! I've gotten myself a warning *jumps punchin the air*.

This is an understandable one, the poem i mean, it's good now i can feel you.

Keep going.
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hey I just found this one today. It's rather small so I thought that I'd post it. I hope you enjoy.

The Dog


Oh, what a dog!

He jumped over the bog!

He's so cool!

He swims in the pool!



I thought that it was still cute, and yes it's one of my very first poems. lol

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Ode To Amaris
(a.k.a. My Twin)

I see you here and I see you there.
I guess I'm starting to see you every where.
I see you in the Great Hall, but not at the mall.
I'm going to The Lake, so don't pick me up at eight.

I don't think this really an ode, but I say it is, so there.
I just made it up this minute. So I don't think it was that bad, besides I was laughing so hard when I was composing I just had to add it here. I hope you all enjoy!
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Old 06-01-2005, 08:38 PM   #21 (permalink)
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LOL, nice one. Amaris is your Twin??? that means you're not ageless *thinks*...weird...

I love the rymes(sp?) in this one.
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Ode to My Great Defender

(a.k.a Luke)

I will never forget the night we met
We found a common interst and started to chat
Through the coming weeks we pledged our devotion
You became my best friend
my great defender
They didn't understand us and jumped to conclusions
We didn't always get along but we stuck together
Our relationship was odd, but it wasn't full of elusions
You became my best friend
my great defender


I have started a new thing with my poems. I'm dedicating them to people. It's kinda going to become a guessing game for my fellow chatters.

Hope you all still enjoy reading my poems, and don't be afraid to post your comments if you have any.

Umm... Lety guess what? I knighted Ama with Agelessness a couple nights ago. So you aren't confused any more.
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